Garlan the kitchen boy’s dream of becoming a knight may not be as impossible as he is often led to believe, when the immortal players in a war from centuries gone reignite their feud right on his very doorstep.
Chased from his home and thrust headlong into an epic adventure that spans the entire kingdom of Faeland, Garlan will traverse impossible mountains and stormy seas, battle nightmarish creatures and the weight of his own fears, all to keep the world he loves safe from an ancient enemy who will stop at nothing to bring about a never-ending winter.
With a cast of wise and whimsical characters to aid him in his quest, can Garlan find and wield the courage he needs to rise above his station and become the hero he always dreamed of being?
Little White Hands was a book that caught my attention from the blurb alone, and the mention of the Seasons being at War. By complete chance, there is an aspect of that in one of the D&D campaigns I’m in at the moment, so it immediately resonated, but there was just something about ‘Almost five hundred years have passed since the Seasons were at war. Half a millennium since Winter defied Spring and lost.’ The entire blurb caught my intention, but that part intrigued me, and I leapt at the chance to read it. Then I saw the cover, which I love – I am a little biased towards foxes – but I just love everything from the colours to the composition, and after reading the book, it is a perfect representation of this tale. And as an added bonus point there is a map!!
I was immediately taken with Cushen’s approach and writing style in this book, it opens like a tale of old, and both the language and the tone had me smiling and knowing that I was going to enjoy this book before I’d even finished the first page. There is a whimsy and warmth to this book, and even though I wasn’t necessarily the target audience for this book – it’s middle grade, albeit with a few darker moments – it wrapped itself around me, and it was a pleasure to lose myself in the story. This is very much a fantastical adventure, steeped in high fantasy, but there was a comfort to this story – partly because the start does have you imagining that you’re sat around a fire in an old tavern listening to a bard regaling you with a tale of adventure, and there are many places where it felt like a hug in a book without ever losing the excitement and forward momentum of the story.
The characters had a charm all of their own. I have a soft spot for coming-of-age stories, and Garlan was a character that I just had to root for, there’s a wonderful blend of innocence, lack of experience and determination and he was one of my favourites. The other was Oldface, who had a way about him that had me laughing and looking forward to what he would say next. I felt that all the characters were well written, and fitting for the world, although I did find it very male-dominated.
I enjoyed the worldbuilding, which had a similar sense of whimsy to the writing. There were some places in particular where it had an almost Ghibli-esque vibe which was wonderful. This was very much a high fantasy world, but Cushen put his own spin on it, and I very much enjoyed the journey across this world with Garlan and his companions and seeing the different regions, creatures and people. There was a breadth and depth to the world that was fitting for the story, without losing the whimsy that is such a dominant and wonderful characteristic of this book.
I had so much fun with this book, and I can’t wait to see what lies ahead for Garlan Greatheart. A brilliant debut that I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend, particularly for anyone in search of adventure with more than a little whimsy along the road.
“I have learned to be happy with who and what I am.” - Little White Hands
This whimsical and magical tale follows Garlan, the young kitchen boy from Kingfisher’s Nest, as he sets out to protect the only world he knows from the sinister Blue Man. With courage of a lion and a heart of gold, he ventures to magical forests, cursed castles, and realms not of this world in search of the missing key that unlocks the Lord of Winter. He must find the key before the cruel blue man finds it to unleash the Lord of Winter and chaos upon the lands. Garlan makes unexpected friendships and finds himself trapped more than once during his quest, but the fear of becoming a witch’s dinner is the least of his worries.
This young adult (middle school age level) adventure fantasy will capture the hearts of all readers as we are reminded of what it means to have courage and hope in the time of adversity. Cushen creates a beautiful and magical world that is fitting for its epic fantasy tale. The pacing is just the right mix of character development and action and will keep you at the edge of your seat. The writing style reminds me of an old friend sharing a beautiful fairytale around the campfire.
Book lovers of Harry Potter, The Hobbit, and Redwall will find great company in Garlan’s adventure (Little White Hands).
I highly recommend this beautiful tale to readers of all ages.
The blurb for this one really had me interested - the seasons at war? Ooh interesting!
And yeah, this is just a really well written really fun heroic middle grade fantasy. It reminds me so much of the chronicles of Narnia. I love Garlan, such a fantastic character. It’s impossible not to root for him. I must also give a big thumbs up to Mark Cushen’s writing style, its just perfect for this type of novel, its fun, engaging, personal and just flows so well.
A fantastic debut and I’m looking forward to seeing where this author goes next.
