The Pen: Sultan's Wisdom

by Dennis Galloway

Harold wanted a better life. He wanted a life that would free him from the shackles of his mundane existence. He wanted freedom, love, and a life that made his soul soar high. But how could he obtain those things?The surprising solution lay in an antique pen Harold purchased. At first, he thought he would just write down his thoughts, but he soon discovered the pen had a mind of its own. The pen took over, forcing Harold to write what it wanted, using a beautiful curly script in a language he didn’t understand.Soon he found himself writing—and translating—the thousand-year-old story of the Bedouin Al-Hamid Akbar, a man who rose from his existence as a street urchin and thief to becoming a sultan esteemed by all. Al-Hamid’s life was filled with excitement, including his escape from slavery, facing crocodiles on the Nile, battles with Bedouin tribes, and finding the love of his life. But most importantly, Al-Hamid’s life provided Harold with solutions to change his own. When he sleeps, he dream-travels back to Al-Hamid’s time, where he sees, touches, feels everything as if he is really there, because he is.Set in 1920s Edinburgh, The Pen is a great adventure story, and a blend of fiction and personal development. Dennis Galloway takes readers on a journey to discover ancient wisdom to transform our current lives, yet we won’t need a magical pen to make those positive changes happen.

230 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 1, 2021

About the author

#1 Best Selling Author, Dennis Galloway has been writing intriguing and exciting stories for several years. Growing up with an active, vivid imagination, and having lived and traveled around the world, experiencing many cultures, he has honed his experiences to create exciting fiction for children and adults, as well as documentaries, videos, and a wide range of other media experiences

Reviews

[Avery Reese · Rating 5 out of 5]

I picked up The Pen: Sultan’s Wisdom thinking it would be a light fantasy read, but it turned out to be so much more. Dennis Galloway masterfully blends time travel, historical adventure, and quiet life wisdom into a story that feels both ancient and deeply personal. Watching Harold walk beside Al-Hamid experiencing fear, courage, love, and transformation was genuinely moving. This book doesn’t just entertain; it gently challenges you to reflect on your own choices. A rare kind of story that stays with you long after the final page.

[Stacey Hartley · Rating 5 out of 5]

I went into The Pen: Sultan’s Wisdom expecting a light fantasy adventure, but it turned out to be much more meaningful than I anticipated. Harold’s discovery of the enchanted pen is not just a fun twist, it becomes the gateway to a powerful, emotional story about Al-Hamid, a boy who rises from street urchin to a respected sultan.

[Emily Hayes · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book blends adventure and life lessons really well. The magical pen idea immediately hooked me, but it was Al-Hamid’s journey that kept me turning the pages. The desert setting, the danger, the personal growth, it all felt vivid and engaging. It’s a story that entertains but also makes you reflect on your own choices. A thoughtful and enjoyable read.

[Colin Merce · Rating 5 out of 5]

Such a creative concept! The way the pen forces Harold to write a story from centuries ago was really unique. Al-Hamid’s transformation was inspiring, and I liked how his experiences ended up helping Harold change his own life. It has adventure, heart, and a nice message about taking control of your destiny. Definitely worth reading.

[Tara Winslow · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed this book more than I expected. It’s simple, but it carries real depth. Al-Hamid’s journey from thief to respected leader was my favorite part full of trials, but full of growth too. The story feels almost like a fable, with nuggets of wisdom woven in naturally. A meaningful, uplifting little adventure.

[Lioren Davis · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Pen: Sultan’s Wisdom is more than just a story it’s an invitation to reflect on personal growth and purpose. Watching Harold learn from Al-Hamid’s experiences makes the lessons feel real and applicable to modern life. The wisdom shared throughout the book is subtle yet powerful, making this a meaningful read for anyone interested in self-improvement through storytelling.

[L. Reads · Rating 5 out of 5]

The narrative skillfully moves between two timelines, creating a rich and immersive experience. The prose is smooth, and the symbolism of the pen works beautifully as a device for transformation. The historical sections are vivid and well-researched, while the modern storyline provides emotional grounding. A well-crafted novel with depth and purpose.

[Amelie Girard · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a surprisingly enjoyable read. The idea of a pen controlling the story and pulling the writer into the past is really creative, and the adventure elements kept things moving at a good pace. I liked how the book combined action, history, and life lessons without becoming heavy. Easy to read, entertaining, and thought-provoking.

[Marris Ellory · Rating 5 out of 5]

At its core, this book explores how ancient wisdom remains relevant across centuries. The story of Al-Hamid Akbar serves as a mirror for Harold’s own struggles, showing how courage, integrity, and perseverance transcend time. The lessons are thoughtful and inspiring, encouraging readers to reflect on their own lives long after finishing the book.

[Rachel Morgan · Rating 5 out of 5]

An imaginative and meaningful story that blends historical adventure with personal growth. The concept is unique, drawing the reader seamlessly between past and present, while the journey remains engaging from start to finish. The lessons are timeless and thoughtfully woven into the narrative, making this not only an entertaining read but also a deeply rewarding one.

[Robert C. smith · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great but Simple Wisdom Presented in an Enjoyable Manner!

Galloway masterfully shared some simple but brilliant philosophies to live by in an easy reading manner anyone can appreciate. Definitely worth reading.

[Linda · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fascinating

A very different book. A man buys an old-style ink pen. The pen, never running out of ink, writes a detailed story. The story teaches the man about himself and his life.
A couple misspelled words that did not detract from the story.

[Ralph · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not a bad story: well plotted and with multidimensional characters.

My first impression when the pen is introduced was that this might be a Cthulhu Mythos style story. It is not. There is a layer of religion, not over the top or heavy handed, but a little preacher-like.