Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words

by Shannon Winslow

What was Mr. Darcy’s life like before he met Elizabeth Bennet? – before he stepped onto the Pride and Prejudice stage at the Meryton assembly? More importantly, where is he and what is he doing all the time he’s absent from the page thereafter? And what is his relationship to a woman named Amelia?

With "Fitzwilliam Darcy, in His Own Words," the iconic literary hero finally tells his own story, from the traumas of his early life to the consummation of his love for Elizabeth and everything in between.

This is not a variation but a supplement to the original story, chronicled in Darcy’s point of view – a behind-the-scenes look at the things Jane Austen didn’t tell us. As it happens, Darcy’s journey was more tortuous than she let on, his happy ending with Elizabeth in jeopardy at every turn in his struggle between duty and his heart’s desire, between the suitable lady he has promised to marry and the woman he can't stop thinking about.

Genres: Romance, Audiobook, Historical Romance

261 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 1, 2021

Reviews

[Sheila Majczan · Rating 5 out of 5]

I do have to say that I have read two other stories/series which were versions of P&P presented from Fitzwilliam Darcy’s POV so this premise was not new to me. However, I must add that it has been years since I read those books so it was enjoyable to reread a story with that supposition now. This was a long well-written story.

I particularly loved the prologue. Darcy has a nightmare about what could have been and wakes up to reality and is thankful for the way fate played out events in his life.

In this version most of the story follows canon as to how Darcy and Elizabeth meet, his comments at the Assembly, his disdain of the neighborhood, his opinions about her family and about Jane’s feelings towards Bingley, etc. However, this Darcy’s commitment to the duty his father drilled into his head goes further. The woman, Abigail Lambright, whom his father held up as an example of whom he should marry, is not only available, (with her father and brother long time friends of the Darcys) but she also meets all the attributes on Darcy’s list of what a wife should be. And here you have to read for your self as Darcy does the unexpected but, no, that depends on your POV.

Yes, as a slave to duty Darcy has even more impetus to spurn all the attraction he finds hard to deny towards Elizabeth. However, in this story he finds himself feeling “traitor” to both women at various times with his actions.

There was just enough angst in this tale to keep me turning pages. I recommend this story to all JAFF lovers. I received an ARC of this story. The opinions in this review are all my own.

[J. W. Garrett · Rating 4 out of 5]

“It’s so difficult, isn’t it? To see what’s going on when you’re in the absolute middle of something? It’s only with hindsight we can see things for what they are.” –S. J. Watson, Before I Go to Sleep

Rating: clean, maybe a bit of heat when our couple comes together: Angst level: a mild stressor only for those already familiar with the P&P background story. Winslow added a new element that sent me calling for my salts. Source: received an ARC [4-1-21] from Meryton Press with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions are mine and freely given. Launch date: May 4, 2021: This review may contain *** Spoilers ***

“I have no desire to suffer twice, in reality, and then in retrospect.” –Sophocles, Oedipus Rex

I have read several JAFF stories where we had Darcy’s thoughts and viewpoint. I’ve read Darcy’s letters, diary entries, the P&P story from his POV, and now we have Darcy’s own words as to what was happening in his life during that time period. This felt like he was looking back and telling the reader what happened during that time and what he thought about it. It read like Darcy was writing his own biography. As he explained his actions, he gave the reader a glimpse into his feelings and his longings for a partner in life to help with the load he carried on his shoulders. It was rather sad.

Winslow took it up a notch in the angst category by adding a new character… a female that answered all the societal requirements for the wife of Fitzwilliam Darcy and mistress of Pemberley. Only, why didn’t it feel right? Where was the love? Was marriage just a business transaction where families coldly brought to the table finances, interests, connections, and status?

This was not my favorite mode of telling the Pride and Prejudice story. However, it was well written. The new elements kept my interest. In the canon account, it was surprising the amount of time Darcy was off the page. Where was he and what was he doing during that time period? Well, Winslow brought that to us in a big way.

