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A Thousand Li #4
The Second Expedition
Even the great may fall.
Wu Ying's idle winter, one filled with training and recovery, is throw awry when his Master and Elder Yang return, injured. The Three Seasons poison fills Master Cheng's veins, slowly killing the powerful Elder. His only hope - a rare antidote. But the ingredients for such an antidote are scarce and located in the deepest wilds.
Together, Wu Ying and Elder Yang take it upon themselves to embark on a Second Expedition to acquire the necessary materials. It would be a dangerous journey through the State of Wei normally, but in the shadows, enemies await to finish the job. Wu Ying is once again pitched against dark forces as a Sect war looms.
The Second Expedition is book 4 of the A Thousand Li series which focuses on immortal cultivation, eastern philosophy, wondrous martial art styles and spirit beasts. The series draws upon the long tradition of wuxia and xianxia works and will thrill those looking for such high flying fantasy. The Second Expedition is written by Tao Wong, the bestselling scifi and fantasy LitRPG author of the System Apocalypse, the Adventures on Brad and the Hidden Wishes series.
Wu Ying's idle winter, one filled with training and recovery, is throw awry when his Master and Elder Yang return, injured. The Three Seasons poison fills Master Cheng's veins, slowly killing the powerful Elder. His only hope - a rare antidote. But the ingredients for such an antidote are scarce and located in the deepest wilds.
Together, Wu Ying and Elder Yang take it upon themselves to embark on a Second Expedition to acquire the necessary materials. It would be a dangerous journey through the State of Wei normally, but in the shadows, enemies await to finish the job. Wu Ying is once again pitched against dark forces as a Sect war looms.
The Second Expedition is book 4 of the A Thousand Li series which focuses on immortal cultivation, eastern philosophy, wondrous martial art styles and spirit beasts. The series draws upon the long tradition of wuxia and xianxia works and will thrill those looking for such high flying fantasy. The Second Expedition is written by Tao Wong, the bestselling scifi and fantasy LitRPG author of the System Apocalypse, the Adventures on Brad and the Hidden Wishes series.
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Tao Wong
137 books956 followersTao Wong is the author of the A Thousand Li progression fantasy series and the System Apocalypse LitRPG series, among others. His work has been released in audio, paperback, hardcover, and ebook formats, and translated into German, Spanish, Portuguese, Russian, and several other languages. He was shortlisted for the UK Kindle Storyteller Award in 2021 for A Thousand Li: The Second Sect. In 2026, the first three books in the A Thousand Li series will be republished in hardcover by Ace Books.
When he’s not writing or working, he enjoys practicing martial arts, reading, and dreaming up new worlds. He lives in Toronto, Canada.
When he’s not writing or working, he enjoys practicing martial arts, reading, and dreaming up new worlds. He lives in Toronto, Canada.
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August 6, 2022
This took me a while to get into. I have been watching a ton of C-dramas lately and many of them are cultivation stories. I have also been reading cultivation stories by MXTX like 'Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation'. What I've learned is that this genre actually is great with characterization and plot and all the good stuff. It's simply that 'Cradle' and this series aren't very good at characterization. It's not the genre. This story focuses on cultivation and advancing and doing this and doing that and not so much on the characters really.
The book is better than Book 3, but book 3 was rough.
I do enjoy this series, but it's only so so compared to these other series. I watched "Duoluo Continent" and it's all about advancing, but it's also about the characters and their relationships. It's so much better. They advance to help their friends and protect them and not just for advancing. I do enjoy this story, but it gets sort of stale by the time I'm done with it. I did lose interest in it for a time. I still enjoy the cultivation and this world. It will be a few more months, but I do plan on going ahead with the story. I'm interested in how Wu Ying progresses. There was several levels of progression here for several characters.
There are only 2 relationships I see as important so far. Wu Ying and Fairy Yang and then Wu Ying and Tou Hu. Otherwise, people come and go and they never seem to mean much to the reader. We got a whole new cast pretty much and I don't feel connected to any of the new people. There are only 3 people I care about in the whole novel, the rest are simply passing by Wu Ying.
Sometimes it even difficult to care about Wu Ying for some reason. He seems so removed from the reader much of the time. I still like him as a character, but he's distant.
I do hope this series finishes, I think there are 8 or 12 books planned. I want to know how Wu Ying makes it to being an immortal. I'll take my time.
