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Chains
"Annihilation is upon you. The whirlwind you now find yourselves in is filled with agony and anguish. Look upon me and despair, for my design is vicious, my resolve is merciless, and your end will be horrendous!"
Within the folklore of the low countries in Europe there is an ancient nocturnal creature of nightmares, a trickster, a shapeshifting demon, merciless and horrifying, that torments its victims before killing them. This creature is still among us today, feeding on the fear of its prey.
Max is about to meet this creature and will be tested to the limits of his fear and his will to survive. There is no choice but to play at the monster's game, the consequences of which could mean the deaths of Max's mother, his girlfriend, his friends and the loss of his very soul.
Ursel has survived the horrors of WWII only to be deceived and deluded into entering into a pact with a demon, a pact that will give him riches and long life but will cost him everything he could ever love: his wife, his son and his grandson.
"Chains" is a thrilling horror novel that takes the reader on a journey to an unnamed northern Canadian town, to the cities of Belgium, to WWII Poland, to the South Manhattan Bowery in New York City, and to a place of dragons and demons.
This is a story about the links that bind us together, which are the indestructible and everlasting chains that connect our fates.
Within the folklore of the low countries in Europe there is an ancient nocturnal creature of nightmares, a trickster, a shapeshifting demon, merciless and horrifying, that torments its victims before killing them. This creature is still among us today, feeding on the fear of its prey.
Max is about to meet this creature and will be tested to the limits of his fear and his will to survive. There is no choice but to play at the monster's game, the consequences of which could mean the deaths of Max's mother, his girlfriend, his friends and the loss of his very soul.
Ursel has survived the horrors of WWII only to be deceived and deluded into entering into a pact with a demon, a pact that will give him riches and long life but will cost him everything he could ever love: his wife, his son and his grandson.
"Chains" is a thrilling horror novel that takes the reader on a journey to an unnamed northern Canadian town, to the cities of Belgium, to WWII Poland, to the South Manhattan Bowery in New York City, and to a place of dragons and demons.
This is a story about the links that bind us together, which are the indestructible and everlasting chains that connect our fates.
- GenresHorror
284 pages, Hardcover
Published March 18, 2021
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About the author
Marc Todd
2 books163 followersAuthor Marc Todd invites you to step into a world of demons and witches, dragons and monsters, heroes and villains where the real and the surreal co-exist in fantastical and frightening aspects.
Marc was born and raised in the Niagara region, in Ontario Canada. “A Darkness of Demons” his second novel was released in October 2024. His first novel “Chains” was released in 2021; noted as being ‘a perfectly plotted, brutal and moving tale with relentless levels of tension and horror’.
As a writer, Marc is looking to give readers original, thought-provoking stories with strong characters interacting in other-worldly circumstances.
Marc works full-time trying to make the world a better place for everyone. And when he’s not doing that, you can find him doing a wide array of hobbies which include music, books, games, portaging / camping, and trivia.
Marc was born and raised in the Niagara region, in Ontario Canada. “A Darkness of Demons” his second novel was released in October 2024. His first novel “Chains” was released in 2021; noted as being ‘a perfectly plotted, brutal and moving tale with relentless levels of tension and horror’.
As a writer, Marc is looking to give readers original, thought-provoking stories with strong characters interacting in other-worldly circumstances.
Marc works full-time trying to make the world a better place for everyone. And when he’s not doing that, you can find him doing a wide array of hobbies which include music, books, games, portaging / camping, and trivia.
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June 19, 2021
"Chains" is by far one of the most interesting books I have read this year: its structure, its pacing and above all, its strangely compelling antagonist are just a breath of fresh air in often formulaic horror fiction.
To be honest I initially had my doubts I would like it, mainly because I've really had it with books who move between two timelines present and past. Having now finished the book, I realize it was very necessary for "Chains" to do so and in hindsight I'm glad it did, because I ended up enjoying the "past" parts more than the storyline and the characters in present. And to be fair, M. Todd does not follow the trend of alternating the two timelines, but brings in the past in due places as an explanation. But, first things first, let's start from the beginning with the plot.
"It doesn't matter what you believe. Hell believes in you."
"Chains" is a folk horror book that borrows folkloric elements from Dutch mythology; we follow a Canadian family with Dutch origins, Max and his mother Hennie, who need to put up with an evil from their old home. A Faustian deal made by Max's grandfather Ursel during WWII makes sure that this nervous young man and his loved ones suffer some serious terror at the hands of this monster!
Horror comes in many guises and forms and here it is the unscrupulous Dutch folk monster Kludde/Kledde. Let me highlight how much I enjoyed this shapeshifting trickster! He's truly off the charts in what evil he can do... Always a cheeky or mean remark on his lips, consistently bad, corrupt and highly unreliable, he feeds on the fear of his victims, playing with them like cat playing with its prey to magnify and relish the flavor of this fear! Little Ursel, as an orphaned young boy seeking revenge, had no choice but fall into his repellent trap.
But the range of his evil is not limited to this little boy, every side character playing a role in "Chains" is to some degree affected by Kludde. And this is a point that I think is important, because I find Todd giving a back story to almost all of his side characters very successfully done - the stories of Hennie and her late husband Rien; Iam Reitt, the Native American bodyguard of the city counsellor; Max's friend, Asian-Canadian Ken Sugiyama; Everil the punk and of course little Ursel were infinitely more interesting to me than main character Max.
