Talk, talk, talk
Lawd ha’mercy the entire book is dialogue. Just an endless stream of conversation. Every chapter new characters are added to talk inanely about everything the characters do. We should have hot cocoa. Earlier, we had hot cocoa. The hot cocoa was delicious! Do you want to get hot cocoa?
Considering the male protagonist is a veterinarian, the author felt it was important for the female protagonist to drone on and on and on and on about how much she hates both animals and men who have careers they love. It was rather ironic that the fmc doesn’t want to come in second to someone else’s job given that the fmc had nothing to talk about except her own career, which is the single most important thing in her life. At one point the mmc, Sam, asks Leanne what makes her happy and she responds with 1) her job; 2) an apartment, and 3) her friends from college who she sees once a year. At another point, she tells hims that she doesn’t have interest in other people. Talk about red flags.
I am baffled that neither the author nor whomever helped edit the book noticed that the fmc had the exact same conversation with every single character. By the time the seventh character mentioned that she should get a job in Buffalo, my eyes were starting to cross with boredom. Yes, I get it. Leanne had a job in Chicago. She is visiting Ramsey because she went to school there. She thinks Sam is cute, but hates all animals. She has nothing else going on in her life. Please, for the love of all things holy, say something, anything, else.