I don't like Navarro's writing on a good day.
This was not a good day.
We start out at a local football field, and Andres is the *last* one to leave (he's the sports announcer. He's also the local deputy sherriff, since Navarro has never been creative with occupations). He's crossing the EMPTY parking lot towards his truck, talking to a buddy in an EMPTY, silent parking lot, shows up at his truck and sees a car parked next to it...
... it's Catalina, his old flame. And she's been WAITING there for him. While he was crossing the empty parking lot, TALKING with a friend... and when he addresses her, she jumps out of her skin, grabs her heart, and is *SHOCKED* to see him. "You scared me!" she says. To the man who was walking and talking in an EMPTY parking lot, while she was WAITING for him.
See, this. This is Navarro's stupidity. I can't even.
How about this one, two pages later: "Last time he had seen her she had cut [her hair] off because her parents had wanted her to wear it long. She had told them that since she wasn't dancing anymore, she didn't need to keep it past her shoulders."
WHAT. THE. ACTUAL. FARTS?!?!?!
Because dancers have to have long hair... why? So they can put it up in a bun?! You do realize that short hair has been a thing on dancers since BEFORE the Rockettes, Flappers, etc...????? My BFF's girl has been dancing competitively since she was four, her hair is cut in a pageboy and it's classy.
Navarro writes STUPIDITY. Almost all of the time. All of this, and it's not even EIGHT PAGES into the book.
I was done when Navarro tells us six pages later that she caved to her father's will when he - A RANCHER - threatened to get in touch with his contacts at the Air Force prep school and get her boyfriend kicked out. A rancher. With that kind of pull in a GOVERNMENT school. How about *NO*??!?!?!?!? It's just total, fabricated, unbelievable NONSENSE.
I don't even *CARE* about the story.
Navarro can't write. She just can't. Ever.
I'm out.