Turmoil in Hell

Hell to Pay #3

by Kaylin Peyerk

Lucifer, God, and I walk into a room. . . .

There's no joke, well, not really. After Heaven fell to Earth in a blaze of shattering glory we're all left living in Hell. Not only that, we have to work together as the final pieces of my prophecy begin to fall into place. . . but the reality is much different from theory. The angels and demons are at each other's throats, both in normal society and in our own home.

Not only will I have to focus on rebuilding the balance of good and evil, right and wrong, I'll also be forced to walk the line of love and loss. All five of the men now living in Lucifer's mansion have a connection with me whether or not they're my destined mates. It's causing tension between all of us and walking me down a path that will lead to a crossroad.

Will I accept them all as my harem, or are we too different? Too wrong for each other?

Genres: Demons

302 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 31, 2021

About the author

Kaylin Peyerk is a lover of badass fantasy heroines and the sexy men who feel lucky to love them. She has five full bookshelves, a bursting Kindle library, and a total love for the written word. When she's not crouched over the computer like a gremlin, you can find her curled up in a nest of blankets with a well-loved book, her two corgis Link & Gannon, and a steaming cup of hot cocoa...

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Reviews

[Dallass · Rating 3 out of 5]

Okay. I truly was not expecting that ending.

This has been a pretty straightforward trilogy, girl meets her soul mate (or 5), but this final book sure took a left turn at Albuquerque with how the relationships are dealt with and what the outcome was. The relationships between Aaliyah and her men were complicated, frustrating. Full of doubt and angst. But it wasn’t until her final conversation with Kronos that I realized that this would not end like your typical UF, and while I didn’t hate where the author went, it did leave me with the feeling that this story wasn’t finished. I wanted to see what happens after the final scene.

3.5 stars ⭐️

[Alex(Books-In-A-Storm) · Rating 3 out of 5]

I like the first two books better then this one. I felt like it didn't do them justice. In fact this one was kind of bad and it needs a better ending. I thought it was going to go one way but went another and it wasn't good.

[Kady Bowers · Rating 3 out of 5]

This story feels unfinished. There's no actual conflict and no resolution to anything. There's no resolution between her and her men, or between Lucifer and God. There's no understanding of what the creation power actually is, it kept telling her she would understand but other than her becoming a Goddess what was she supposed to understand. What does heaven and hell working together look like. I felt like these books where a great rough outline to the story with no real body. We only have a vague understanding of who she used to be, no background on the boys at all and the only thing we know about Lucifer and God is they we once in a relationship. There's no "bad guy" or "big evil" everyone just accepts what's going on so no real conflict which makes the story feel lacking.

I did enjoy the idea of the story, the idea that something bigger made Kronos, then Zeus, then God. I liked the mix of mythologies and the idea that as the world evolved the creation evolved its Gods.

[Adricrisuruta · Rating 4 out of 5]

The trilogy was very good, even though it started out as one thing and ended as another. I never expected the ending to be so open ended and with so many themes without closure. I can only imagine what could have been.

I think the author wanted to show us her perception of another way of a higher God that is more kind, loving, vulnerable, human, different from everything we know. Breaking the preconceived molds and imagining something more in line with what the human being may need in these times with his story of polyamory in the background. Otherwise, I don't see much sense in so many twists and turns and such an open ending. A goddess who is not alone in her work to lead the world into a new era.

Although that ending was not what I expected, I liked the trilogy quite a bit.

[Kata · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5★
Luego de la caída del cielo al infierno, nuestra protagonista se ve envuelta en reconstruir un mundo con ángeles y demonios que se odian, intentar llevar la paz, mantener a raya sus sentimientos por quien o quienes no debería tenerlos.
Me gustó este libro, da un giro sorprendente de lo que fue el primer libro, vemos como protagonista alcanza todo su potencial, como se convierte en lo que debe ser y aprende a vivir y amar lo que es, logra estar en armonía con sus chicos, vemos parejas nuevas y un poliamor que se veía venir. Lo que no me gustó del libro es que fue muy vago en cuanto al romance, me cortaron una escena que yo creo que todas las lectoras necesitábamos, me faltó más desarrollo entre Lucy y Jehová, me faltó desarrollo con la prota también, además de saber que pasa con el árbol y Kronos, además de faltarme un cierre más detallado y no tan general. El libro se centra mucho más en la fantasía que el romance y me faltó eso.

[Emily Humpal · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book started right when the last one ended with heaven falling into hell and Allie and Jehovah in the center of it. this book was kind of structured weird. there was no big climax. it happened at the beginning of the book. this book followed Allie in the aftermath of bringing down heaven and her coming to terms with her part in the prophecy. honestly this focused on the relationships around her and her mated are all worthless. Jehovah and lucifer are the only ones remotely supportive of her and they have to much baggage as well.

in the end the story just seemed unfinished. the relationship between Allie and lucifer and Allie and Jehovah is settles and i guess Adonis too. but Liam felt still up in the air as well as Amon's relationship. and there is so much still brewing between Jehovah and Lucifer.

i like how the book was structured but it just felt unfinished

[Avia Shelton · Rating 3 out of 5]

4 overall

Spoilers ahead!

I really loved the series with the first 2 books. So much action and all the men in her harem were hot 🥵 Unfortunately I’m rating the last book a 3.5 because what the hell was that ending! I feel like it just ended with so many loose threads like the tree, Kronos, and Jehovah and Lucifer! And what about her becoming the goddess in the end? I just feel like so much was left open for either a longer book or an extended epilogue. Overall this series is great with the plot with only a little bit of smut. The ending felt rushed like they were meeting a deadline or something, but I would recommend if you’re into angels and demons.