“Hindsight, I think, is a useless tool. We, each of us, are at a place in our lives because of innumerable circumstances, and we, each of us, have a responsibility (if we do not like where we are) to move along life’s road, to find a better path if this one does not suit, or to walk happily along this one if it is indeed our life’s way. Changing even the bad things that have gone before would fundamentally change who we are, and whether or not that would be a good thing, I believe, it is impossible to predict. So, I take my past experiences… and try to regret nothing. –Drizzt Do’urden” –R. A. Salvatore, Sea of Swords
Posted review: Goodreads 4-23-21

[Carole (in Canada) · Rating 4 out of 5]

My Rating: 4.5*

Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words, gives us a unique glimpse into his thoughts, his heart and his life...as a young man before he loses both his parents; as the Master of Pemberley; and when he meets Elizabeth Bennet and beyond. For in canon, we hear very little from Mr. Darcy. We learn what has shaped him into the man he is and the vulnerabilities he works to conceal. When he makes the decision to find a wife, his father's words come back to guide him...and what a tangled web he weaves himself.

"My early years had taught me, again and again, that to love was to suffer pain. To love was to surrender a part of oneself, to give the object of that love power over one's life - power to wound or to destroy, either by accident or with intent." (quote from the book)

This is a well written story that had me talking back at my Kindle. It was a very one-sided conversation as Mr. Darcy did not heed me. At times, I was downright annoyed with him! He continued on his self-imposed mission to find a wife until someone caused him to veer from his path interrupting his plans...thank goodness!

"The difference between you and me, Will, is that I choose to think for myself. I do not mean to let somebody else, even your high and mighty old man, spoil my fun." (quote from the book)

We are also introduced to Lord Harcourt, a good friend of his father's and one he had esteemed, along with his daughter, Miss Amelia Lambright. Miss Lambright plays a very pivotal role in this story.

"Miss Lambright was not at all the sort of person to inspire violent emotions of any kind." (quote from the book)

Though this story follows canon, we see it from Mr. Darcy's perspective. We are treated to his inner thoughts and believe me, your emotions will be engaged on so many levels. Mine certainly were!

"She irritated me. She confounded me. The simple truth was that despite my best efforts, Elizabeth Bennet interested me. She was like no one else I had ever known." (quote from the book)

I highly recommend this 'supplemental' view to Pride & Prejudice in Mr. Darcy's own words. And the cover is just lovely...sigh.

I received an ARC of this book for a fair and honest review.

[Debbie · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'd been a little concerned, when I read the description of this book, that Ms. Winslow had perhaps bitten off more than I (as a reader) would care to chew. Both a prequel AND retelling of Pride and Prejudice? Anyone who follows my reviews know I'm always annoyed by what I call "chronologies" that just meander through one situation to the next, resolving each in sequence, and that's what I feared here. It could be simply a fictional "autobiography" of Darcy, which would lend itself to that kind of lazy storytelling.

Having read and admired all this author's previous works, I should have known better than to be concerned. This book definitely does not have that problem.

In his own words, Fitzwilliam Darcy tells the reader that his tortured relationship with Miss Elizabeth Bennet was even more fraught than previously known. The reason: Miss Amelia Lambright. We never knew (until now) how close he came to finding himself with a different bride.

Miss Lambright has attributes Miss Bennet lacks. In addition to being perfectly down-to-earth, easy to converse with, and beautiful, she's the daughter of Viscount Harcourt of Ravenshaw (an estate near Pemberley), experienced in running an estate household since the death of her mother, and well-dowered. She's already established in London society and sought after by various potential suitors. No embarrassing relatives. Not argumentative or impertinent.

Darcy's own father, years ago, had suggested that Miss Lambright might be a suitable candidate and discouraged young Fitzwilliam from considering affection when the time would come to choose a potential mate. Compatibility - yes, but love was unnecessary. After Georgiana's close call with Wickham at Ramsgate, Darcy becomes convinced he needs to marry and provide her with a sister. Time to visit Ravenshaw and see if Miss Lambright will suit.

When Darcy arrives, Viscount Harcourt isn't exactly subtle about promoting the match. By the time Darcy leaves, he has been favorably impressed by the man's daughter and all but made his mind up to propose soon.

Then he goes to Hertfordshire to help his friend Bingley.

The story we all know commences, with Darcy pulled back and forth between his fascination for Miss Elizabeth Bennet and his perceived duty to claim Miss Amelia Lambright. Major angst-burger!

Ms. Winslow's writing is just wonderful, with her storyline successfully adding another dimension of drama to my favorite literary romance. Content is clean.