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for a honest review. Mark Cushen’s debut novel was released in May 2021 and Little White Hands is an enjoyable read for all ages. The proper audience for this book may lean more towards the YA genre but I thoroughly enjoyed the fun, quick paced story and the characters are a joy to follow. Let’s take a deep dive into why Little White Hands will leave readers of all ages with a smile.
Centuries ago there was a war between the four seasons and it is best to think about them for this story as deities. Winter refused to leave when it was time for the seasons to change to spring and started a war with the other three. Winter lost the war and was imprisoned at the bottom of an active volcano. Five centuries later, the world has never known the cold chills of winter but events will turn ice cold very quickly. Garland is a kitchen hand in the service of the king. Orphaned from a very young age, his job is to attend the knights and workers in the castle. One night on his way home, Garland comes across a dying man who says to him the Blue man has returned and he is looking for a key to free Winter from his prison. When Garland takes this information to his master, events unfold quickly and Garland is sent out on a mission to find the seasons and to tell them of this mysterious stranger. The road will be perilous for Garland and his friends, but Garland’s dreams have always been to become a knight and he is thirsty for this adventure.
What makes this story such a joy for me was the passion and excitement I got from reading the characters. Garland is pure of heart and will do anything to protect his friends from danger. As he grows his skills he will also grow as a person making hard choices in a difficult time. Along with Garland is the character Oldface. Oldface is essentially a spirit contained in a sculpted piece of wood. Not much to look at but the wealth of knowledge Oldface contains will be vital for the success of this mission. Garland will also come across a sly fox named trickster and you can guess at why this is his name. Many different types of creatures will be found in this world including, huge birds, wolves, and fairies and each one has a role within the story.
The writing style is easy to follow and has just the right pacing for a fun adventure. Even though there will be hardships along the way, the adventures for Garland are only just beginning and the ending will definitely show that. Don’t be misled by the cover thinking that this novel can’t be enjoyed by adults fantasy fans because it most certainly can. Sometimes in order to get through these heavy and epic tomes of the fantasy genre, I need a palate cleanser and Little White Hands was just the remedy I needed. This has my vote as a series to look out for with future volumes.
This is the tale of Garlan. The kitchen boy who wants to be a knight.
Mark Cushen weaves an enthralling and enchanting tale of dreaming big. Of working for your dreams and never letting go of your ambitions.
The story revolves around Garlan who is told that an ancient evil is returning to the land and that the king must know of its return. However, when he speaks to his mentor, he decides that he will undertake a quest to avert disaster, and with his friend, a sentient floating piece of wood called Oldface, they tackle the ancient evil together, taking the news to The four Seasons who live in Dryad Wood. A place out of time and out of the world.
This is a classic tale of the underdog finding ways to make his dreams a reality. However, the tale also describes an individual who has spirit and will try his hardest for those around him.
Filled with a wondrous cast of characters that include faeries, wizards, the four seasons, murderous snowmen, and yetis
Mark Cushen’s writing is reminiscent of classic faerie tales and it captures your imagination. Never once did the story lull in its adventure. There was always something in the plot that keeps your attention. Always a new situation to keep you entertained. And this is an entertaining book from start to finish.
Sometimes, children’s books can fall into the trap of trying to talk down to children, and never once did this feel like it was talking down to children, trying to impart them with the knowledge that they may need in their future lives. It treats them as individuals who will understand the story and its message. There are some sweet moments in this book. Particularly when Garlan helps a scarecrow deal with the death of his master, telling him about his own losses and how he dealt with the situation
In fact, there are some pretty grown-up scenes in this book and one of them wouldn’t be too out of place in a Joe Abercrombie novel in all honesty as it was pretty bloodthirsty.
In addition to this, there are a wonderful cast of characters. Garlan is pure innocence,, he approaches each problem that he faces with pragmatism and determination. In addition, he has a number of advisors that lead him on the right path or are quick to give him the advice that he needs.
Never once does Garlan not listen to advice. He listens to the counsel that others give him and uses it to his advantage, and generally comes out on top.
This book was a delight from start to finish. It was one of those books that lightened my day each time I read it. The prose is full of whimsy and warmth and this book begs to be read in the middle of winter with a cosy glass of something warm.
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I received a copy to review for BBNYA, and my review has been withheld until after the competition ended. I also grabbed a paperback copy, as I prefer to read physical. And what a beautiful cover.
