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Consequence & Consequences
Mr Darcy, a man of consequence, while staying with a friend in Hertfordshire, meets and falls in love with the daughter of a minor landholder and a shrill mother. As he is leaving the area, and afraid that he might have raised the young lady's expectations, he informs her that the difference in their stations prohibits him from following his heart.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is furious with the arrogance of the man, but she has quite recently found out that her father, Mr Thomas Bennet is the heir to an almost forgotten great-great-uncle, the Duke of Barrington, which will make her the daughter of a Duke.
Elizabeth, without mentioning her background, agrees with Darcy that the difference in their stations would be perceived by society as an unsuitable match.
A few months later, when Mr Darcy finds out about the change in fortune of the Bennet family, he has a difficult choice - be labelled as a fortune-hunter or refrain from courting the woman he loves.
He never considered that his unfortunate attitude about consequence could have such consequences…
Miss Elizabeth Bennet is furious with the arrogance of the man, but she has quite recently found out that her father, Mr Thomas Bennet is the heir to an almost forgotten great-great-uncle, the Duke of Barrington, which will make her the daughter of a Duke.
Elizabeth, without mentioning her background, agrees with Darcy that the difference in their stations would be perceived by society as an unsuitable match.
A few months later, when Mr Darcy finds out about the change in fortune of the Bennet family, he has a difficult choice - be labelled as a fortune-hunter or refrain from courting the woman he loves.
He never considered that his unfortunate attitude about consequence could have such consequences…
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Published March 22, 2021
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June 23, 2024
Loved the premise, well thought out. I don't think I am a fan of this writers style. There is something modern about the writing as it lacks the regency era touch. There is a literal feel to this story telling.
May 28, 2023
Delightful story full of surprises, twists, and turns. A definite reread.
>> Rating: clean: >>Angst Level: low-to-medium as we watched things unfold.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [4-30-21] Own: I purchased this book so I could read it again. So, sue me.
>>Trope: Bennet family has higher connections and wealth than publicly known.
SPOILER: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
I swear, I have now read this three times and will probably read it again. Not sorry. LOL! I love stories where the Bennet family is more than they seem. An express rider arrived with a letter for Mr. Thomas Bennet that changed his life and that of his family. His great-great-uncle had died and Bennet was his only heir. Only one thing, his relation was the 7th Duke of Barrington. This would not be the only surprise for the family and especially for Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Darcy had already apologized for his caustic comment at the assembly and he and considered that he and Miss Elizabeth were friends. As friends they enjoyed their banter, discussions, debates, or arguments, as Bingley called then. When it was time to return to London, Darcy took his leave of Miss Elizabeth. It will be up to the reader to decide if he was a hero or a zero.
Not wanting to be cruel, Darcy felt that he should set the record straight. Bless his heart. He told Miss Elizabeth that although he enjoyed their friendly debates, they could only be friends. He hoped his behavior hadn’t raised any expectations for her. The difference in their social stations prevented him from following his heart. Elizabeth [remembering her father’s express] just smiled and completely agreed with him. Yes, the difference in their stations was definitely an issue. Darcy was certainly glad she seemed to understand. Little did he know that she was more than just a lady; she was a Lady. Oh, Darcy. You have stepped in it now. As the old saying goes… “To err is human, to forgive, divine.” –Alexander Pope. Would Elizabeth be able to forgive Darcy? That was the crux of the matter and would take the rest of the story to resolve.
“Never interrupt your enemy when he is making a mistake.” –Napoleon Bonaparte
*** Spoiler *** Oh, Caroline… you poor deluded social-climber, if only you knew. She gleefully and maliciously separated her brother from that fortune-hunting Jane Bennet and her match-making mother. She disrespected, disdained, and turned her nose up at that horrid Bennet family from the first moment she met them. What she didn’t know was that they were so far above her that she would NEVER recover from her callous abuse of them. Our Caroline received the most magnificent set-down ever. I am still shaking my head. She had always wanted to impress high society. Well, she set her stage well and then proceeded to do just that. They will still be laughing about what happened that night for years to come. The ton tends to have a long memory for social scandal. They may forget her name but they will never forget the foolish tradesman’s daughter that made a scene at the Introduction Ball of a Duke and his family. Wow! How clever. The whole thing was hilarious.
This was a delightful story. The author did a marvelous job of managing a plethora of characters without it feeling crowded. Each character had a moment to shine and reach their HEA. I loved every nuance of this story. I have a whole new understanding of Mrs. Bennet and just loved her. She was a force to be reckoned with. Lady Sophia was such a stabilizing force within the family and she was my favorite.
1st read: 5-6-21 loved it
2nd read: 5-7-21 yes, I read it again: not a typo
3rd read 5-27-23 still loved it
>> Rating: clean: >>Angst Level: low-to-medium as we watched things unfold.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [4-30-21] Own: I purchased this book so I could read it again. So, sue me.
>>Trope: Bennet family has higher connections and wealth than publicly known.
SPOILER: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
I swear, I have now read this three times and will probably read it again. Not sorry. LOL! I love stories where the Bennet family is more than they seem. An express rider arrived with a letter for Mr. Thomas Bennet that changed his life and that of his family. His great-great-uncle had died and Bennet was his only heir. Only one thing, his relation was the 7th Duke of Barrington. This would not be the only surprise for the family and especially for Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Darcy had already apologized for his caustic comment at the assembly and he and considered that he and Miss Elizabeth were friends. As friends they enjoyed their banter, discussions, debates, or arguments, as Bingley called then. When it was time to return to London, Darcy took his leave of Miss Elizabeth. It will be up to the reader to decide if he was a hero or a zero.
Not wanting to be cruel, Darcy felt that he should set the record straight. Bless his heart. He told Miss Elizabeth that although he enjoyed their friendly debates, they could only be friends. He hoped his behavior hadn’t raised any expectations for her. The difference in their social stations prevented him from following his heart. Elizabeth [remembering her father’s express] just smiled and completely agreed with him. Yes, the difference in their stations was definitely an issue. Darcy was certainly glad she seemed to understand. Little did he know that she was more than just a lady; she was a Lady. Oh, Darcy. You have stepped in it now. As the old saying goes… “To err is human, to forgive, divine.” –Alexander Pope. Would Elizabeth be able to forgive Darcy? That was the crux of the matter and would take the rest of the story to resolve.
