I am writing this review mostly for myself to help me remember what I learned. If this review helps someone else decide to read this book, I'd be glad for that, too. I'll review each part of the book individually.
Introduction: Who Is Making the Decisions?
In their introduction, Kittle and Gallagher laser beam the problem currently facing high school English teachers: "Jillian's good grades [in high school] represented acts of compliance, not decision-making, and how that's she in college, she is beginning to understand what she doesn't know" (p. xix) and "Completing teacher-generated step-by-step work is not learning; it masquerades as it" (p. xx). As a high school English teacher, I can attest to this. I tell students how to write their five-paragraph essay; I tell students, not explicitly, but by the assignments I give, how to read our whole-class novel ("Skim it in order to extract the answers to these specific questions I've given you"). The result is students like Jillian, whose good grades are signs of compliance, not a sign of having gained skills in self-directed reading and writing. "Students need the space to struggle, to wrestle"; students need decision-making handed back to them, where it belongs (p. xxi). This, say Kittle and Gallagher, is the work of their book, presented in four sections: essay writing, book clubs, poetry, and digital composition. I am excited to start reading because I know I need this!
Part 1: Teaching the Essay as an Art Form
First, Kittle and Gallagher suggest English teachers fundamentally shift essay-writing assignments from a prescribed, analyze-this-text exercise to an "invitational space" in which students try to articulate their ideas on a self-selected topic of inquiry (p. 1, quoting Christina V. Cedillo). Kittle and Gallagher remind us that "essay" comes from the French essai, which means try or attempt. This definition is worthwhile sharing with students as a way to begin inviting them into the essay space.
"We have to create conditions that allow [students] to struggle without penalty," say the authors, suggesting that we work against the negative effects of grading (p. 3). The biggest negative effect of grading, it seems to me, is that grading forces students to comply with teacher directives, making grade-conscience students to write "what the teacher wants" without needing to wrestle with questions such as What's important to write about? How should I organize my writing? What format or genre would best enable me to say what I am trying to say? What am I trying to say?
When I taught SAT Prep, I was proud of the two-day lesson plan I wrote to teach students how to do well on the SAT Essay. While the lesson was good, what I shouldn't have been proud about was the meta-lesson I was inadvertently teaching, that writing in school is all about plugging in the thesis statement, three reasons why, and evidence to support those three reasons. This meta-lesson is a terrible lesson for kids to learn, for it teaches them that formulaic writing is how they are supposed to write! Formulaic writing deadens their writer's voice, undercuts their joy in discovery in writing, and depletes their writing of "energy" (p. 4, quoting Katherine Bomer). Inadvertently or not, I do not want to hold up this kind of writing as a model for students any longer.
The authors help us with practical concerns--how can we teachers accomplish this sea-change, practically, within the day-to-day work of our classrooms? One way is to show students many different examples of essays (perhaps centered on the same topic, but all written in different formats to show students possibilities), and have students, in pairs or small groups, notice the "craft moves" the writer made (p. 11).
Another practical tip the authors give us English teachers is to assign our students "a volume of ungraded practice" in the form of free-writes (p. 13). Ungraded free-writes give students the freedom to experiment with things they've seen other writers do--writers we've studied in class and writers they've encountered on their own (perhaps through Silent Sustained Reading).
On the practical necessity of grading, the authors write, "We give our students credit or no credit for their practice both inside and outside of class. We give credit for total pages written--in words or in sketches--in writing notebooks. We ignite the practice in class each day with poetry or other provocations... We hope this 'together practice' will inspire 'alone practice' outside of class, [but] we do not grade students for regular notebook practice outside of class" (p. 14).
It's worth mentioning that the authors "demonstrate [to their students] how we reread our notebooks, highlighting ideas we might want to explore in greater depth." They also demonstrated "underlin[ing] the last line of each entry, asking themselves, 'Do I have more to say about this?' (p. 15).
Other very practical concerns are (1) what should each day of the writing unit consist of and (2) how long should the unit last? On p. 15, Kittle and Gallagher share the speech they would use to introduce a writing unit to their students, including this statement: "We will be drafting for three weeks." However, writing skills should be taught throughout the year so that students can transfer them to many different tasks: "A student who learned how to write an anecdote in a narrative unit and then weaves an anecdote into their current argument piece" has gained the wide application of this skill (p. 27). Next, Kittle and Gallagher explain what they would do on each day of the unit. At the beginning of the unit, they would spend putting students in writing groups/pairs looking at example essays (including published essays, student examples, and the teacher's being-written-along-with-the-class, work-in-progress essay). At the end of the class, each writing group shares with the class their particular findings. After several days of this, the authors say they would revisit the essays with the students, having students rank them from most to least engaging; this is not so much to judge the essays but to prompt students to define criteria for excellence in essay writing. The student-generated criteria will then be used by the teacher to grade the students' essays (p. 17).
