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One decision changed his life. 

Nathan Hollister nearly died in a war zone and the experience made one thing crystal clear—breaking off his engagement was a terrible mistake. He arrives at his ex’s ranch to make amends, but gunfire erupts before he can. 

Someone wants her dead. 

Cassie Miles is used to being abandoned, first by her mother and then Nathan. But when an attempt is made on her life, she can’t protect herself and the horses she’s rehabilitating. Accepting Nathan’s help is the only answer.   

A hazardous mission. 

Nathan won’t let anyone harm Cassie. Convincing her to give him a second chance, however, is impossible. As the danger creeps closer, the risk heightens. One critical error could cost Nathan everything…again. 

196 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 27, 2021

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Lynn Shannon

38 books373 followers
Lynn Shannon is a Publishers Weekly bestselling author of inspirational romantic suspense.

After moving from Texas to Greece, Lynn turned her passion for reading into a love of writing. She lives with her husband, two children, an extremely spoiled dog, and a pair of chirpy lovebirds. Experiencing life in a new country has introduced her to delicious foods—like Yemista and Kourabiedes—which now share a place on her favorites list alongside pecans and Blue Bell ice cream. She also never passes up coffee, chocolate, or the chance to watch cute animal videos.

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Profile Image for Stephanie - Books Less Travelled.
215 reviews1 follower
April 21, 2024
This is the second book I've ready by Lynn Shannon, and while I still don't fully get the love for this series yet, I will say that I did find myself enjoying Nathan and Cassie's story. I don't know, but after hearing the love some of the people I follow have for this series, and Lynn Shannon's books in general, I still feel that personally something is missing. I enjoy Romantic Suspense, and at a basic level these have been fun reads with sweet romances and offer a steady dose of action and suspense, but I've yet to find whatever factor it is that makes me really connect with a book, character, or series so far. There's still hope, as I tend to enjoy a series more with each passing book, and I definitely found myself more engaged with this one. (Which I slightly hate, since I have no idea why I didn't love Jason's book more, and it makes me a little sad. I know everyone is different and all, but 'on paper' his book should have had the perfect combo to at least make for a fun read, but somehow while it was okay and a good story I wasn't engaged...?)

I'm determined to keep reading to at least finish this series and give both the series and Lynn Shannon a fair chance. And I admit, after reading this one, I am looking forward to Tucker's story at least, and the others have potential as well. I ended up liking Kyle and Nathan in Critical Risk, so there's hope that I'll find a book I love in this series yet!

(Please don't take me wrong here, I mean nothing bad against the series or author at all! It's definitely not her fault, and if I do find whatever it is that is the 'missing' element for me in these, I'll happily update my reviews, since I'd love to know as well what it is that I'm struggling with here, but so far I'm finding these books to be quick reads that are fun while they last, but sadly forgettable. Which I know isn't always the case with the genre... So, I'm just writing down my thoughts and didn't want to wait to long to get a review up, in part so that I can read the next book, and in part so I didn't forget anything that I wanted to add. I would love to share more on this one, but I don't want to risk spoilers as it's late and this one needs a good dose of mystery and is definitely one I'd recommend going in 'blind' and with as little as possible knowledge about the book about book before reading. It's one that is better to let the mystery unfold naturally while reading.)
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Author 3 books30 followers
December 31, 2021
"Some people say their life flashes before their eyes." Nathan breathed out. "Not me. As I fell to the ground, before losing consciousness, it was your face I saw. The biggest regret of my life was walking away from you, Cassie, and I'm sorry for the pain I caused you."

Nathan only intended to try to make amends, then he was willing to walk away. But when Cassie needed protection, he couldn't leave her only. Can he help her to find who is stalking her and not manage to lose his heart again along the way?

I really enjoyed this second book in the "Triumph over Adversity" series. I read it through Kindle Unlimited. This was an enjoyable romantic suspense book. While I did guess parts of the plot, I was still surprised in the end. I look forward to reading book three.
Profile Image for Victoria.
4,699 reviews
November 28, 2021
This story has so many layers to it, pain, hurt, grief, regret, worries, fear, anger, pasts, mistakes, forgiveness, loss of faith, danger, suspense, family, friends, honesty, trust, connections, chemistry, truths, support, understanding, acceptance, healing, romance and love.