“Never interrupt your enemy when he is making a mistake.” –Napoleon Bonaparte
*** Spoiler *** Oh, Caroline… you poor deluded social-climber, if only you knew. She gleefully and maliciously separated her brother from that fortune-hunting Jane Bennet and her match-making mother. She disrespected, disdained, and turned her nose up at that horrid Bennet family from the first moment she met them. What she didn’t know was that they were so far above her that she would NEVER recover from her callous abuse of them. Our Caroline received the most magnificent set-down ever. I am still shaking my head. She had always wanted to impress high society. Well, she set her stage well and then proceeded to do just that. They will still be laughing about what happened that night for years to come. The ton tends to have a long memory for social scandal. They may forget her name but they will never forget the foolish tradesman’s daughter that made a scene at the Introduction Ball of a Duke and his family. Wow! How clever. The whole thing was hilarious.
This was a delightful story. The author did a marvelous job of managing a plethora of characters without it feeling crowded. Each character had a moment to shine and reach their HEA. I loved every nuance of this story. I have a whole new understanding of Mrs. Bennet and just loved her. She was a force to be reckoned with. Lady Sophia was such a stabilizing force within the family and she was my favorite.
1st read: 5-6-21 loved it
2nd read: 5-7-21 yes, I read it again: not a typo
3rd read 5-27-23 still loved it
May 4, 2021
This is a cute low angst P&P what if where the morning after the Netherfield ball dunderhead Darcy appears to tell Lizzy that "I am totally into you but you are so far removed from my social sphere we gotta be friends" (Paraphrased)
As Lizzy loves to laugh she it tickled pink by this pronouncement since she has a secret. And that secret is her Father is about to be a Duke.
A few months pass and the Duke, Duchess and their eldest daughters go to London for the season. Darcy is stunned to find the woman he disdained is now virtually miles above him in Status.
Both Bingley and Caroline are given marvelous set downs and shunned. Darcy is given a talking to by the Duchess about expectations for her daughters and his snobbery. He decides to be friends with Lizzy
Lots of low angst stuff happens. Jane gets engaged Colonel Fitzwilliam appears to be courting Lizzy. And let me just say this is one of those books where I would have been perfectly happy to see Lizzy wind up with someone beside Darcy.
But we get our HEA and then an epilogue and as I am known for my loathing of epilogues I was less than amused. Further the author could have throw us a bone about what happened to Caro & Bingley
I would have liked something like this:
Fortune Teller:
Oh, she turns to fat! And oh, she has a beard!
Holmes:
What of the warts?
Fortune Teller:
Oh she's covered in warts.
But alas I am left wondering
As Lizzy loves to laugh she it tickled pink by this pronouncement since she has a secret. And that secret is her Father is about to be a Duke.
A few months pass and the Duke, Duchess and their eldest daughters go to London for the season. Darcy is stunned to find the woman he disdained is now virtually miles above him in Status.
Both Bingley and Caroline are given marvelous set downs and shunned. Darcy is given a talking to by the Duchess about expectations for her daughters and his snobbery. He decides to be friends with Lizzy
Lots of low angst stuff happens. Jane gets engaged Colonel Fitzwilliam appears to be courting Lizzy. And let me just say this is one of those books where I would have been perfectly happy to see Lizzy wind up with someone beside Darcy.
But we get our HEA and then an epilogue and as I am known for my loathing of epilogues I was less than amused. Further the author could have throw us a bone about what happened to Caro & Bingley
I would have liked something like this:
Fortune Teller:
Oh, she turns to fat! And oh, she has a beard!
Holmes:
What of the warts?
Fortune Teller:
Oh she's covered in warts.
But alas I am left wondering
October 27, 2024
In this Pride & Prejudice variation Darcy and the Bingleys are spending time at Netherfield. But as Darcy leaves the area he informs Elizabeth that the vast difference in their social standing prevents them being anything then friends. Elizabeth angry at the statement agrees, not informing him that she and her sisters are now duke's daughters. How will each of Bennet family respond to their elevated standing, will their be happening endings for any of them. It is such a shame that once again Darcy does not get his comeuppance as he is such an arrogant hypocrite.
An entertaining and well-written story. An enjoyable re-read. Again, though I would have preferred more about Mary Bennet as she had more to change then the eldest two.
An entertaining and well-written story. An enjoyable re-read. Again, though I would have preferred more about Mary Bennet as she had more to change then the eldest two.
April 1, 2021
With a Salier book you aren't sure where you'll end up, but you know you'll have fun getting there; she nails JAFF wish fulfillment that doesn't give you a headache.
You can expect the associated trademark virtues- cathartic, quippy and amusing- and it's signature follies- emotionally lightweight, poorly developed ODC, and saccharine- of her novels to be present. Still enjoyed it in one sitting!
Synopsis:
When I first read the blurb detailing yet another 'the Bennet's come into a Dukedom inheritance', my knee jerk reaction was:
We all want the best for Lizzy & the Bennet’s- really who wouldn’t?- and I love when Lizzy and the reader are in on a joke at Darcy’s expense- so delicious!
Darcy apologizes to Lizzy for the MA slight when he is made aware she overheard it and they develop their same canon banter- without Lizzy's needling intent- as friends, so much so that Lizzy begins to feel the stirring of a tendre.
After the Netherfield ball Darcy encounters Lizzy at Oakham mount while making his escape to town and decides to take his leave and be brutally honest with her, that he hoped he didn't raise her expectations too much as he could never offer for her, due to the difference in their station.
Lizzy was at this point aware her father would soon come into a dukedom so she agreed readily, taking pleasure in the knowledge that he had no idea just how right his words were but in the opposite sense!
That Which Sparked Joy:
❀Jane and her suitor were dope, honestly I think they had the best relationship in the story, usurping ODC here.
❀Dialogue quippy- Lizzy was in fine form and OC!
❀The explanation as to why the Bennets inherited and Collins couldn't was well done.
❀No Wickham!
That Which Courted Disdain:
✗ Lacks emotion & dimension to the characters
✗Characters have personality overhaul that even affects their idiosyncrasies, i.e. Mrs B, Mary- unrecognizable. I don't mind them improving but they should still sound like themselves at the least.
✗Darcy and Lizzy lukewarm relationship- also wanted more Darcy featured and less getting dresses and preparing for season.
✗Could have included more scenes i.e. we are told Darcy watched out and defended Lizzy in the season from rude suitors- give us one dialogued example instead of summarizing it.
✗No curve balls or intruding variables to spice up the plot
✗
The Decree:
I had a lot of fun reading it; it is fast paced and I thought the premiss was well explained, however due to the barebones prose/ introspection of ODC and the lack of stakes and complexity, I can't bequeath this with more stars. I did enjoy it and recommend it all the same. I consider Ms Salier one of my favorite JAFF authors.
She is consistent and never incurs my vexation as she writes sensible, likable characters.
You can expect the associated trademark virtues- cathartic, quippy and amusing- and it's signature follies- emotionally lightweight, poorly developed ODC, and saccharine- of her novels to be present. Still enjoyed it in one sitting!