The book is better than Book 3, but book 3 was rough.
I do enjoy this series, but it's only so so compared to these other series. I watched "Duoluo Continent" and it's all about advancing, but it's also about the characters and their relationships. It's so much better. They advance to help their friends and protect them and not just for advancing. I do enjoy this story, but it gets sort of stale by the time I'm done with it. I did lose interest in it for a time. I still enjoy the cultivation and this world. It will be a few more months, but I do plan on going ahead with the story. I'm interested in how Wu Ying progresses. There was several levels of progression here for several characters.
There are only 2 relationships I see as important so far. Wu Ying and Fairy Yang and then Wu Ying and Tou Hu. Otherwise, people come and go and they never seem to mean much to the reader. We got a whole new cast pretty much and I don't feel connected to any of the new people. There are only 3 people I care about in the whole novel, the rest are simply passing by Wu Ying.
Sometimes it even difficult to care about Wu Ying for some reason. He seems so removed from the reader much of the time. I still like him as a character, but he's distant.
I do hope this series finishes, I think there are 8 or 12 books planned. I want to know how Wu Ying makes it to being an immortal. I'll take my time.
June 9, 2025
Re-read: Fun but slightly sloppy. This series really needs a more stable supporting cast.
Other reviewers have said that this is the second best book in the series so far, and I concur. This series is best when it's just our hero or a small team on an adventure into the unknown. Smaller battles, tighter stories, more personal plot lines.
Sadly, the middle of this book with the auction drags a bit. We didn't need that much of a focus on it. Also, I wish there was more character growth for the side characters. Even long running characters are starting to feel two dimensional. They could really use some love to bring this series to it's full potential.
Other reviewers have said that this is the second best book in the series so far, and I concur. This series is best when it's just our hero or a small team on an adventure into the unknown. Smaller battles, tighter stories, more personal plot lines.
Sadly, the middle of this book with the auction drags a bit. We didn't need that much of a focus on it. Also, I wish there was more character growth for the side characters. Even long running characters are starting to feel two dimensional. They could really use some love to bring this series to it's full potential.
October 2, 2020
Back to form
I would rate this as the second best book in the series after the initial one. It loosely resembles the second book, in that both are expeditions but this book is far superior. It helps that there are actual antagonists to contend against, instead of simply a series of monster encounters like the second book. The stakes are also a lot more personal, giving the story better narrative hooks. I’m very happy for the return to form. I think the first novel is a gem of a book and this book a worth successor which gives me hope for the series again after the filler book 2 and the decent book 3.
I would rate this as the second best book in the series after the initial one. It loosely resembles the second book, in that both are expeditions but this book is far superior. It helps that there are actual antagonists to contend against, instead of simply a series of monster encounters like the second book. The stakes are also a lot more personal, giving the story better narrative hooks. I’m very happy for the return to form. I think the first novel is a gem of a book and this book a worth successor which gives me hope for the series again after the filler book 2 and the decent book 3.
March 5, 2021
It was better than the 2nd and 3rd, definitely. There's a part of me that wants to give it a 4, but that's really just because the last two were so bad. This book, should have been the third book, mashing the 2nd and 3rd books together into one training book instead of two. There was actual action in this book, it was nice. There was plot, but it definitely came out of nowhere instead of being woven in/hinted at subtly in the other books. Tao Wong literally had 3 books where the foundation for this dark sect could have been layered, but there was nothing.
The character's are flat, their motivations are boring. Wu Ying never talks to anyone long enough for us to really get to know him, its all in his head. I was very irritated with Wu Ying's hypocritical nature. How do you disavow the dark sects because of "how they build their power on bloodshed and mayhem" and simultaneously make room for the chiefs dao that may or may not be that of a warlord? He has a best friend that we know... nothing about after 3 books.
There are inconsistencies with the world building. How powerful are core cultivators--how powerful are Elders and how should the world interact with them? That's not something that should be changed simply for plot points.
There's like a 50/50 chance of me reading the next book.
The character's are flat, their motivations are boring. Wu Ying never talks to anyone long enough for us to really get to know him, its all in his head. I was very irritated with Wu Ying's hypocritical nature. How do you disavow the dark sects because of "how they build their power on bloodshed and mayhem" and simultaneously make room for the chiefs dao that may or may not be that of a warlord? He has a best friend that we know... nothing about after 3 books.
