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When a running back falls for his teammate’s little sister, can he prove to them both that he’s in it for the long run?

Chloe
I’m ready for a new start in life.
Moving to Oakwood City and opening my own gallery seems like just what I need.
What I don’t need is to fall for my brother’s best friend.
Dane Rios is sexy, athletic, and has a reputation of being a player.
He says he’s ready for the real thing, but can I trust him with my heart?

Dane
My whole life has been focused on football.
I don’t know if I’ll ever settle down, but then I meet my best friend’s sister.
Chloe Jennings is curvy, creative, and makes me want to commit a personal foul.
Now I have to convince her that I’m not just playing a game.

FIRST DOWN is a short, sweet, steamy story featuring a strong, independent, curvy heroine and the sexy football player who wins her heart. It is the 2nd story in the Oakwood City Players series but can be read as a standalone with no cliffhangers and a HEA!

Don’t miss the rest of the series:
Game Plan
First Down
Hail Mary
End Zone

48 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 29, 2021

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C.L. Cruz

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C.L. Cruz writes short, steamy romance with curvy girls and the men who love them. She is a single mom of two kids currently seeking her own happily ever after.

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2,355 reviews9 followers
April 29, 2021
Book 2 of this series. Dane falls fast and hard for Cole’s little sister Chloe. He’s ready to give up his womanizing ways for Chloe but what will Cole say when he finds out? This was a great quick read. The characters were entertaining and had a great connection and chemistry. Chloe was an independent, hard working gallery owner and Cole was immediately lured to her brains and beauty. I received an arc copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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4,306 reviews37 followers
May 3, 2021
This story was sweet and romantic with steamy parts and drama free. 😍😍Dane is Coles best friend and a bachelor by choice. Little does he know that Coles sister Chloe will change his whole life😉 Dane should stay away from her... but well the heart wants.... the heart gets😉 Can't wait for the next story in this series🥰🥰🥰
11.7k reviews49 followers
May 2, 2021
She knows nothing about football and he loves that about her

First Down is the second book in the Oakwood City Players and is the story of Dane and Chloe. Dane is football player with the Oakwood City Devils team and a good friend of Cole, who's story is in Game Plan. Early one morning on their day off Dane is picked up by Cole not knowing where they are headed. But Cole soon tells him they are going to an art gallery to help the person who runs it to help get things set up. It turns out that woman they are helping is Chloe, Cole's younger sister. Chloe has moved back to town from NYC to be closer to her family, including her two young nieces, and to run an art gallery. With her fer first show is coming up Cole brought Dane to help set up the show, moving walls, stringing lights and more. This is the first time Dane has met the "elusive Chloe" and let's just say that he is more than intrigued at the prospect. What he was not expecting was to have the thunderbolt hit to his heart when he sees her for the first time, let alone the snap, crackle and pop when they touch. But Cole has already made it clear that Chloe is off-limits to everyone on the team as he does not want her to be hurt in any way. Dane's brain knows this but his heart has other plans. Chloe is attracted to Dane but as he is a friend of her brother's and also a team mate she knows he is off limits. Or maybe not as what Cole does not know will not hurt him....right??? Well that may be good in theory but what happens when Cole actually does find out...a whole lot of whoop-a$$ and drama ensues.

This is a great story that had my attention right from the start. I loved the tie-in with the previous book and characters but also Dane and Chloe are both great characters also. First Down is a wonderful addition to the series and I am looking forward to reading the next to see which player falls next.
1,020 reviews12 followers
May 28, 2021
Love will sneak up on you and everything will change
This book is about Dane and Chloe. Dane’s best friend and team-mate Cole takes him to the art gallery – which in itself was a big surprise. So imagine his even bigger surprise when he realises they’re there to help Cole’s little sister Chloe set up a new gallery she’s running. He’d never met her before, but had heard a lot about her. His best friend had tasked him with keeping an eye out for her, making sure the other football players keep their distance from her. That meant him too, but the way he was attracted to her would make it really difficult, but he didn’t want to risk his friendship or their playing dynamic on the field. So what would it be?
Chloe is also really attracted to and interested in Dane. Apart from being obviously very good-looking, she finds him funny, interesting and easy to talk to. They are at a stand-still, but Dane compromises with them spending time together simply getting to know each other – and taking it from there.
It’s swift, sweet and steamy. The characters are endearing and you can’t help but fall in love with them. The football players are like one big family, and the girls are all so supportive and friendly. I did feel like it ended a bit abruptly, but I’m looking forward to the next book, hoping for an update on Dane and Chloe, as well as Cole and April. I give this book four and a half stars.
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2,453 reviews15 followers
May 1, 2021
C.L. Cruz continues her Oakwood City Players series with First Down, a wonderfully-written, best friend's sister / brother's best friend romance with two awesome characters. When Dane is asked by his best friend Cole to help set up his sister's art gallery, Dane agrees. And when Cole tells his best friend that his sister is off-limits, Dane agrees. Then he meets Chloe. And suddenly he gets what Cole meant when he suggested that one day he would be blindsided by love. Not only that, but he is caught between a rock and a hard place between his immediately intense feelings for Chloe and his loyalty to his best friend. Dane and Chloe have explosive chemistry, and the fabulous Ms Cruz utilizing my favourite romance trope just amplified my love for this couple. Chloe is extremely relatable and lovable, smart and sassy, and taking no guff from either her brother or Dane. And Dane is swoon-y in his transformation from player to one-woman man, and the way he understands and supports Chloe's dreams (while she has no comprehension whatsoever of football LOL).