[Ree · Rating 5 out of 5]

An Excellent First-Person Account
I love first-person accounts—if they are well written. This one most brilliantly fits that criteria. Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words is exactly that. It is the telling of Pride and Prejudice from Darcy’s own perspective. However, it is also a variation, or a retelling as it were, because there is a huge twist from canon involved. In Jane Austen’s P&P, we never really know Darcy’s true thoughts and emotions, as her original story is told primarily from Elizabeth’s point of view, although it is not a first-person account. In this enlightening read, Shannon Winslow draws open the curtains to the window of Darcy’s mind, and eventually, his heart for all of us to see.

The book opens with a Prologue in which Darcy awakens from a dream, or perhaps a nightmare, when he turns in his bed to see someone who is Mrs. Darcy next to him—except, it is not Elizabeth Bennet. To Darcy, and to this reader, thank heaven it is only a dream. Knowing this from the beginning takes away what could have been an angst-filled book. For an angst wuss like me, I was grateful.

This Darcy was determined to marry and fulfill his duty by marrying well; someone who would do the Darcy name proud, and someone for whom he could hold affection and respect, but not necessarily love. As such, he undertakes to court his late father’s suggested bride, a Miss Amelia Lambright, “of excellent noble family”. This part of Darcy’s life, and how the events surrounding it unfold, is the main variation to the original Austen story. While he admired and respected her, I found Darcy’s initial true impression of Miss Lambright very telling.

“Then I reminded myself that the idea of anybody’s violently disliking Amelia was unimaginable. And it was true; Miss Lambright was not at all the sort of person to inspire violent emotions of any kind.”

Many of the Darcy diary-styled books that I have read follow canon so closely that for Austen fan-fiction aficionados (myself included) who have read hundreds of variations, one can easily find the book becomes somewhat boring. Because I know the story so well, I find they just become a long, uninspiring narrative. However, in addition to her superior writing skill, which cannot be understated, Ms. Winslow gives this book the added twist that keeps you wanting to turn the next page. It is not just a narrative either. She also adds interesting and pleasing dialogue among the various characters throughout the book. By doing this, it’s not so much a diary, but rather an account by a man verbalizing or recounting his own story. I wasn’t bored for an instant.

This Darcy isn’t always likeable. In fact, I found him very deliberate in his insult to Elizabeth, and in his manipulation of Bingley’s leaving Jane, exercising substantially more influence with Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst in getting his way in this matter. He most definitely does not act in an gentleman-like manner at times. As in all good roads leading to a happy ending, however, he begins to see himself as he truly is. I loved the irony of including “tolerable” in his own description of himself.

“I saw a proud young man with nearly every worldly endowment – health, wealth, property, position, a tolerable person – and yet possessing little of the one essential: the milk of human kindness.”

At times, he even displays some snark, such as during his dance with Elizabeth at the Netherfield ball in response to her goading him to comment about the dance and size of the room. Oh, this made me blink! Shocking, Mr. Darcy!

“As you wish. ‘This seems exactly the right sized room to accommodate the number of couples present.’ Happy?”

Of course, with Elizabeth’s reproofs, dealing with his own guilt towards her AND Miss Lambright, along with some time, he improves his character.

I thoroughly enjoyed this book right from the start with it’s Colin Firth-inspired front cover (artwork by the multi-talented Shannon Winslow herself!). This insightful and unique retelling in Darcy’s own words from the imagination of this brilliant and well-respected author is a worthy and well-pleasing read. I highly recommend this book, as well as her other Austen-inspired works. I believe this is my favorite of hers to date.

I received an ARC of this book from the author and am voluntarily providing a review. I do plan to purchase it for my Kindle library, and especially hope for an audiobook with a good male narrator in the future.

Update: published Kindle version purchased May 4, 2021.

June 26, 2021 - Audiobook
I’m just wild about Harry Frost —as a narrator. Fabulous performance as Fitzwilliam Darcy. Highly recommend the audiobook.

[James S · Rating 4 out of 5]

What was Darcy doing between the two proposals?

5 stars for interesting what-if and 3 stars because thus Darcy was a bit of a cad and really never thought he was. The story kind of dragged on even to the end of the story Darcy still seemed to be Blaise about how he interacted with others.

For instance he didn’t seem care or worry how Georgiana felt about Wickham being a brother-in-law. I couldn’t tell if he was meant to be Blaise or if it was the writing style of the author.

An ok premise but not a page turner.