This is a fun mix of elemental-esque magics, as the seasons are at war with winter. The big bad is so bad that he is locked away and still posing problems. One of the most enjoyable things, is that while the stakes are high, world-endingly so, the entrance of our de facto hero is in the king’s kitchens as a lowly kitchen boy. He does desire to be a knight, but he’s just a boy. One with nearly no experiences in life.
Through the novel, the author shows Garlan as he leanrs, experiences, and grows. He has to experience danger, loss, near-death activities (several times), and even new friendships. He is not infallible, nor is he invincible, he feels both real and knightly.
Although the ending does really deliver on the whole battling seasons plot line, I did find some of the other stops/action sequences to feel a bit uninvolved. They served the purpose of teaching Garlan, but at the same time didn’t always tie back to winter.
Personally a 4/5* for me. As this is more so whimsical than many other fantasies, as well as featuring such a young protagonist, the fairytale-esque style of storytelling did make this read a little overlong for me.
I was sent an eARC copy of Little White Hands by the author, Mark Cushen. Thank you for the opportunity! My thoughts are my own and my review is honest.
Little White Hands is a coming-of-age fantasy adventure about a humble kitchen boy with lofty dreams who sets out on a cross-kingdom trek to save the world as he knows it. The world Cushen has crafted is lush and fresh, yet comfortably familiar, and should appeal to most high fantasy readers. The characters are well fleshed out and empathetic, and I do believe there's someone in here for every reader to latch onto.
My favourite character was the wise sidekick/teacher figure Oldface. His introduction immediately made me think of Bob from the Dresden Files (book version, permanently stuck in the skull), so that's probably why I latched onto him at first, but he continued to make me smile, nod, and laugh throughout the book. The way Garlan has to hide the fact that Oldface is essentially an enchanted floating log from everyone else gave me a Studio Ghibli / Miyazaki vibe, too. This book is neither of those franchises, it's entirely its own thing, but just one character reminded me of both of those great properties, so I hope that captures your imagination and gives you a taste of the pleasant surprises you'll find in all of this book's major characters.
My one major critique is the lack of significant female presence in this book. I was curious after I finished and did a document search for the complete word "she." My search returned 150 instances, the second of which is the phrase "he or she" and many of which refer to unnamed single-scene characters or animals. This book is listed as 268 pages print length. A search for "her" turns up 133. "He," on the other hand, turns up 1,628 results and "his" 1,214 results. Just a little unbalanced. Perhaps something that might change in future books?
Overall this is a solid middle-grade/YA fantasy and a good start to a series. If you're looking for a fresh fantasy that reminds you of your favourites without sacrificing what makes it unique, check this one out!
Garlan is a kitchen boy at the King’s castle, but what he really dreams of being is a Knight. His uncle is the cook and he tells Garlan to never stop aiming for his dream. Then one day, Garlan intercepts a dying man and he has to go off on a dangerous journey practically by himself. The fate of the world rests on the little kitchen boy’s shouders. Will he survive?
This is a heartwarming tale of adventure and danger in a cool fantasy world. Garlan is an age that’s between MG and YA, so it works for both genres. Anyone who has ever wanted to see more, be more, do more with their life then this is the story for you. Garlan is a great character. Grounded in reality he’s not a daydreamer. He does his work, but hopes for more even though he doesn’t think it will ever happen. Then he’s thrown headlong into a quest that has the fate of the world depending on him and he rises to the occasion. Along the way he faces things he never dreamed of and meets friends of all kinds. All-in-all a great read.
The first thing I noticed about "Little White Hands" is how the story pulls you right in with a gentle tug. The second thing is how adorable Garlan is (other characters are available!)! The idea behind the book is brilliant, and it has been brought to life superbly. Mark Cushen's writing oozes warmth, making this one of those rare reads that comforts at the same time as sending you on an adventure. More please!
My thanks to the author. This review was written voluntarily and is entirely my own, unbiased, opinion.
In this fantastic middle grade fantasy we meet Garlan, a young kitchen boy, as he starts a journey to protect his world from the evil Blue Man. Garlan is a brilliant , likeable character who had me rooting for him all the way. His innocence and determination quickly made him my favourite character. I quite enjoyed the author’s whimsical, magical writing style. It brought a unique twist to the fantasy world that I found hugely engaging. The characters were extremely well developed and entertaining, each one being an integral part of the story. Add the tremendously fantastic world building and you get a perfect series for middle grade readers that everyone can enjoy
I was given a review copy of this book as part of the BBNYA 2023 competition. Thank you to the author and BBNYA. My review is unbiased and my opinions are my own.