Synopsis:
When I first read the blurb detailing yet another 'the Bennet's come into a Dukedom inheritance', my knee jerk reaction was:
We all want the best for Lizzy & the Bennet’s- really who wouldn’t?- and I love when Lizzy and the reader are in on a joke at Darcy’s expense- so delicious!
Darcy apologizes to Lizzy for the MA slight when he is made aware she overheard it and they develop their same canon banter- without Lizzy's needling intent- as friends, so much so that Lizzy begins to feel the stirring of a tendre.
After the Netherfield ball Darcy encounters Lizzy at Oakham mount while making his escape to town and decides to take his leave and be brutally honest with her, that he hoped he didn't raise her expectations too much as he could never offer for her, due to the difference in their station.
Lizzy was at this point aware her father would soon come into a dukedom so she agreed readily, taking pleasure in the knowledge that he had no idea just how right his words were but in the opposite sense!
That Which Sparked Joy:
❀Jane and her suitor were dope, honestly I think they had the best relationship in the story, usurping ODC here.
❀Dialogue quippy- Lizzy was in fine form and OC!
❀The explanation as to why the Bennets inherited and Collins couldn't was well done.
❀No Wickham!
That Which Courted Disdain:
✗ Lacks emotion & dimension to the characters
✗Characters have personality overhaul that even affects their idiosyncrasies, i.e. Mrs B, Mary- unrecognizable. I don't mind them improving but they should still sound like themselves at the least.
✗Darcy and Lizzy lukewarm relationship- also wanted more Darcy featured and less getting dresses and preparing for season.
✗Could have included more scenes i.e. we are told Darcy watched out and defended Lizzy in the season from rude suitors- give us one dialogued example instead of summarizing it.
✗No curve balls or intruding variables to spice up the plot
✗
The Decree:
I had a lot of fun reading it; it is fast paced and I thought the premiss was well explained, however due to the barebones prose/ introspection of ODC and the lack of stakes and complexity, I can't bequeath this with more stars. I did enjoy it and recommend it all the same. I consider Ms Salier one of my favorite JAFF authors.
She is consistent and never incurs my vexation as she writes sensible, likable characters.
June 26, 2022
Loved this book.
Reread: I bought the paperback copy because I needed it on the shelf. Wow, this story is fantastic.
Reread: I know I bought this in May but I love it so much that I read it again.
Reread: Can you believe I read it again?
Reread: Still great.
Reread: I bought the paperback copy because I needed it on the shelf. Wow, this story is fantastic.
Reread: I know I bought this in May but I love it so much that I read it again.
Reread: Can you believe I read it again?
Reread: Still great.
May 5, 2021
Mr. Bennet becomes a Duke
3.5 stars rounded to 4.0 stars.
Another story by an author who doesn’t have much angst in his stories but his characters often have their flaws pointed out. Darcy falls for Lizzy but tells her he cannot marry beneath him and when Lizzy becomes a daughter of a Duke saaumes she will love having him for a husband.
She doesn’t.
He is read the riot act by Lizzy’s mother and goes home to wonder how he became a donkeys rear end.
They finally get together but it almost felt like Lizzy was settling for him. Not a great romance. Meh 😑
3.5 stars rounded to 4.0 stars.
Another story by an author who doesn’t have much angst in his stories but his characters often have their flaws pointed out. Darcy falls for Lizzy but tells her he cannot marry beneath him and when Lizzy becomes a daughter of a Duke saaumes she will love having him for a husband.
She doesn’t.
He is read the riot act by Lizzy’s mother and goes home to wonder how he became a donkeys rear end.
They finally get together but it almost felt like Lizzy was settling for him. Not a great romance. Meh 😑
April 4, 2021
Good
An enjoyable variation that that has the Bennets becoming titled, with Mr. Bennet becoming a duke, and Elizabeth becoming his heir. While Elizabeth is aware of her father’s new status, it remains unknown to the public for the present.
As the book begins, Darcy and Elizabeth are already friends. When Darcy leaves Netherfield for London the day after the ball, upon taking his leave of her he declares, ‘please forgive me if I raised your expectations. I have come to realise that the great pleasure I took in our debates could be misconstrued. But the difference in our stations prohibits me from following my heart.’ She finds him arrogant, but they depart as ’friends’.
Wickham is not mentioned once by name—only described with respect to Darcy and Georgiana. He never encounters the Bennets and has no role in the story. I didn’t mind this in the least. I did not miss him.
The remainder of the book involves the family becoming adjusted to their new roles, including the re-education of Mrs. Bennet and the three younger daughters. It’s all very angst free.
The thing I found missing was at the very beginning of the book. We are told that upon learning Elizabeth had overheard his insult to her at the Meryton assembly, he apologized and from there they become friends through conversations and debates. At this point she is halfway in love with him. I think the progression or unfolding of their early relationship needed more development. A missed opportunity for some good dialogue. There simply wasn’t enough exchange between ODC.
I did enjoy it.
An enjoyable variation that that has the Bennets becoming titled, with Mr. Bennet becoming a duke, and Elizabeth becoming his heir. While Elizabeth is aware of her father’s new status, it remains unknown to the public for the present.
As the book begins, Darcy and Elizabeth are already friends. When Darcy leaves Netherfield for London the day after the ball, upon taking his leave of her he declares, ‘please forgive me if I raised your expectations. I have come to realise that the great pleasure I took in our debates could be misconstrued. But the difference in our stations prohibits me from following my heart.’ She finds him arrogant, but they depart as ’friends’.
Wickham is not mentioned once by name—only described with respect to Darcy and Georgiana. He never encounters the Bennets and has no role in the story. I didn’t mind this in the least. I did not miss him.
The remainder of the book involves the family becoming adjusted to their new roles, including the re-education of Mrs. Bennet and the three younger daughters. It’s all very angst free.
The thing I found missing was at the very beginning of the book. We are told that upon learning Elizabeth had overheard his insult to her at the Meryton assembly, he apologized and from there they become friends through conversations and debates. At this point she is halfway in love with him. I think the progression or unfolding of their early relationship needed more development. A missed opportunity for some good dialogue. There simply wasn’t enough exchange between ODC.
I did enjoy it.
May 10, 2021
This is a longer story and the author's blurb does set it up well for readers.
Darcy and Elizabeth becomes friends early in this story. Darcy does realize he would love a woman such as her for a wife but there is all that lack of connections and wealth and, frankly, the behavior of her family, especially Mrs. Bennet. So it is as Darcy plans to return to London and knows he may never meet Elizabeth out in society that he informs her of how much he admires her but that is all she can expect in their relationship...he doesn't want her to have higher expectations!