[Sam H. · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5*

4 stars for well done writing. 3 from me, because I just couldn't get in to it.

This author did a fantastic job portraying Darcy's voice. It couldn't even be said it was overly proud. More like, scared and shut off from the potential to love.

However, it followed classically along canon, that aside from Darcy's thoughts it was same-same.

Most readers will enjoy it!

[Meredith (Austenesque Reviews) · Rating 3 out of 5]

Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy of Derbyshire is Intending to Marry

Rating: 3.5 out of 5 stars

Source: Review Copy from Author

TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice from Mr. Darcy’s POV

THE PREMISE: Paying close attention to the counsel and criteria his father imparted, Fitzwilliam Darcy is ready to do his duty and find a suitable bride to become the next mistress of Pemberley. He is determined to choose a wife with his head and not his heart. But what happens when he finds himself torn between an eminently suitable match and a bewitching miss whom he inexplicably regards…

MY THOUGHTS:

I’ve been a long-time admirer of Pride and Prejudice recountings from Mr. Darcy’s point-of-view, and through the years I’ve read my fair share. I love these types of stories because they depict Mr. Darcy’s thoughts and feelings firsthand, allow readers to spend more time in his head, flesh out the important relationships in his life, and often illustrate what he was doing when he was off page in P&P. In her Mr. Darcy POV tale, Fizwilliam Darcy in His Own Words, Shannon Winslow does all the above and also introduces some new developments and new characters.

These new developments and characters were some of my favorite parts of this Pride and Prejudice tale. I greatly appreciated the groundwork Ms. Winslow laid with Mr. Darcy’s childhood and relationship with his father. More so than I do in Pride and Prejudice, I understood and sympathized with our Mr. Darcy wanting to adhere so strongly to his father’s expectations and the pressures of family duty. In addition, I enjoyed the added tension of Mr. Darcy pursuing another woman (gasp!), Amelia Lambright and his misguided notions about marrying without affection (silly Mr. Darcy, just wait and see how that plays out!). In addition, I thought these new original characters – Amelia, her father, and her brother were all well-drawn and likable. I enjoyed the skillful way Ms. Winslow wove this new storyline into the background of Pride and Prejudice, and how it progressed and impacted Mr. Darcy’s actions throughout the course of his journey.

However, as much as I loved these new elements, there were some aspects of which I wasn’t as fond. In general it felt like the writing was heavier with narration than with sequences of dialogue or action. And since it is a retelling of P&P the narration was often comprised of familiar plot points of the story which most Austenesque/JAFF readers are already acquainted with. In addition, with some of the pivotal scenes – when Mr. Darcy recognizes his true feelings, his first proposal to Elizabeth, and when he finally achieves his happiness – it seemed like some of the action – instead of taking place on the page – was reduced to a half summarized account. I found Mr. Darcy’s style of chronicling the events of his life to be very controlled and stoic. There was more telling than showing at times. I think I would have felt more engaged in this story and Mr. Darcy’s quandaries if some of his firsthand emotions of irrepressible affection, turmoil, and staggering disappointment were conveyed in a more tangible way. But perhaps it was the author’s intent that Mr. Darcy always remain under good regulation and easy resolve.

While I enjoyed the new twists and characters Ms. Winslow introduced to Mr. Darcy’s life, Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words is not one of my mosts favorite story from his perspective. Regardless, I am happy to have read it and I am so thankful to Shannon Winslow for penning so many fantastic Austenesque novels! Readers who love spending time with Mr. Darcy and want to see events from his point-of-view will find a lot to enjoy in this thoughtful and creative tale!

Austenesque Reviews

[Kim · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the story of Pride and Prejudice told in first person from Darcy’s point of view. I’ve read at least 3 other retellings from Darcy’s POV, but they are all different. This one adds a little prequel element as we get to see some of what was going on in Darcy’s life before he ever set foot in Hertfordshire. We also get to see Darcy’s struggle between duty and desire, and how each one governs him at different times. I enjoyed this book, it’s always fun to imagine what Darcy was doing when he wasn’t on the pages of P&P.