There are inconsistencies with the world building. How powerful are core cultivators--how powerful are Elders and how should the world interact with them? That's not something that should be changed simply for plot points.
There's like a 50/50 chance of me reading the next book.
February 3, 2021
There is so much holes plot wise. The protagonist entire logic path is flawed in such a way it becomes comically nonsensical. He literally chooses the most unwilling/ flighty member of his team to execute life and death tasks at the end of the so-called expedition. Under this constant threat of ambush and attempted murders, why not give this bookish random guy all our items and let him go ahead to be more expedient.
YEAH... I actually laughed out loud at the ridiculousness of the entire plot. That's a reaction I dont think the author was aiming for. The third book showed some troubling cracks, but this was outright devolution. We're four books in and some Day 1 secondary character's depth is still at (Basic carnivorous loyal monk). Wow. Just wow...
YEAH... I actually laughed out loud at the ridiculousness of the entire plot. That's a reaction I dont think the author was aiming for. The third book showed some troubling cracks, but this was outright devolution. We're four books in and some Day 1 secondary character's depth is still at (Basic carnivorous loyal monk). Wow. Just wow...
October 4, 2020
Rating 4.0 stars
I enjoyed this one more than the last couple. It felt more like the first book which I enjoyed the most. The main character has to go on a dangerous mission to save his master who has been poisoned. They can only get a small group to go. He gets stronger, learns more about his Doa and his place in the world and is able to advance towards his goals.
I enjoyed this one more than the last couple. It felt more like the first book which I enjoyed the most. The main character has to go on a dangerous mission to save his master who has been poisoned. They can only get a small group to go. He gets stronger, learns more about his Doa and his place in the world and is able to advance towards his goals.
December 28, 2020
A fast thrilling five star read but...
The author really does need to lose ihs thesaurus. Lol. However before I get into that this fourth book of the series remains appropriate for young adults and above and is a quick easy read that will pull the reader all the way through the story from beginning to end. It is so far a series that is certainly worthy to be in anybody's library and is a still on Kindle unlimited.
The characters, settings, plot, and world building all come together to form a pretty good story. It is a legitimate five-star story I believe and a five-star series so far. While there were a handful if that of editing errors and perhaps a couple switch names there has been really nothing inconsistent throughout the story. It is not a story in which the main character is saving the world every book or has become all powerful through four books. In fact it is a slow progression for the main character. In so much as he is still not the fastest smartest strongest or Uber protagonist that is seen in some works, which I do not mind by the way, or even in my own hobby writing lol.
I do think that perhaps he lost or dropped the ball a bit on a minor antagonist that's our main protagonist had to face a couple times. by the end of the book when he faced me again it was only in a passing mentioning and they did not face off. I might have missed something and even misinterpreted something but it was not a big deal and certainly did not detract from the story outside of me wondering what was going on with him.
So far judging from where the character can go to reach the top and where he is right now I believe that this could be a fairly long series. Depending upon how the author wants to work it and how much passion he has for it of course. once again I've stayed up way past my bedtime to finish a very good story. That said I do want to be honest about the annoying little nat of the story.
The author has used in each of his books some hundred dollar words that will pull a reader out of the story while they try to figure out what the heck it meant. The truth is his style of writing is not fitting for the random thesaurus word of the day insertions. You never see the author's hand that is how good he is. That is what many authors want to achieve. Transparent prose can really help keep the reader into the story. I understand that many authors and avid readers have a larger vocabulary to work from. And there is nothing wrong with having an unusual word in the story so long as it fits.
But unfortunately there's a few instances in the story where it gets a little awkward or where you do see the author's hand in wanting to insert a word to perhaps fancy it up a more and add a little bit additional spice to the story because plain and simple is boring. In this book he used the term "susurration" only a couple times but it was enough to be distracting. Basically it means whisper or murmuring. You usually understand words by context and he used it once to refer to a crowd and the other time to a sword passing through flesh. I honestly have never seen it in any work I have read as far as I can recall. It just doesn't flow with a story. Another instance was the use of "mien" when manner demeanor would have suffice. So I have seen this word used before so it is a bit more understandable but a little distracting. The funniest was when he used the "equine friends" instead of horses. Throughout the entire story and the series they've been horses for some reason once when referring to severants taking the way to be stabled and another time when having been left while the group search for something temporarily he referred to the horses as such.the vast majority of people would be able to easily understand what he meant but it also did not fit because he has never given horses personality or made them characters within the story. While they have been there and have been useful and even named by a couple side characters they've only been props. It just seemed odd.
