I am excited.
Hollee Mands is a new author writing in the Fantasy romance genre, and she has produced an excellent first book. Let me tell you why I think this is so!
Firstly, there was terrific world-building. No gigantic info-dump, but a subtle description and exploration of this fantasy world, namely the Five Realms.
We have vivid characterisation. The heroine, Evangeline, is a complex, intelligent young woman. She manages to be both sensitive and strong, with a surprising backbone that develops over the course of the book. The hero, Declan, is an archmage of immense power. His is a callous arrogance that initially manifests as cruelty and indifference, for example, to the plight of the people being taken as slaves. He is softened and ultimately transformed by Evangeline. It takes time and their relationship is a difficult one, but I found myself invested almost from the outset in their story.
The secondary characters are also fascinating and I am eagerly anticipating their stories in future books.
Of course, I loved the imaginative and unpredictable plot. Never a dull moment in this book, although I admit the sheer brutality and descriptive violence in some parts were hard for me to read. Shades of GoT were evident, a series I never rally warmed to. This was especially the case when the despicable treatment of females by the villains turned my stomach, but then, I have a weak stomach where this is concerned! And the sad fact is: females are easy targets in any kind of conflict. (We don't need to look further than the use of rape as a weapon of war, something that is even now being perpetrated in the Ukraine. Still, it always makes me furious.) If you like action and a bit of gore, you will find lots of that here.
The writing is really good- grammar, syntax, vocabulary and the fluid, graceful style made for very pleasurable reading. I cannot say this for many books that I have read recently, unfortunately. The author is Australian (yay!) and thus avoids poor grammar and Americanisms, especially the annoying misuse of prepositions. (These bump me jarringly out of the world the author is creating.) Conversations were realistic and rang true to the characters who were speaking.
Ultimately, in this book we have a hero who is alpha, but tender, possessive but respectful, and who is willing to learn about the needs of his partner and try to modify his more aggressive tendencies when it is needed. And a heroine who is shy and sensitive, but bravely stands up for what she believes in, willing to go head to head with the hero to get her way. As she becomes tougher and more confident, the hero has to work hard to win her regard. I love that.
The writing puts me a little in mind of Milla Vane's Gathering of Dragons barbarian fantasy romance series.
One small caveat- for some reason, the audiobook for this novel uses an American narrator. For me, this genre always works better with a British narrator- it seems to add a certain gravity to the tone that lends credibility and realism to what is essentially an imagined world. The American accent in the sample I heard just didn't work for me here, and I will not be listening to the audiobook, which makes me sad 😓.