Oh, Darcy, you certainly put your foot in it deeply this time, because Elizabeth has just learned that her father is in line to become a Duke as a forgotten and distance relation has no other heir and is at the end of his life. So it is now to be "Lady Elizabeth" with a fortune and the highest connections.
Before Darcy learns this he does change his mind about whether or not he can court and marry Elizabeth. In fact he even travels to Longbourn in order to get permission from Mr. Bennet for the courtship. Alas, the only one he finds there is Mrs. Hill and he does ask her to inform her master that he would like to speak with him. Not realizing that the Bennets are not coming to come back, Mrs. Hill agrees to tell him but other events cause her to forget this small errand until much later in this story.
Darcy does meet Elizabeth at one of the ton's social events and now it is she who informs him that she considers him a fortune-seeker like so many other men she is meeting for the first time. So Darcy has to accept meeting her on occasion as a "friend". He looks on as others seek her attention. Even his own cousin is among those.
There is a lot more going on in this story, i.e., Mrs. Bennet having to learn how to act like a Duchess. She does find guidance for those lessons - I am sure you will enjoy the lady's changes in behavior. The Gardiners remain close and there are others who help this family as they find their place in London's high society.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it to JAFF lovers.
Darcy and Elizabeth becomes friends early in this story. Darcy does realize he would love a woman such as her for a wife but there is all that lack of connections and wealth and, frankly, the behavior of her family, especially Mrs. Bennet. So it is as Darcy plans to return to London and knows he may never meet Elizabeth out in society that he informs her of how much he admires her but that is all she can expect in their relationship...he doesn't want her to have higher expectations!
Oh, Darcy, you certainly put your foot in it deeply this time, because Elizabeth has just learned that her father is in line to become a Duke as a forgotten and distance relation has no other heir and is at the end of his life. So it is now to be "Lady Elizabeth" with a fortune and the highest connections.
Before Darcy learns this he does change his mind about whether or not he can court and marry Elizabeth. In fact he even travels to Longbourn in order to get permission from Mr. Bennet for the courtship. Alas, the only one he finds there is Mrs. Hill and he does ask her to inform her master that he would like to speak with him. Not realizing that the Bennets are not coming to come back, Mrs. Hill agrees to tell him but other events cause her to forget this small errand until much later in this story.
Darcy does meet Elizabeth at one of the ton's social events and now it is she who informs him that she considers him a fortune-seeker like so many other men she is meeting for the first time. So Darcy has to accept meeting her on occasion as a "friend". He looks on as others seek her attention. Even his own cousin is among those.
There is a lot more going on in this story, i.e., Mrs. Bennet having to learn how to act like a Duchess. She does find guidance for those lessons - I am sure you will enjoy the lady's changes in behavior. The Gardiners remain close and there are others who help this family as they find their place in London's high society.
I enjoyed this story and recommend it to JAFF lovers.
July 16, 2023
3.5 stars. The premise was interesting and also the story but the narration didn't suit that well.
April 12, 2021
Excellent story!
Really a fabulous read! Mr. Bennet finds out he is the heir to an extremely wealthy Duke! This changes the fates, besides the fortunes, of all of the Bennet family! And in wondrous ways! Excellent read!
Really a fabulous read! Mr. Bennet finds out he is the heir to an extremely wealthy Duke! This changes the fates, besides the fortunes, of all of the Bennet family! And in wondrous ways! Excellent read!
June 9, 2021
Great Story
I loved it, and all the live stories. Loved Darcy and the improvements of the Bennett family were great. Loved the epilogue and the later lives of the Bennett, Darcys Fitzwilliam and the Cartoons. Whatever happened to the Bingleys?
I loved it, and all the live stories. Loved Darcy and the improvements of the Bennett family were great. Loved the epilogue and the later lives of the Bennett, Darcys Fitzwilliam and the Cartoons. Whatever happened to the Bingleys?
August 26, 2021
Oh boy. This book. Look, 2 stars is maybe a little harsh. A 2.5 would be more accurate. But I just can’t bring myself to round up the star rating.
I like the story - or rather, I like the idea of the story. The execution, not so much. First off, I needs editing badly. So many capitalization and punctuation errors. And “mental giant” was used twice to describe characters. No. Also, a fair amount was just dull. The first part of the story gets a little bogged down in contrived circumstances. But with Mr. Bennett turning out to be a duke, you know there is going to be contrivances anyway so I mostly let that slide. It did keep going though, mostly to arrange things so the rest of the Bennett family were not an embarrassment. Unfortunately, this meant Elizabeth (and Darcy) had almost zero screen time in this part and instead it was all about Mrs. Bennett’s and Mary’s amazing turnarounds after a few sentences were spoken to them to set them right. So not only did I not really care about the three different conversations Lydia had with people to try to improve her, the end result was that characters (Mrs. Bennett in particular) were so dramatically (and rapidly) changed that they ended up wildly out of character. (Lydia, at least, stayed very in character the entire book but after the tantrums at the beginning, we don’t see her much at all.)
Finally though, we get to the fun bit - Elizabeth shocking Darcy with her new status. I’m not going to lie, that was enjoyable. But it was short. And once that was over, there was really no tension left in the book. Instead there are repeated conversations (I think the were five conversations about why Mr. Collins would not be inheriting - two of them actually with Mr. Collins) and very little emotion from anyone.
The characters are so flat and we are shown no relationships developing. Elizabeth has the realization that Mr. Darcy is her best friend but why? How? But really, they were both so bland that I ultimately didn’t care. It was just all so dull. Which is a shame because I loved the idea and really wanted it to work. But it doesn’t, at least not for me.
I like the story - or rather, I like the idea of the story. The execution, not so much. First off, I needs editing badly. So many capitalization and punctuation errors. And “mental giant” was used twice to describe characters. No. Also, a fair amount was just dull. The first part of the story gets a little bogged down in contrived circumstances. But with Mr. Bennett turning out to be a duke, you know there is going to be contrivances anyway so I mostly let that slide. It did keep going though, mostly to arrange things so the rest of the Bennett family were not an embarrassment. Unfortunately, this meant Elizabeth (and Darcy) had almost zero screen time in this part and instead it was all about Mrs. Bennett’s and Mary’s amazing turnarounds after a few sentences were spoken to them to set them right. So not only did I not really care about the three different conversations Lydia had with people to try to improve her, the end result was that characters (Mrs. Bennett in particular) were so dramatically (and rapidly) changed that they ended up wildly out of character. (Lydia, at least, stayed very in character the entire book but after the tantrums at the beginning, we don’t see her much at all.)