Max not being particularly interesting has its reasons, though; especially the first half of the book reads like some kind of fairy tale or an homage to Central European tellings, like a distorted Red Riding Hood where the wolf/werewolf/shapeshifter surprises protagonist by arriving at his (grand)mother's house before him. So accordingly, Todd plays with archetypes: the young innocent, the chosen one (or more like the "cursed one") who needs to defeat his fears by confronting them is reflected in Max and the absolute evil in Kludde. And the language is accordingly a little stripped down especially in this first part but as the story unfolds, reaching dimensions that go beyond this initial homage to Dutch folklore, the story gains in pace and the dialogues in fluency.
"Alles hat ein Ende, nur die Wurst hat zwei."
As a half German who probably (hopefully! My grandmother used to sing this song!) enjoys a certain familiarity to the culture but also a certain distance, dialogues like the following between two WWII soldiers cracked me up:
"What a bunch of banana benders. Such arsch mit ohren walking around. If they were to come face-to-face with any of our soldiers, they would turn to kotzbrocken. Nothing but a gang of hosenscheißer, all of them." Len liked to be creative with his words.
"Yes, here comes one of the blockflötengesichts now", said Rolf.
Blockflötengesicht!!!
Although somewhat exaggerated, it wouldn't be unrealistic to imagine people talking like this and I still laugh at this excerpt. Although my grandparents lived in a neighboring town on the border to Netherlands, I unfortunately know next to nothing about Dutch/Belgian folklore and found the nocturnal, shapeshifting evil Kludde very interesting. Almost like the French loup-garou but cunning and articulate. I had the impression that Todd either knows this mythology first hand from his own background or his researches were very thorough.
Ultimately, I enjoyed this book progressively more and more. I was glad that it ended on a semi-cliffhanger; you could stop reading here but the ending also gives hope that "Chains" could spawn sequels. Any reader who finds this folklore appealing, but also the ones who don't but are into fresh antagonists, shouldn't miss it, I certainly had a good time.
My thanks to M. Todd for sending me a digital copy of "Chains" in exchange of an honest review.
To be honest I initially had my doubts I would like it, mainly because I've really had it with books who move between two timelines present and past. Having now finished the book, I realize it was very necessary for "Chains" to do so and in hindsight I'm glad it did, because I ended up enjoying the "past" parts more than the storyline and the characters in present. And to be fair, M. Todd does not follow the trend of alternating the two timelines, but brings in the past in due places as an explanation. But, first things first, let's start from the beginning with the plot.
"It doesn't matter what you believe. Hell believes in you."
"Chains" is a folk horror book that borrows folkloric elements from Dutch mythology; we follow a Canadian family with Dutch origins, Max and his mother Hennie, who need to put up with an evil from their old home. A Faustian deal made by Max's grandfather Ursel during WWII makes sure that this nervous young man and his loved ones suffer some serious terror at the hands of this monster!
Horror comes in many guises and forms and here it is the unscrupulous Dutch folk monster Kludde/Kledde. Let me highlight how much I enjoyed this shapeshifting trickster! He's truly off the charts in what evil he can do... Always a cheeky or mean remark on his lips, consistently bad, corrupt and highly unreliable, he feeds on the fear of his victims, playing with them like cat playing with its prey to magnify and relish the flavor of this fear! Little Ursel, as an orphaned young boy seeking revenge, had no choice but fall into his repellent trap.
But the range of his evil is not limited to this little boy, every side character playing a role in "Chains" is to some degree affected by Kludde. And this is a point that I think is important, because I find Todd giving a back story to almost all of his side characters very successfully done - the stories of Hennie and her late husband Rien; Iam Reitt, the Native American bodyguard of the city counsellor; Max's friend, Asian-Canadian Ken Sugiyama; Everil the punk and of course little Ursel were infinitely more interesting to me than main character Max.
Max not being particularly interesting has its reasons, though; especially the first half of the book reads like some kind of fairy tale or an homage to Central European tellings, like a distorted Red Riding Hood where the wolf/werewolf/shapeshifter surprises protagonist by arriving at his (grand)mother's house before him. So accordingly, Todd plays with archetypes: the young innocent, the chosen one (or more like the "cursed one") who needs to defeat his fears by confronting them is reflected in Max and the absolute evil in Kludde. And the language is accordingly a little stripped down especially in this first part but as the story unfolds, reaching dimensions that go beyond this initial homage to Dutch folklore, the story gains in pace and the dialogues in fluency.
"Alles hat ein Ende, nur die Wurst hat zwei."
As a half German who probably (hopefully! My grandmother used to sing this song!) enjoys a certain familiarity to the culture but also a certain distance, dialogues like the following between two WWII soldiers cracked me up:
"What a bunch of banana benders. Such arsch mit ohren walking around. If they were to come face-to-face with any of our soldiers, they would turn to kotzbrocken. Nothing but a gang of hosenscheißer, all of them." Len liked to be creative with his words.
"Yes, here comes one of the blockflötengesichts now", said Rolf.
Blockflötengesicht!!!
Although somewhat exaggerated, it wouldn't be unrealistic to imagine people talking like this and I still laugh at this excerpt. Although my grandparents lived in a neighboring town on the border to Netherlands, I unfortunately know next to nothing about Dutch/Belgian folklore and found the nocturnal, shapeshifting evil Kludde very interesting. Almost like the French loup-garou but cunning and articulate. I had the impression that Todd either knows this mythology first hand from his own background or his researches were very thorough.
Ultimately, I enjoyed this book progressively more and more. I was glad that it ended on a semi-cliffhanger; you could stop reading here but the ending also gives hope that "Chains" could spawn sequels. Any reader who finds this folklore appealing, but also the ones who don't but are into fresh antagonists, shouldn't miss it, I certainly had a good time.
My thanks to M. Todd for sending me a digital copy of "Chains" in exchange of an honest review.