I cannot recommend this series enough, and I cannot wait for the next installment.

I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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3,225 reviews19 followers
May 23, 2021
Cole and Dane, are teammates first, and foremost, but more importantly, good friends. On this day, Cole has asked, Dane, for his help. Of course, Dane agrees. As they are driving for a while, Dane finally asks, where they are going. Now, Dane had always heard, Cole talk about his younger sister, but had yet to, meet her. So, when he says, an art gallery, he figures, he has another thing to, tease him about. Because when Cole’s girl, comes up PG, and they decide to get married. With him doing, the whole married-man thing. Dane and his teammates have been giving him a ration, of dog doo-doo, over it. Cole is open with the fact, that his sister is opening, her first art gallery, and she needs physical help, muscle to get that done. So, Cole volunteers, them both. Cole did not mind, at all. That's what friends do for one another. Although Cole did give, Dane a heads up that he would need his help keeping the guys from the team away from her. Dane isn’t naïve in thinking that, Cole is also directing the message at, him as well. Which before stepping foot in the gallery, he has no problem with. The eternal bachelor would fall, one day, for the right woman, Cole did always say. He just never meant, his sister. Very sweet sexy story. Of friendship, betrayal, and forgiveness.
715 reviews5 followers
April 29, 2021
Dane is a football player who goes with his best friend/teammate to help the friend’s ‘sister set up her new art gallery. Before they get there his friend warns him to not get involved with his his little sister. However, Dane is immediately attracted to Chloe, 27, and finds her beautiful and intelligent as well curvy and independent. Chloe has never been interested in sports but finds Dane handsome, fun, and easy to talk to. They decide to go on a date but they will decide to keep their meeting from her brother. What will happen when her brother finds out Chloe has been seeing his teammate?

I give this short instalove book 4.5 stars. I enjoyed this story about the overprotective older brother who arms his teammate that he should not get involved with his sister. Dane ignores the warning because he felt an instant attraction but inevitably her brother sees them together and there is a messy confrontation. You will have to read the book to find out if they can find happiness together.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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5,075 reviews56 followers
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April 29, 2021
The addition starts with the book cover….yeah…yeah…yeah don’t judge a book by its cover they say ….well we all do it and this one here it is the scratch to your itch or better yet the filling to your oreos! Speaking of filling…..wait, that’s for later. Within the first chapters you get the panoramic view of whom you’re dealing with!
Can’t say I didn’t warn you.
Chloe is sweet, kind, stands up for herself and goes after what she wants, she is creative just moved to another city to open her own gallery. Dane is her brother’s best friend, sexy as all get out and football star and the moment, he sees his best friends’ sister the world stands still the chemistry is instant between the two of them but because they both feel like it is wrong because he is her brother’s best friend. She is everything he wants, and he is everything she wants but can they both get past the fact that she is related to his best friend and can what they feel lead to happiness?
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354 reviews22 followers
April 30, 2021
Dane and Cole are not only teammates on a professional football but they are also best friends. Chloe is Cole's sister and she recently moved back to town and has taken a job at a new art gallery. Cole takes Dane with him to help Chloe get the gallery set up. On the way to the gallery Cole does the typical protective older brother routine and declares his sister off limits to every guy on the team. Dane was fine with that....until he met Chloe. Of course he can't stay away from especially when she's not any other woman he's encountered. While she's proud of her brother, Chloe is clueless about football which is a refreshing change for Dane. They had a bit of a bumpy road to the HEA but they got there and it was perfect.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Profile Image for Debbie.
863 reviews5 followers
May 3, 2021
A reputation is almost impossible to outrun. Especially if that reputation is a negative one. That was Dane's problem and it was well known. But when he meets his best friend's sister Chloe, he knew this was it. He wanted the real thing, the forever love and this woman was his future. But Chloe knows all about her brother's friend, Dane. Yes, he was gorgeous, hot, muscular, all the plus signs a woman wants in a man. But that was on the outside. Dane had a rep as a player and with her opening her own gallery and moving her life forward, she didn't have time to deal with Dane. But Dane isn't letting his bad rep destroy his future. He will show his buddy and Chloe that he can be a one woman forever love. A really great book by a fantastic author. I highly recommend this book and this author.
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3,698 reviews28 followers
May 3, 2021
i read this book as part of an arc program. This is the second book in the Oakwood City Players series. In this book, Chloe moves back to Oakwood City to run an art gallery and asks her brother Cole for help setting things up. Cole is a football player and asks his teammate Dane to help, but warns him against dating his sister. Dane agrees, but regrets it when he sees Chloe. Chloe and Dane talk a bit and they hit it off, but when Cole returns, Dane has to bury his attraction to Chloe and try to forget her. Dane returns to the gallery and asks Chloe to get a drink, saying they will just be friends. They have a great connection, but Dane doesn't want to betray Cole. Chloe doesn't want to be a secret either. I really enjoyed this book. I liked Dane, he was trying so hard to be a good friend, but he really cared for Chloe. Good one.
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374 reviews7 followers
April 30, 2021
Dane is a professional football player at the top of his game.  He is not looking for love or to settle down in anyway.  Chloe is art design professional.  She is also the sister to Dane's best friend and teammate, Cole.  When Chloe moves back to Oakwood City to accept a job at a local art gallery, Cole and Dane help her get the gallery ready for her first showing.  Can Chloe and Dane find their way with Cole’s over protective watch?