Finally though, we get to the fun bit - Elizabeth shocking Darcy with her new status. I’m not going to lie, that was enjoyable. But it was short. And once that was over, there was really no tension left in the book. Instead there are repeated conversations (I think the were five conversations about why Mr. Collins would not be inheriting - two of them actually with Mr. Collins) and very little emotion from anyone.
The characters are so flat and we are shown no relationships developing. Elizabeth has the realization that Mr. Darcy is her best friend but why? How? But really, they were both so bland that I ultimately didn’t care. It was just all so dull. Which is a shame because I loved the idea and really wanted it to work. But it doesn’t, at least not for me.
May 2, 2021
In this Pride and Prejudice styled story, Fitzwilliam Darcy proposes to Elizabeth Bennet before he leaves Hertforshire for London. As in cannon, he waxes on about one of them is so much higher than the other in society. Elizabeth is happy to reject his proposal of the man she dislikes, especially since she just learned that she is the daughter of a duke. Indeed, one of them is higher!
As the Bennet's come to terms with the change in their lives, understand their new inheritance, and make some true friends to guide their way in the ton, Darcy learns his error. As Elizabeth and Jane learn to navigate the ton and work through the fortune hunters and hangers on, each lady finds their champion. I have to say one of my favorite parts is when the Bingley's learn about the Bennet's status. That bit aside, the misunderstandings and assumptions must be overcome for more than one lady to find their happily ever after.
As the Bennet's come to terms with the change in their lives, understand their new inheritance, and make some true friends to guide their way in the ton, Darcy learns his error. As Elizabeth and Jane learn to navigate the ton and work through the fortune hunters and hangers on, each lady finds their champion. I have to say one of my favorite parts is when the Bingley's learn about the Bennet's status. That bit aside, the misunderstandings and assumptions must be overcome for more than one lady to find their happily ever after.
May 25, 2021
Some issues.
I felt that the characters are underdeveloped and shallow, the writing is sort of a “ … and then this happened and this happened and Lizzy thought that Mr. Darcy was arrogant and then…” the dialogue is choppy. The pacing is all off… it feels very episodic rather than a story that flows well - the transitions are non-existent. Dialogue needs work. Story wasn’t believable- the amount of change in personality in such a short timeline was beyond my ability to suspend disbelief.,, and so it felt more like a fairytale, but no faeries. What happened to Bingley? Was he only in the book to get a set-down? The scene with Caroline at the ball was gratuitous vengeance- totally over the top petty and it felt like something middle school girls scripted.
I just feel that this book is poorly executed compared to most others in the genre.
I felt that the characters are underdeveloped and shallow, the writing is sort of a “ … and then this happened and this happened and Lizzy thought that Mr. Darcy was arrogant and then…” the dialogue is choppy. The pacing is all off… it feels very episodic rather than a story that flows well - the transitions are non-existent. Dialogue needs work. Story wasn’t believable- the amount of change in personality in such a short timeline was beyond my ability to suspend disbelief.,, and so it felt more like a fairytale, but no faeries. What happened to Bingley? Was he only in the book to get a set-down? The scene with Caroline at the ball was gratuitous vengeance- totally over the top petty and it felt like something middle school girls scripted.
I just feel that this book is poorly executed compared to most others in the genre.
June 11, 2023
I like the unusual twist this variation on Pride and Prejudice takes, with the Bennets suddenly elevated to the ranks of nobility when a distant relative dies.
This happens at a point in the story when Mr. Darcy is about to leave Netherfield with Mr. Bingley, and he assumes that Miss Elizabeth Bennet has similar feelings to his. He relieves her of any expectations, reminding her that they are from different circles of society, in effect insulting her family's lower position.
Elizabeth already knows that her father is about to inherit the title of duke, so she agrees with Darcy, without explanation, that yes, they hold unequal ranks. But the insult continues to anger her, and she's determined for him to have a little comeuppance when they meet again.
I love Mrs. Bennet's character arc in this story. I also like the surprises that both Mr. Collins and Miss Bingley have coming to them.
This happens at a point in the story when Mr. Darcy is about to leave Netherfield with Mr. Bingley, and he assumes that Miss Elizabeth Bennet has similar feelings to his. He relieves her of any expectations, reminding her that they are from different circles of society, in effect insulting her family's lower position.
Elizabeth already knows that her father is about to inherit the title of duke, so she agrees with Darcy, without explanation, that yes, they hold unequal ranks. But the insult continues to anger her, and she's determined for him to have a little comeuppance when they meet again.
I love Mrs. Bennet's character arc in this story. I also like the surprises that both Mr. Collins and Miss Bingley have coming to them.
August 14, 2022
I loved this book. The irony was just delicious! It was hilarious, in a very dry sarcastic sort of way which suits my sense of humor just fine. I was ecstatic when I read about all the pettiness that if you ask me the the family was entitled to & the set downs to those who were deserving.
I do wish that when it came to a point, Darcy’s courtship would have lasted longer. It felt very rushed. Or perhaps it would be more accurate to say I wanted him to suffer for a bit longer. No really, I would have enjoyed more watching them make that leap from friends to romance. That part fell a little flat for me.
I absolutely loved how the epilogue included everyone! I hate it when they ignore the vast majority of the characters in the book! Although a final look at Bingley & Caroline would not have gone amiss.
I do wish that when it came to a point, Darcy’s courtship would have lasted longer. It felt very rushed. Or perhaps it would be more accurate to say I wanted him to suffer for a bit longer. No really, I would have enjoyed more watching them make that leap from friends to romance. That part fell a little flat for me.
I absolutely loved how the epilogue included everyone! I hate it when they ignore the vast majority of the characters in the book! Although a final look at Bingley & Caroline would not have gone amiss.
May 23, 2021
Overall a pleasant read, despite its appalling title and contrived storyline.
April 6, 2021
Entertaining
Another fun story from this author. It reminded me a lot of a previous book by Sydney Salier, called Don't Flatter Yourself. In that story, Mr Bennett married a second time to a woman with noble connections, but the new Mrs Bennett didn't want to use her title and the connection was hushed up. In this story, Mr Bennett inherits a dukedom from a distant uncle, and the whole family adopts the new status and moves to a new home, but not before there's plenty of confusion about their changed circumstances, and how it affects the attitudes of others, including Mr Darcy.
This is another story wherein Elizabeth is determined to find a husband who loves her for herself, and not for her wealth and connections, and where Darcy sticks his foot in it by coming off as an arrogant fortune hunter, even though he truly has feelings for her. This author writes highly satisfying tales, where the characters that most annoy us get what's coming to them, and things just conveniently go right for the characters that we love. The Bennetts are all elevated in status, and are very wealthy. People are hired to improve the shrill and nervous Mrs Bennett, the insipid Kitty, the spoiled and whiny Lydia, and even the self righteous and pompous Mary, and the changes are quick and miraculous. Even Mr Bennett has his own makeover that takes everyone by surprise.
