Kiwi

by Hitterj

I step under the hot stream of water, soaking my hair, and take a deep breathe. I try and clear my mind, focusing on the way the water feels hitting my body. I turn around, opening my eyes, only to shout out a curse and stumble back.

Emma is directly in front of me, taking off her tank top, eyes glued to my body. I hadn't shut the curtains, thinking no one would be in here, and I didn't know if I was happy or mad I did that. I stood there speechless as her small hands grasped the bottom of her sports bra. I inhaled sharply when she pulled it up and over her head, exposing her breasts. They jiggled slightly as she tossed her clothes to the side, and I found my heart rate quickening at an alarming rate.

"W-what are you doing?" I breathe out as she pulls her leggings down her body, leaving her in just a thong.

"Showering." Emma tells me as if it's obvious.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Romance

ebook

Published January 1, 2020

Reviews

[Cindy · Rating 4 out of 5]

it was a serve!

[Meghan · Rating 5 out of 5]

this is pure smut, no plot. very kinky and a fun read

[Zdenka Horváthová · Rating 3 out of 5]

Zacatek 10/10, sileny ex top, potom 50shades ohrany tropy a silenej konec aka stastna rodinka ewww

[Abby Carico · Rating 4 out of 5]

made me think things

[Zoey · Rating 3 out of 5]

I don’t know what to say about this book. It was one of the first books I read on Wattpad. I just reread it and now I’m not so sure how I survived that much smut. The storyline also isn’t that great. I mean the whole crazy-ex-Jake-thingy and the gym aspect are great but after that it gets so cliché.
Character wise the book is fabulous. I love Lu, Niall, Oli, Mike, Millie, Maura and of course Kate and Amy. I also love the confidence Emma develops and how soft Harry is. Talking about that, I think it is amazing how Harry worships Emma and all but by the end it gets just too sappy and too much. Simply too cliché.
The writing is quite good. I’m just not the biggest fan of ‘cock’ and ‘length’. Like just say ‘dick’ but as long as it is not ‘member’ I think it is okay lol.
The title is a 3.8/5 but reminds me of the anxiety parts of the book which I think are really good ans I really enjoyed.
All in all I think the book is okay but you should only read it if you really are a fan of smut which is quite good at some points.

[Ellie · Rating 5 out of 5]

SPICY SPICY VERY SPICY

[Jaime B · Rating 4 out of 5]

SMUT! SMUT! SMUT!
If you are looking for a book packed with sex and all things racy then this Is certainly the book for you! My only complaint in this book is actually there might be too much sex! The beginning definitely focusses on the smut and the plot becomes more about falling in love and their lives outside the bedroom (or gym showers). A typical friends with benefits type situation that quickly ends up with people catching feelings but not wanting to own up to them in fear of scaring the other off. I definitely enjoyed this book and all its steamy glory and would recommend to anyone wanting a bit of spice!

[— Brontë♡ · Rating 5 out of 5]

There’s not one thing that I dislike about this book.

Emma is such a sweetheart but she’s so well driven. You don’t see many mc’s who are like this nowadays it seems. She’s the perfect blend of sweet, badass, powerful, strong, mature, and just all around perfect.

Whereas most people say this book is pure smut, no plot, I disagree. I really really liked this book, for the plot also. It was a change from all the dark fics I was reading at the time.

I liked have something soft to read.

⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐/5
🌶️ 🌶️ 🌶️ 🌶️ 🌶️/5

[claudia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Kiwi... Esta fanfic... No he leído cosa más guarra en mi vida... Es perfecta.

Una historia sencillita sobre dos personas que se conocen en un entorno cotidiano, con trabajos normales, y que tienen vidas normales. Es que es sencilla y perfecta. A veces una chica solo quiere leer una historia de dos personas adultas enfrentándose a la vida sin mafias ni rollos raros... La volví a leer hace poco y es que es cuquísima.

[Gracee Donohue · Rating 4 out of 5]

I don’t know how i feel about this book to be completely honest. It has a wonderful plot but the amount of smut there is made it super hard to read. i will say i do like this book but it took me awhile to read it.

[Lanya Fletcher · Rating 4 out of 5]

4/5 ⭐️

did i just re read a 800k word harry styles fanfiction that was purely smut? yeah… but you would do it too for a check (i was in fact not getting paid and would do it again. no hesitation. full stop.)

[Kayleigh Rae · Rating 5 out of 5]

Kiwi harry is top tier harry

[Jae e · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely love this book!!! This is going to be my forever comfort book!!

[Kelsey · Rating 5 out of 5]

PLEASE PUBLISH THIS.


I absolutely loved this book! One of my favorites from Wattpad!

[Natalia Łukowicz · Rating 5 out of 5]

SO much 🌶🌶🌶🌶

[nele :) · Rating 5 out of 5]

The smut in this 🤌

[Iadoremyfictionalmen · Rating 5 out of 5]

I’m used to Dark Harry but seeing him being a sweet accountant in this book was also cute. I love my girl Emma

[Eva Stegeman · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was a good book, but it was hard to get into

[Μαρια Τσακαλου · Rating 3 out of 5]

sex

[Amorisflammae · Rating 2 out of 5]

Mediocre writing, couldn't finish it

[Morg · Rating 4 out of 5]

loved it

[maya · Rating 3 out of 5]

just straight up porn

[Lana Heinsen · Rating 5 out of 5]

So good, like actually its so incredible and great and fantastic and i love it so much

[Kyla Duggan · Rating 4 out of 5]

Mostly smut with a touch of plot . . . I LOVED IT !

[jenna lord · Rating 5 out of 5]

i literally- like there's so much smut. LOVED IT THO ALSO HAD THE CUTEST SCENES EVER

but the smut.. my god.

[Racha Mebarek · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.75 ⭐

[Emilie · Rating 5 out of 5]

🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

[abby · Rating 4 out of 5]

🚂🚂🚂🍆🍆👻💦

[addie thom · Rating 5 out of 5]

cutesy

[lia ♡₊˚ 🦢・₊✧ · Rating 3 out of 5]

no plot just sex but i learned a lot ??