Wonderfully sweet steamy read. Loved the dynamics between the characters.  Dane is so sweet and Chloe is a strong independent woman. She doesn’t let her big brother or anyone else push her around.  She knows what she want and goes for it. 

I received a review copy of this book from the author. I am voluntarily leaving a review. 
1,226 reviews5 followers
May 2, 2021
Dane is a football player and is going to help his teammate out by helping setup for an art show at the art gallery his sister owns. The one thing his teammate says is don’t hit on my sister. Dane meets Chloe and as they spend the day working he finds they have a lot in common. Dane is interested in Chloe and wants to know more about her. Chloe feels a spark also. What is going to happen? What will Chloe do? What is Dane going to do? Will he go against his teammate? This is a sweet sexy little story about instant attraction, passion, and possibly love. It is a feel-good, can’t live without you, kind of romance.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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6,131 reviews57 followers
June 30, 2021
First things first; I like the cover of this book!
First down is the second book in the ‘’Oakwood city players’’ series. This story is short, fast paced and an enjoyable read. I read this book in one sitting and was satisfied throughout. I found the writing style easy to follow, the characters likeable and the storyline enjoyable. Dane isn’t looking for love but that changes when he meets his best friends sister. Chloe is attracted to Dane but will love blossom between them?
The chemistry between Chloe and Dane is clear to see and I liked them together.
I really liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read. I cannot wait for more books from this series.
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4,045 reviews6 followers
April 29, 2021
4.5 Stars
Chole abd Dane were great together. Dane tries to fight his attraction to Chole, his best friend's little sister, but she has turned his world upside-down. Chole is drawn to Dane and doesn't care what her brother has to say about it. Then things hit the fan, Dane does the only thing that he can of to defuse the situation. Well it was the wrong decision and now he is willing to do anything to get this woman back. I really enjoyed this book and I would recommend it and Ms. C.L as an awesome author.

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1,845 reviews5 followers
April 29, 2021
The Bro code

Coles sister Chloe comes back home to work at the art museum.
First rule to Dane is - no messing with my sister.
Dane did not think anything about it until he met her and wow.
He knew that rule was going to be broken it was just a matter of time.
Chloe could not deny the feelings but her brother threw a wrench into her relationship.
Brothers really need to back off on their sisters relationships; and just be there if or when there is a problem.
Another book in this series and can not wait for the next one.
Touchdown!!

I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
Profile Image for Opasan Ouprie.
1,198 reviews
April 30, 2021
Book two in this series, Oakwood City Players. He is a football player. She is opening her own art gallery. Her brother and his best friend help her. While helping her, she is taken with her brother's friend. Her brother has warned him off of his sister. They decide to friends and hang out to get to know each other. While spending time together, they realize they want more than just friendship. With her being off-limits, can they make things work between them? How will her brother react if he finds out about these two?

