This was stupidly short and in serious need of editing, or at least the use of a spellcheck.
The previous boss in this Swiss have had their spelling and grammatical errors but this one is the worst, I think if I had reported at the spelling errors to Amazon, I would have spent more time correcting the book than reading it!
So far this is book three and everything that has happened could've been told in just one book. I am on to book four but according to the series page this is supposed to be a seven book series but I don't see anymore books after number four. I truly hope the author did not string me along for four books only to not not finish the series!!
Not really long enough for anything to get anywhere
I was really looking forward to reading this episode of the series but apart from the revelation at the end of wasn't long enough for anything else to really happen. Disappointed that it took me 2 hours to read!
Kane and Olivia were definitely on fire in this one. I love their interactions. Olivia standing up for herself was definitely a thumbs up in this one. Finally with that ending I can't wait for the next book.
Ok that was not the secret he was keeping like mind totally blown!!! Livy is in for a treat and man I can't wait to see where this goes!! I wonder if Kane will completely loose it or start working with Rod to figure shit out!!
Please take some pride in your book and comb through and edit as needed! Even the wrong character’s name on a chapter. Lots of problems with typos. Such a nice story but all these “little mistakes” need to be fixed. You have so much talent!