While these activities are first oriented toward looking at the essay as a whole, as the unit progresses, the authors study essays in part, looking at such things as an author's style, structure, and sentences. For example, after studying a piece of an essay at the sentence level, students might imitate the model essay's sentence frames (how they begin or end sentences) in a free-write (p. 19).
Midway through the unit, the authors allow students to choose the form--or even multiple forms, as in a multigenre essay--in which to write. "I choose this form orients the writer to the act of composing different than I will practice this form that was chosen for me. Again we ask: Who is making the decisions?" (p. 25).
As students begin writing their drafts, the authors do daily one-on-one conferences with their students in which their goal is to coach students (to encourage the strengths they see in their students' writing) and not to criticize. They say, "Until you set up a system to make this happen [conferencing one-on-one with students] regularly, you will never gain the insight you need to become the best writing teacher you can be" (p. 27).
As students continue to write and begin to revise, the authors encourage the use of writing groups (not peer editing groups). To get the most out of these groups, the authors advocate pairing writers up with other high school students in different parts of the country (using flipgrid.com to connect them) as well as modeling how to ask for specific feedback from one's writing group (pp. 31-2).
There is a list of suggested ungraded summative assessments--in addition to one-on-one student conferences--given by the authors on page 37.
At the end of the unit, as students are handing in their best drafts, Kittle and Gallagher also require students to submit end-notes answering the following questions: "Which mentor text had the biggest impact on your thinking and writing? Name a skill that you sharpened over the course of this unit. if you had more time to work on this, what would be your next move? Explain some choices you made while creating this draft? Is there something you want me to know about your process that is not evident in the best draft?" (pp. 39-40). This reflection helps students internalize their learning.
Finally, the best draft is graded by the teacher according to the criteria that the students came up with during their discussion on the best-written essay of all the mentor texts they studied (see above). The criteria will likely include aspects such as Scope, Sequence, Development, Craft, and Editing (p. 41-2).
Part 2: Book Clubs
Gallagher and Kittle start the chapter off with this profound point: "[Students in book clubs] talk more because they are actually reading and preparing for discussion" (p. 45). And again, "Telling students that they will begin the year by reading MacBeth—or any complex core text—is nonsensical. None of us would jump into class five rapids if we hadn't been in a kayak in months. But let's be honest, our kids are not even getting into the water. They are standing on shore, watching us paddle" (p. 46). In short, as all high school English teachers know, most students don't actually read the canonical texts assigned to them. Instead of making students pretend, book clubs fire students' interest by giving them choices and them provides accountability with a group of peers. The result of book clubs is that students get actual practice reading, analyzing, and discussing texts.
"Students often regularly see reading as one more task to complete to earn a grade for school, so they seek the easiest way to complete the work and move on" (p. 48). All I can say to that is preach it, sister. Preach it, brother.
Summarizing the introduction and the first two sections of chapter 2 ("Belief 1: We must build reading momentum before students enter book clubs" and "Belief 2: Rigor is not in the book itself, but in the work students do to understand it"), Kittle and Gallagher write, "We believe independent reading and book clubs lead our students to deeper thinking than whole-class novel study" (p. 49).
Kittle and Gallagher's 3rd belief is that "students practice the habits of lifelong readers when they engage in book club conversations" (p. 51). Students naturally like talking and thinking with their peers, an experience which is sorely limited in a whole-class text study, but which is eminently available to students when "four desks are huddled together" (p. 51). In these four-desk groups, "student-driven talk about books... moves beyond the book to life itself" (p. 51).
In the second half of the chapter, Gallagher and Kittle transition to their five essential practices for facilitating book clubs.
"Practice 1: We choose books that are relevant" (p. 52). The main point here is to choose relevant, diverse books, perhaps connected to a core text, perhaps not. A throwaway line was interesting to me: "Students sampled each of these [book club options] to decide which book they most wanted to read"—I was looking for how to facilitate student selections, and having students choose by reading a small section from each choice is a good idea (p. 52). Kittle and Gallagher also suggest book clubs in which students read many different books/essays/writings by the same author (they gave the example of Matt de la Pena).
"Practice 2: We connect readers across schools" (p. 55). Kittle and Gallagher provide the summary of this section for me. "We must emphasize this before moving on: Nothing we did in this monthlong book study elevated our students' engagement more than connecting them to students outside the walls of our own classrooms" (p. 56).
