A New Take on an Old Trope
The fifth book in Jessie Gussman’s excellent Sweet Water Ranch series throws a wrench into the well-known “fake marriage turns real” trope (premise of a romance or rom-com). It could be a flop, but the author—one of my favorites—inserts just enough twists to keep the reader (me) guessing how it’s going to be resolved.
Remington “Rem” Martinez has escaped a bad situation in his native Texas to find a wife. The first tweak is that neither of the two parties wants to get fake-married…Ford Hanson, hero of The Cowboy’s Beauty, plays matchmaker and talks up Elaine Anderson‘s charms to Rem while warning him that she’s a recent divorcee (not by choice) with four small children and a rickety house on an ancient ranch. Rem loves a challenge—hence his championship in bull riding—and what could be more challenging than marrying a single mom running a decrepit ranch by herself in North Dakota?
Elaine, who’s received one of the “get married, stay in North Dakota, inherit a billion dollars“ letters from the eccentric billionaire who owned the Sweet Water Ranch, isn’t certain she can trust any man to stay with her after her ex-husband married her younger sister, but she needs the money to restore her ranch and consents to Ford’s recommendation to marry a man she’s never met, from a state she’s never visited, for the sake of her children and her ranch, which has fallen into disrepair since her ex-husband left her bank accounts nearly empty. She doesn’t anticipate her arranged groom to be tall, dark and handsome! He also prays in Jesus‘a name before meals and insists on being married before a pastor and going to church every week—a characteristic both Elaine and I find appealing.
They wed shortly after Christmas, and the children are so cowed by their new stepfather that they don’t create as much chaos as they usually do. Rem, who describes himself as “not good with kids“, proves GREAT with Elaine’s kids and brings fun back to their home. However, they’re honest with each other about the money and the ranch being most important and the marriage being a business transaction, nothing more.
In late January Elaine’s mother comes to her house for her daughters’ birthday party—with her cheating younger daughter and son-in-law. Her ex-husband pulls her into his chest, her sister cattily says she’s trying to win him back, and Rem saves an awkward afternoon by ignoring the sister’s flirting and by acting affectionately toward Elaine.
Several months pass (all of which feel like winter to Texan Rem), and when he calls his mother on her March birthday, she berates him for not telling her he was getting married and begs him to come home for his father‘s last days; he has terminal pancreatic cancer. Rem returns to Texas and takes Elaine with him, only to witness her being treated rudely by his mother and his drunk brother, who says their father is going to give him the ranch—something he had taken away from him after a small argument escalated into the ranch being given to his brother—the brother Rem’s fiancée magically “decided” she wanted all along. Rem’s brother, who was left himself, then drops a bomb on Elaine, but Rem’s explanation clears it up—yet another twist for readers who think the couple deserve more trouble!
After the trip to Texas, Elaine fears Rem will try to relocate her family to Texas or, worse yet, go there without them, just like the last man she trusted. That would leave her where she started but with new heartbreak, as she has learned to care for Rem.
Rem, in turn, cares for Elaine and doesn’t want her to be burdened by a ranch in dire need of repair, which applies to his ranch as well as hers. They discuss possible financial fixes if the billion dollars don’t come…and when the lawyer’s secretary tells them that her letter was sent by mistake—another twist, one I didn’t see coming—they realize Rem needs to work on an oil field to earn money to repair the ranch, house, and outbuildings, including the lakeside cabins that could make money as rental properties.
On Rem’s final night before departure (following a stressful talk with the children, who accuse him of leaving “just like our last dad”), Rem takes a phone call from an unknown number. It’s the lawyer, who says his secretary made a mistake in saying that her letter was a mistake, and he needs to know where to deposit her billion dollars!
With the money, Rem no longer needs to leave the family for any oil fields, and the kids get a “Dad” who’ll stay with them forever. Rem and Elaine finally admit their feelings and have a “real” marriage as well…which means the “closed door” is needed!
I love Jessie’s work, and I highly recommend this book, which shows that faith and trust both make a successful marriage.