Okay that's a little bit of whining for a five-star story but it just was nagging at me throughout the books. In any case this is a good read and I recommend it for anyone who loves young adult fantasy martial arts action and fun.
The author really does need to lose ihs thesaurus. Lol. However before I get into that this fourth book of the series remains appropriate for young adults and above and is a quick easy read that will pull the reader all the way through the story from beginning to end. It is so far a series that is certainly worthy to be in anybody's library and is a still on Kindle unlimited.
The characters, settings, plot, and world building all come together to form a pretty good story. It is a legitimate five-star story I believe and a five-star series so far. While there were a handful if that of editing errors and perhaps a couple switch names there has been really nothing inconsistent throughout the story. It is not a story in which the main character is saving the world every book or has become all powerful through four books. In fact it is a slow progression for the main character. In so much as he is still not the fastest smartest strongest or Uber protagonist that is seen in some works, which I do not mind by the way, or even in my own hobby writing lol.
I do think that perhaps he lost or dropped the ball a bit on a minor antagonist that's our main protagonist had to face a couple times. by the end of the book when he faced me again it was only in a passing mentioning and they did not face off. I might have missed something and even misinterpreted something but it was not a big deal and certainly did not detract from the story outside of me wondering what was going on with him.
So far judging from where the character can go to reach the top and where he is right now I believe that this could be a fairly long series. Depending upon how the author wants to work it and how much passion he has for it of course. once again I've stayed up way past my bedtime to finish a very good story. That said I do want to be honest about the annoying little nat of the story.
The author has used in each of his books some hundred dollar words that will pull a reader out of the story while they try to figure out what the heck it meant. The truth is his style of writing is not fitting for the random thesaurus word of the day insertions. You never see the author's hand that is how good he is. That is what many authors want to achieve. Transparent prose can really help keep the reader into the story. I understand that many authors and avid readers have a larger vocabulary to work from. And there is nothing wrong with having an unusual word in the story so long as it fits.
But unfortunately there's a few instances in the story where it gets a little awkward or where you do see the author's hand in wanting to insert a word to perhaps fancy it up a more and add a little bit additional spice to the story because plain and simple is boring. In this book he used the term "susurration" only a couple times but it was enough to be distracting. Basically it means whisper or murmuring. You usually understand words by context and he used it once to refer to a crowd and the other time to a sword passing through flesh. I honestly have never seen it in any work I have read as far as I can recall. It just doesn't flow with a story. Another instance was the use of "mien" when manner demeanor would have suffice. So I have seen this word used before so it is a bit more understandable but a little distracting. The funniest was when he used the "equine friends" instead of horses. Throughout the entire story and the series they've been horses for some reason once when referring to severants taking the way to be stabled and another time when having been left while the group search for something temporarily he referred to the horses as such.the vast majority of people would be able to easily understand what he meant but it also did not fit because he has never given horses personality or made them characters within the story. While they have been there and have been useful and even named by a couple side characters they've only been props. It just seemed odd.
Okay that's a little bit of whining for a five-star story but it just was nagging at me throughout the books. In any case this is a good read and I recommend it for anyone who loves young adult fantasy martial arts action and fun.
October 19, 2020
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First, my review: “This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
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I enjoyed this book, so my goal is to promote it and help the author. If you are a potential reader, just stop reading now and take the above as all you need to know. I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. It is my opinion that Art needs to be experienced at an individual level. You are the only one that can determine what you like and don’t like. Don’t let others make that decision for you. You should definitely read the book and completely ignore all of the reviews. Or not if you don’t think this book is for you. That choice is all yours and the beauty of art appreciation. You are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
If you are a member of the IAK Guild (thanks, Jason) or part of the review police, feel free to criticize me and challenge my philosophy on reviewing art. I think we all love a good debate. The forums are open and I welcome your comments. I was wrong in my previous request to get you to stop. Your blatant disregard for that request has led to some fun discussions. Growth is important for us all.