I have enjoyed reading this story and the hope that I felt whilst do so; that it would all work out for those that I came to care about. I liked the added history between Cassie and Nathan, the bond with his friends and the animals that were part of the story. I am looking forward to reading book three, Kyle's story next.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,003 reviews21 followers
February 22, 2022
Critically interesting!

My favorite genre is Christian Romantic Suspense and Lynn Shannon is an author that puts everything into her stories! This book was exciting from beginning to end, with great characters (good and evil) , a riveting story and lots of action and suspense. Looking forward to more!
2 reviews
February 21, 2024
Two Things Missing

I really wanted a recap of what the guys did to rescue Cass and getting to the cabin where she and Eric were held. Also, how did Nathan escape from getting blown up in the 1st cabin? Did they figure out where the stalker was going, etc.? Details do matter in the recap!
3,944 reviews1,764 followers
August 4, 2023
An emotional edge-of-your-seater!

Though this is the second book in the ‘Triumph Over Adversity’ series, it reads really well as a standalone. The books are based around ex-military friends who bonded in the VA hospital and are now easing into civilian life. Shannon has captured the kind of brotherhood that continues beyond enlistment which is a huge draw for me. These guys are facing real challenges, both personal and through the dangerous situations they find themselves in. And, keep in mind, romance can be every bit as scary as a stalker! Just saying’. 🙂

So, we have reunion romance with a rescue horse ranch for a setting! Can it get any better than that? Well, actually, yes it can when you throw in some edgy suspense full of gasp-out-loud, cringe-and-duck moments!

Nathan arrives at Cassie’s ranch to serve up some humble pie. What he did back in the day…oy…Nathan, you had to work hard to regain my trust! Cassie is still mad and hurt and unforgiving and he gets that. He’s never stopped loving her but he isn’t hoping for a second chance. He just wants to make things as right as they can be but before he can even begin grovelling, he’s swept into a frantic scene of gunfire and mayhem.

Once he discovers that Cassie is battling an unknown assailant who has been relentlessly harassing her…well, Nathan appoints himself her bodyguard. Anyone enjoy the forced proximity trope? I sure do and this one plays out beautifully.

Intense. Breathtaking. Pretty much unputdownable…or unstoppable since I listened to the audio edition courtesy of Chirp. An exciting marathon ‘read’ that was over all too soon. Luckily there are more books in the series for me to binge on!

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1,136 reviews
November 24, 2021
Kept me guessing:
When Cassie's life was in danger she ended up having to rely on Nathan to protect her. The only problem was he'd stood her up at the altar!
This book was full of suspense as they sought to track down Cassie's stalker and I felt like I was investigating the case right alongside the characters. I liked that it was unpredictable and I was left guessing all the way to the end.
Another thing I liked was how caring and protective Nathan was and I was so glad that these two were finally able to work through their issues. I would have liked to form a closer bond with the main characters however as I felt like I only got to truly know them right near the end.
This sweet yet suspenseful story was a good addition to the series and I look forward to seeing what comes next.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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3,735 reviews31 followers
December 4, 2021
Nathan's arrival back home was not something Cassie expected and as much as she wants to hate him, right now she has bigger concerns like who is stalker her and with each incident things are escalating and she isn't the only one in danger. Nathan didn't expect to need to rescue Cassie when he went to see her and let her know he was back in town so she didn't find out from others or they cause a scene in public, but he know firmly knows he not only needs to protect her but he wants another chance but he is going to have to work at it after how he left her last time. You get action, danger, burning attraction, not knowing who to trust as well as a second chance romance that if they can catch the stalker before anyone dies will have the chance to be the happy ever after Cassie and Nathan deserve.

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2,555 reviews14 followers
January 25, 2024
Another exciting love story

This book had just the same as book one: Suspense, intrigue, A lot of cops and friends handling the case and a lot of love. Nathan, a Green Beret in the Army, had in love with Cassie forever. On their wedding day, he left her at the alter. Four years later, he was hoping to get another chance. Cassie, not so accommodating. She has a stalker who gave everyone a punch in the belly. So many suspects but which one was so evil. It's such a good book and I have to admit, I did not know who it was. I had picked him once but dropped him from the list. So, yes, the book had me stumped. If you like mysteries, I think you'll like this series. Written by Cindy :)
6,539 reviews27 followers
November 25, 2021
Once again Lynn has given us the perfect combination of suspense and drama with romance as the underlying story