[Barb · Rating 5 out of 5]

I listened to this book on audible. Harry Frost performed the book and did an amazing job. The story of P&P from Darcy’s perspective would normally provide little in new information, but in this version the author created a new character as a potential marriage partner for Mr. Darcy. Darcy, acting as the dutiful son, seeks an appropriate marriage partner as described to him by his father prior to his death. Amelia asks for some time to consider Darcy’s offer, so the understanding is kept quiet and doesn’t become an actual engagement. Then Darcy meets Elizabeth and his arrangement with Amelia adds to his torment in determining the partner of his future life.

[Les · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is an immensely readable book. Completely from Darcy's perspective we learn about his life leading up to P&P and his thoughts on marriage before and after meeting Elizabeth Bennet he was more than happy to settle for a marriage of convenience to an appropriate woman and literally would have had fate not gotten in his way.

if the mere idea of Darcy considering anyone but Lizzy makes you twitch you probably should give this a hard pass

[Suzan Lauder · Rating 4 out of 5]

Perhaps this book should be called Fitzwilliam Darcy in Jane Austen's Words because there was too much reiteration of canon without much of an attempt rewording in Austen's style as could have easily been done. The novel did have original work as part of the story arc. Editing was quite good.

This review will not include a synopsis or book report format, rather, it's a technical review of the parts of a book that niggle at the reader causing stars to be dropped.

The plot was full canon with an added prequel, thus it was a complete story arc. Pace was on the slow side at times, with sections of summaries in the narrative that were tiresome, but for the most part, the book was consistent and interesting.

The book was burdened further with an abundance of telling and little showing. We need to know D's reaction, how he's feeling. Canon didn't tell us that, and though the author did a bit of showing, this book missed out on that aspect in many scenes.

Although there was a prequel and new characters, too little was new, and too much was canon in canon words. In the odd case, use of Austen's words was important, and I commend the author for making that choice. However, in this reviewer's opinion, it was done too much in the opening scenes of the canon section of the novel, which happens a lot in JAFF. Everyone knows those opening scenes. Get by them as fast as you can.

Point of view was first person, which was executed with care and consistency throughout.

Language was suitable for an Austenesque book, with far fewer than the usual number of lapses into non-Regency words and phrases for a JAFF book: only "taken aback" and acerbic were noted. Non-British uses were "I will," "We will," and toward. There was a dearth of really big words, so the book was comfortable to read. Spelling errors included Mrs. Young and distain/distained; a homophone was roll for role.

Punctuation errors included use of single hyphens with spaces around them in lieu of em-dashes, a missing end quotation mark, and an extra comma between subject and verb.

Prose was good and suited the characters well, however, I found a quotable line in this book.

Dramatic tension was excellent, mostly because of the addition of the new characters who added a conflict dimension that wasn't seen in canon. The author was clever to avoid changing canon with their presence, though.

Scene-setting was well done since the author chose to do more than Austen in terms of descriptions of people and places. This enhanced the quality of the reading pleasure.

Characterization was one of the better parts of this book because each character was strongly drafted and consistent, including the new characters from the author's imagination. We were sympathetic to the lead character of Mr. Darcy, who was standout compared to canon.

The cover includes original artwork by the author, and in this reviewer's opinion, it's a fantastic breath of fresh air that catches the eye and drags it over to say "Buy me!" You can't ask for better than that. He's terrifically handsome, reminding me of Elliott Cowan in the eyes. Works for me!

This book would have benefited from a snappier handling of sections of canon and more showing versus telling, but otherwise, it's a decent read. Shannon Winslow is no babe in the woods as a writer. She has some fantastic novels behind her to support her in writing a challenge such as this one. The addition of the excellent new characters in the prequel and the fill section during the winter of canon added not only some interest, but also some dramatic tension that wasn't in canon. This isn't merely a rehash.

Disclaimer: I'm a Jane Austen Fan Fiction author, and some might say that means this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. They are written for both the reader and the author. Shannon Winslow is a friend.

[Teresita · Rating 5 out of 5]

Near miss

I found very interesting this variation from Darcy's POV. It allows us to see how he thought and how he changes, as well as how the story may have developed.

[Barbara K. · Rating 4 out of 5]

This Pride and Prejudice variation does what a lot of readers have said they wanted. It presents the original story almost intact, but from Mr. Darcy's point of view, and with some added material invented to explain what is going on in his life at the time he meets and comes to know Elizabeth Bennet. And what a difference that makes! It's written in first person, which of course makes it seem more personal, and indeed it shares the kinds of thoughts we don't often share with others, so it feels intimate. On the other hand, Darcy comes off as someone who has trouble being in touch with his feelings. They are upon him before he realizes it. It takes him some time and introspection to realize when he's fallen in love. He gradually learns to not place so much importance on social station, connections, and wealth. But his sense of honor is a deeply ingrained quality, and nearly costs him his future happiness anyway.