Mr Collins, Caroline Bingley, and Lady Catherine all get resounding set downs that make you want to clap. That's why these stories are so much fun to read, because they're low angst, idealistic, and romantic.
This isn't great literature. Throughout the book the language used isn't strictly true to the era. There are a lot of contractions, and a lot of modern day idioms. However, if you go in prepared for this, and you're willing to just read a pleasant tale, this is lovely. The book is well written enough, and I recommend it.
Another fun story from this author. It reminded me a lot of a previous book by Sydney Salier, called Don't Flatter Yourself. In that story, Mr Bennett married a second time to a woman with noble connections, but the new Mrs Bennett didn't want to use her title and the connection was hushed up. In this story, Mr Bennett inherits a dukedom from a distant uncle, and the whole family adopts the new status and moves to a new home, but not before there's plenty of confusion about their changed circumstances, and how it affects the attitudes of others, including Mr Darcy.
This is another story wherein Elizabeth is determined to find a husband who loves her for herself, and not for her wealth and connections, and where Darcy sticks his foot in it by coming off as an arrogant fortune hunter, even though he truly has feelings for her. This author writes highly satisfying tales, where the characters that most annoy us get what's coming to them, and things just conveniently go right for the characters that we love. The Bennetts are all elevated in status, and are very wealthy. People are hired to improve the shrill and nervous Mrs Bennett, the insipid Kitty, the spoiled and whiny Lydia, and even the self righteous and pompous Mary, and the changes are quick and miraculous. Even Mr Bennett has his own makeover that takes everyone by surprise.
Mr Collins, Caroline Bingley, and Lady Catherine all get resounding set downs that make you want to clap. That's why these stories are so much fun to read, because they're low angst, idealistic, and romantic.
This isn't great literature. Throughout the book the language used isn't strictly true to the era. There are a lot of contractions, and a lot of modern day idioms. However, if you go in prepared for this, and you're willing to just read a pleasant tale, this is lovely. The book is well written enough, and I recommend it.
January 10, 2024
A fun, if rather implausible, plot
This is one of this author's earlier books and is rather better than the more recent work. There is a level of repetitiveness to the books but as one of the earlier ones the repetitive label is perhaps better applied to the later ones. There is a lightness and a sense of humour which runs through the books which I do appreciate but the language is rather too modern at times.
This is one of this author's earlier books and is rather better than the more recent work. There is a level of repetitiveness to the books but as one of the earlier ones the repetitive label is perhaps better applied to the later ones. There is a lightness and a sense of humour which runs through the books which I do appreciate but the language is rather too modern at times.
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November 13, 2023Not to my liking. DNF. There’s way too much about the Bennet’s elevation in society, and I prefer when it’s more centered on ODC.
January 27, 2024
I went into this story expecting to dislike it and stop reading halfway. The reason for it being the premise as told by the summary: when Darcy leaves after the day after the Netherfield Ball, he apologises to Elizabeth in case he raised her expectations, because he can't marry her due to the difference in their stations, not knowing the Bennets have inherited a title and dukedom.
That right there is the reason I expected to dislike the story. But it's also the reason I gave it a read anyway, since it's obviously a D/E HEA, when after those words the whole thing should be beyond repair and the D/E ship should have sunk.
In truth, I'm not sure I like how that obstacle was overcome in this story. But I can definitely say without spoiling anything it wasn't as wishy-washy as one might fear.
The D/E romance takes a backseat, however, to the Bennet family's adjustment to their new circumstances and the consequent changes wrought, which takes up a huge part of the story. I approve.
[ Lydia sighed. 'I hate growing up. It is a great deal of work.' ]
And this proves true for all characters throughout the story.
My favourite part is the gentle set down Mrs Bennet gives to Darcy, reminding him of his own words and his behaviour in Meryton, and what that means now that the shoe is on the other foot. Mrs Bennet's motive isn't revenge, but rather mercy: she knows Elizabeth would have phrased things in a way that would have destroyed Darcy.
[ 'When did you become so wise?’
‘When I stopped being afraid of the future.’ ]
That just about sums up the hows and whys of Mrs Bennet's character changes in the story, and why it's not as OOC as some readers think.
And once she's curbed her excitement, with the help of some new friends, why should Mrs Bennet have trouble fitting in the ton? As she says in-story, they're still women, and Mrs Bennet knows how to handle women. And she thoroughly enjoys that the shoe is on the other foot now: now it's the men who have to pursue her daughters because she made it known her daughters would marry for love and respect or not at all (they can afford it) and she gets to enjoy watching them be courted by all and sundry.
One side effect of all these changes in the family and their circumstances is that Jane's eyes are opened to the real world. It helps that Caroline humiliates her twice, once when Jane visits her in London before her new status is known, and once at the very ball intended to introduce the Bennets to the ton (a ball to which Caroline is of course late and thus doesn't know the mistake she's making).
As such, naturally the Jane and Bingley ship sinks, hard. But no worries, there's a deserving gentleman waiting in the wings for Jane.
Caroline learns her lesson too late, but she's willing to accept that. (And maybe this acceptance of her own fault is what makes some readers cry OOC, but to that I only have to say that likely as not they've read too many crazy!Caroline stories and lost objectivity.)
There's also naturally the obligatory "Collins fumes and blusters and insists he's Mr Bennet's heir to the dukedom too, when his line was deliberately disowned in perpetuity". In his case though, the acceptance did come too fast. One minute he's insisting he's given his due, the next he's immediately contrite without anything resembling a transition. That bothered me simply because it didn't feel remotely realistic (for a given definition of the word, naturally).
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story. It's a light-hearted feel-good story for a rainy day.
But I cannot give it a 5 star rating. The technical quality just isn't good enough for that. The author really needs a good proofreader.
In truth, I'm rounding it up from 3.5 to 4.
That right there is the reason I expected to dislike the story. But it's also the reason I gave it a read anyway, since it's obviously a D/E HEA, when after those words the whole thing should be beyond repair and the D/E ship should have sunk.
In truth, I'm not sure I like how that obstacle was overcome in this story. But I can definitely say without spoiling anything it wasn't as wishy-washy as one might fear.
The D/E romance takes a backseat, however, to the Bennet family's adjustment to their new circumstances and the consequent changes wrought, which takes up a huge part of the story. I approve.
[ Lydia sighed. 'I hate growing up. It is a great deal of work.' ]
And this proves true for all characters throughout the story.
