Butterflies 🦋 that Never Die
I don’t like hiding my reviews because of spoilers but there will be spoilers in this review, so you’ve been warned.
Quotes and Curses September box themed “Into the Unknown”… and every time I hear that I think of Frozen II 😂
Straight away I was hooked.
Hannah is a trouble maker. Within twenty pages she’s broken a bitch’s nose with a fat ass history book. That’s the kinda sanctioned violence I’m after 😂😉 especially when the weapon is a book 📖
On a side note, my sister’s name is Hannah, so it’s difficult to not imagine the MC as my sister, even though they don’t look anything alike.
The pacing in this book was really frustrating. It seems like they’ve been in Leirianor for three days, suddenly it’s three weeks later? So we miss a lot of them learning about this new world, the customs, the expectations, the landscape. And so we, as the reader, don’t learn it either. So I felt a little lost and detached because I didn’t get to experience exploring the new world. I feel we missed a lot of crucial world building, and if we had been let in more, it would have been so easy to love it.
But regardless of that, I was really into the world that Aldara has built. It had a supernatural vibe with high fantasy names and included a magic system that wasn’t too convoluted or difficult to understand. I’ll be the first to admit I don’t read a lot of shifters novels, so I can’t base it on anything, but the shifting parts made sense at least to me, so that was a bonus.
It also bugs me that for the first quarter to third of the book, it is solely in Hannah’s POV, then it switches to multiple POVs and it got really confusing until I figured out what was happening. I think it would have been a lot better if the POVs were labeled.
There is also a LOT of characters and I feel like we are introduced so fast that I forget a lot of them, who they are, what they do and their significance to the plot. Or insignificance. Too many stories interwoven together, so it was easy to get lost.
And, add to boot, Hannah is not the special character in this novel. Normally, the MC is the super special heroine, but it doesn’t seem that way. And don’t get me wrong, I love me a little normal MC rather than ultra special but to me it doesn’t sit right in this novel.
Add to that the POV switching, and the fact that Hannah isn’t involved in a massive event in about halfway, it really just solidifies the fact that Hannah is only a foot in the door involved in everything that is going on.
To be fair, I wasn’t expecting the reveals towards the end of the book, so it really threw me a bit, but also made me understand that it seems everyone has some sort of special involvement, but Hannah is the ultra-special one. Ugh, but whatever.
I like the way Aldara has woven a whole web of lies and it takes the whole book to unravel them. It creates tension and motive for a lot of the characters, and also explains the reasons why some personalities are filled with angst and torment. It means that we get a lot of fucked up, complicated characters and that always makes a story interesting, and it was done well as well (looking at you Mr Derek).
Something Hannah said in this book really irked me. “Family or powers: each girl got one back. Surely that had to be fair.” Ummm… no. That is absolutely a deplorable, shitty thing to say. It makes Hannah seem immature, and not a real friend. I didn’t necessarily mind Hannah as our MC, but some things she did made her seem quite immature, like a child throwing a tantrum. Some of her motives and reasoning for the way she acts isn’t always explained very well either. I much prefer Margaret, she seems strong, kind-hearted and someone who has her head screwed on right. Definitely looking forward to more of her in the next book!
A three star read 🌟🌟🌟 it was interesting and enjoyable enough that I got through it. I will probably read the next one in the series! There is a lot that is unresolved and if this first book is anything to go by, there are a lot of secrets still waiting to be revealed.