Little White Hands is an extremely enjoyable middle grade adventure. A ‘Hero’s journey’ filled with rich and charming storytelling about a young kitchen helper who longs to be a knight. Little White Hands is the name given to Garlan the kitchenhand by a bully known as Rotter.
The world in which Garlan lives is beset by evil in the form of one of the four High Seasons, Winter and his minion Hoarrime who wants to free Lord Winter from the prison to which he was long ago banished. The theme of good triumphing over evil is strong in this book, with Garlan’s character developing along the way from a bullied kitchenhand to an accomplished hero.
Garlan sets off to try and help Baron Fall; another of the High Seasons, aided on his quest to defeat Winter by a floating wooden head, called Oldface, which contains the soul of a fire mage. I loved these imaginative ideas the author came up with.
“…in drifted a floating wooden head, into which was carved the likeness of a man’s face, which appeared older than was probably intended due to the lines and wrinkles in the wood—a detail which was no doubt the origin of the creature’s name. A tail of thin cloud, or maybe smoke, trailed behind the head, and a harness was strapped about it, and suspended from the harness was a hammock of books, piled high.”
On their journey they encounter many strange races: ghosts, dryads, the High Seasons, snowmen, living scarecrows, faeries, witches, mermaids, to name but a few. Each of which becomes quickly impressed by Garlan’s stout heart and bravery and gifts him with various objects to help his quest.
The worldbuilding in this charming tale is expansive and imaginative:
“as they descended, and saw the lush valley in all its glory, awash with trees and flowers of all the colours and shades you can imagine. In the distance, in all directions, were strands of silver and sparkling blue, far-off waterfalls that seemed to bleed out of the crevices in the mountains and send twinkling mists into the air.”
“They walked by terraced pools and waterfalls both miniature and massive, and of colours ranging from azure to green and silver to blue. All the pools were linked by chutes and streams, and bordered and connected to dry land by a network of narrow earthen paths that cut through the reeds or slipped behind waterfalls that descended from other areas overhead. Every now and again, the path would lead away from the water completely and into beautiful groves and lush forest where moss covered the ground like a green carpet and flowers of every colour ornamented the base of each tree. Here the larger animals of the valley would make themselves known, where previously all that could be seen were the outlines of fish in the emerald pools and the shells of turtles breaching like little islands, or the statuesque forms of frogs on their water-lilies and the blur of dragonflies too fast on the wing.”
Parents of potential young readers should be aware that Little White Hands is peppered throughout with wise advice for children, which I find admirable and important in middle grade fiction:
“You can spend all of your waking hours poring over dusty old tomes with me and Oldface here, but there is no better way to cultivate true wisdom than by venturing out into the world and experiencing all of its wonders for yourself.”
“I’ve heard it said that the hardest part of any journey is taking the first step out the door,” he said to Oldface, who was not exhausted or breathless as he was. “I’ve never even left this lake. Not really. I suppose then that this is the hardest part right now.” He closed his eyes for just a brief moment, absorbing the enormity of what he was about to do, and then with determined strides, he crossed and emerged on the other side to a broad horizon.”
All in all, I would highly recommend this book to middle grade readers and older readers who enjoy charming expansive worlds with a hopeful theme of good triumphing over evil.
When I was approached with Little White Hands, I was immediately captured by the idea of a questing, adventure-filled narrative. What I wasn’t expecting was how much heart would come in such a small package.
Garlan is but a kitchen boy at the start of his adventure. He knows little of the world and has experienced even less of it. Still, when a wounded man crosses his path, it sets him on a journey that will change everything about who he is.
I have to admit that I haven’t read a Middle Grade story in quite a while. My last foray was the Lemony Snicket books, and I’m still salty about how they ended. Truthfully, I didn’t know that LWH was MG for about a chapter and struggled with how simply it was written. I was worried for the book, to be frank. However, once I pulled my head out of my rear and realized what I was reading, I dove headlong into it with newfound fervor. I embraced Garlan and his journey completely, and through his trials and sorrows, I felt deeply what he did. In my opinion, that is nothing but a testament to Mark’s talent. Being in the mind of a child (especially a preteen) is no easy place to be, especially as an adult. But Mark did it with such gentility and kindness that it was impossible to look over.