August 11, 2021
I went into this story blind, having no real idea of what I was about to read. I love a good creature feature and when you add in a healthy dose of history and folklore, I’m all in.
This is not a quick read. Get comfortable, get that pot of tea ready and some biscuits. Do not try to rush this story along as there is a lot to unpack. Let it happen as you read. You will get pulled into the story from page one. You will begin to worry about Max and his girlfriend as their situation becomes more dangerous and you will get lost in the history and brutality of WWII as the backstory unfolds, revealing a heart wrenching link in this wretched family chain.
The story centers around a creature called “The Kludde” which is a sort of demi-god, shapeshifter, trickster type of entity that feeds on fear, but not just any fear. It lives to feed on the best or conversely the worst among us, the hero or the anti-hero. Those that claim to be fearless, or unbreakable. It loves to break them, to feed from their fear, so much more potent than others. Max, happens to come from a long bloodline of a fearless man, an evil man that first met the Kludde in WWII Europe.
The story unfolds in modern times but then takes you back through history, following the cursed bloodline to its origins, tying the links together, before the finale of Max’s story. There is a bit of lull in the action, in the middle of the book when the backstory is unfolding, but there is so much to unfold there that it ultimately adds to Max’s predicament and the final outcome.
Four solid stars for this intriguing story.
This is not a quick read. Get comfortable, get that pot of tea ready and some biscuits. Do not try to rush this story along as there is a lot to unpack. Let it happen as you read. You will get pulled into the story from page one. You will begin to worry about Max and his girlfriend as their situation becomes more dangerous and you will get lost in the history and brutality of WWII as the backstory unfolds, revealing a heart wrenching link in this wretched family chain.
The story centers around a creature called “The Kludde” which is a sort of demi-god, shapeshifter, trickster type of entity that feeds on fear, but not just any fear. It lives to feed on the best or conversely the worst among us, the hero or the anti-hero. Those that claim to be fearless, or unbreakable. It loves to break them, to feed from their fear, so much more potent than others. Max, happens to come from a long bloodline of a fearless man, an evil man that first met the Kludde in WWII Europe.
The story unfolds in modern times but then takes you back through history, following the cursed bloodline to its origins, tying the links together, before the finale of Max’s story. There is a bit of lull in the action, in the middle of the book when the backstory is unfolding, but there is so much to unfold there that it ultimately adds to Max’s predicament and the final outcome.
Four solid stars for this intriguing story.
May 12, 2021
Chains by M. Todd is a perfectly plotted and masterfully, even beautifully written, psychological thriller about a terrifying monster of myth. The Kludde. An ancient, mysterious evil. An ancient horror. An ancient demon. This riveting page turner will keep you up as you follow Max, his family and friends as they battle the fiendish Kludde. Follow the Kludde as he relentlessly pursues his victims. Will Max, his family and friends save themselves? Will they overcome a sadistic curse, a deal made with the devil generations ago? This book is filled with twists and turns and mounting suspense sure to rival the horrors of Stephen King and psychological thrillers of Tana French. M. Todd is just a great writer. The ghoulish tale is inventive, dangerous, filled with epic symbolism and even philosophy! It’s an action packed, five-star story from a five-star writer that will keep you turning the pages and on the edge of your seat into the long shadows of darkness. I highly recommend you read this heart pounding and excellent debut. Chains by M. Todd is a masterpiece sure to leave you breathless.
May 5, 2021
This book really surprised me. I was impressed with the author's ability to bring such quiet terror to his writing. Todd's writing was enthralling and beautiful and wholly encapsulated my attention. I didn't want to put it down, and simultaneously wished I hadn't been reading it before bed--a true sign of horror.
Not only was this a thrilling read, but Todd also had something to say about hope and the connections that bind us to one another, how trauma shapes us, what survival looks like, and great fear. In the same vein and imagery as Clive Barker or Guillermo del Toro, Todd has produced a book that is fit for anyone who loves ancient beasts of horror and a psychological thrill ride.
Not only was this a thrilling read, but Todd also had something to say about hope and the connections that bind us to one another, how trauma shapes us, what survival looks like, and great fear. In the same vein and imagery as Clive Barker or Guillermo del Toro, Todd has produced a book that is fit for anyone who loves ancient beasts of horror and a psychological thrill ride.
March 2, 2022
A very well-written book with wonderfully-interesting characters. Interesting plot that kept me thoroughly engaged throughout. Enjoyed every minute of it!
*I received a complimentary ARC of this book in order to read and provide a voluntary, unbiased and honest review, should I choose to do so.
*I received a complimentary ARC of this book in order to read and provide a voluntary, unbiased and honest review, should I choose to do so.
May 6, 2021
Expertly written, rich world...
I was a huge fan of this book from beginning to end. Captivating, rich in detail and expertly written, it was a special treat.
I was a huge fan of this book from beginning to end. Captivating, rich in detail and expertly written, it was a special treat.
May 7, 2021
After reading only a couple of pages, I knew that CHAINS would be a book to read and savor. Think a fast burger on the run versus a succulent filet mignon enjoyed with a glass of fine wine.
Pigeonholing. Brick and mortar bookstores are very good at pigeonholing. However. forcing books into specific categories doesn't work well. I give you the ever-changing shelf space given books deemed 'horror.' When browsing a brick-and-mortar bookstore, I would always peruse the horror and science fiction shelves. I have always been attracted to the speculative. On what shelf would you put CHAINS? Personally, I would put it in a section called Read These Books!
