September Readathon
The heroine is great. The hero is a bore.
But he's also suddenly, incredibly likable and redeemed in the final chapter, and unlikable until then. And that's part of the point, and Campbell obviously wrote it that way.
I'm not quite sure he's fully redeemed; at least in their HEA he'll have time and resources to pull that off and give the heroine everything she deserves.
Very interesting and uncommon background for the heroine. At all, and definitely for a romance novel. I appreciated that; her dreaming heart and how she was both capable and not a pushover but just didn't know all the ways of things a hard-bitten businessman would.
Good sense of humor and actual repartee in the dialogue.
What bothered me most about the hero isn't him being brusque or meddling, or even detached/appreciative of the heroine, but rather his sexually pestering her. If we view backwards through the lens of his trauma and closed heart, you can imagine he wants to install her as a mistress because he's in deep and can't admit it, but this would be a way to hold onto her. As it stands, he hasn't done enough on page to earn that benefit. Even for a category pubbed in '86.
I'm not fully sure why the heroine falls for him, other than it's made so clear how she loves the unlovable and has no self consciousness or worry in doing so. He's among the unlovable, until he sheds his hard shell and the past that created it. She's said to be somewhat prescient, and learned lessons from her nontraditional family, so we'll chalk it up to her simply understanding who he should be (glimpsed in their quiet moments) and not what he showed.
He still has some making up to do, and the only one good to him (his little sister) is the only one who'll be good to her after they're married, but they'll make it work. At least they already have a rangy, dubious mutt who's ready to be loyal to them.