If you have children, I can tell you this: get this book in their hands as soon as possible. It is filled entirely with motivation, wonder, and reassurance. I don’t know how he was able to pull it off, but Mark made me feel like I was the one who needed reminding of my worth. In a lot of ways, I was. On nearly every page, someone was there to remind Garlan of how much he meant to those around him. It made me feel warm and fuzzy. I cheered Garlan on as much as his companions did, and with every victory, loved him a little bit more. If my stepdaughter (she’s 13, lord help us) enjoyed reading, I would want this to be the next book she read. I would want it to remind her of just how capable and strong she is, just like Garlan. I can’t be with her right now, but I want her to always, always know that she can do anything she put her mind to. Reading this book as a parent is a treat because it reminds us of the things we need to say to our kids.
Kids are our future. When we’re old and gray, they will inherit the world we leave them. And books like Little White Hands are just what they need. Just what WE need. My daughter’s adventure may not be filled with swamp monsters and the embodiment of the four seasons, but wherever her journey takes her, like Garlan’s companions, I will be by her side cheering her on. I know I’m supposed to praise the book in this review, and I hope I have, but this is so much more than a book. It is a lesson that children and parents can both learn from.
That first step out your door is always the hardest. But that step can take you so many places. For Garlan, it was the adventure of a lifetime. For us, it might just be reminding our kids (and ourselves) how much we love them.
Editing with Full Review: Little White Hands is a tale of a small hopeful Knight who goes on a mighty adventure to help the Four Seasons battling. Garlan makes friends and enemies along the way, and even learns a lesson or two. My CAWPILE total score came out to 42/7 categories = 6 = 3 Stars, which is right along with my initial rating after finishing the book. (After looking this up again, on a different platform, I see it's listed as children's - which makes a lot more sense. Rating stays the same but adjusting some wording to match.) Characters - 7 - Unique characters that fit the tale for the age range. Atmosphere/Setting - 6 - I loved the atmosphere when the Blue Man walked through the town/forest/scene, etc. Writing Style - 6 - Nothing wrong with it, and now that I've seen it's been advertised as children's book elsewhere things make a lot more sense. When I originally looked this book up, it didn't say anything about children's books, but the cover was quite young. I thought maybe it was one of those books that's about children but with deeper themes and therefore not a children's book. So initially I thought this read really really young. It still does but it makes sense now. Plot - 5 - Technically, there was a plot that went throughout the book, but so much happened that I got distracted from this main plot line at times. Intrigue - 4 - There wasn't a whole lot of intrigue in this book. Which is not surprising as it's a children's book ... But it did have a few moments of intrigue and for that I give it 4. Logic/Relationships: 7 - Logic: not really sure how to score this in something like logic. However, Garlan makes a lot of good friendships and learns the true value of friendship. Enjoyment: I did enjoy it, despite it's flaws. I think I would have enjoyed it a bit more if I knew that it was supposed to be a children's book from the start - instead of just reading young. That is my mistake for not doing my homework at the beginning.
What an utterly charming, wholesome book! This is why I love reading Middle Grade / lower Young Adult stories. Things aren't any less dangerous and the stakes aren't any lower compared to adult fiction, but the protagonists aren't angry all the time or jaded or in a state of utter despair that they think the solution is to burn it all down or something. (I just find that exhausting especially with the state of our own world as of late.)
Garlan is a delightful hero. A real role model for young people. He's a kitchen boy with big dreams of becoming a knight, an underdog who takes on a quest to save the world — which he didn't have to, but did anyway. I was rooting for him the whole time!
One of the things I especially appreciated about how he was written was showing him processing the things he learned. He felt things and struggled with things, but more importantly, he learned and applied what he learned. Many heroes are already gifted with special abilities that they breeze through their adventures, but not Garlan. He learned and grew and earned his place, all while remaining kind and good-hearted. I just really really like that. Plus his relationship with everyone else was so good? I liked the variety of having mentor figures (a lot of them too, not just one who then dies per the popular trope LOL) and friends who are more his age.
Garlan's world is a fun one, too! Older readers might feel it's a little generic, but I think the use of familiar, across-the-board elements is a great way to prepare our young readers for the fantasy genre (particularly epic fantasy).
I highly recommend this for readers who want more accessible epic fantasy. It's got a lot of adventure and a lot of heart!
4.5 After reading some very intense dark fantasy, I really need a glimmer of sunshine. Although this is a middle school age book, I thoroughly enjoyed my time here. There are lots of mythical creatures that make an appearance here. We see a ghost knight and his horse, dryads and faeries, scary snowmen, scarecrows, mermaids, and frost giants (yetis). What’s not to like? Plus our young hero, Garlan, who is a kitchen boy who yearns to become a knight. As his journey progresses, he gets his chance. But he does not venture out alone. By his side is a sentient piece of wood, Oldface, who is actually a wizard. And his other companion is Trickster, a Fox with a beautiful multicolored tail that transforms into little birds. This trio experiences quite a few scary adventures along the way. This story reads like an old fashioned fairy tale. It is whimsical and magical. Characters are wonderful. Each chapter is an adventure. My only little quibble is that Garlan seems a bit too young to have certain feelings and being able to articulate them. However this doesn’t detract from my immense enjoyment of this story.