Nothing makes you rethink you life more than nearly dying and that is what Nathan Hollister has faced in his latest war zone he is now questioning the fact that he walked away from the woman he loved Determined to set things he right he heads to Cassie Miles bur when he arrives so does hail of bullets someone is determined to kill Cassie Now Nathan will do whatever he need to keep the woman he still loves safe and in the process can he win her love back You will have to read to see
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77 reviews
April 5, 2022
Loved this story

A great HEA for everyone. I love inspirational romance, but this is a story for everyone too. Nathan and Cassie share a painful past but through their struggles learn that the past can be forgiveness. Nathan has deep regrets but realizes that his love for Cassie is strong. Cassie has deep laying fears but she is able to work her way through them.

This is listed as inspirational but the mentions of God and scripture are few. Normally, I enjoy the faith aspects, but I feel the author shared just enough faith that everyone can enjoy this book.

Read it as a stand alone story or in the series, either way it is amazing.
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1,075 reviews13 followers
February 26, 2024
Lynn Shannon's books are addictive. I want more and more so when I finish one, I want to start another. "Critical Error" was another winner.

Nathan and Cassie had history together. They had been engaged until Nathan left Cassie at the altar on their wedding day. He wanted to try and protect her but she already had trust issues and he was just another personal who had broken her trust.

When Cassie has a stalker who seems to be escalating, Nathan steps up to protect her at any cost.

This story has so much to offer. It is a clean story without foul language or sex but is full of suspense, drama and swoon-worthy romance. This author has hit it out of the park again.
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1,365 reviews1 follower
September 15, 2024
Critical Error

Nathan has loved Cassie for years but she doesn't trust him because 4 years ago he left her at the altar, he thought for her own good but he regrets doing it. They've both move back home to a small town in Texas so he goes to see her to get the meet and greet done in private only to find she has a stalker that is escalating. He calls his friends together and they set up protection but her stalker starts using armed drones and is shooting, killing and kidnapping people. During this time Nathan and Carrie spend all their time together and they come together as a couple again. After catching her stalker they Marty. Great story.
16.7k reviews155 followers
November 25, 2021
After he nearly dies in action he finally realises he should never have left her and he intends to change that. He goes to see her when a bullet rings out and it seems someone wants her dead. She is used to everyone leaving her so she is shocked when he arrives back into her life but she will need him to protect her from danger. Why does someone want her dead? Who is it? Will she find out? Will he be able to keep her safe? Will love rekindle? See if it will

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2,608 reviews8 followers
November 26, 2021
A well written story that paints the imagination so clearly that you feel you are there with the characters. Surrounded with strong characters, Cassie and Nathan are slowly making their back to each other while trying to stay alive. Someone is after Cassie and Nathan will protect her with everything he has in him. Lynn writes a story with action and suspense with a sprinkling of romance. You will love the rollercoaster ride with these characters.

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6,030 reviews45 followers
November 28, 2021
what should she do when the man who shattered her heart might be the only one who can save everything important to her?

stalkers are a difficult problem. until they have done harm, readily provable, they are notoriously hard to catch and prosecute

Cassidy loves her Papa Joe, the horses they care for, the extended family they built, and her dreams for an equestrian rehabilitation center

can Nathan help protect her without losing his mind, life or hesrt?

action packed thriller

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
9,376 reviews140 followers
November 25, 2021
The second book in the series brings a strong cast of characters centering on Nathan and Cassie. It's a great romantic suspense as well as an inspiration filled story. It's a second chance romance with danger ,kidnapping and love. It's well written with perfectly painted scenes and is a fantastic read. Loved and recommend this book.

I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book. All opinions in this review are my own and freely given.
6,140 reviews17 followers
December 4, 2021
I thoroughly enjoyed this new "Triumph Over Adversity". It is full of suspense, danger and romance. This is a second chance story about Cassie and Nathan. He stood her up at the alter but life made him realize he never should have let her go. Determined he heads to her ranch only to see her in danger and bullets flying. This is a good second chance read that is a clean romance. I enjoyed every minute of their story.
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182 reviews2 followers
December 28, 2021
Second Chance at Love

Critical Error is well written and keep you in suspense. It is Nathan’s and Cassie’s second chance at the love they lost years ago. Nathan has returned home after serving in the military and seeks Cassie’s forgiveness for the way he left her. It appears he has arrived at the perfect time because Cassie has a stalker threatening her.

