Reading this now on Radish. The story is good which is why I keep waiting for chapters. But the editing is AWFUL. I have never seen such bad grammar in a published work. If the author were still alive I'd be contacting her to offer to edit for her. I think some of the issues may have been a language/translation issue. If this kind of thing bothers you, you won't make it past the first 3 pages. If you can overlook it, you might like it. Or, if you are like me, you are constantly rewriting it in your head...