I really liked this one! I don't read much Middle Grade, so I wasn't sure if I would, but I was pleasantly surprised. This one was just so light and fluffy, it was adorable
My favorite thing was definitely the cast of characters. As Garlan continued his journey, he ran into so many loveable sidekicks. Trickster and Oldface were definitely my favorites, but even the faeries were super fun to read about. They added a super neat whimsical aspect into the story, which I'd partly why this one thrived.
I also really liked the development of Garlan. He was always a likeable character, but his growth was so relatable. He wasn't particularly skilled, he was just an adorable little guy. I connected to him so strongly, and was rooting for him the entire time.
Although this isn't what I normally read, I still really enjoyed it! Short enough to be a quick read, but with enough plot to keep me entertained, it was great.
Thanks to Storytellers on Tour for providing a free copy!
Mark Cushen's first book and hopefully not his last. I thoroughly enjoyed it and finished it in two sittings. The story follows an unlikely heroes journey around a world Cushen has lovingly created. His inspirations are clear and the story is like a love letter to those influences. Anyone with a hint of imagination will be able to fall headlong into this realm he has created. His writing is easy to follow and suited to readers young and old . I look forward to his future works. The artwork lends a nice tone to the story , that I as a reader enjoy, the pencil like naivety of the art inside the book is reminiscent of Quentin Wilson's sketches in Dahl's books , not in style but in nature and their contribution to the story.
I loved the idea of this book, and I liked the creative thinking of this author, but I found the character was very contradicting, and a little young acting for the age of 11. I would have guessed the character was 8. I did only read up to the climax of the book, but thought is was a little dull, so I stopped reading. With a little experience I can see Mark Cushen becoming a great author. I hope this review helps. Happy Reading, and Blessed Be. Lily Ashtree
Such a lovely book 😊 I read it slowly because I read the whole thing out loud to my son (who is way too young to understand words) - I can't wait to read it to him again when he's older 🥰
Note: I received an ARC of this book from the author in exchange for a voluntarily and honest review. Original review on my blog Boekensteeg Little White Hands is Mark Cushen's debut. In this book you will meet Garlan, a simple kitchen boy with a big dream: to work at the royal guard. This dream seems impossible until Garlan learns that he has been chosen to save the country from eternal winter.
Five hundred years ago in the great war, winter was defeated and imprisoned ever since. Faeland has not known winter for 500 years, until now. An icy cold arrivers in the Faeland, and a harsh winter arrives. The ruler of winter seems stronger than ever, and must be stopped. Can Garlan stop the ruler of winter and prevent an eternal winter?
Little White Hands is a book that shows you should never stop dreaming. Mark Cushen has managed to create a totally unique world in this book, and although this book revolves around the ruler of winter and Garlan, I felt I had just not received enough information about the war and the ruler of winter. Garlan also remains very superficial, and I would have liked to see him further developed as a character.
Where in most fantasy books the balance between male and female characters is very equal, this book has almost only male characters, so I could not relate to any of the characters. In addition, the book has a lot of secondary characters, who in my opinion often had little added value to the story.
Mark Cushen has a fine writing style with a normal pace. Although the story contains a lot of adventure, I really missed the thrills a bit. All in all Little White Hands is a decent debut that gets 3 stars from me.
Great read! the story has you interested from the off, scenes are described beautifully and the twist is not expected! Very clever writing looking forward to book 2!
When Mark Cushen reached out to me about the review of Little White Hands, I wasn't sure I was the right person for the task. I don't usually read books aimed at young readers. Mostly because I don't have kids myself, or contact with them, so I'm way out of touch with what their tastes can be. However, two things changed my mind - the blurb and the gorgeous cover artwork by Jeremy Adams! And I'm glad they did.