"Practice 3: We balance a volume of practice and close study" (pp. 56-63). There is a lot in this section. First, every day during a month-long book club unit, Kittle and Gallagher bring in a poem, infographic, piece of digital media (like a TED talk), image, artwork, picture book, or article that ties into the book club's theme. "Each day, we shared one text and asked our students to write [for as little as 4 minutes and as long as 10 minutes] in response to it. We did not give them questions to spur this writing. Instead, we asked them to select an idea, a word, a phrase—any hot spot pulled from the text that helped them to deepen their understanding of the idea of [the theme of the book club]" (p. 58).
Both Gallagher and Kittle start the unit by sharing their "finish line question" (AKA the question students will answer at the end of the unit as their summative assessment). For example, here is part of Gallagher's finish line question: "in an essay you will analyze the moves and techniques employed by the author that bring his characters to life. You should share (1) specific moves—with cited page numbers—that you find effective along with (2) explanations as to why you believe these moves are important" (p. 59).
They used weekly focus questions to guide students' thinking: "Week 1: What do we know about these characters? What is said? What is implied? ... Week 3: What trouble is brewing? What does this trouble tell you about big ideas that are emerging? Week 4: What craft movies are you noticing? ... What do you notice about the structure of the book? What decisions were made in the construction of the story?" (p. 61). Also, on page 64, here are more questions: "Week 1: What's worth talking about? Is there a passage that struck you as important in developing a character or a person or an idea in the book so far? Week 2: Name and discuss a big idea that's emerging. [Week 3: a question relating to the theme of the book club.]. Week 4: How has this experience of reading and listening to others changed your thinking?" For this last question, students can fill in these sentence starters: "I used to think ____, but now I think ____. I still think ____, but I'd like to add ____. Others think ____, but I think ____ (p. 73).
Additionally, the authors both "created a one-month calendar that included weekly meetings... We connected our students across classrooms via Flipgrid. We asked them to prepare for discussion by creating two-page spreads. In addition, we asked them to dedicate two pages in their notebooks to capture interesting, intriguing, and provocative language. We wanted students to consciously celebrate words and passages.... [In a short story study at the end of the unit,] we asked, "Can you find the significance of a character in a small detail?" (p. 61).
Kittle had students write alongside the texts she brought in, and then, just before book club discussions, she had them write again, asking them "to revisit their original thinking through the lens of the book they were reading. "[W]riting before talking focused and intensified book club discussions" (p. 63). Pages 73-4 have a list of specific writing prompts: "Find a gossipy moment in the book, identify the turns in the book, discuss a critical decision made in the chapter or the book, capture a shift in your thinking, discuss a minor character of major importance, pick a passage and read it [on Flipgrid.com] the way the author intended it to be read, identify and discuss the most important word in the passage, chapter, or book, annotate poetry."
"Practice 4: We increase student-generated talk" (p . 63).
I love Kittle and Gallagher's idea of having students generate two-page spreads, and for two different purposes. First, "to prepare for discussion by creating two-page spreads in their notebooks... bring[ing] evidence that they had been thinking about their reading" (p. 64). Second, "As we read, we'll be collecting sentences and passages from our books. When you come upon a sentence or a passage that you feel is important or well said, or simply beautiful, you add it to a two-page spread in your notebook" (p. 70). There are myriad student examples of both types of two-page spreads downloadable from Online Resources on Heinemann's website and from PennyKittle.net.
There was a short section on pages 68-70 explaining a mini-unit on reading graphs. Students analyze graphs for (1) what it is saying, (2) what it ISN'T saying, and (3) where it would best fit in the book (this is an act of literary analysis).
"Practice 5: We turn decisions over to students" (p. 74). Here Gallagher and Kittle simply list the decisions students make during a book club unit, from choosing the book they'd like to read to deciding what sentence or passage best demonstrates the author's writing craft.
The authors have a brilliantly simple way of grading the summative assessment of the book club unit, which is an essay analyzing how the author's craft moves are effective. The grading is done in five categories: scope, sequence, development, craft, and editing. It's worth reading pp. 75-6 for a full explanation of each of these categories.
Finally, the "Closing Thoughts" section (pp. 76-9) re-emphasizes that student desire should be the center point of every unit in an English classroom, which is the reason why Kittle and Gallagher like book club units: they stoke the fires of student desire. Also, the authors emphasize that just as, in Donald Murray's words, writing itself is the best teacher of writing, reading itself is the best teacher of reading.
Part 4: Digital Composition
At the beginning of the chapter, Kittle and Gallagher encourage teachers to stumble after them in creating a digital composition unit because it has "ignited energy in our classrooms." What's more, they believe that "the best way to become a critical thinker about digital media is to create in that genre" (p. 117).