**ARC provided by NetGalley**
As a queer person and a former band geek, I was so excited when I saw this book. I was ready for some sweet sapphic love between two nerds and I wouldn't say I was disappointed in THAT regard. However, there were many other areas in which I was disappointed.
Forward March follows Harper, a senior saxophonist who finds out that someone has been posing as her on Tinder and sending risque messages to a member of the drumline. This is a great story idea, and this is the plot that I was looking forward to. Unfortunately, it feels like the Tinder profile plotline gets sidelined in favor of focusing on her father's political campaign, as he is planning to run for President. This information, for me, is where this author seriously jumped the shark. It went from a "haha semi-relatable" romantic romp to someone trying to skate on the coattails of Red, White, and Royal Blue's success. The political plot simply never meshed with the bit I was actually interested in, and it would have been even more interesting to see Harper and Margot's relationship blossom throughout some investigation of that delicious mystery.
There were moments that I enjoyed, all of the little inside marching band jokes were spot-on. Yes, trumpets ARE obnoxious and the percussion section can NEVER find the beat. I also liked the pop culture references at first, as Harper's favorite shows are also all of my favorite shows, but even those got old by chapter four. The relationship that we finally see between Harper and her brother, Christian, and his boyfriend, Ben, was amazing as well. I wished we had gotten that earlier, but alas, it was a sweet tie-in at the end at least. My favorite thing about this was definitely the solid, well-handled asexual representation that Quinlan gave us. And Harper and Margot's relationship was fun to watch grow and blossom.
However, there were so many parts of this book that either frustrated me to no end or that I simply couldn't suspend my disbelief enough to enjoy. As I said, the entire political side to this book, which ended up being a good 60% of it, did not mesh into what I thought was going to be the main plot. Similar stakes could have been made simply by Harper having conservative parents, one of which runs the school. Harrison, the Vice President's son that is apparently desperately in-lust with Harper, also felt like a pointless character. He added nothing to the plot, except as something small to fuel Evelyn's jealousy. Speaking of characters who did nothing more than annoy me, Nadia absolutely sucks. It was obvious that her jealousy over Margot was because of feelings she harbored for Harper, but even having gleamed that subtext, all of her outbursts and arguments felt unnecessarily amplified. Even by the end, when you know the full story, it never feels justified. That happens with a lot of the emotional upheavals of the book, they never really feel deserved. From Harper's arguments with her mother to Harper and Nadia's multiple fights, even Bellamy's final outburst of apology feels terribly over the top and unnecessary. The emotions of the book were hard to follow and I could never quite tell if I was supposed to be mad at someone or not because I couldn't tell how Harper was feeling.
Finally, the ending. The "forgive and forget"-ness of the ending drops this book an entire star for me. What Bellamy, Nadia, and Evelyn did to Harper and Margot was absolutely horrendous. I'm glad Evelyn was expelled, and I can even accept that Nadia and Bellamy were just dumb teenagers making poor decisions (though I would have preferred hearing that from Harper's voice than Ben's), but making up with Bellamy and Nadia at the very end felt extremely uneared and unsatisfying. If it had been handled differently, it might not have hit so badly with me, but the idea that Harper has to forgive Bellamy and Nadia otherwise Evelyn "wins" is not an idea that I vibe with. Harper doesn't have to forgive people that hurt her like that, and I can't imagine someone forgiving even their best friends that quickly after such a betrayal.
Overall, I had a lot of feelings about this book. It's not the best thing I've ever read, and I'm still disappointed that it wasn't the story I thought I'd be getting from the first couple of chapters. However, the love story, the ace representation, and the sibling interactions were enough to at least get me through the end.