I bought this book, even though it was rather expensive, mostly because it was brand new, and I had been interested in using mentor sentences in my classroom. Anderson and colleagues make an excellent case to teach using mentor sentences, their approach seems like it would be easy to implement, and I’m interested to see how my students respond to it. I love the theory behind the practice and their suggestions for how to set this up in the classroom.
So, why three stars? I gave this three stars for a couple of reasons. Most importantly, the book seems like it was hastily put together. Many typos, inconsistent focus phrases and standards, repeated sentences to focus on several standards, etc. Some of the mentor sentences are pulled from some odd pieces of literature that I wouldn’t expect to engage a middle school reader. With so much literature out there, some of the choices were odd, and the repetition of already-used sentences seems lazy. This would not bother me as much if this was a $20 book. However, it was nearly $70, and if you’re paying that much, you expect a more polished product.
Secondly, the book starts off advising teachers to create focus phrases that don’t focus on terminology so much. They specifically state that terminology can confuse and intimidate our young writers and readers. Then you get a few units into the lesson plans and find focus phrases such as, “I use the subjunctive mood to show that something is a wish, a fantasy, or untrue.”
Lastly, the standards used in this book are not aligned with my state. My state does not have grammar standards this specific. Since the price of the book is justified by the publisher due to the lesson plans within it, they should probably state which state standards they are using so that it is not misleading. These are not Next Generation standards or CCSS. These are some state’s antiquated standards that still require middle school students to “use and explain the function of gerunds,” etc.
In summary, while I plan to use the spirit of this book in my classroom and the invitation process that the author’s discuss, I don’t know that I feel satisfied to have paid nearly $70 for lesson plans that don’t align with my curriculum and seem hastily put together.