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Winner of the 1st Fixi Novo Malaysian Novel Contest

All around Kuala Lumpur, people are being found dead in their homes, their bodies completely drained of blood.The victims have nothing in common...except they were all suspiciously wealthy.

At a crime scene, Inspector Khairul encounters the enigmatic Detective Fara Astaka, an occult investigator who reveals to him the hidden supernatural side of Kuala Lumpur. Someone is manipulating the city's toyols, turning them from mischievous thieves to vicious killers!

There is a company right at the heart of this: TOYOLS ‘R' US. While it appears cheery on the surface, there are sinister schemes at work behind its attractive promotions and free umbrella deals. How is the company connected to the murders? And can Khairul and Fara catch the killer?

249 pages, Paperback

Published May 21, 2021

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6 reviews
February 23, 2023
Written by Terence Toh, this novel is the winner of the first Fixi Novo Malaysian Novel Contest. The plot, at least by the blurb on the back of the book follows Inspector Khairul and Detective Fara Astaka,an occult investigator that reveals the supernatural side of Kuala Lumpur and the series of murders he’s investigating were done by a the supernatural entity known as Toyols from the Nusantara myth. While true, that’s just a part of it as the novel is actually an ensemble featuring several different pov characters; Ismail and Putri, a married couple introduced into the toyol service by his estrange cousin. Jing, a university student who is caught between a rock and a hard place upon learning that she’s pregnant and her “rowdy” course mate Munira who is determine to help her during her trying times.

Despite opening with Inspector Khairul performing a wellness check that soon links back to a string of murders that he’s investigating, the novel favors or rather more interested in the narrative of the other characters, Ismail and Jing whose plot are directly closer to the Toyol ‘R’ Us Company (a parody of Toys R Us if you clearly can’t tell) while Inspector Khairul’s investigation remains on the fringe at least until he met Detective Fara. Main reason being is that the novel’s main theme is non-marital pregnancy and the issues surrounding it, i.e - abortion, social outcast, forced marriage, baby dumping and now exploitation as toyols are made out of dead fetus. Despite it being the main theme however, it never went beyond discussing it and left it conclusively on the fence while the “out” it try to give - “these young mothers should be supported, not judge” is tacky and is in the same spirit of “what if everyone just love one another and there won’t be anything bad happening”. And that’s a big issue when they whole book revolves around it.

Character wise, they’re serviceable in the same fashion that characters in a typical horror movie are serviceable. There are progression but it’s hardly one would call a traditional arc. The only concern that I think should've been highlighted more is with Jing, whose character is written to be endearing especially with what she’s going through but her journey is just her digging herself deeper and deeper that you realize that this could be the start of a budding unhealthy relationship between her, her wants and everyone else. Her journey ends with her getting her cake and eating it too is just terrible.

As for the writing, the only other writings of Mr Terence Toh I read were from the KL Noir and Hungry In Ipoh anthology which are also published by Fixi Novo but I never had much of an impression for his prose at all. Here on the other hand, the novel does start in this quirky fanfiction`issh style of prose:

If there was anything Inspector Khairul hated, it was when people died at home. It was an irrational feeling, and he knew it. In some ways, after all, that was the most fitting place to die. But that was the exact reason Khairul hated it.


But as you read on, the prose simply devolved into that of a normal windowpane prose from your typical YA novel.

There's also a chekhov's gun that Mr Toh introduced and successfully fired which as far as writing goes, Mr Toh is competent writer that understand storytelling techniques, if nothing else.

The issue I had with the writing however is the usage of Malay language mixed in here. It’s like picking up a Japanese novel that has been translated into English and still have the characters speaking or shouting in Japanese. The novel already felt authentically Malaysian through the various tidbits and small worldbuilding but adding in Malay mixed in here just drag down the novel another level into amature status.

The YA aspect is what really carried it for me especially when compared to most of FIXI NOVO’s 2edgy4you type of output in place for mature/pulp reading. It felt like a silly homemade comic I did with secondary school friends where we blend several elements together like a “pokemon battle” in the middle of this book. Though not much beyond it. So, a 2 out 5. It's closer to a 1 than it is to a 3.
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747 reviews141 followers
October 7, 2021
I remember now why I stopped reading FIXI books. I'm no longer excited at the YA genre. Now, to be fair FIXI never said their books are strictly YA but a lot of their readers are and their books, I feel, reflect that readership. Not that there's anything wrong with that! It's just not for me.

