When What's Right Is Wrong

Rights and Wrongs

by LovesBitca8

“There will be a medical examination tomorrow morning.”

Her breath hitched, and something stuck in her throat. She waited calmly, trying not to betray her frantic heartbeat. “Alright,” she managed. “Is there something you need me to do?”

A breath left him, almost a laugh, and he spun to stare at her bookshelf, like he couldn’t bear the sight of her.

“You are a virgin. Still.”

Realization cracked over her like an egg against a bowl. Her skin was tingling and numb as she took a deep breath. “Will they check for that?”

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Ebooks, Short Stories

Unknown Binding

About the author

Fanfiction pen name for Julie Soto.

Reviews

[Lovinmyshelf]

Another short that I think would have made The Auction better🤷🏻‍♀️

[enola (semi-hiatus)]

i think i'll prefer the auction's version

i don't rate fanfics

[Amna]

Love the au of an au concept, such a funny spicy scene 😂

[Anastasia Terendii (livie's version)]

розділ з альтернативним сюжетом (перший секс Драко і Герміони) з основної роботи. якщо в основному фанфіку мені подобається написання гарячих сцен, то тут це якось було так недолуго написано, що тільки дискомфорт викликало, як і у героїв, хоча авторка продовжувала нам вкидувати, що їм це типу подобається. ну таке. оригінальний розділ (і сюжетно в тому числі) в рази кращий.

[julia ☾ (sirius' version)]

★★★★☆ - 4 stars
cute but i liked their first time in 'the auction' more… it was more passionate yk

[Em]

3.75!

We love a little smutty au of a dark au 😩✨

[Gabriela]

Well, this was intense. I would say, not my favorite LovesBitca8 so far, but entertaining nonetheless.
I love how she brings life and fully fleshes out characters, even when doing a one-shot story. However, this is a very grey area and dark au, closer to rape than I would like so I found the subject matter a bit too confronting to find it funny or cute.

[☽]

desperately need to reread the auction

[Mia]

Hilarious 🤣 reading this at 4:50am just after finishing The Auction and I'm cackling.

[hannah ✧.* ☽｡⋆✧.*]

such a silly little scene. i did enjoy the actual events in chapter 19 better in the auction but this was still funny and awkward 🙏🏼

[lins୨ৎ📚]

/10. No notes.

[Alondra Ellard]

This is such a niche crowd 😂😂😂

AU chapter inside of an alternate universe inside of a fanfic? Love.

I saw a comment that said this chapter would’ve made the Auction better and I 100% agree.

I mean like COME ON LADYYYYYY

I’m only 400 pages into the Auction and the miscommunication is KILLING me.

Like Hermione STOP BEING STUPID.

This would’ve made it better than the awkward ass scene…maybe what happens next will save it?

[lana_cobb]

Voto: 3,85
Capitolo speciale per "The auction" in caso alcuni avvenimenti non fossero andati come in realtà avrebbero dovuto (chi ha letto capirà).
Sinceramente penso sia una delle poche scene spicy che mi abbia fatto ridere date le circostanze ma tutto sommato è andata bene.
Consigliato? Si

[Kiajia]

This was an alternative chapter 19 ending from the fanfiction The Auction. It was wonderful. We are lucky we were given this gift from the author. Only reason it isn't a 5 star is because sexually if felt not as passionate and shocking it could have been.

[Charlotte McNair]

Not my favorite but I love seeing writers ideas aside from what they put into their work

[bebe ♌︎]

Never laughed so much at a sex scene 😂 (don’t worry gets spicy in the end)
loved what the author did with this, original and beautifully written as always.

[Shruti]

This was very well done, I liked how Draco and Hermione slowly became lost in one another due to their (hidden) feelings for eachother. I could really feel the emotions they were going through.

[Weronika]

rereading

[Taylor Goodban]

A fun spicy scene🌶️ I really liked how events went down in chapter 19 of The Auction but this was a fun take on that chapter if events were different.

[em]

i very much prefer the actual way they had their first time tbh

[Tarah Fitzgerald]

⭐️3.5

[Eva’s Grimoire]

I love the main idea but this spicy scene was nice, I just expected Draco to be more witty rather than just shy as Neville hahah

[Cati Ivan]

BAHAHA "I can ask Blaise," he said suddenly. "If you'd be more… If you'd prefer it not be me." THIS WAS GOLD.

[Hollie Newman]

Read in 12 minutes. Loveeee

[Volkoren]

OMG I had flutters in my stomach during the whole read. Can Draco please me real

[Lena Blazejova]

Draca a Hermiona..
SMUT 🌶️🌶️🌶️ pokud zjisti, ze je jeste panna bude problém.... A ten se musi hned vyresit... Jde se na reseni problemu...

[halina mae]

it was good writing, but I don't enjoy pwps lol

[Ariadne]

3.5/5

[Hetta]

Pointless

[Melissa Witney]

I liked the original scene that happened in the auction better.