The tournament begins. An uneasy peace treaty. A champion emerges.
I thought I’d get to spend a little quality time with my new, beautiful, bonded women after taking out the poacher threat, how fast things change.
With the tournament only a couple weeks away, a new visitor has arrived at the manor, and she needs my help.
I’ll need to rank up my skills to ensure I’ll pass each of the trials in my way, protect those closest to me, and more importantly, survive.
It will take the help of my amazing bonded women, a feisty goblin, and a spurned member of the royal family to take on a plethora of combatants, as well as, a king who wants me destroyed.
Cultivate. Rank. Rise.
I better get started. I’ve got monster girls to help, a manor to expand, and a tournament to win.
There's no time like the present.
DISCLAIMER: This series contains adult themes, graphic violence, undefined relationships/harem, and explicit scenes. You’ve been warned.
Grammer, pacing, character development, romance, believability... all 0 stars. I tried to read this one assuming that the writer's first novel was just a rough start. Now i see that the author isnt interested in telling a story, but rather seems to be pumping out garbage for what i can only assume is a cash grab. Its the same reason i dont read authors such as Eric Vail or Logan Jacobs. Bad stories are bad, period.
I want to like this series, but it is so hard to support such a convoluted storyline between the main characters bad decisions, the story suffers from inconsistencies. As you read, you never get a feel for anything the character is able to do or not do, or what the supporting characters can do. One time he's (MC) so powerful he can take anyone and next he can do two feats of power and he's out of core spirit? it's just confusing the story, it reads as if the storyline is thought up as you go, as if the author had no clue what he was going to write and the story suffers because of it! the writing itself needs editing, maybe that would in some way help it make sense but I doubt it! I keep wanting to like it because it's kind of a cool concept but again the cover art is the best part of this book!
Ok... for book 2 the pacing seems to be all over the shop. some parts are rushed through while others seem to be dragged out. the MC goes from being a total badass with what seems to be unlimited ability, to running out of puff after barely doing anything.
Also, it seems like every monster girl he meets falls head over heels for him. doesn't really make for a convincing story.
Lots of action, adventure and adult fantasy action!!! This series has definitely been one that when you start you can't put down till its over!!! Excellent characters and first rate writing!!!! More more more
Towards the end of the book it seemed the author had difficulty remembering what weapon some one was wielding, one time it's a sad hammer next it's a sword, then a mace back to a sword
I just couldn't pick the book down longer then 30 minutes. I just had to find out what happened next! I enjoyed all the action. I can't wait to see what happens to Stricker.
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
Great character development, but needs a better proof reader. So keep working at it. Someday you may understand the difference between a sword and a mace☺
Now this is a book that makes you think you know what is going to happen, then it leaves you wondering, "What's Next. " So , I'm wondering, what's next?