My favourite part is the gentle set down Mrs Bennet gives to Darcy, reminding him of his own words and his behaviour in Meryton, and what that means now that the shoe is on the other foot. Mrs Bennet's motive isn't revenge, but rather mercy: she knows Elizabeth would have phrased things in a way that would have destroyed Darcy.
[ 'When did you become so wise?’
‘When I stopped being afraid of the future.’ ]
That just about sums up the hows and whys of Mrs Bennet's character changes in the story, and why it's not as OOC as some readers think.
And once she's curbed her excitement, with the help of some new friends, why should Mrs Bennet have trouble fitting in the ton? As she says in-story, they're still women, and Mrs Bennet knows how to handle women. And she thoroughly enjoys that the shoe is on the other foot now: now it's the men who have to pursue her daughters because she made it known her daughters would marry for love and respect or not at all (they can afford it) and she gets to enjoy watching them be courted by all and sundry.
One side effect of all these changes in the family and their circumstances is that Jane's eyes are opened to the real world. It helps that Caroline humiliates her twice, once when Jane visits her in London before her new status is known, and once at the very ball intended to introduce the Bennets to the ton (a ball to which Caroline is of course late and thus doesn't know the mistake she's making).
As such, naturally the Jane and Bingley ship sinks, hard. But no worries, there's a deserving gentleman waiting in the wings for Jane.
Caroline learns her lesson too late, but she's willing to accept that. (And maybe this acceptance of her own fault is what makes some readers cry OOC, but to that I only have to say that likely as not they've read too many crazy!Caroline stories and lost objectivity.)
There's also naturally the obligatory "Collins fumes and blusters and insists he's Mr Bennet's heir to the dukedom too, when his line was deliberately disowned in perpetuity". In his case though, the acceptance did come too fast. One minute he's insisting he's given his due, the next he's immediately contrite without anything resembling a transition. That bothered me simply because it didn't feel remotely realistic (for a given definition of the word, naturally).
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story. It's a light-hearted feel-good story for a rainy day.
But I cannot give it a 5 star rating. The technical quality just isn't good enough for that. The author really needs a good proofreader.
In truth, I'm rounding it up from 3.5 to 4.
January 31, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy considers himself to be a man of consequence. When he meets Miss Elizabeth Bennet while visiting with his friend in Hertfordshire, he is captivated by her lively wit and sparkling eyes, but her lack of wealth and connections make an attachment impossible for him to consider. As he is leaving Hertfordshire, he tells her, ‘please forgive me if I raised your expectations. I have come to realise that the great pleasure I took in our debates could be misconstrued, but the difference in our stations prohibits me from following my heart.’
Miss Elizbeth Bennet is furious with him, but politely answers, ‘I am exceedingly grateful that you are aware of the expectations society places on making an appropriate marriage.’ But there is something she does not tell him, she had just found out that her father was the heir to the Duke of Barrington, making Darcy’s attitude ridiculous.
Months later, Darcy is confronted with Lady Elizabeth at a ball given by her father, the new Duke of Barrington, to introduce himself and his family to society. Darcy’s initial elation that the woman he has fallen in love with, is now what he considers an eligible match, is soon dashed when the Duchess informs him that she considers him a fortune-hunter.
Darcy now has a difficult choice to make, be labelled as a fortune-hunter or refrain from courting the woman he loves. He never considered that his attitude about his own consequence could have such unfortunate consequences. Is there a way for Darcy and Elizabeth to have a HEA? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy considers himself to be a man of consequence. When he meets Miss Elizabeth Bennet while visiting with his friend in Hertfordshire, he is captivated by her lively wit and sparkling eyes, but her lack of wealth and connections make an attachment impossible for him to consider. As he is leaving Hertfordshire, he tells her, ‘please forgive me if I raised your expectations. I have come to realise that the great pleasure I took in our debates could be misconstrued, but the difference in our stations prohibits me from following my heart.’
Miss Elizbeth Bennet is furious with him, but politely answers, ‘I am exceedingly grateful that you are aware of the expectations society places on making an appropriate marriage.’ But there is something she does not tell him, she had just found out that her father was the heir to the Duke of Barrington, making Darcy’s attitude ridiculous.
Months later, Darcy is confronted with Lady Elizabeth at a ball given by her father, the new Duke of Barrington, to introduce himself and his family to society. Darcy’s initial elation that the woman he has fallen in love with, is now what he considers an eligible match, is soon dashed when the Duchess informs him that she considers him a fortune-hunter.
Darcy now has a difficult choice to make, be labelled as a fortune-hunter or refrain from courting the woman he loves. He never considered that his attitude about his own consequence could have such unfortunate consequences. Is there a way for Darcy and Elizabeth to have a HEA? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
June 12, 2025
Funny variation. Darcy and Elizabeth have overcome their first encounter and the “tolerable” remark to become friends. Darcy is planning to leave Hertfordshire after the Netherfield ball and meets Elizabeth on Oakum Mount to take his leave. He apologizes if he has raised her expectations and tells her due to the difference in their social status they can only be friends. Elizabeth agrees with him, not letting him know she has just learned that her father, Thomas Bennet, is heir to a dukedom and she will be the daughter of a duke.
Darcy learns of her change in status when he returns to London in the new season and attends a ball given by the new duke to introduce himself and his family. Darcy is initially thrilled that he can now consider Elizabeth as his bride, but the new duchess, aka Mrs Bennet, lets him know he is now considered a fortune hunter and is not worthy of her daughter. Additionally, a very angry Elizabeth was looking for vengeance for Darcy’s remarks about her and her family and realizes that Mrs Bennet was correct in her milder way of handling the matter. When Darcy next sees Elizabeth he apologizes and promises to remain her friend and not pursue her.
Darcy has to watch as his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, pursues Lady Elizabeth throughout the season along with many other suitors who are no match for the magnificence that is Elizabeth. The inconstant Bingley and the virago Caroline come to no joy as they learn the lessons of no constancy and no real consequence. Collins also learns he has no real importance in the world. And at the end of the season Elizabeth learns that a best friend can make the best partner.
Darcy learns of her change in status when he returns to London in the new season and attends a ball given by the new duke to introduce himself and his family. Darcy is initially thrilled that he can now consider Elizabeth as his bride, but the new duchess, aka Mrs Bennet, lets him know he is now considered a fortune hunter and is not worthy of her daughter. Additionally, a very angry Elizabeth was looking for vengeance for Darcy’s remarks about her and her family and realizes that Mrs Bennet was correct in her milder way of handling the matter. When Darcy next sees Elizabeth he apologizes and promises to remain her friend and not pursue her.