[Mary · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this version of the Darcys. A good perspective from Mr Darcy.

[Anne · Rating 2 out of 5]

SPOILERS IN REVIEW


Just boring. I did not like the whole plot of Darcy almost being engaged.

[Katie · Rating 5 out of 5]

In a November 1814 letter to her niece, Jane Austen wrote that “nothing can be compared to the misery of being bound without love.” She had brilliantly illustrated her point with many unenviable couples in her novels serving as warnings of what her protagonists should strive to avoid. Likewise, readers found in her most famous story, Pride and Prejudice, a hero dutifully resigned to such misery and a heroine determined to evade it. Prolific Austenesque author Shannon Winslow explores that hero’s path from misery to love in her latest Pride and Prejudice adaptation, Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words.
Fitzwilliam Darcy believes that he is destined to fulfill his familial duty by securing a society-approved mate for himself and proper mistress of Pemberley—and by choosing prudently, hoping for mutual respect at best, and knowing that love was neither desirable nor wise. “My early years had taught me, again and again, that to love was to suffer pain. To love was to surrender a part of oneself, to give the object of that love power over one’s life – power to wound or to destroy, either by accident or with intent.” (189) Therefore, Darcy resolutely heeds his late father’s advice by discreetly selecting a decorous lady from a suitably wealthy and consequential family, ever mindful of his family’s expectations and his own responsibilities. “To choose the wrong path, to be careless of the way, to neglect minding every step, was to invite calamity of a kind most painful and permanent.” (171)
After George Wickham nearly absconds with Darcy’s young sister at Ramsgate, Darcy finds himself shaken to his core by the barely avoided catastrophe and questions his own wisdom. Wishing to counteract his tendency to brood, he seeks diversion with his cheerful friend Charles Bingley at Netherfield Park. “In part, I had come to Netherfield hoping for a cure.” (1546)
Unbeknownst to Darcy, however, his dutiful resolve is about to become untenable once he encounters the saucy smile, fine eyes, and pert opinions of the incomparable Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Their charged interactions have the potential to further unravel his determination as he tentatively steps off his sensible path and veers toward a life he’d never imagined might be his. Far too soon, though, reality invades Darcy’s hopeful dreams to remind him of his prior obligations. As he settles “one final contest of will versus inclination, of duty versus desire” can he summon the courage to choose the path that follows his heart? (3968)
It is rare to read a first-person narration from Darcy’s viewpoint, and it felt like we were having a fireside chat as he explained his perspective of all of the events that transpired not only in Pride and Prejudice but also during those previously silent times when he was away from Elizabeth. Hence, the story was at times quite unputdownable. My only frustration was that I was hoping for a bit more romantic yearning from him, but he was far too true to his stoic character to melt from Elizabeth’s presence overmuch. He also felt honor bound by his other commitments, however tenuous they may have been. Still, I was quite content with his cerebral musings about how he’d fallen in love without suspecting or allowing it and was grateful for his loss of control. As he said, “My happier outcome depended on the slimmest thread of unlikely circumstances being precariously strung together without error. At any one of a dozen junctures, the course of my life could have carried me in a completely different direction.” (109)
Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words provides an enjoyable opportunity for Pride and Prejudice enthusiasts to have a cozy tête-à-tête with their favorite fictional gentleman.
https://austenprose.com/2021/07/26/fi...

[Ashley · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow! This book is phenomenal! It is unique, intriguing, and so much more! Whenever I picked up "Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words", I was whisked back in time, and went on such an emotional journey with this story.

I absolutely love each book of Ms. Winslow's that I have read thus far! She has such a beautiful way of storytelling, and her love and passion for what she is writing is so clear. Her respect for Jane Austen, as well as Ms. Austen's original book is also so lovely, and Ms. Winslow seamlessly blends events and characters from the original novel with those of her own creation. From before the events of "Pride and Prejudice", to some during, to after, as the reader, I was pulled in from the very first page to the last, and had such a difficult time putting this book down. Even though I know that Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are each other's happily-ever-after, many moments had me holding my breath to see how everything would work out, and many other moments had me simply smiling.

