Blueberry Bunny Boy

Elves After Dawn #1

by Leona Windwalker

Mallow is a walking disaster when it comes to all things Easter, and for an elf in Bunnyville, that's the worst thing possible!

Mallow

I've tried every Easter production station possible. I sneezed the chickens bald, and there's no way they are letting me anywhere near the ducks or bunnies now. Basket weaving? The less said about my attempts there, the better. Preparing the real eggs? I set the water to boil them on literal fire, and when they moved me to egg painting, I broke out in hives. I swelled up so big, they had to bring me down from where I floated up to the ceiling. If we'd been outside, I'd have drifted off like some errant cloud! Candy testing is out as I hate sweets, so it all tastes disgusting to me.

I'm such a disaster as an Easter Elf that Peter Cottontail himself had a meeting with Kris Kringle to figure out where in Kringle Enterprises they could safely put me. That's how I found myself assigned to the human world, working for the Feed and Seed department. Arranging and collecting deliveries of fresh greens and stuff for the bunnies and chicks should be fine, right? I knew I'd struck gold when on my very first day, I found it- a place called Rabbit Food. And the human working there? Oh wow...I think he might just be my mate!

Genres: Holiday, M M Romance

115 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 2, 2021

About the author

Leona is a longtime staunch supporter of human rights and environmental causes. Her favourite genre to read is M/M fiction and she particularly enjoys science fiction, fantasy, and action/suspense subgenres—especially if they have a nice seasoning of romance. She has far too many books on her Kindle, has overloaded her phone with even more and, when not reading, writing, being driven to distraction by her children, or being overlorded by her three cats, can be found trying to locate the portal that the sock monster uses to steal socks from her dryer.

pseudonym for Loretta Johns

***Works by this author are protected by Muso. Please help support the author who is supporting her family by only purchasing legal copies***

Reviews

[Jacquie Stewart · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5

The bunny boy thing was cute. The whole thing short and sweet. Theo was a little too accepting though and Mallow a little too innocent for stuff they did

[andrea moran · Rating 3 out of 5]

Elves after dawn 1

I really wanted to like this but between the dodgy grammar and disjointed story I really struggled but don’t let that put anyone else off!

[Jennie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Cute, Needs a Bit of Help

These elf series are kinda cute, but some simple editing errors made this book feel rushed. The main character's name is not capitalized on a couple spots, and there were at least two minor errors in each chapter (missing quotation marks, "andt he" instead of "and the", things like that). The BDSM club aspect also felt forced, like it didn't quite fit the story idea.

[Monika · Rating 2 out of 5]

This started out really great. This quick little read made me laugh and I thought it was really sweet in a "lets not believe any of this" way but hey, I was laughing. Then the humor got old and the story fell apart and by the end it felt rushed. The little elf/panties kink was cute but it lost me when Mallow and Theo went to the club. In my mind that experience didn't fit these characters or the light and fun story the cute cover promises.

I really loved Mallow and Theo and I saw promise in their story but unfortunately this needs a bit of retooling or at the very least someone to proof read it to try and catch all the silly little mistakes.

TAGS
-- Holiday/Easter -- elf/human pairing -- mostly sweet -- the beginning made me laugh -- loved the MCs... Mallow & Theo -- needs a bit of spit and polish -- lots of silly little errors -- turned out to be just ok

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Blueberry Bunny Boy was a sweet and delightful read about Mallow, an Easter elf shifter, who lands in the human world after one too many failed attempts at trying to help Easter production in Bunnyville. He ends up meeting his mate, Theo, who is a human that runs the local vegan restaurant. Theo thinks Mallow is being led astray by a weird cult and just wants a Sub to love. This was a sweet and achingly endearing novella with mild BDSM, D/s kink, with a clueless Easter elf, his sweet and concerned human mate, and lots of fun times :) This is book 1 in the Elves After Dawn series which features multiple authors writing about elf shifters, Easter, eggs, so much eggs, bunnies, and clueless mates/humans :) I'm excited to read more of this achingly sweet (cavity inducing) series!

[Kimberly · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was all kinds of crazy and fun. Mallow is an Easter elf that can't do anything right. Sent to a human town to buy food for the animals at Bunnyville, Mallow walks into Theo's vegan restaurant trying to buy the whole salad bar. After meeting Mallow's wacky roommate and hearing tales of Peter Cottontail, Theo is drawn to Mallow's innocence and his Daddy instincts kick in wanting to protect Mallow from the cult he thinks he is apart of. Funny, sweet, and kinky. This was a fun Easter story about fate bringing a sweet, clueless Easter elf and his human mate together.