TOYOLS R US is in the vein of Laurell K. Hamilton's Anita Blake series of books or Jim Butcher's Dresden Files. These are urban fantasies where the supernatural live side by side with the 'normal' people. Except in Toyols R Us, the existence of an occult underground business is still on a "recommended by a friend" kind of deal.

There is a business that sells toyols to interested individuals who want to get rick quick. Except that these people end up dead with all their blood drained out and their toes missing. Classic death-by-toyol. But why would the creatures turn against their masters? And who is behind TOYOLS R US anyway?

Although it's an occult-crime-thriller-fantasy, TOYOLS R US really revolves around the stigma of teenage pregnancies and abortion. That gets lost a little in the midst of the police procedurals and murders by exsanguination but since toyols are purpotedly created from aborted fetuses, that is the crux of the entire story. An important subject to be discussed but one that is not fully explored in this book except for the chills and thrills.

As stated above, I feel that this book is perfect for the younger reader (younger than me that is, because I am old). It's not too heavy and the story is fun but it's nothing I haven't read before. Except that it is set in Malaysia. Not many occult crime thrillers set in Malaysia, I don't think. Maybe Detective Fara will appear in a sequel seeing as how she says she is kept busy with all the occult crimes going on, unbeknownst to the public.

My rating reflects my bias and jadedness and not the quality of the book. Your mileage may vary.
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585 reviews7 followers
September 16, 2021
The first time that I set my eyes on the brightly coloured cover and saw the catchy title, I knew I had to check it out. After reading the synopsis, I knew I had to have it. Thanks to Kedai Fixi giving out one free book if you had your vaccinations, I got this despite being on a "book buying ban".

I knew the book was going to be interesting, but I didn't know how interesting! It was funny (yes, I'm a sucker for puns), it was pretty rad with how fresh the idea was and it wasn't as dark as I thought it would be. I should've known - the cover was a hint!

This book ticked all the right boxes for me. It was hard for me to put it down, even though currently I'm really into embroidery and am deep into my latest project. I really didn't expect the feminism element at all, which I truly appreciate.

If there was anything I didn't particularly enjoy it was all the icky ugly parts of Malaysians and Malaysia. But honestly I think the story felt more real because Terence actually mentioned them.

I usually don't like series, but somehow reading this, I was kind of disappointed that it wasn't part of a series. It gave me the vibe of Inspector Singh series, but with supernatural elements. Would be nice to have the police chasing after other criminals involved in the occults, maybe with different hantus.

By the way, I feel like I just learned a lot of Malaysian curse words from reading this one book, hahah.

Another book by a Malaysian that I really enjoyed. Wait a minute... I just realized... The last book I read by a Malaysian that I enjoyed had a toyol too 😅
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425 reviews9 followers
September 23, 2021
As if the title wasn’t clickbait material already, here’s a snapshot of the ingredients that make up the book: Dead bodies drained of blood, toyols and detectives, add some dad jokes and puns to the mix, and lo and behold, you’re in for a delightful read!

I typically stay away from the occult, and anything horror that can make me squeamish, I actively avoid. Toyols would fall into the category but the way they are presented in the book was satisfying to me. There were some grisly parts in the book, don’t get me wrong, but I thought justified.

I loved how (for the lack of better word) “1Malaysia” the characters were, and the fact that Terence didn’t shy away from the more controversial ‘lapisan masyarakat’ made the story seem more realistic and wholesome. There wasn’t a specific character that I was rooting for, but I’m glad that there also wasn’t a character that I particularly despise which could potentially affect my enjoyment of reading the book. Not even the perpetrator of the crime, except for the needless deaths they caused.

The story did not exactly have the element of mystery to it, but it did build up naturally until the whole case was revealed. It was also fast-paced, no words were wasted on unnecessary things which kept the story fresh and interesting from the very beginning.

