***1 book-by-sadist-about-continual-sexual-assault-romanticized-in-a -school-where-they're-only-in-the-cafeteria/at a party/football game star***
The catch phrase
the male lead used throughout the book on the female lead was
“You can run but you can’t hide.”
- said every creepy stalker/serial killer ever.
How the boys in the book spoke about girls - how attractive, consider me wooed -
“Khloe wasn’t the kind of girl you saved. She was the kind of girl you fucked and then moved on.”
“Sara’s got too much of a smart mouth for me. I like my women to talk less and suck more.”
Blame the girl for your perverted thoughts - how chivalrous, I've been won over -
“Of course she’d had to storm into the kitchen wearing nothing but thin pajamas, her silky hair hanging over her shoulders like a huge fucking arrow saying ‘look at my tits’.
I forced myself to look away, silently commanding my dick to stand down.”
A splash of Higher than thou attitude & treating people like dirt is exactly what'll score you points in my book, keep it up -
“Mr. Chase.” Mr. Henson sounded pissed. “I’d like you take your usual—”
“Change of plan, Sir.” He didn’t even look at Mr. Henson. “I’ll be needing a seat at the back. Jones,” Cameron addressed the guy beside me. “Move.” The guy already sitting there almost tripped over himself to move.
Toxic female best friend the h should've gotten rid off -
The stylist/party coaxer otherwise known as the bff for no reason was a user. She was using the F to get to her hot step-bro. She left the F unattended at a party where she was roofied & filmed sans clothing. And after the incident she keeps forcing the F to get into a relationship with her bully of 6 years...nice. She was desperate to become friends with the F's tormentors just because it was their "last year in high school" & they were popular hot jocks. Doesn't look like friendship to me but the author thinks otherwise. She blatantly used the F to be able to be around her "hot bro". The "bff" was the most pathetic thing about this books, she used the F dry because she had the hots for her bro. The F was actually good.
When "NO" means "Yes" - oh how adorable we find deaf ears, non-consent, cornering & use of force, I'm charmed -
1.“That was... you can’t do that.”
“I can’t kiss you?” I teased. “I think I just did.”
“Well, don’t do it again.” Oh, she wanted me to do it again all right, she just didn’t want to admit it.
2.“I do not,” she countered. “This... us... I hate you,” she seethed, but I wasn’t done playing with her. Sliding my hand along the curve of her neck, I leaned down, brushing my lips over the shell of her ear. “You can hate me all you want, Sunshine, but it doesn’t change the fact you’re probably wet for me right now.”
3.“Fuck you,” she spat, trying to move around me, but I pinned her in place, sliding my leg between hers and pressing gently. I wanted to touch her, to test my theory. But I knew I shouldn’t. Knew if I did, I might want to do it again, and that would be a dangerous thing indeed.
4.“Cameron, if you don’t get off me in the next three seconds, I will—” A strangled moan left her lips as if she was fighting her own body when I ground my knee further into her
5.“Get. Your. Fucking. Hands. Off. Me.” The venom in her words had me backing away slowly. She looked furious, anger rolling off her in dark waves. But Hailee could deny it all she wanted; I felt the chemistry between us. The push and pull.
6.“Stay away from me, Cameron.”
But as she walked away from me, I knew I was screwed.
Because the rules had changed, and I knew I couldn’t stay away from her.
7.“Cameron,” I finally said breaking the tension. “I should go.”
“You can’t go,” he said
“Cameron, I’m not doing this.” Whatever this was. “I’m not—” One of his hands slid along my collarbone, gliding up my neck, his thumb stroking the skin there.
8.“Cameron,” I said jabbing my fingers into his ribs when he didn’t move. “Get the hell off me.”
9.“I’m leaving now,” I said roughly. “Please don’t follow me.” I slipped out from between him and started walking away but his hand snagged my wrist.
And lastly, when the F had her nude video posted all over town what does the first thing the M do after consoling her for 5 min? Have sex with her. And the way this author brushed off the whole traumatic incident was disgusting. It was like a blip on the radar. Yeah sure everyone gets roofied, stripped naked, surrounded by guys laughing when the girl is unconscious & get the video posted & everyone just moves on. No PTSD whatsoever. Bff forces her into a relationship with her bully. There are real world girls out there who this has happened to, they deal with the trauma for years -
Case in point - Steubenville, Ohio incident.
It's not something to be written about so lightly. Shame on you writer.