The plot drew me in, but oh my god, was it bad.
I understand that this story is supposed to be short and sweet, but short doesn't mean there shouldn't be description. So much of the story followed the format of, 'We did this. We then did that.' I often found myself lost at to where we were, because everything was described in one sentence.
Raven first meets her two mates after she has woken up in their home/cabin, and is somehow not panicked, even though the last thing she remembers is passing out?? After they have breakfast, she asks if she can stretch (yoga) and the whole time, the men are watching her and moaning at her, and Raven doesn't find it uncomfortable or even weird. At this point, she knows nothing about them being her mates.
And once she is told they are wolf shifters and mates, on the same day she first meets them, she takes no more than 5 minutes to process and accept it. She really only asks them to shift, and somehow she claims to seeing them in the woods earlier...even though she had passed out.
When we are first introduced to her mates, she describes a few of their physical characteristics, but we are not given their names, and have no clue who is who. I can't even remember their names and I finished the book an hour ago. The two mates are so similar, I don't know why there are two. They have absolutely no differences besides hair colour and maybe eye colour - but again - we don't know who is who.
Continuing to Raven. At some point, Raven introduces herself, and in turn, one of her mates thinks this, "I realise we never got around to introductions. It doesn't matter to us, she will be ours either way."
W0w! How romantic! How lovely to hear the man that the fmc is supposed to fall for, not care about the literal start of their relationship. I understand its supposed to be possessive and sexy, but it does not read like that.
Just like the male characters, Raven poses no characteristics at all except for her ability to do and teach yoga. And that is literally the only thing she is associated with. She taught yoga in the town she lived in before, she does yoga in the cabin, and she's teaching yoga a decade later. That's it.
And then there's the stalker aspect. I liked this aspect and it was the reason I clicked on this book in the first place, being a slight twist to a typical shifter romance. The stalker however, made no sense. I'm not sure if it was just poorly planned? The stalker was able to follow Raven to a random town after she had driven 24 hours straight and know the exact cabin she was staying in. It is just not possible.
At some point, Raven goes grocery shopping with her mates and she stares at the condom section. Apparently that was like a fucking crime, and its a big no, no from one of the mates, as he tells her no. I mean..fuck Raven for just trying to protect herself, am I right? Mind you, it had been 1-2 days at this point. But it does have my favourite line from one of the mates, "I shoot one last dirty look at the condom selection."
Now to the 'spice'. Okay, spice wasn't too bad. Not the longest or most complex scenes, and that's fine. But, how the hell did Raven go from having her first kiss to dp anal in two days??!! With 1 minute of prep and no lube. Ouch!