The blurb reads:
"Almost five hundred years have passed since the Seasons were at war. Half a millennium since Winter defied Spring, and lost. Generations have come and gone, not knowing the bitter freeze and howling snows of Winter ever existed. But now, after centuries of silence, the participants in this ancient struggle have resurfaced and reignited their feud on the doorstep of an unassuming little kitchen boy. Garlan's dreams of being just like the knights he idolizes may not be as impossible as he has always been led to believe, when he is chased from his home and thrust headlong into the kind of adventure he had only ever read about in books. Setting out on a journey that spans the entire kingdom of Faeland, Garlan will traverse impossible mountains and stormy seas and battle terrible monsters, all to keep the world he knows safe from an enemy who will stop at nothing to bring about a never-ending winter. With a cast of fantastical characters to aid him in his quest, can Garlan overcome his self-doubt and find the courage he needs to rise above his humble station and become the hero he always dreamed of being? The fate of the world rests in his hands."
Many moons have passed since I read a fairytale-like story, but when the book opened with: "If I were to tell you that there was once a humble little kitchenhand who struggled through many perils and pitfalls to become a venerated hero, would you believe me?" I was ready to get under a cosy blanket with a cup of hot cocoa and immerse myself in the whimsical world of Garlan, a kitchen boy who wants to be a knight.
And what a world that is! Inhabited by wizards and faeries, humans and ghosts, snowmen and knights, and obviously - the Four Seasons, this vivid creation is lovingly curated for the younger audiences. There is plenty of action to keep the reader interested, and a good few lessons to be learned.
Now, since I am an adult and work under the assumption that the review will be read mostly by other adults looking for a recommendation for young readers in their lives, there will be spoilers ahead.
If you yourself are a young reader - I will say that you chose well. Make yourself comfortable in your reading spot and enjoy the story.
-- Spoilers inbound --
The main character, 11-year-old Garlan, wants to be a knight. He has a dream and works for it within his meagre means. As a kitchen hand, he knows that the road to knighthood will be long and hard, if at all possible. But despite all the naysayers and doubts - he trains every day with his wooden sword to become the best he can be. Yes, it's good to have dreams. It's ok if they seem impossibly far to reach. Dedication and hard work will pay off - in the best-case scenario, you'll triumphantly live up to your dream. At worst - you'll gain invaluable skills in the process.
His journey is long and full of both dangers and heartbreak. Various characters come to Garland's aid, and sometimes this aid comes in the form of sacrifice he doesn't want to accept. Yet, for the journey to continue, there's little he can do to prevent it, being just a young boy. A painful reminder that we may lose something or someone on every journey we take, and there is nothing we can do but to endure. It doesn't make the pain any easier to bear, but it is a part of our journey nonetheless.
Garland, surrounded by sidekicks much older and wiser than him, is often given advice or actively asks for it. Even though the final decision is still up to him, he always listens to his advisors. Sometimes he makes a questionable choice but is not afraid of facing the consequences of such. Unpleasant as they may be, he keeps reminding himself about what would a knight do in his situation and acts accordingly. Honestly, many grown-ups I know would benefit from applying the (mentally) "dress for the job you want" rule in everyday life.
And the final lesson I'll bring up, the one I personally appreciated the most, is the one given at the very end. Upon Garland's return from the quest and saving the world from Hoarime's frosted rage, a reward awaits him. The King, in appreciation for his courage, appoints him as...
Here I was expecting the usual "get the ultimate reward and live happilyeveraftertheend" conclusion. The children's and YA stories often portray that since you helped rescue the Princess and did half the work, you get half the swamp. Or something along this line if Donkey is to be trusted. Don't get me wrong - you did the work, you should get rewarded, but in real life, the story doesn't end with the arrival at your Destination station. When you land the dream opportunity, you rarely rest on laurels as the end credits run - most of the time, that comes with many more a chapter, a lot of work (thank you for coming to my TED talk...). You probably guessed that this is a pet peeve of mine.
Here's what Mark did in "Little White Hands" - at the end of the story, when King heard of all Garland's perils, he decided to award him appropriately. And so Garland is given an opportunity to become... a squire! YES! My heart rejoiced! You worked damn hard for your dream, and the opportunity knocks on your door. But, as real-life often has it, it is dressed in overalls and carries a promise of more work to be done. And more adventures to have, and growth, and self-improvement, etc...
All of the above makes me forgive two blemishes the book has, both of which can easily be improved upon as Mark Cushen builds upon his craft. One - the story is leaning more towards the male audience since the vast majority of the characters happen to be male. Having said that, I'd rather read a decent male character than an ineptly created female one. One of the pieces of advice that writers are often given is "write what you know", which I see happening here. And two (which is more likely a me problem, than a book problem) - I had to keep reminding myself that Garlan is 11. The way he was portrayed put him in my eyes as a 14 to 16-year-old teenager instead. Something about his attitude and ability to hold up in a fight with more skilled opponents was a bit amiss for me. On that note, my experiences with 11-year-olds are limited, and I suspect that any 11-year-old who practised with a sword and a shield more than I did would've been able to painfully prove me wrong. All in all, these are more of an observation than a criticism.