[April · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars

I started out loving this series, but I was a little disappointed in this book. Mostly it was all the blabbering about how they all loved her that has went on and on throughout all the books. Then we get to the ending with her destiny and that's it. No insight at all what that means or for the future of anything including whether she's emotionless or keeps her men after wondering if she will be able to. After reading the entire series the ending was a huge let down and I feel that I wasted my time.

[Maria Barra · Rating 5 out of 5]

okay this was a very disappointing ending. This series started out so very strong and fantastic, only to the end like that. so much more could have have happened there. it makes me wonder if there's going to be another book. I think there should be. because it don't tell us nothing if she saved the world or ended it. like what kinda $h!+ is that , 🤔 this is the first book that had me a bit mad 😠 with the ending. don't get me wrong it's good story but this last book or really that ending was not it. it could have been better.

[Denisse · Rating 4 out of 5]

Simplemente perfecto, este libro me encantó.
Me hubiese gustado que mostraran mucho mejor la relación entre Lucifer, Jehová y Aali en las últimas páginas. Pero a pesar de eso fue perfecto.
Y este libro me hizo amar a Kronos.
Aunque definitivamente me encanto y esta cerca de la perfección para mi, me quedo debiendo alguna escena entre L, J y A.
Y hubiese amado un epílogo que mostrara la dinámica de los cinco.
Aun así, de mis favoritos del año.

[ADVIJHRGKMNHY · Rating 4 out of 5]

Such a good book!!!

It’s an awesome book series! I was so hooked! I would’ve rather this book be a bit longer and show what will happen to the fl and her lovers. I also was really curious about how she bonds with Kronos. Other all the series was one of the best series I’ve read and I usually dislike series! Great job author!!!👍👍👍

[katherine stinchcombe · Rating 2 out of 5]

What???

The series was ok. The ending, not so much. Still so many unanswered questions. It just didn't gel. Needed a few more chapters to explain a lot more. Would of given more stars if the ending was different. Also a new editor is needed as there were so many mistakes throughout the series.

[Shannon Zell · Rating 5 out of 5]

Absolutely ADORE this book 🤩

Perfect ending to the series! Everything wrapped up perfectly in a beautiful package! Everyone wins! Ecstatic that Aaliyah got her 5 men 👏👏 Each man was super special and unique and steamyyy in the 🛏

The author wrote this series so smoothly, I'm in love with it 😍

[Lindsey Perez · Rating 1 out of 5]

I should have stopped after the first book that didn’t have a plot but I kept going hoping it would get more interesting. It did not. I can promise I will never think of this book again. It’s simply forgettable in every sense of the word. The plot? Nobody knows? The love interest? Everyone. The main character? Already forgot her name. Did she have a personality? I don’t think so

[V.J. Lee · Rating 3 out of 5]

Just ok

The first book was good but they just went downhill from there. There were a lot of typos and way too much internal dialogue. A question would be asked and by the time we got to the answer I’d have to flip back to the question. It was a good premise just bad execution. It was very anticlimactic. Three stars for originality only

[Danielle · Rating 2 out of 5]

Least favorite of the series

This was my least favorite of the series, it's like she tried to jam everything into this book and I really dislike the ending like is that it? It just felt really rushed. It could have easily been another 100 more pages.

[Serinity1976 · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amazing set of books 💕

This set of demons and angels is a great read. I would recommend this set of three books to anyone as is my five star 💫 review this author is great. The set does not bore you

[Tanya · Rating 5 out of 5]

What an amazing ending to the series, Aali is one kick ass heroine and with 5 mates she was only destined to full fill the prophecy. I only wish it didn't have to end would have loved to see how the Heaven and Hell end up in the future.

[Katrina · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF 40%. To do this on the last of the trilogy should tell you how poor this book was. The whole series lacked depth and real world building or,seemingly, a conclusion. This author is going on my don’t trust list. Good ideas but poor execution.

[Yamell Lizardo · Rating 3 out of 5]

" I choose you ! I love you and I'm not afrait to go deeper with you".

I don't know what happened here, that reverse harem of 5 people I don't see as necessary, the story spread too much.
I need more action.

[Sheila Ryals · Rating 5 out of 5]

😻

Ok , this had me go through so many emotions including confusion. It answered a lot of questions but still left some out. I kinda feel bad for Kronos as well. It never said why she was drawn to him..

[CarolAnn Lovell · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh my

I think I have fallen like Lucie this was such an amazing book I love the trilogy. Aaliyah was so like a human I think I fell in love with her and her sassy attitude you definitely need to read this trilogy.

[alea sefton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fantastic Finale

I love the resolutions and this world is so beautiful. The descriptions u use keeps me imagining Kronos and heaven and hell.. its beautiful and u applaud the attention to details.

[Haley Deitz · Rating 2 out of 5]

What ending…?

The whole story was okay… but there were so many relationship dynamics to be fleshed out and plot points that were never realized. The ending was completely abrupt, anticlimactic and pretty disappointing overall.

[Nevaeh · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really did enjoy these books and I had such a fun time reading it but when I finished this one the story just felt incomplete and I felt like there should have been another book and im left with a lot of questions.

[Ammi · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was a good book

The ending was a bit anticlimactic. The series was a good read. I wished the author had put in the part with the threesome and just Lucie and Jahovah.

[Kelly Smillie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great

Well I really wish I could have gotten longer. But it was really well written and I love the growth of the characters can't wait to see what this author does next

[Winter Girl · Rating 4 out of 5]

4/5

[Melanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

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I am kinda of sad at the abrupt ending but I also understand it as well. This has been a very good storyline.

[Shannon · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's more like a 3.5. I enjoyed the other two more because they had buildup and action. This one was buildup and...not exactly action. Though, I did ultimately like the ending.