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First, my review: “This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
Second, I am not a bot...at least I don’t think I am. Yes this is copy pasta (just learned that term, so fun!) simply because I feel like any book I read deserves acknowledgement but at the same time my feelings on reviews conflict with the normal review process.
I enjoyed this book, so my goal is to promote it and help the author. If you are a potential reader, just stop reading now and take the above as all you need to know. I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. It is my opinion that Art needs to be experienced at an individual level. You are the only one that can determine what you like and don’t like. Don’t let others make that decision for you. You should definitely read the book and completely ignore all of the reviews. Or not if you don’t think this book is for you. That choice is all yours and the beauty of art appreciation. You are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
If you are a member of the IAK Guild (thanks, Jason) or part of the review police, feel free to criticize me and challenge my philosophy on reviewing art. I think we all love a good debate. The forums are open and I welcome your comments. I was wrong in my previous request to get you to stop. Your blatant disregard for that request has led to some fun discussions. Growth is important for us all.
Cheers
October 18, 2020
Thoroughly consistent fun
All of the thousand li novels share consistency in worldbuilding and pace and character that make them a welcome experience for me. Whenever one comes out I know I'm going to enjoy the journey.
They're far from perfect, lacking in some elements of polish, but always consistently solid. It's a struggle to put what keeps me from five starring these things into words and honestly I am not sure a pile of picked nits would not give a more mistaken impression than just giving all the stars would.
I buy each one the moment it comes out, which perhaps says more than petty complaints about editing or occasional peculiarities of dialog. The good vastly outweighs.
As an American raised on western pop culture I can't say how refreshing the martial arts progression genres (and I struggle with some of the distinctions between subgenres still) are. They generally show us characters more challenged and with a more realistic investment in their own success that I love.
Wu Ying is just a really compelling character and watching him struggle with decisions and planning instead of simply leaping from challenge to challenge draped with plot armor is supremely engaging.
All of the thousand li novels share consistency in worldbuilding and pace and character that make them a welcome experience for me. Whenever one comes out I know I'm going to enjoy the journey.
They're far from perfect, lacking in some elements of polish, but always consistently solid. It's a struggle to put what keeps me from five starring these things into words and honestly I am not sure a pile of picked nits would not give a more mistaken impression than just giving all the stars would.
I buy each one the moment it comes out, which perhaps says more than petty complaints about editing or occasional peculiarities of dialog. The good vastly outweighs.
As an American raised on western pop culture I can't say how refreshing the martial arts progression genres (and I struggle with some of the distinctions between subgenres still) are. They generally show us characters more challenged and with a more realistic investment in their own success that I love.
Wu Ying is just a really compelling character and watching him struggle with decisions and planning instead of simply leaping from challenge to challenge draped with plot armor is supremely engaging.
May 8, 2021
DNF 20%
I had to drop this book, despite my investment in the series. It was boring. There was no conflict... not even a foreshadowing of conflict. Page after page of detailed notes on plants, animals, and cultivation techniques do not a novel make.
Okay, the story may have picked up later on but I gave it a fair shake. If your patience is better than mine then go for it.
I had to drop this book, despite my investment in the series. It was boring. There was no conflict... not even a foreshadowing of conflict. Page after page of detailed notes on plants, animals, and cultivation techniques do not a novel make.
Okay, the story may have picked up later on but I gave it a fair shake. If your patience is better than mine then go for it.
September 21, 2025
Wu Ying’s journey just keeps getting better. In this book, his master is poisoned, and the only way to save him is to head out on a dangerous expedition to find the cure. Of course, it’s not that simple—there are spirit beasts, enemy cultivators, and even whispers of war waiting for him along the way.
What I loved here is how the story blends action with heart. The fights are exciting, but it’s Wu Ying’s determination and loyalty that really shine through. He’s not the strongest or the fastest cultivator, but he keeps moving forward, even when the odds are stacked against him. That steady, thoughtful growth makes him such a great character to follow.
By the end, I was itching to see where Wu Ying’s path leads next. Tao Wong really knows how to deliver a mix of danger, character growth, and emotional punch.
What I loved here is how the story blends action with heart. The fights are exciting, but it’s Wu Ying’s determination and loyalty that really shine through. He’s not the strongest or the fastest cultivator, but he keeps moving forward, even when the odds are stacked against him. That steady, thoughtful growth makes him such a great character to follow.