Darcy has to watch as his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, pursues Lady Elizabeth throughout the season along with many other suitors who are no match for the magnificence that is Elizabeth. The inconstant Bingley and the virago Caroline come to no joy as they learn the lessons of no constancy and no real consequence. Collins also learns he has no real importance in the world. And at the end of the season Elizabeth learns that a best friend can make the best partner.
May 29, 2021
Interesting but unsatisfactory
As many Pride and Prejudice variations, the premise to this one is that the Bennets had more consequence, and therefore, there is a difference in societal stations between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, a whole lot of difference. What would have been a promising story, however, became somewhat tedious and somehow misses the mark.
The author focused too much on how the Bennets settled in and changed considerably to play the parts as heirs to the Barrington estate/dukedom. What would have been several opportunities to reignite the love affair between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet were not actively taken. In effect, the rekindling of their romance was demoted in emphasis, left as an afterthought close towards the end right before the epilogue. As an avid fan of Pride and Prejudice variation, this reader has always been of the opinion that if the variation does not focus on the beloved couple, then it would be unsatisfactory to say the least.
As much as this one tried, there is much to be desired. This reader does not like Mr. Darcy in this one. He hardly proved anything in terms of his love and affection for Elizabeth; and how could he when she is way above in rank and station. The set down to the Bingleys was well deserved but it goes to show Mr. Bingley had no substance in this one either. The other characters were almost positive good to be true as they changed and I suppose this variation focuses more on the improvements of the Bennets than anything else.
As many Pride and Prejudice variations, the premise to this one is that the Bennets had more consequence, and therefore, there is a difference in societal stations between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, a whole lot of difference. What would have been a promising story, however, became somewhat tedious and somehow misses the mark.
The author focused too much on how the Bennets settled in and changed considerably to play the parts as heirs to the Barrington estate/dukedom. What would have been several opportunities to reignite the love affair between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet were not actively taken. In effect, the rekindling of their romance was demoted in emphasis, left as an afterthought close towards the end right before the epilogue. As an avid fan of Pride and Prejudice variation, this reader has always been of the opinion that if the variation does not focus on the beloved couple, then it would be unsatisfactory to say the least.
As much as this one tried, there is much to be desired. This reader does not like Mr. Darcy in this one. He hardly proved anything in terms of his love and affection for Elizabeth; and how could he when she is way above in rank and station. The set down to the Bingleys was well deserved but it goes to show Mr. Bingley had no substance in this one either. The other characters were almost positive good to be true as they changed and I suppose this variation focuses more on the improvements of the Bennets than anything else.
April 11, 2021
Money and a title
Money and a title are overwhelmingly important in this story. Darcy leaves Hertfordshire after explaining to Elizabeth that he can't marry her because of the lack of money and connections. Of course Bingley leaves too as in the classic. What they don't know is that Mr Bennet is the heir to a Duke who has just died. That side of the family had no sons living, Mr Bennet was the next heir, and Mr Collins's side was disowned in perpetuity by his great grandfather. It's arranged with the King that Elizabeth is the heir to her father.
Several characters get their comeuppance due to their own actions - Caroline and her brother specifically. And Darcy gets a talking to from several people especially Duchess ( Mrs Bennet) who informed him that he was a fortune hunter when in Hertfordshire. Darcy's got plenty to think about now that his poor behaviour is pointed out to him.
It's an excellent story with plenty to think about, especially how much money matters to some people and how attitudes have changed regarding women and their capabilities!
Money and a title are overwhelmingly important in this story. Darcy leaves Hertfordshire after explaining to Elizabeth that he can't marry her because of the lack of money and connections. Of course Bingley leaves too as in the classic. What they don't know is that Mr Bennet is the heir to a Duke who has just died. That side of the family had no sons living, Mr Bennet was the next heir, and Mr Collins's side was disowned in perpetuity by his great grandfather. It's arranged with the King that Elizabeth is the heir to her father.
Several characters get their comeuppance due to their own actions - Caroline and her brother specifically. And Darcy gets a talking to from several people especially Duchess ( Mrs Bennet) who informed him that he was a fortune hunter when in Hertfordshire. Darcy's got plenty to think about now that his poor behaviour is pointed out to him.
It's an excellent story with plenty to think about, especially how much money matters to some people and how attitudes have changed regarding women and their capabilities!
July 20, 2021
This was a well written P&P alternative which really drew me into the story. However the ending was rushed and also rather disappointing - the Darcy in this story was truly an arrogant jerk for much of the tale, and Lizzy should totally have ended up with Colonel Fitzwilliam this one time, he was much pleasanter and more respectful. Instead, the author had Fitzwilliam fall for another Bennet sister on the spot to make way for Darcy, which seemed way too convenient and also out of character. So that ruined the ending for me - Darcy could have fallen for another sister or someone else and let Lizzy & Fitzwilliam have their HEA for a change.
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May 24, 2023
I thought this book was hilarious, and I love this author's work. She makes me laugh! Darcy had to bend over backwards to untangle the mess that he created for himself once Mr. Bennet became a Duke and Mrs. Bennet a Duchess. Yes, she really believed that she didn't have a snowball's chance in hell of getting it right. She was downright terrified. "I barely know how to behave like a lady!" All this time we thought she was vulgar for the hell of it when she was actually trying to be ladylike! Who knew?
Caroline really suffered in this story as well! Some may think that the writing is too modern, but it works for what it does, entertain!
Caroline really suffered in this story as well! Some may think that the writing is too modern, but it works for what it does, entertain!
May 15, 2021
Liked it: warning: spoilers
I liked that they kept their change in consequence under wraps. A couple of things though: Mrs. Bennet's discourse matured unbelievably quickly and why would they invite the Bingley's to make a black mark in the ball? There would've been better places for a set down, though this way they were out of the picture faster and Caroline got to overhear some salty needed truths.
I liked that they kept their change in consequence under wraps. A couple of things though: Mrs. Bennet's discourse matured unbelievably quickly and why would they invite the Bingley's to make a black mark in the ball? There would've been better places for a set down, though this way they were out of the picture faster and Caroline got to overhear some salty needed truths.
August 8, 2021
I love it when the whole family gets a good makeover!
I love this author's works and I couldn't put this one down. Purists beware, this is not for you. However, if you enjoy variations in which the whole family fortune is upgraded, you will love this one. The only editing complaint I have is the frequent incorrect placement of commas. Otherwise I have no complaints, this one was delightful.
I love this author's works and I couldn't put this one down. Purists beware, this is not for you. However, if you enjoy variations in which the whole family fortune is upgraded, you will love this one. The only editing complaint I have is the frequent incorrect placement of commas. Otherwise I have no complaints, this one was delightful.
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