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321 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 28, 2007
"Sam's voice rang in her head, reminding her that everyone felt fear, but what separated the coward from the hero were knife-edge smarts and the ability to control that fear. Of course, he also taught her that only fools fought battles that weren't their own. Shaking her head, she focused on the first thought. She'd chosen her path today, and she'd see it through to the end, even though her little snowscooter pitted against the hard-shelled tanks was the equivalent of a mosquito against a genetically engineered shaggy-haired mastodon.In the middle of an action scene, she philosophizes, meanders enough to naysay her own theory (i.e. "Of course..."), consciously returns to point A, pauses to remark on a convoluted metaphor, and just when we expect her to finally leap back into the fray, she philosophizes some more.Maybe that made her a fool. Or maybe it made her brave. Or maybe it just made her human."
In the middle of an action scene, she philosophizes, meanders enough to naysay her own theory (i.e. "Of course..."), consciously returns to point A, pauses to remark on a convoluted metaphor, and just when we expect her to finally leap back into the fray, she philosophizes some more.
She not only interrupts an action scene with a monologue but her inner dialogue is entirely too casual for the suicide into which she's heading. I expect action scenes to be tight, no more than a few thoughts seeding the narrative and all of them contributing to an atmosphere.
"Your eyes are appropriately spaced," he whispered.Raina was raised by an ex-military father who trained her to fight, by beating her every time she lost. Both had brutal upbringings but find commendality under all their emotional walls. This story is like ice truckers meets Mad Max.
He stared at her, saying nothing, his gray eyes narrowed in thought. “Romance. Compliments. Gifts.” He gave an abrupt nod. “Understood.”
[...] “Raina… Your eyes are appropriately spaced.” He whispered
She blinked.
“And your ears are proportional to your face. The collagen fibers of your integument have maintained a wrinkle-free and youthful appearance.” He looked at her earnestly. “Compliments.”
“Ummm….” She frowned. “My integument?”
“Tomorrow, I will order you a set of titanium body armor. Lightweight and impenetrable.” The corners of his mouth kicked up just a bit, and he looked incredibly pleased with himself. “Gifts.”
He stared at her, saying nothing, his gray eyes narrowed in thought. “Romance. Compliments. Gifts.” He gave an abrupt nod. “Understood.”
[...] “Raina… Your eyes are appropriately spaced.” He whispered
She blinked.
“And your ears are proportional to your face. The collagen fibers of your integument have maintained a wrinkle-free and youthful appearance.” He looked at her earnestly. “Compliments.”
“Ummm….” She frowned. “My integument?”
“Tomorrow, I will order you a set of titanium body armor. Lightweight and impenetrable.” The corners of his mouth kicked up just a bit, and he looked incredibly pleased with himself. “Gifts.”