This book is told from the perspective of Mr. Darcy, and I truly felt like I was sitting beside him, listening to him tell me his story. We get to see what others expect of him, and how many expect him to act and behave in a certain manner. His head and heart are often in battle with one another, and it is so intriguing to really see so much from Darcy's point of view. We see how his past, his family life, as well as his other relationship's really impact him in one way or another. It is so interesting to see many events unseen during "Pride and Prejudice" that involve Darcy as well. Each and every moment is so specific, and really provides an insight into his character.

If you enjoy "Pride and Prejudice" and / or anything related to Jane Austen, I highly recommend this book! It had me turning the pages into the early hours of the morning to see what would happen next, and I did not want to put this book down. I can't wait to see what Ms. Winslow writes next!

Thank you so much to the author, Shannon Winslow, for sending me an ARC of this book, I so enjoyed it! All opinions expressed in this review.

[Elizabeth S · Rating 5 out of 5]

The author dives deeply into Darcy's mind to elaborate upon his thoughts throughout the whole of the Pride and Prejudice story. His very staid, rigidly formal, relentlessly correct demeanor, and rather stiff comportment are perfectly expressed. It's amazing how much insight Shannon Winslow has into his character, from the early instruction of his father, to his multiple responsibilities, including that of his sister, to his acceptance of his lot. Elizabeth Bennet throws a monkey wrench into the mental wheels of all his previous beliefs. She does not conform to all the standards he's been programmed to require, and it fascinates him.

Darcy had previously decided to court Amelia Lambright and was at the point of asking for her hand when Ramsgate entered the picture. He flew from Pemberley and arrived in time to stop Georgiana from ruining her life. Several other providential events interfered Darcy's courtship of Amelia.

With the exception of the courting of, and proposal to, Amelia, events follow the original in sequence, though Darcy does not tell Bingley about his error in judgment about Jane Bennet until near the end. We are inside Darcy's mind, where all of his thoughts and emotions are elaborated upon. The only fly in the ointment is Amelia Lambright, although it's easy to imagine the outcome.

Shannon Winslow's prose is elegant, the plot believable, and very enjoyable to read.

[Fenna Edgewood · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book! It absolutely made me feel as if I were inside Darcy's head. Uncomfortable and awkward at times, but that's exactly how it should be!

Previous reviewers seem to be complaining that this rendition is not the "true" Darcy, but really, I wonder how many times they've read their Austen because the Darcy of P&P is by no means a saint. He can at times act like a cad. He does indeed have dislikeable qualities. If he did not, why would Elizabeth have rejected him the first time?

Every step Winslow's Darcy took was logical. His motivations and his reasonings were so suitable for his character. Nothing rang false about this book at any point, nor did he treat any woman in this book with disrespect. If you think the canon Darcy was a suave romantic, then perhaps you won't agree, but to me the canon Darcy was certainly not always sure of his own mind or heart. He could also be downright crochety.

I do not normally read Austen spin-offs. The only few I've read, I did not enjoy. This was altogether different. The writing was excellent and smooth, in no way contrived. I read a wide variety of romance and in this case I set the other book I was in the middle of aside, it was that engrossing.

I loved feeling like I was reading a "Bonus Austen" book, something a reader could easily see her having imagined and written.

[Amanda Kai · Rating 5 out of 5]

Have you ever wondered what Pride and Prejudice would have been like if it had been written from Darcy’s point of view instead of Elizabeth’s? Shannon Winslow gives us a wonderful insight into Darcy’s mind during the events that take place in the novel through her story, “Fitzwilliam Darcy, in his own words.” Written in first-person voice in a style that wonderfully captures Austen’s narrative, we see firsthand how Darcy’s own pride and prejudice nearly ruined every chance of happiness for him, and his journey to overcome his inherent faults in order to find true love.

The addition of Miss Amelia Lambright, an original character, as a contender for Darcy’s wife, made an interesting sub-plot. I also enjoyed seeing what happened to Darcy during the “gaps” when he is not present in the original book.

If you love Pride and Prejudice stories that stay true to the canon while filling in the missing pieces of the timeline, then you’ll love Ms. Winslow’s original take on this beloved classic.

[PhyllisRBooks · Rating 5 out of 5]

5.0 out of 5 stars This has to be one of my favorite P & P adaptations!!