Overall - I enjoyed the story very much and would certainly recommend adding it to a reading list of a young adult in your life. "Little White Hands" is Mark Cushen's debut, and seeing how much love and care he pumped into it, I eagerly look forward to reading his future creations.
Although I know this is intended for children/young adults, I was so enchanted with this story I've already ordered the next one in the series lol. It's been nearly 500 years since the war of the High Seasons, when the Lord Winter decided not to return to the Season Tree, thereby keeping the world in Winter indefinitely. Although Lord Winter lost the battle, and has been entombed for half a millennia, Winter has once again reared it's icy head after an attack on the farm where the High Seasons pass their designated time on earth. When a knight dies in the arms of an eleven year old kitchen boy, he is set on a quest to notify the other High Seasons of the attack, and the possible release of Lord Winter....to prevent another war that could potentially destroy the earth. And so begins a quest of epic proportions that will change his life forever. The book has everything! Floating heads and talking animals, mages and fairies and goblins and slithering serpents in the deep. It has evil witches and enchanted forests, specters that teach life lessons, pirates, and a catfish the size of a dragon! Through all his trials and travels, little Galen makes new friends, faces hardships he never dreamed could exist, and learns not only what he's made of, but what kind of person he wants to be. Absolutely wonderful book! One of the sweetest MC's I've ever read, but with enough action and drama to keep even me on the edge of my seat lol. Highly recommend it!
“I have learned to be happy with who and what I am.” •There's magic in here, there's fantasy, there's a lot of stuff in this book. But none of them comes anywhere near the most beautiful and important message this story shares, Being yourself is more than enough. It can do amazing things in this world. •Garlan, our protagonist, he is a no one. Literally nobody. All he has is the heart full of courage and strength, and the dream to be a knight someday. This maybe his story. But it's not just about him. It's about all of us, who thinks that we are not enough. • This story is what I like to call a storytelling. The narration is like an old man telling an age old story in front of a campfire, in the darkness of the night. And the writing is full of great word building and epic fantasy adventure. Not once has this book lost its momentum. The action, the humour and sarcasm, the beauty of everything is so well written that you can feel it's life. • Trolls, fairies, witches, monsters, the beautiful fantastical magical world, and the four Season as living gods are the highlights of the book but there's a lot more than that, waiting for you. • I so want to spoil this book for you 😅😈. But I am going to end it with this, Little White Hands is the book that you needed. 💕
I Read this book is part of a book tour from storytellers on tour and was completely blown away by how in-depth the entire world is and we've only scratched the surface.
The story definitely started as a character bumbling around before he was able to kind of find his way and grow into a stronger character. But luckily he gets a few friends that are able to help him along the way. I definitely say I could use an old face in my life. I thoroughly enjoyed the growth of the main character Garlan as the series progressed. It didn't feel forced and everything seemed to happen kind of organically as they grew into himself a bit more. He was definitely not overpowered but he did have some luck on his side.
I do think that this is for a little bit older young adults maybe around Middle School age as there are some areas of violence. But overall I think close to any age can really enjoy this.
In my opinion this is a great story and beginning to a series that I hope goes on for a very long time and I look forward to the next book. It is highly exciting and fraught with adventure and a few twists.
There's no other way to rate this, I give this book 5 wooden swords out of 5.
Until next time, -Teo
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I received a copy of Little White hands by Mark Cushen as part of BBNYA - the Book Bloggers Novel of the Year Competition where it was a finalist, finishing in the top ten.
And… it is well deserved!
This is a really great and fun read. It’s very easy to get into and within a few pages you really find yourself invested. There is so much in this that reminds me of other favourites from the Hobbit to the Chronicles of Narnia and even a little of an old 80's movie (Willow) which I adored (unlike the crap modern remake).
I love Cushen’s style of writing, literally from the opening line you just know you are going to like this. It has that really easy, talking to a friend, feel where every line is a treat. I love reading old fairy tales and it really does read a lot like one of them. Garlan is your classic comes from nothing hero, who gets swept away on an adventure far too big and grand for the likes of him. (This is why Willow and the hobbit jumped out at me as I read it).
I won’t give anything away about the plot but I will say if you enjoy fantasy targeted for young children and are looking for something a little different then absolutely give this a try. There is a reason it beat out, dunno 250-300 other books and made it to the finals of BBNYA