By the end, I was itching to see where Wu Ying’s path leads next. Tao Wong really knows how to deliver a mix of danger, character growth, and emotional punch.
October 25, 2024
We are firmly in the territory of Harry Potter - children solving the problem for adults. I would have less of an issue if this wasn't the form book and the MC should be stronger. DNF
January 17, 2024
I am really enjoying this series. The cultivation theme is one that is teaching me even personal lessons. While this book doesn't have as much high adventure as other series I have read, there is a methodical movement forward which is taking it's time. I am really looking forward to continuing this series and seeing where it ends up.
September 11, 2022
I want to continue the series but I’m so tired of getting my hopes up. There is so much potential for a satisfying payoff but the author continuously lets me down. Every time I believe the main character is going to actually progress the author finds a way to avoid it. The main character learns a newish ability mid way through the book and doesn’t use it again at all when it matters. The last fight when everything came to a head with the dark sect and we think the main character is going to Either have another breakthrough or even use his learned ability he loses and wakes up being healed like that’s what the reader wanted all along. It’s a cultivation story that avoids the cultivation. We don’t even have a grasp of the mc power level because that part of the story isn’t important apparently. If you do plan on reading this book just know that although they succeed in their main goal but there is no reward just like you the reader will have read the book but will not feel the payoff at all.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 22, 2021
I am really enjoying this series. And that enjoyment is increasing as it goes on. Bumping this book up to the fairly rare 4 stars from me. I was surprised to learn that this author seemed to mostly put out litrpg. Which I honestly dislike strongly. So glad they went in a different direction with this. Instead of using MMO mechanics taking the time to describe things in a way that these people might really have used to understand their world and how it works. Makes it all so much more rich and engaging. Looking forward to more of this one!
July 21, 2021
Hmm, not really my cup of tea. I'm quickly becoming a nonfan of the cultivation novels. They can contain interesting tales, but ones like this one that are mostly obtaining materialss, encounters with other cultivators trying to stop progression, and journey's that absolutely must be undertaken, then turn out successful with nearly no trials and tribulations just doesn't appeal tto mme. If you're a cultivation fan though, don't let my review stop you, go on and enjoy the bbook, it's just not for me.
December 17, 2020
Tao Wong is really hitting his straps with this fourth book
The world building was much better than the previous novels and the fight scenes really nail biting. There was sometimes a lack of payoff with some of the built up tension but in general it was very well managed. The exploration of the dark sects really added to the depth and gave a sense of danger that had been a little leaving in previous books. Can't wait for the next one!
The world building was much better than the previous novels and the fight scenes really nail biting. There was sometimes a lack of payoff with some of the built up tension but in general it was very well managed. The exploration of the dark sects really added to the depth and gave a sense of danger that had been a little leaving in previous books. Can't wait for the next one!
June 17, 2021
I struggled to get into this one
I haven't really pinpointed why I didn't like this book as much as the previous books in the series, they just didn't hook me at well.
Our protagonist and his friends grow a little, but there really doesn't seem to be much development going on - either as characters or in cultivation. For a progression novel not much progress is made.
I hope the next one is better.
I haven't really pinpointed why I didn't like this book as much as the previous books in the series, they just didn't hook me at well.
Our protagonist and his friends grow a little, but there really doesn't seem to be much development going on - either as characters or in cultivation. For a progression novel not much progress is made.
I hope the next one is better.
December 1, 2020
Better
Slow start. However lacked the the story problems from book 2, or the flow issues from book 3. No love interest in this book solved a lot of issues. His best friend needs some character development. So far he is a punching bag that eats meat.
The world was fleshed out more and a more cohesive plot started to form.
Slow reading but not bad.
Slow start. However lacked the the story problems from book 2, or the flow issues from book 3. No love interest in this book solved a lot of issues. His best friend needs some character development. So far he is a punching bag that eats meat.
The world was fleshed out more and a more cohesive plot started to form.
Slow reading but not bad.
April 13, 2021
Lots of growth and events occur throughout the story. No complaints in pacing or delivery. A solid story overall. Only complaint is the often-thrown out technique names. They honesty mean nothing to me and make the fight sequence seem a little too drawn out? But I am still interested to see where it goes.
October 2, 2020
Good growth
I thought this was much better than the last installment. Good character growth. Good plot direction adding a new “antagonist”. I love wuxia. But as with anything else. I need to see the characters grow each book!
