Overall, I was pleased with this second installment in this series. This is the first, I believe, at least MM romance, that Morton has done that focuses on the same couple for more than one book, and I think overall she did really well. There a few snags here and there to make me go down from the usual 5 stars I love giving her books, but still overall a good continuation, I think.
Levi and Blue are sweet together, and after a year together, they've really settled into their relationship in this one. But there are still things they had to work through in their relationship, which were touched on here. I thought maybe they could have been touched on a bit more, talked about by these two a little more, but I like where they came to be by the end of this. A
And in a way, the new haunted house they had to endure in this one brought them even closer together than they were before.
But I don't think I'm the only one who came to be frustrated near the end with how many excuses and how many times these guys refused to run the fuck away from that house when they had the chance. It just eventually came to feel a little contrived and ridiculous, just to keep these two at the haunted house until the climax.
Like why would Blue be all "we have to leave, we have to get the fuck out of here right now" one second and then be like "I have to stay" even for his father, especially for his father who has never been in his life and has shown he isn't that good of a man, and the viscount, as nice as he could be, WAS the cause of all the shit that happens, and Blue changes his mind like that, separates himself from Levi and goes after his estranged father and the viscount, when he was just going "we have to get the fuck out of here"??? At that point it felt WAY past contrived.
I know Blue is a good person and everything, but why would you put your life in danger and separate from the man you love for two people who don't entirely deserve it? I know it all works out in the end, but it just...it didn't feel believable, and it was just too much for me to get past, and my main reason for giving a star off of this.
I also felt that it wasn't as scary as the last one was and there were so many times the scares could have been better, but I wasn't as annoyed or bummed about that as the finding every way to rationalize staying in a scary haunted house with spirits trying to kill you and those you love.
Otherwise, this was enjoyable and I loved my Blue and Levi parts, I loved them just being together and in love, and I loved Tom and am actually really interested in a book about Will and Jem, the plot for the most part was interesting, even if it wasn't as scary as I would have liked.
It's just when you take the believability out of the MC's actions where things get to be a little too much, too contrived and ridiculous.
But overall, a strong second outing. The beginning and middle was overall wonderful, and there parts of the end I very much enjoyed. It just faltered near the end, especially, with how many times they were like "I can't leave, we have to see this through" WHY? For what fucking reason? I mean, it made no sense.
Blue and Levi may have come out even stronger from this experience, which yes, is good, but it could have just worked on the believability factor. At least with the first one, that is where Levi lived and he was trying fix it up and he wanted to stay in that town and was falling for Blue and all that to keep in the house despite the scary shit.
But they had no obligation to be in that house. Yeah there was money to be had, but Blue and Levi are not motivated by that, ya know? They aren't greedy, so other than that, it just...yeah, made no sense.
Definitely worth a read for the Blue and Levi relationship development aspect and the good beginning middle, but for me it just faltered a little near the end. Still would give it a thumbs up overall, though!