I have to point out that I DID enjoy the lame puns and the social commentary on certain things that most rakyat can relate to as well. And most of all I appreciate how very Malaysian it was. Read it, and you’ll understand.
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313 reviews5 followers
October 30, 2021
Dari cover dah tahu buku ini akan penuh dengan fun, funny and colorful plot. Ada juga mesej sosial sempat diselit oleh penulis. Sengal betul Khairul dengan puns dia. Harap dapat lihat lagi gabungan Khairul dan Fara dalam next book.
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22 reviews
August 8, 2022
Wanted to join #FixiNovoMalaysianNovelContest initially. So I checked out the two books listed. But hey after a while, I lost motivation but purchased this book nevertheless because the blurb was greatly intriguing!

Here is my biggest 'personal' problem. I expected something else. I thought the book would be a psychological war between police who focused his search on human, and the criminal that weaponise toyol. Something like death note. It turned out that this story is about police that discovered the supernatural side of Malaysia, where people can buy and customize their own toyol, and later track down a criminal that made the toyol turned savage and sucked their owners to death.

Overall, it's a light and enjoyable read. I love how the author introduced each set of characters separately, with different time and setting, and then linked them with each other. I couldn't guess how these characters would cross each other's path, and so it was fun to see. Also, the idea of a world where big companies produce toyols is pretty absorbing. Though lowkey, I think it could be developed better.

Character wise, i'm not into the main two. Their characters doesn't have that woah factor to me. But i do find the side characters interesting. Not one puns nor jokes made me giggle, though it was good. Probably not my kind of humour.

Plot wise, I had those moment where I waited for more, but there's none. I had hoped the book would be packed with 'breath-holding' moment in which I had to hold myself back from peeking at the ending. But again, this turned out to be a light read.

To sum up, it's not my kind of book, it left little to no impact, but enjoyable nevertheless! Managed to change my view on toyol from something gross to cute, too
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Author 14 books45 followers
May 29, 2021
I got this book from Kedai Fixi. Redeemed it free by showing my Covid-19 vaccination card (completed on March 31, yay!). Wanted to purchase this book, but the other one I picked had a higher price tag.

Toyols ‘R’ Us by Terence Toh is the winning entry of Fixi Novo’s first Malaysian novel contest. The cover design is bright and cheerful and is a parody of Toys “R” Us, which perfectly reflects the content. As a whole, the novel is a satirical take, a parody, of contemporary Malaysia. From references of corrupt politicians to keyboard warriors, Malaysians can relate to (and groan at) these.

The jumps between groups of characters initially don’t seem related, but the author skillfully weaves their disjointed subplots and perspectives to eventually intersect and come together to tell the whole story. Despite the serial murders and the investigation to solve them, despite the creepy undead fetuses (which are what toyols are made of) and the process to create them, the novel doesn’t take itself too seriously, and it’s refreshing. The pace, in particular, is a steady buildup from a leisurely pace (bersahaja, in my language), to a brisk walk, to a jog, to a run, to a sprint, to a breakneckspeedwhatthehellisthattoyoldoingchasingme – you get my drift. I was almost breathless at the climax. Ehem.

Anyway.

The attempts at wordplay and punchlines are mostly cringey, and the novel sometimes tries too hard. It uses the most obvious tropes of current social issues, (one particular issue is imported from the US, along with the character). But when it doesn’t try too hard, and whenever the story takes over without intrusion, this work is by far one of the best English novels Novo has produced. It has all story elements almost down to a tee: a good, steady pace buildup, instances of foreshadowing that do not feel contrived, a high stake (solving a string of murders and preventing further deaths), plausible motives all around, including (and especially) the villain, plenty of conflicts with increasing difficulty in reaching the climax, and an overall satisfying resolution.

The novel is purely plot-driven, so there is no character development. Although, there is definitely character progress. Just no development. Almost all of them try at wordplay at least once, even during tense situations, which makes it feel like a blooper reel of sorts. Oh, and there's a toyol fight scene that is totally Pokemon, including how they heal the toyols after the fight! Two of the main cast become a couple, and I’m pleasantly surprised at finding out which couple. Woulda been disappointed if it was between another couple (because cliché). The revelation explains one of the character’s motives, and it doesn’t feel like a plot device, or worse, an effort at pandering.

I’m not kidding about the quality of work. I mean, the novel works. I hope the author will produce more novels. With proper and well-directed promotion, Toyols ‘R’ Us can sell internationally. After all, Westerners want to read something exotic and different from our region, and this novel can steal their hearts. And maybe some banknotes and jewelry, since the toyols are apparently trained to recognize 9 different currencies.