[Onyerbike]

DNF @ 80%

Aside from the overwhelming number of spelling, grammatical, and formatting errors (which I'd be willing to overlook if the story was good enough), this isn't for me. Dom Daddies who take pleasure in catching their boys out so they can punish them really fucking annoy me. I don't mind light BDSM elements, but cutting off a guy's air while getting a blowie is NOT up my alley. Too many elements here had me grinding my teeth in annoyance, so it's time to cut my losses. Sorry, Mallow and Whatsyourname, it's not you (well, it kind of is), it's me.

[Shelia · Rating 2 out of 5]

Disappointed

I was so excited for this story but was terribly disappointed. I just couldn't get past how naive and childish Cotton is. Yes, I understand he is not of the human realm but I believe it is taken way too far. I like the Daddy trope but not a big fan of club settings but that is because I like that type thing to be private. There is nothing wrong with it if it is your thing, it just isn't mine.

[Denise GremoryKohta · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was so good!

I adore Mallow. Theo will be a good Daddy Dom for him. I loved the pace of this story until we got almost to the end. That felt a bit rushed and like we skimmed over some important moments. It did make me want to know more about the other Dons snd subs at the club though.

[Helen · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute story but didn't go through an editor.

Mallow and Theo were good characters.

This book was a charming story, but I couldn't see past all the typos and grammatical errors.

An Elf, aa Daddy and a kink club, this could have been such a good book.

Blueberry Bunny Boy
(Elves After Dawn #1)
by
Leona Windwalker


❤❤❤ Story

[Marie · Rating 1 out of 5]

There are so many ways this could have gone better

This is a fantasy elf “romance” with Daddy/Dom characters. This story looked cute from the description but there was barely a storyline, it felt like a cartoon of a story; like someone took a mad libs and entered random words in place. There could have been something really cute and fun here but I don’t recommend it.

[Kate McDougall Sackler · Rating 1 out of 5]

Thank goodness that was short. WTF. That was not at all what I was expecting. Daddy kink is so not my thing. Also, distracting errors easily solved by a bit of editing. Not really spelling errors, just dropped letters or words or strange spacing issues. Hard pass.
Red by any other name challenge-Apple

[Sheryl Howard · Rating 4 out of 5]

Finding a Home

When you're an elf and terrible or allergic to everything finding out where you belong don't come easily. This Easter adventure helps one elf find not only a home but someone to love. Grab this one now.

[Sherri Englett · Rating 3 out of 5]

I would leave a better review, but I only got to read half the book. It was suppose to be 115 pages but I only got 54 pages and that was the end of the book. What I read was funny and good. Just wished I could have finished it.

[Mstay · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cute

This was an adorable story. I still found it weird how they let someone go work in the human world that knew nothing about it though. I dropped one point off the earring for the editing issues.

[Dana · Rating 3 out of 5]

Blueberry Bunny Boy 2.8 stars

I have nothing but good things to say about the story, however the needs to have a complete edit done. There are many mistakes in spelling, additional words added or missing, and several cases of what looked like auto correct.

[Gemi Star · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ugh I hate when a book ends with half finished stories

Seriously it's like hitting a wall the author seems like oh ok I'm done writing and just makes up an epilog to make it better when it only makes it WORSE!!! The series is good until you find there's no ending just a hole.

[Emma · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5

[Virginia Lee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Cute

Cute story with bunny ad peeps. Looking for a sweet hea book you will love this one. Sweet boy with his daddy

[Jocelyn F · Rating 2 out of 5]

The typos were really REALLY bad. The story was just herky jerky, and Mallow was annoyingly naive. Plus it ended at like 85%.

[Frederick · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and kind of cute ... BUT. Needs editing, a LOT of it. Sorry but I don't think I'll be reading any of the others in this series.

[Wellington · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book needed some editing help. The errors kept pulling me out of the story. I liked the humor and the characters had decent chemistry.

[AJ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hippety Hop

Oh my gosh, this story had me laughing from the start. Laughing out loud - glad I was alone. Can't wait to read the next book.

[Debra (Dragon Nanny) Phiri · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cute story. The characters were cool but there were quite a few typos and that distracted a few times from the smoothness of the story.

Overall a good plot and fun.

[Cally]

DNF 80%

It wasn't bad, it just wasn't my thing. Perhaps I would have liked it without the BDSM elements. Nothing against BDSM, I do read that, it just didn't seem to mesh well.

[Jill · Rating 3 out of 5]

Funny

This story was very funny. It earned a three for the distracting typos. I'll definitely be reading more if the series.

[Debbie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Enjoyed it

This was a great story. It was let down though by poor editing. Some sentences just didn’t make sense. This is a new to me author, I did really enjoy the storyline and look forward to more from her.