CHAINS is about good and evil, men and monsters, power and fear. There is a monster that seems formed of every monster literature has ever created. It is a shapeshifter but not a were-creature. It is a vampire but not a bloodsucker. It is alien but not from some far-flung planet. As is my wont, I turned to Google to see what the internet has to say about the Kludde. Although new to me, this creature seems well known in Dutch folklore. It may seem strange, but over the past several years, I have taken to 'fact checking' even things in fiction. I have always said that a day where I learn something new is a good day… today is a good day.
The complex plot of CHAINS is offset by the normalcy of Max, Emily, and their close friends. As they become embroiled in the terrifying circumstance Max must face at the claws of the demon, you will feel the thrill of danger, the strange delight of fear. Afterall, they, like you, are only human.
A well-written debut novel often portends future books worth reading. If I am reading the tea leaves correctly, there should be a sequel. I for one, want to know more about Emily. CHAINS is a fine piece of writing that deserves to be read.
PS: Take a deep breath and read 'About the Author.' I did… then asked myself 'when does this man sleep?'
Pigeonholing. Brick and mortar bookstores are very good at pigeonholing. However. forcing books into specific categories doesn't work well. I give you the ever-changing shelf space given books deemed 'horror.' When browsing a brick-and-mortar bookstore, I would always peruse the horror and science fiction shelves. I have always been attracted to the speculative. On what shelf would you put CHAINS? Personally, I would put it in a section called Read These Books!
CHAINS is about good and evil, men and monsters, power and fear. There is a monster that seems formed of every monster literature has ever created. It is a shapeshifter but not a were-creature. It is a vampire but not a bloodsucker. It is alien but not from some far-flung planet. As is my wont, I turned to Google to see what the internet has to say about the Kludde. Although new to me, this creature seems well known in Dutch folklore. It may seem strange, but over the past several years, I have taken to 'fact checking' even things in fiction. I have always said that a day where I learn something new is a good day… today is a good day.
The complex plot of CHAINS is offset by the normalcy of Max, Emily, and their close friends. As they become embroiled in the terrifying circumstance Max must face at the claws of the demon, you will feel the thrill of danger, the strange delight of fear. Afterall, they, like you, are only human.
A well-written debut novel often portends future books worth reading. If I am reading the tea leaves correctly, there should be a sequel. I for one, want to know more about Emily. CHAINS is a fine piece of writing that deserves to be read.
PS: Take a deep breath and read 'About the Author.' I did… then asked myself 'when does this man sleep?'
June 22, 2021
Chains by M Todd is a brutal and moving tale with relentless levels of tension and horror. Todd employs a mixture of folklore and cosmic horror to create a demon story outside the norm.
The story itself is so intense, one could almost miss the depth, the psychological and human elements. But ultimately, it is not just about good and evil, it’s also about corruption, desperation, and determination. It’s about the bonds between people. It’s about the literal and figurative demons of our pasts. But it is also an epic horror story about a demon out of myth and legend and the terror it inflicts.
I enjoyed this story for its brutality (it’s about a demon, so …), its realistic characters, its incredible plot and sequencing, and for its merciless flow. I love how Todd includes backstory and origin story without a hint of overwriting or lag. This story is quite evocative and has some very hardcore subject matter. It is not for the squeamish, so don’t be fooled by the reference to it being a horror thriller. It is more than that. Todd plumbs the depths of horror and brings forththings that evoke a physical response as well as an emotional one. There’s a philosophical realness here that will have you thinking dark thoughts deep into the night. Serious horror fans only, please.
The story itself is so intense, one could almost miss the depth, the psychological and human elements. But ultimately, it is not just about good and evil, it’s also about corruption, desperation, and determination. It’s about the bonds between people. It’s about the literal and figurative demons of our pasts. But it is also an epic horror story about a demon out of myth and legend and the terror it inflicts.
I enjoyed this story for its brutality (it’s about a demon, so …), its realistic characters, its incredible plot and sequencing, and for its merciless flow. I love how Todd includes backstory and origin story without a hint of overwriting or lag. This story is quite evocative and has some very hardcore subject matter. It is not for the squeamish, so don’t be fooled by the reference to it being a horror thriller. It is more than that. Todd plumbs the depths of horror and brings forththings that evoke a physical response as well as an emotional one. There’s a philosophical realness here that will have you thinking dark thoughts deep into the night. Serious horror fans only, please.
July 11, 2021
I would like to thank Tellwell Talent and BookSirens for allowing me to read this ARC free for an honest review. Max Bakkers has a big problem. There’s a monster trying to kill him. Not just kill him, but torture and taunt him to bring out all his deepest fears. It’s a strong monster, a god of a monster and it wants to bring Max to his knees in terror. Fear and terror are its sustenance, what keeps it alive. It wants to kill everyone Max holds dear first to build his fear. Max has to look inside himself and see if he has to courage to overcome The Kludde. I found this story to be pretty scary. The Kludde was a mythical monster in Dutch folklore during the Middle Ages and Mr. Todd has brought it to modern times. The writing and the story were both good and I really liked Max, his mother, Hennie, and his friend, Emily. I would rate this story 3.5, but gave it 4 stars, as it was a very quick read and I like that. I had never heard of The Kludde before, but it will be a while before I forget it.
October 25, 2021
Hmmm....I really wanted to like this one, and thought it would be a good Spooktober read but it fell flat for me. It took a long time to get into and this isn't a very long book.
The writing isn't bad at all and the story flows and paces well but, for me, it was just too slow. Slow is sometimes good but for horror I like to have more scary and action than slow.
I sincerely appreciate the publisher and Book Sirens for providing me with a review copy. All opinions expressed herein are mine and mine alone.