I thought this was much better than the last installment. Good character growth. Good plot direction adding a new “antagonist”. I love wuxia. But as with anything else. I need to see the characters grow each book!
October 4, 2020
Another Great
Tao Wong continues to impress with A Thousand Li. This next installment takes the hero, Wu Ying, on his continued journey to being a true leader and martial cultivator. Truly enjoyed the book.
Tao Wong continues to impress with A Thousand Li. This next installment takes the hero, Wu Ying, on his continued journey to being a true leader and martial cultivator. Truly enjoyed the book.
October 6, 2020
Excellent continuation
This is an excellent book, that also happens to be an excellent addition to a series. In some ways it is better than the previous novels.
I eagerly look forward to the next novel.
This is an excellent book, that also happens to be an excellent addition to a series. In some ways it is better than the previous novels.
I eagerly look forward to the next novel.
October 9, 2020
A great story continues
This is another slice of life that still has a lot of action and depth to the world build. Of course once read all in a day I now have to face waiting for more.
This is another slice of life that still has a lot of action and depth to the world build. Of course once read all in a day I now have to face waiting for more.
October 18, 2020
Good
A cultivation novel done right. I list it right next to the artorian archives, gotta love that old man. A good mix of character development, descriptions, and good pace. The fights are excellently narrated, the creatures are mostly simple to identify.
A cultivation novel done right. I list it right next to the artorian archives, gotta love that old man. A good mix of character development, descriptions, and good pace. The fights are excellently narrated, the creatures are mostly simple to identify.
January 28, 2024
Title: The Second Expedition (A Thousand Li, #4) by Tao Wong
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐ (3/5)
Review:
"The Second Expedition," the fourth installment in Tao Wong's "A Thousand Li" series, continues the saga of Li Mu Bai's cultivation journey, but it faces challenges in maintaining the momentum and freshness established in earlier books. While Wong remains true to the series' cultivation themes, certain aspects of the plot, character development, and pacing contribute to a somewhat diminished reading experience.
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐ (3/5)
Review:
"The Second Expedition," the fourth installment in Tao Wong's "A Thousand Li" series, continues the saga of Li Mu Bai's cultivation journey, but it faces challenges in maintaining the momentum and freshness established in earlier books. While Wong remains true to the series' cultivation themes, certain aspects of the plot, character development, and pacing contribute to a somewhat diminished reading experience.
Repetitive Plot Elements:
One of the notable drawbacks in "The Second Expedition" is the recurrence of plot elements seen in previous books. The narrative tends to revisit familiar challenges and conflicts, leading to a sense of predictability. Readers may find themselves yearning for more innovative plot developments that break away from established patterns and provide a fresh perspective on Li Mu Bai's cultivation journey.
Character Stagnation:
The character development in this installment feels somewhat stagnant. While Li Mu Bai continues to face external challenges and adversaries, his internal growth and evolution seem less pronounced. The depth of character exploration, which was a strength in earlier books, could be more nuanced in "The Second Expedition." Readers may seek a more profound understanding of Li Mu Bai's motivations and internal conflicts to enhance their connection with the protagonist.
World-Building Opportunities:
Despite the potential for further world-building in the series, "The Second Expedition" doesn't fully capitalize on expanding the lore of the "A Thousand Li" universe. The exploration of new realms and mystical elements could be more extensive, providing readers with a richer and more immersive backdrop for Li Mu Bai's adventures. Delving into uncharted territories within the established world would contribute to the series' overall depth.
Missing Emotional Resonance:
Emotional resonance, a key component in connecting readers to the characters and their struggles, is somewhat lacking in this installment. Moments that could elicit a strong emotional response are either underplayed or not fully realized. Injecting more emotional depth into critical scenes and character interactions would enhance the reader's investment in Li Mu Bai's journey.
Pacing Challenges:
The pacing in "The Second Expedition" faces occasional challenges. Certain sections of the narrative feel rushed, while others may linger without significant plot advancement. Achieving a more balanced pacing would contribute to a smoother flow, keeping the reader engaged and invested in the unfolding events. A well-paced narrative is crucial for maintaining tension and anticipation throughout the story.