Protection, love, family and forgiveness is what this book is about.
2,254 reviews12 followers
January 1, 2022
Critical Error

Lynn Shannon did a wonderful job with the writing of this book. It was full of suspense with some romance. Nathan had left Cassie at the altar years before. Now he is back and wanted to apologize as well as let her be aware of the fact he was staying at his Aunts house only to find Cassie was being stalked and in danger. Will Nathan be able to keep her safe from the stalker?
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19 reviews
January 13, 2022
Sweet and Suspenseful!

Nathan and Cassie are adorable. Their care for each other is obvious throughout this story. The amount of suspense was just perfect. And the sweet romance between the couple was awesome. Sometimes it’s hard for authors to show romantic feelings between a couple without it seeming like lust rather than true love, Lynn Shannon does a wonderful job of developing the love between her characters. I am excited to read the next book in this series!
136 reviews2 followers
January 19, 2023
Oh my goodness..... that ending. I did not see that coming. There were a couple of word choice errors that should have been caught but nothing as bad as some other books I've read.

This is Nathan's story of forgiveness and second chances. As with the first book of the series, it was refreshing to have characters who act like normal people... normal for me anyway. Zero profanity & no insta-love bed hopping.
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1,170 reviews49 followers
March 22, 2023
This story line was riveting from the beginning to the end, and the characters and animals were great. Nathan and Cassie have a past. Cassie struggles with trusting people, including Nathan who was her ex-fiancé, because she has been abandoned by people in her past.
When a stalker is after Cassie, Nathan steps in to protect her and his friends volunteer to help protect Cassie.
This was a wonderful suspense story that kept me guessing until the end.
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2,362 reviews209 followers
November 6, 2023
Loved this one. Being left at the altar it's not easy but you could see that he loved her so what he did had to have a good reason to. I admired her for trying a second time, to trust her heart to him again, but I'm glad they did. Nathan would do anything for her, no matter if she forgave him or not and I loved that. His love had no strings and that's how it's supposed to be. Cassie was awesome, I loved her, she loved her family and her life
75 reviews
May 27, 2025
Cliches

I enjoy this authors books....to an extent. If she cut on the cliches and the over repetition of the main characters angst her books would be a good five chapters shorter. A dictionary and a thesaurus would be excellent additions to her writing tool kit as well. I was uber tired of reading the word gorgeous.

There were many issues with characters ages that didn't make sense. Was Dwayne in his 40s or was he near the age of the heroine. That is an unsolved mystery.
1,659 reviews11 followers
November 24, 2021
Brilliant

I love this author's writing and this book is no exception. Nathan is back in Cassie's life after jilting her four years ago, arriving as yet another threat comes from her stalker. Everyone around her is in danger and Nathan, with help from his friends, seems to protect her and discover the culprit. Brilliant suspense story.
1,922 reviews8 followers
November 26, 2021
I loved this book, when Nathan comes back to town, he knows that he has to go see Cassie. He wants the first time they see each other again to be in private and not in the middle of town. However, he gets way more than he bargained for when shots ring out and she is in danger.

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869 reviews3 followers
December 3, 2021
Nathan and Cassie made SUCH a great couple!! He certainly did make and error in leaving her, but now these two get a chance to make amends—in the midst of gunfire no less!! He is so determined to not only get her back, but to also keep her safe that I really fell in love with his character

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78 reviews1 follower
December 8, 2021
Fast-paced Adrenaline Rush

Wow!
A stalker is after a young woman, who has lost her faith in God. A woman who seemingly has been abandoned by almost all of her close family.

Her hope is rekindled when her ex fiance and his band of ex military brothers come into help solve this stalker problem
Wonderful dialog, strong female protagonist.
Loved this book!
Author 7 books7 followers
February 9, 2022
Keep them coming!

We're only at book two, but I've been loving this new series from Lynn Shannon! Hunky ex-military men with the strong and sassy women they love--what's not to love? The kisses are so swoon-worthy, the heated glances, and just a well-paced story that keeps me turning pages. I read Cassie and Nathan's story in one sitting-- it was that good! Keep them coming!
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