The writing isn't bad at all and the story flows and paces well but, for me, it was just too slow. Slow is sometimes good but for horror I like to have more scary and action than slow.
I sincerely appreciate the publisher and Book Sirens for providing me with a review copy. All opinions expressed herein are mine and mine alone.
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June 24, 2022A solid story idea dragged down by writing that included far too may adjectives, strange turns of phrase, and the feeling that the author was trying to meet a word count by shoving in unnecessary descriptions. A good editor would would wonders for this book.
August 7, 2025
As someone who's played in a band named Kludde for many years, I was intrigued by Chains, which centers around the same mythological figure. The topic is close to my heart, so I approached the book with curiosity and a critical mindset.
Kludde is a creature from Flemish folklore: a shapeshifting water demon, particularly associated with the Dender and Scheldt regions of Belgium. In this novel, however, the story takes place mostly in Canada. This in itself is completely fine, as the chapters move back and forth between Canada and Belgium. The origin of Kludde is briefly referenced, but not very accurately. For instance, the book literally claims: "A Dutch folklore page revealed that the Kludde was from The Netherlands, a place called Brabant, although it was also part of Belgium folklore legend." That’s factually incorrect. Kludde has little or nothing to do with Dutch folklore, and certainly not with the Netherlands as a whole.
There are also some confusing and misplaced cultural references throughout. Characters are named Ursel, Rien, Hennie... Rien and Hennie are very Dutch sounding names. Ursel Bakkers is a central figure in the book, a man born in Leuven, Belgium. Ursel is a German girls name, and Bakkers is a Dutch surname. Scenes supposedly set in Belgium take place near the river Dijle, which has no particular link to the Kludde legend. Dutch foods like tosti and spekkoek are mentioned several times, though these are not Belgian staples. A "tosti" is called a croque-monsieur in Belgium. It gave me the impression that the author blurred the lines between Belgium, the Netherlands, and Germany, which might not bother a Canadian reader, but feels odd and jarring if you're Belgian. While some chapters take place in Belgium, all cultural references point to the Netherlands. Belgium (Flanders) and the Netherlands share a language, but are culturally very, very different.
Another thing that stood out was the portrayal of Kludde himself. He speaks in an overly pompous and theatrical tone, constantly making grandiose threats. In folklore, Kludde is more of a tormentor, a malevolent trickster who terrifies or harasses people. Not necessarily the embodiment of ultimate evil. The exaggerated tone made him feel melodramatic.
The novel also features numerous nightmare sequences which, for me, disrupted the pacing and didn’t add much. While the writing itself isn’t bad, I found the story neither particularly compelling nor engaging. And the many factual and cultural inaccuracies ended up being too distracting for me to truly enjoy it. A little too much creative liberty, not enough depth, and ultimately not the immersive or respectful tribute I had hoped for.
Kludde is a creature from Flemish folklore: a shapeshifting water demon, particularly associated with the Dender and Scheldt regions of Belgium. In this novel, however, the story takes place mostly in Canada. This in itself is completely fine, as the chapters move back and forth between Canada and Belgium. The origin of Kludde is briefly referenced, but not very accurately. For instance, the book literally claims: "A Dutch folklore page revealed that the Kludde was from The Netherlands, a place called Brabant, although it was also part of Belgium folklore legend." That’s factually incorrect. Kludde has little or nothing to do with Dutch folklore, and certainly not with the Netherlands as a whole.
There are also some confusing and misplaced cultural references throughout. Characters are named Ursel, Rien, Hennie... Rien and Hennie are very Dutch sounding names. Ursel Bakkers is a central figure in the book, a man born in Leuven, Belgium. Ursel is a German girls name, and Bakkers is a Dutch surname. Scenes supposedly set in Belgium take place near the river Dijle, which has no particular link to the Kludde legend. Dutch foods like tosti and spekkoek are mentioned several times, though these are not Belgian staples. A "tosti" is called a croque-monsieur in Belgium. It gave me the impression that the author blurred the lines between Belgium, the Netherlands, and Germany, which might not bother a Canadian reader, but feels odd and jarring if you're Belgian. While some chapters take place in Belgium, all cultural references point to the Netherlands. Belgium (Flanders) and the Netherlands share a language, but are culturally very, very different.
Another thing that stood out was the portrayal of Kludde himself. He speaks in an overly pompous and theatrical tone, constantly making grandiose threats. In folklore, Kludde is more of a tormentor, a malevolent trickster who terrifies or harasses people. Not necessarily the embodiment of ultimate evil. The exaggerated tone made him feel melodramatic.
The novel also features numerous nightmare sequences which, for me, disrupted the pacing and didn’t add much. While the writing itself isn’t bad, I found the story neither particularly compelling nor engaging. And the many factual and cultural inaccuracies ended up being too distracting for me to truly enjoy it. A little too much creative liberty, not enough depth, and ultimately not the immersive or respectful tribute I had hoped for.
September 10, 2021
I loved the mix of horror and mythology in Chains. This is definitely a story you need to take your time with. If you rush it, you will lose some of the nuances within its pages.
I would have loved to know the specifics of Max's last encounter with the Kludde. The ending is also intriguing as it paves the way for another book.
Chains is the first book I have read from this author but it definitely won't be the last.
I received a free Advance Reader Copy of Chains through BookSirens and have chosen to leave a review.
I would have loved to know the specifics of Max's last encounter with the Kludde. The ending is also intriguing as it paves the way for another book.
Chains is the first book I have read from this author but it definitely won't be the last.
I received a free Advance Reader Copy of Chains through BookSirens and have chosen to leave a review.