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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7,458 reviews75 followers
April 30, 2021
When he fall, he is going to fall hard. Dane is a Cole's best friend, and a known player, but one day helping Cole's sister has changed his world. Chloe is a strong woman and is as stubborn as her brother. She is working on building her life and dating is not in her plans, but maybe some fun. First Down well written fast tale of falling for you best friend's sister. The chemistry is hot, passion is steamy and the intense feeling will have you lost in the pages as Dane and Chloe navigate their feelings.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
818 reviews5 followers
April 30, 2021
Dane is best friends with Cole and they're on the same team. Cole asks for his help with moving things for his sister Chloe at an art gallery. Cole warns Dane not to get involved with his sister. Dane has all good intentions of not getting involved with Chloe - until he meets her!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this engaging entertaining and compelling instalove romance. There's plenty of chemistry between Chloe and Dane. The story is well written, fast paced filled with plenty of attraction, instalove, growing attraction, awareness, steamy scenes, and an overprotective brother! There's an epilogue and a HEA 💓
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1,750 reviews8 followers
May 2, 2021
Best friend Sister is always off limits! Or is it?

Best friend Sister is always off limits! Or is it? This is about Dane and Chloe. Dane is Cole’s best friend and when Chloe moved back, he was asked to look after her against the teammates as he was very protective of her. Dane didn’t think anything of it and said yes, but that wasn’t the end of it. He meets Chloe and she meets him and they can’t stay apart until both idiots decide they are going to work things out, well she is not too happy about it, like she can’t run her own life. This short story was great – loved it.
937 reviews4 followers
April 26, 2021
In the Beach.
Fantastic story. Dane has been known as a player and likes the single life. But, when he meets Chloe he changes his attitude. He starts falling for her. Chloe is is having feelings for Dane, too, she wants to be with him. They just have an teeny tiny problem: her big brother and Dane’s best friend and he is furious when he catches them together. Can Dane and Chloe ignore big brother to find happiness together? Go Devils!!

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2,773 reviews32 followers
April 28, 2021
Dane is a football style and his best friend is on the team as well, and when Cole asked him to help his sister Chloe setting up her new business, the art gallery. He warns Dane to stay away from his sister, but they are both interested in each other. Trouble is in the air when cool finds out that Dane is dating Chloe, there is conflict and they come to physical blows but they work things out and then there is a happily ever after the end.

I was given an advanced copy of this book to read and review with my honest and fair opinion.
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2,032 reviews12 followers
April 30, 2021
Dane has been asked by his team mate and best friend, Cole, to watch after his sister Chloe. Chloe recently got out of a relationship. She also moved from New York to open her own art gallery. Dane is smitten with Chloe but doesn't want to ruin his friendship with Cole. When Cole finds out, Chloe gets mad at her brother, Cole, and Dane for refusing to fight for her. Will Cole come around? Will Dane get his head out of his butt or lose Chloe forever?

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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10.7k reviews28 followers
May 19, 2021
First Down is a brother's best friend romance between Chloe and Dane. Chloe needs a new start so she moves to Oakwood to open her own gallery. Dane is her brother's best friend and was told that Chloe was off limits. From the moment Chloe and Dane meet they are instantly attracted to each other. One problem how is her brother going to take their relationship and can Dane convince Chloe that he is there for the long haul? This is a short, steamy story with likable characters and a great ending. I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book.
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4,107 reviews31 followers
April 28, 2021
I voluntarily reviewed an arc of this book.

This is the second book in the Oakwood City Players series, it can be read as a standalone story. No cliffhangers, no cheating.

I really enjoyed this novella, the best friends younger sister storyline is entertaining and when you have strong alpha sportsmen you know there will be drama. Sweet and steamy. I liked both Dane and Chloe, likable characters.
2,715 reviews33 followers
April 29, 2021
Dane is best friends with Cole and they are both pro footballers.  Cole's sister,�� Chloe is opening an art studio and needs help from the guys.  When Dane meets Chloe, it's almost instalove.
This was sweet, steamy and well done.  I enjoyed the rapport between Dane and Cole. But also between Dane and Chloe. I liked the way Dane described how he felt about her.  Great story,  sweet and sentimental.
This was an ARC and this is my honest review.
1,509 reviews4 followers
April 29, 2021
Chloe is opening an art gallery and is waiting for her brother Cole and is friend Dane. While they worked she watched Dane work.
Dane has a great connection with Chloe. Even though Cole told me to stay away from his sister but he can't. The attraction is strong.
They end up telling Cole and it was the best thing. Now they can be together with no secrets.
While on vacation they decided to get married.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
287 reviews1 follower
April 29, 2021
I absolutely loved First Down by C.L. Cruz. Dane, a pro football player has no intentions to settle down anytime soon so when his teammate and buddy declares his sister, Chloe off limits, he figures no problem. Then he meets the very beautiful Chloe and he is instantly smitten. Will Dane risk his friendship with his friend Cole to be with Chloe or will he walk away? Looking forward to book 3. 5 stars!
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