From Darcy’s POV, this story fills in the storyline that we have longed for...of Georgiana’s trouble with Wickham, what Darcy feels about Bingley’s infatuation with Jane, his struggle with caring for Elizabeth and more that I will not mention...this book fills in the storyline while also being true to P & P and its writing style. I came away from this book with a sigh, satisfied that it gave me more story, more of the beloved characters that feel so real, with a greater attachment to them.

This novel is also free of bad language and inappropriate scenes. It is suitable for teens and up.

I received this book from the publisher/author free of charge with no expectation of a positive review.

[Tina · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was really happy to see this book get published because while we have some we almost never get to read Pride and Prejudice from Darcy's point of view. We get some backstory with Mr. Darcy's father on how to choose a wife and damn that was some advice. This ultimately gets Darcy to think about offering for a Miss Amelia Albright and then he actually does it but she doesn't immediately accept him. It was great to see him agonize over Elizabeth and Amelia (though let's face it Amelia never stood a chance).

This book was great and I can't wait to read any other Pride and Prejudice books that Shannon Winslow puts out in the future.

[Sheryl Hart · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really enjoyed getting his Point of View. It was very interesting to learn about his early life with his parents. I honestly felt bad for him and Georgiana. I also liked how it was Amelia who broke it off and that Darcy was not to blame at any point except with Jane and Bingley. It also shows his growth of friendship with Bingley. I rate this five out of five stars since it entertained me during two airplane flights and one time when we were waiting in the airport and waiting for people to come back from an outing. I finshed this on the tenth of Janurary and started it on the twenty-seventh of December of 2024.

[Clare English · Rating 5 out of 5]

I recieved an ARC of this book and this is my honest unbiased opinion.
Fitzwilliam Darcy In His Own Words is the classic story of Pride and Prejudice told from Mr Darcy's point of view. It feels like he is talking directly to the reader - starting with a nightmare of him waking up and finding that his wife is not Elizabeth but someone else. The book takes a look back at his boyhood with his parents and how his relationship with Wickham started and then ended. You learn of events that took place before he met Elizabeth and then his take on what happened when they did meet. You find out what Darcy was up to when he was not present during the original story. And most importantly for me you see the impact Elizabeth has on him, slowly but surely, as he learns to recognise his flaws and become a better man who finds the importance of love.
As Pride and Prejudice is my all time favourite book I've always been wary of other authors adding to the story and writing prequels/sequels that might ruin it for me - however this book has totally blown me away. I enjoyed every single part of this book and I think the style was a perfect fit to go with the original. Even though I know how the story ultimately ends this book still had me hooked to find out what was going to happen next.
Colin Firth is my Mr Darcy and as I was reading this book it was his voice I could hear in my mind narrating.
If I could give this more than 5 stars I would. It ticked all the boxes for me. This will be something I will be reading again and again as much as I re-read the original. If you love P&P you will love this!

[Mrs H · Rating 5 out of 5]

Satisfying take on Darcy's point of view

Another beautifully crafted tale from Ms Winslow, recounting the story from canon from Darcy's first person perspective. But had that been all it would not have gripped As it did, the author cleverly incorporating Darcy's on and off pursuit, in the guise of his former dutiful self, of a different woman, a suitable match, thus throwing his transformation through Elizabeth's prejudiced rejection into even sharper relief. Clever! Highly recommended.

[Rachel · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lovely Austen style book

I thought this book was so well done. She captured the Austen style of writing, and even though we know the outcome of the story it was fresh and interesting from Darcy’s point if view. It really helped bring him more to life and explain the why behind the behavior and actions. Definitely recommend it

[Liz H · Rating 5 out of 5]

An insightful look into Darcy's mind and memories. Here we come to see how Darcy's objection to Elizabeth's lack of status, family connections and fortune really is "right and just" by the mores of his time. I received an ARC of this book. The opinions are my own.

[Terri Clark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Delightful!

Ms. Winslow is always a favorite! Darcy had to wrestle with his feelings and the demands of honor, and I thought it was well and delicately balanced. Looking forward to another!

[Linda Franklin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Delightful perspective

The addition of an unknown marital prospect to the canon, grafted onto the existing P&P events and words, is truly charming. Darcy's own thoughts, worries, and triumphs are beautifully done, creating a unique variation.