May 7, 2021
7/6/2012, NYC, NY. Webber Hall’s VIP section. Everil Lievereux (57, bouncer) was having a beer with Sheila (45+, GF) & waiting for Neander Sex Slaves (punk band) to start playing.
The Neander Sex Slaves bass player stumbled out of the dressing room with his arm bleeding from a severe cut.
The Concert was quickly cancelled.
Maximilian “Max” Rien Bakkers was fascinated by deaths by drowning.
Today is Saint’s Day, & tomorrow is All Souls’ Day.
Officer Swithen & Officer Evans were speaking to Ken Sugiyama (son) about some vandalism.
Emily had been volunteering on/off for BFF’s Julianna’s mom Jennifer Connelly.
Piper bar. There were musicians doing solo’s & several bands presenting.
Rein (25, f, Subliminale Occulte Marketingnetwerken en Allianties Mutual Bakkers-Ursel Limited SOMNAMBUL marketing firm secretary) worked for Ursel Bakkers (Rien’s eccentric father, SOMNAMBUL owner).
Later Rien’s funeral was held, the eulogy was read, followed by the burial & dinner. Everyone gave their condolences to the Bakkers family.
Rien & Lars Van Buskirk (Rein’s younger brother) had drowned.
Hennie (f) thought Ursel had something to do with their deaths.
A Kludde (Tormentor, Child Terrorizer, Trickster, shapeshifter, complete with internal guts, no outward solid state) had confronted Hennie.
It spoke & whispered Sit Draco Mihi Dux & vanished as soon as it appeared.
Max & Emily read up on the creature.
adjutant Lieutenant/Dr. Battel ordered trucks to go into the Jewish ghetto & pick up as many of them as possible & then bring them to the Wehrmacht barracks to be placed under the protection of the soldiers stationed there.
Sergeant Major Rolf Brandt had disappeared somewhere along the San River. 2 German soldiers had spied claw marks in the grass. They didn’t report it to their superiors what thewy saw.
Grandfather Ursel found out Hennie “Hen” (wife/mother) had died & Maximillian “Max” (son) disappeared.
Mr. Kledde (Kludde, trickster, shapeshifter, monster, liar, black Bullmastiff/Rottweiler mix) came to see Grandfather Ursel.
I do not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing free books from publishers & authors. Therefore, I am under no obligation to write a positive review, only an honest one.
An awesome book cover, hand drawn black/white pictures, great font & writing style. A very professionally written paranormal book. It wasn’t always easy for me to read/follow from start/finish, but never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters & facts to keep track of. This could also make another great paranormal movie, an animated cartoon, or better yet a mini-TV series. Not really my cup of tea so I will only rate it at 3/5 stars.
Thank you for the free Author; Tellwell talent; Goodreads; Making Connections; Making Connections discussion group talk; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
The Neander Sex Slaves bass player stumbled out of the dressing room with his arm bleeding from a severe cut.
The Concert was quickly cancelled.
Maximilian “Max” Rien Bakkers was fascinated by deaths by drowning.
Today is Saint’s Day, & tomorrow is All Souls’ Day.
Officer Swithen & Officer Evans were speaking to Ken Sugiyama (son) about some vandalism.
Emily had been volunteering on/off for BFF’s Julianna’s mom Jennifer Connelly.
Piper bar. There were musicians doing solo’s & several bands presenting.
Rein (25, f, Subliminale Occulte Marketingnetwerken en Allianties Mutual Bakkers-Ursel Limited SOMNAMBUL marketing firm secretary) worked for Ursel Bakkers (Rien’s eccentric father, SOMNAMBUL owner).
Later Rien’s funeral was held, the eulogy was read, followed by the burial & dinner. Everyone gave their condolences to the Bakkers family.
Rien & Lars Van Buskirk (Rein’s younger brother) had drowned.
Hennie (f) thought Ursel had something to do with their deaths.
A Kludde (Tormentor, Child Terrorizer, Trickster, shapeshifter, complete with internal guts, no outward solid state) had confronted Hennie.
It spoke & whispered Sit Draco Mihi Dux & vanished as soon as it appeared.
Max & Emily read up on the creature.
adjutant Lieutenant/Dr. Battel ordered trucks to go into the Jewish ghetto & pick up as many of them as possible & then bring them to the Wehrmacht barracks to be placed under the protection of the soldiers stationed there.
Sergeant Major Rolf Brandt had disappeared somewhere along the San River. 2 German soldiers had spied claw marks in the grass. They didn’t report it to their superiors what thewy saw.
Grandfather Ursel found out Hennie “Hen” (wife/mother) had died & Maximillian “Max” (son) disappeared.
Mr. Kledde (Kludde, trickster, shapeshifter, monster, liar, black Bullmastiff/Rottweiler mix) came to see Grandfather Ursel.
I do not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing free books from publishers & authors. Therefore, I am under no obligation to write a positive review, only an honest one.
An awesome book cover, hand drawn black/white pictures, great font & writing style. A very professionally written paranormal book. It wasn’t always easy for me to read/follow from start/finish, but never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters & facts to keep track of. This could also make another great paranormal movie, an animated cartoon, or better yet a mini-TV series. Not really my cup of tea so I will only rate it at 3/5 stars.
Thank you for the free Author; Tellwell talent; Goodreads; Making Connections; Making Connections discussion group talk; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
January 29, 2025
Marc Todd’s Chains is a thrilling horror novel that weaves together folklore, history, and supernatural terror into a gripping narrative. Rooted in the chilling legends of the Low Countries, the story introduces a shapeshifting demon that feeds on fear, drawing its victims into a nightmarish game of survival.