Conclusion:
The Second Expedition (A Thousand Li, #4) by Tao Wong grapples with maintaining the freshness and innovation that characterized earlier books in the series. While the cultivation themes remain integral, issues with repetitive plot elements, character stagnation, missed world-building opportunities, limited emotional resonance, and pacing challenges contribute to a somewhat diminished reading experience. Despite these shortcomings, fans of the series may still find enjoyment in Li Mu Bai's continued journey, hoping that future installments will rekindle the narrative magic that initially captivated readers.
June 28, 2025
loved it!
A Thousand Li: The Second Expedition by Tao Wong
“He was just a man making his way through the paths of cultivation, seeking his own little slice of the Dao to embody.”
— A Thousand Li: The Second Expedition: An Epic Progression Fantasy by Tao Wong
With Wu Ying’s martial masters life in danger, he and his martial sister Fairy Yang travel on an expedition to gather the supplies necessary to save their masters life with the help of some others.
The fourth book in A Thousand Li is filled with dangerous creatures, plants, and people. I have enjoyed every single book so far and this one may be my favorite! I’m impressed that each book, this one being no different, is filled with plenty of action and new opportunities for Wu Ying, along with his growth in his strength and personality. I look forward to reading book 5!
A Thousand Li: The Second Expedition by Tao Wong
“He was just a man making his way through the paths of cultivation, seeking his own little slice of the Dao to embody.”
— A Thousand Li: The Second Expedition: An Epic Progression Fantasy by Tao Wong
With Wu Ying’s martial masters life in danger, he and his martial sister Fairy Yang travel on an expedition to gather the supplies necessary to save their masters life with the help of some others.
The fourth book in A Thousand Li is filled with dangerous creatures, plants, and people. I have enjoyed every single book so far and this one may be my favorite! I’m impressed that each book, this one being no different, is filled with plenty of action and new opportunities for Wu Ying, along with his growth in his strength and personality. I look forward to reading book 5!
June 4, 2023
Just gets worse
The MC has zero agency. Everything in this story is always about him doing things for other people, getting screwed over and then for some reason being okay with it. The amount if times over these 4 books where he finally accomplishes something, someone comes and takes his hard work and he just shrugs and says "Could be worse" is ridiculous. I wish I wouldn't have started reading this because atleast when he was just a peasant farmer he atleast fought back, as a cultivator he's nothing more than a doormat. I cannot reccomend this series to anyone. Also, what happened to Li Yao? Spent an entire book pinning after her and then she just dissapears. Adding characters just for forced drama between the mc and Yin Xue was dumb.
The MC has zero agency. Everything in this story is always about him doing things for other people, getting screwed over and then for some reason being okay with it. The amount if times over these 4 books where he finally accomplishes something, someone comes and takes his hard work and he just shrugs and says "Could be worse" is ridiculous. I wish I wouldn't have started reading this because atleast when he was just a peasant farmer he atleast fought back, as a cultivator he's nothing more than a doormat. I cannot reccomend this series to anyone. Also, what happened to Li Yao? Spent an entire book pinning after her and then she just dissapears. Adding characters just for forced drama between the mc and Yin Xue was dumb.
July 24, 2021
The last book infuriated me with how pointless the whole thing felt and I ended my review by saying that the series had one chance with the next book to keep me interested.
This succeeded.
It's not stand out brilliant or anything but in a series that has always been readable adding some real stakes and some actual meaningful changes made a big difference. This felt like the author finally kicking things into gear and it adds a "one more book" morishness that was entirely missing at the end of The First War.
This succeeded.
It's not stand out brilliant or anything but in a series that has always been readable adding some real stakes and some actual meaningful changes made a big difference. This felt like the author finally kicking things into gear and it adds a "one more book" morishness that was entirely missing at the end of The First War.
October 5, 2020
Enjoyable and interesting cultivation story
I always enjoy Tao Wong books and this was no exception. Introduces some new characters to accompany on a expedition to find rare ingredients to save the protagonist mentor from a deadly poison. Revisits old friends, finds new enemies, and sees our hero progress further on his path. I like the style of writing and development of characters throughout the series and look forward to more.
I always enjoy Tao Wong books and this was no exception. Introduces some new characters to accompany on a expedition to find rare ingredients to save the protagonist mentor from a deadly poison. Revisits old friends, finds new enemies, and sees our hero progress further on his path. I like the style of writing and development of characters throughout the series and look forward to more.
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