What can I say, for a book with such a great title the writing is truly horrible. Never have I taken so long to read five hundred pages and that includes It by Stephen King which I also hate with a passion. For three quarters of the book, close to nothing happens except politics and stalking. If it had been written well I wouldn't have minded that, but one doesn't use a phrase like "elongated blink" and expect a person to not role their eyes. The vision was there but the execution was dreadful and it is clear that the author's writing skills just weren't up to par for what he had in mind. It had the intention of sounding beautiful, and one or two phrases were, but most of them didn't land at all.
At least three quarters of the book was tiresome to read, mostly because of the dialogue. The issue is that dialogue is very sparse because most of the character interactions weren't written out at all. Most of it was "they talked about X and decided to do Y", but this not only makes dialogue very fragmented, it also makes it very hard for the reader to immerse themselves into the story. If most of a story is written like that it makes for a very dull read and hard to relate to the characters. It was also very hard to sympathize with any of the characters. They were all very unlikeable but not in the way that was intended I think. Friar Diego was supposed to be a young and driven priest but instead he was annoying from the start and a very hard person (not character, person) to like, but he gets described as having a lot of support from he other friars and a good leader. Except he was rude and borderline disobedient to most everyone around him. Twice I had to read how he "pouted" when he didn't get his way and twice I was reminded that that is a grown man, not a baby. His pride was very evident in his behaviour and this would've had more consequences in real life. I am not disputing any historical events, simply that it was badly written. The very few female characters had it worse, however. They were written in such an unlikeable way that I almost feel personally offended. There is nothing strong or proud about them and remind me of a character trope that I thouht we had left behind in 2007. Alara is supposedly "cruel" and "enjoying Cortez' suffering" when he is nervous to talk to her, but the author never made her express more than slight annoyance. To make someone cruel is not a light trait to give, especially when she never acts cruel or says unjust things. The only thing proving she is "cruel" is the fact that the author says so. And to make her like that in opposition to Cortez who is very autistic coded is a dangerous game to play when Cortez is violating her privacy immensly. Cortez is not an unlikeable character because of is autism but because he is a creep, and this is a very important distinction to make but wasn't. It made it seem that Alara didn't like him for his neurodivergence and not because he makes all the warning bells go off. Any other woman would've felt uncomfortable as well and women always know to trust their gut when it comes to a man. All other female characters weren't much better, swinging between stereotypes and unoriginality.
Gradually, as the story (finally) picked up the pace the writing became less bothersome, and the violence and torture at least made it seem like something was happening for a change, but then it ended so abruptly that it somehow made me annoyed that the book was over... which I had been dreaming of since chapter three. It really could've benefited from an epilogue just to clarify what happened td the rest of the characters but no. Several times it was mentioned throughout the book that Friar Diego after the events- but never what those events were- would be sent back to Spain to receive the consequences of his actions, and then when it finally comes to it, it just ends... nothing else. No final looks of disgust, the other friars standing up to him, or even the natives fighting back. Just nothing .As for Cortez, his mother is his entire life and vice versa, but we don't get to see what happens to her, or Alara for that matter. Giving the characters some closure would've really benefitted the book and maybe even elevated it to two stars, but alas.
The whole story feels too drawn out and yet not detailed enough and it makes me wonder if there was a proofreader or an editor because it really didn't have to be this long. The characters were lifeless and unlikeable, impossible to relate with, and the ending, the only redeemable part, belly flopped into the water. I really hoped this book was going to be a life changer and the one that put things into motion, it's too bad that failed.