The novel follows Max as he faces this malevolent entity, testing the limits of his courage and endurance. Alongside his story, we delve into the haunting past of Ursel, a WWII survivor who unknowingly enters a demonic pact that costs him everything he holds dear. From the eerie landscapes of a northern Canadian town to the war-torn streets of Poland, Chains spans time and place, building an intricate web of connections—both mortal and supernatural.
Todd’s storytelling is immersive, with strong character development and exceptional world-building. The novel maintains a fast-paced start, though the middle slows slightly to explore the historical elements shaping Max’s present-day horrors. This shift in pacing works well, adding depth and intrigue. The horror elements are effectively chilling, with plenty of suspenseful and terrifying moments that will keep readers on edge.
However, the ending was a bit of a letdown. After such an intense and well-crafted buildup, it didn’t quite deliver the payoff I was hoping for. While it wasn’t necessarily bad, it lacked the impact and resolution that the rest of the story seemed to promise. That said, the book is undeniably well-written, with a solid narrative and engaging writing style.
Overall, Chains is an excellent read for fans of horror and supernatural thrillers. If you enjoy stories steeped in folklore, psychological terror, and intricate storytelling, this book is definitely worth a read—even if the conclusion doesn’t quite match the strength of the journey.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The novel follows Max as he faces this malevolent entity, testing the limits of his courage and endurance. Alongside his story, we delve into the haunting past of Ursel, a WWII survivor who unknowingly enters a demonic pact that costs him everything he holds dear. From the eerie landscapes of a northern Canadian town to the war-torn streets of Poland, Chains spans time and place, building an intricate web of connections—both mortal and supernatural.
Todd’s storytelling is immersive, with strong character development and exceptional world-building. The novel maintains a fast-paced start, though the middle slows slightly to explore the historical elements shaping Max’s present-day horrors. This shift in pacing works well, adding depth and intrigue. The horror elements are effectively chilling, with plenty of suspenseful and terrifying moments that will keep readers on edge.
However, the ending was a bit of a letdown. After such an intense and well-crafted buildup, it didn’t quite deliver the payoff I was hoping for. While it wasn’t necessarily bad, it lacked the impact and resolution that the rest of the story seemed to promise. That said, the book is undeniably well-written, with a solid narrative and engaging writing style.
Overall, Chains is an excellent read for fans of horror and supernatural thrillers. If you enjoy stories steeped in folklore, psychological terror, and intricate storytelling, this book is definitely worth a read—even if the conclusion doesn’t quite match the strength of the journey.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 22, 2024
Horror is not a genre I normally read, not because I am squeamish, but more that many horror books depend too much on violence and gore as opposed to good story telling. I am happy to say that 'Chains' does not fall into that category. Yes, there is some pretty nasty violence and a few images in my head that maybe I wouldn't want there, but they didn't detract from the story telling.
The premise is that a demon, for want of a better word, roams the earth feeding on fear. It's name is Kludde/Kledde and it is Dutch in origin, but some of the action takes place in Canada given a hunted descendant has moved there.
The story comes in two parts, the present day where the demon hunts Max, and the past during and post World War 2 where we find out how Max's grandfather is drawn into Kledde's influence and his deal which seals Max's fate.
I like the portrayal of the demon as a being from another realm and not steeped in any particular organised religion. It's just a big nasty beastie that likes to hunt. Perhaps a metaphor for humans. It feeds on fear and uses violence and the threat of violence to engender the fear in its targets, much like we might season our food.
It also has its weak spots and occasionally it is wounded, much to its surprise. I did wonder whether Max would manage to kill it or not which was a captivating thread of suspense.
The ending of the book was a little unexpected and took me a while to process and understand. Plus I never really understood the purpose of the chain. But these are minor things in what I found to be an excellent and readable book.
The premise is that a demon, for want of a better word, roams the earth feeding on fear. It's name is Kludde/Kledde and it is Dutch in origin, but some of the action takes place in Canada given a hunted descendant has moved there.
The story comes in two parts, the present day where the demon hunts Max, and the past during and post World War 2 where we find out how Max's grandfather is drawn into Kledde's influence and his deal which seals Max's fate.
I like the portrayal of the demon as a being from another realm and not steeped in any particular organised religion. It's just a big nasty beastie that likes to hunt. Perhaps a metaphor for humans. It feeds on fear and uses violence and the threat of violence to engender the fear in its targets, much like we might season our food.
It also has its weak spots and occasionally it is wounded, much to its surprise. I did wonder whether Max would manage to kill it or not which was a captivating thread of suspense.
The ending of the book was a little unexpected and took me a while to process and understand. Plus I never really understood the purpose of the chain. But these are minor things in what I found to be an excellent and readable book.
July 5, 2021
There is something about folklores that make them so interesting. Chains by Marc Todd is a story about an ancient demon from Dutch folklore – a trickster, a shapeshifter, and a horrifying nocturnal creature. He goes by many names – Kludde/Kledde/Mr. K. It is merciless and gets his energy from his victims’ fear.
The story takes place in a small Canadian town, where Max wakes up from a nightmare. The same night he is out with his friends and comes across a weird person who is not what he seems to be. He is the demon and Max is his next victim. The demon has been haunting Max’s family for generations because of a pact Max’s grandfather made with him years ago. Will Max be able to survive this demon chasing him? Will he be able to make it alive from this pact?
I loved the how the author described the demons, all his forms, the places so well. He created a brilliant atmosphere, and it was easy to imagine what was happening like watching a movie. The ending left me with wanting for more. But I feel I should mention this, its gory and dark and meant for serious horror lovers.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The story takes place in a small Canadian town, where Max wakes up from a nightmare. The same night he is out with his friends and comes across a weird person who is not what he seems to be. He is the demon and Max is his next victim. The demon has been haunting Max’s family for generations because of a pact Max’s grandfather made with him years ago. Will Max be able to survive this demon chasing him? Will he be able to make it alive from this pact?
I loved the how the author described the demons, all his forms, the places so well. He created a brilliant atmosphere, and it was easy to imagine what was happening like watching a movie. The ending left me with wanting for more. But I feel I should mention this, its gory and dark and meant for serious horror lovers.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 23, 2021
“Chains” by M. Todd was a slow read for me. At first, I didn’t know where the story was leading, but after a while it got it’s groove.
“Chains” tells the story of The Kludde - a monster from Dutch folklore that is a shapeshifting trickster that torments his victims - and his main victim, Max, and his family and friends. Once the Kludde targets you, it is hard to get away. He enjoys the chase and the fear that comes from it.
I enjoyed the characters and their story and how M.Todd was able to weave them all together. I was a little confused when he navigating from Max’s story and went to Germany, but picked right back up of telling the story of Max’s grandfather- who made a deal with the Kludde.
This story reflects the fear you had as a child that the boogeyman was going to get you. As it’s based on folklore, this could be the boogeyman of your nightmares. The story was well-written, although slow at times, and was a great read for those who love horror and thrillers.
“Chains” tells the story of The Kludde - a monster from Dutch folklore that is a shapeshifting trickster that torments his victims - and his main victim, Max, and his family and friends. Once the Kludde targets you, it is hard to get away. He enjoys the chase and the fear that comes from it.
I enjoyed the characters and their story and how M.Todd was able to weave them all together. I was a little confused when he navigating from Max’s story and went to Germany, but picked right back up of telling the story of Max’s grandfather- who made a deal with the Kludde.
This story reflects the fear you had as a child that the boogeyman was going to get you. As it’s based on folklore, this could be the boogeyman of your nightmares. The story was well-written, although slow at times, and was a great read for those who love horror and thrillers.
November 13, 2021
A superb horror novel grounded in folklore.
Chains tells the story of a family bound by a pact with the Kludde, a shape-shifting entity hell bent on feeding off people’s fears. Spanning generations, Chains gives the reader an intimate insight into not only the human protagonist’s lineage, but how the Kludde’s most sublimely cruel personality came to be. In fact, much of the book centres around intimate conversations between the Kludde and its victims. The result is a journey to a very dark place, where the Kludde’s thinking is beautifully fleshed out by Todd’s creative writing
On that subject, Todd’s writing style is precise, easy to absorb and allows a certain level of contemplation while reading. There are many deeper meanings weaved into the pages, though none slow the pace of what turned out to be a fast read. A highly recommended book. Inventive. Enthralling and enjoyable despite the very dark subject matter. I look forward to future writings by this author.
Chains tells the story of a family bound by a pact with the Kludde, a shape-shifting entity hell bent on feeding off people’s fears. Spanning generations, Chains gives the reader an intimate insight into not only the human protagonist’s lineage, but how the Kludde’s most sublimely cruel personality came to be. In fact, much of the book centres around intimate conversations between the Kludde and its victims. The result is a journey to a very dark place, where the Kludde’s thinking is beautifully fleshed out by Todd’s creative writing
On that subject, Todd’s writing style is precise, easy to absorb and allows a certain level of contemplation while reading. There are many deeper meanings weaved into the pages, though none slow the pace of what turned out to be a fast read. A highly recommended book. Inventive. Enthralling and enjoyable despite the very dark subject matter. I look forward to future writings by this author.
June 3, 2021
A family curse comes looking for Max & no-one will get in its way.
I found this went up & down for me. Was slow then began engaging, then slowed down again, I couldn't get into it fully. There were a few scenes I could picture as a tv or movie that would have you on the edge of your seat. I struggled when it changed to another character to explain some of the back story & began to skip over parts. But picked up again for me once came back to Max. I wish had just stayed with Max & his situation for the whole story, would have enjoyed it more. The Kludde was an interesting character & seems like this is not the end of the story.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I found this went up & down for me. Was slow then began engaging, then slowed down again, I couldn't get into it fully. There were a few scenes I could picture as a tv or movie that would have you on the edge of your seat. I struggled when it changed to another character to explain some of the back story & began to skip over parts. But picked up again for me once came back to Max. I wish had just stayed with Max & his situation for the whole story, would have enjoyed it more. The Kludde was an interesting character & seems like this is not the end of the story.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 13, 2021
Chains is an entertaining and fast-paced tale of a horrific monster, the Kludde, and a pact made during the harrowing times of World War 2 that goes on to wreak havoc on multiple descendants of the original protagonist's family. The Kludde is a truly evil creature, based on folklore but embellished by the creative mind and impressive imagination of the author.
I found Todd's writing enjoyable and engaging, but my favourite thing about this book was the incredible depth of character allowed to the Kludde ensuring that the monster was not only horrific but also fascinating. I would definitely recommend this book to horror fans and look forward to Todd's next novel.
I found Todd's writing enjoyable and engaging, but my favourite thing about this book was the incredible depth of character allowed to the Kludde ensuring that the monster was not only horrific but also fascinating. I would definitely recommend this book to horror fans and look forward to Todd's next novel.
November 19, 2024
"Chains" is a captivating and suspense-filled thriller. Marc Todd has crafted a remarkable world where a creature from Dutch mythology/folklore wreaks havoc. Spanning three generations, it's a tale that is terrifying, grand, and thrillingly horrific.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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