Congratulations to Terence Toh for the much-deserved win, and to Fixi Novo for publishing this gem that I hope will be turned into a movie. My only gripe is that I almost turned back to the bookstore to claim the free umbrella. Sheesh.
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18 reviews
September 26, 2021
"Please lah. This is Malaysia. Our drains are so dirty, Pennywise also will choke and die."

Toyols R Us by @terrence is a distinctively Malaysian story, from the characters, their traits and the depiction of Malaysian society in general.

The story starts with Inspector Khairul, a police officer investigating a string of bizarre murders where the victims were found drained of all blood on their body, the sole harm to their body, a missing toe. As he investigates further, he meets a mysterious women named Fara Astaka, an occult investigator who reveals that their is a supernatural side to the city of Kuala Lumpur.

While the story is plot driven, the pace in which the various characters were introduced was not confusing and the connection to Toyols R Us company and Inspector Khairul and Fara's investigation was linked well.The motivation of the characters in the story on why they chose to procure a Toyol was also believeable.

The usage of Toyols (reanimated fetuses who are charmed by Black Magic to steal and cause mischief on behalf of their owner) as part of the main plot was unique and the way in which the marketing and concept behind the company called Toyols R Us in the story made sense.

There is also an emphasis on the debate of abortion, weaved into the story, between pro life and pro choice and of the stigma and struggles that unwed mothers go through in Malaysia. I think this was brilliantly done and took me by surprise as it added a layer of realism to the whole plot and story.

Overall the comical undertone of the characters and plot made it a fun read and gave a good balance to the narrative of the story. Definitely recommended, for a fun read, especially if you like an occult crime thriller with some "cute" Toyols thrown in.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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403 reviews4 followers
May 2, 2023
3.5 stars

The first thing that grabbed me was the bright and colourful book cover. The book was a quick, fun read that was most entertaining!

The story is about toyols, mythical supernatural entities in the mythology of South East Asia. Every Malaysian would likely know about these creatures which are commonly used to rob people of their riches. But here, the toyols have gone rogue and started killing their owners.

This story puts a fun spin on it and I found myself laughing out loud many times while reading it 😁
Dad jokes, bad puns, quirky characters, a veritable smorgasbord of toyol types/categories. So enjoyable!

As funny as it was though, the very sad reality is that a toyol is formed from dead foetuses. So not only is there a terrible loss to a mother, there is also the second blow of your dead baby being restored to an undead life. While some may argue that Terence Toh did not delve deeply enough into the topics of unwed mothers, abortion, baby dumping, societal judgement, I felt he handled this aspect of the story sensitively and sensibly in the context of this book.

The book was fast paced and it kept my attention. I liked the characters of Khairul and Fara (the Mulder and Scully analogy was spot on, if reversed). I'd definitely want to read more about their occult adventures. Another likeable character, for me, was Datin Viola. Her toyol tea party brought to mind the Mad Hatter and the March Hare 🤣 🎩🐰

My biggest hope is that there truly is Occult Investigation Unit in Bukit Aman.
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87 reviews16 followers
April 29, 2023
ToyolsRUs was the winner of Fixi Novo's first Novel Writing Competition. And that is a much deserved win I would say.

I knew the book was going to be funny. And true enough, it had me in stitches at some parts. It also had some really gruesome details and they are still etched in my mind. But what needs to be highlighted is the characterization, the plot, the seamless connections made between the characters, the plot twists, the climax ( it was very movie like and i can actually imagine ot on screen)and i must say this, the TOYOLS!

The author has clearly researched about these supernatural characters in detail. Their appearance, their abilities, their weaknesses... i was in awe. I mean, which Malaysian havent heard about toyols kan? But this book was brilliant. I kinda felt i learnt so much about toyols thanks to Terence and ToyolsRUs...

I think it was really clever, the way Terence weaved the story about a Kuala Lumpur mud deep in Toyols and how different our lives would be with these little creatures. I shudder yet i am intrigued. And this book would sit well with Malaysians because its so very MALAYSIAN in nature. Descriptions, settings, names and the list can go on.

In a nutshell, the book was fantastic, a well deserved winner TBH.
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Author 32 books178 followers
August 31, 2021
Toyols 'R' Us starts off like quite a normal police procedural then veers quickly into magic. Inspector Khairul is at his wit's end trying to solve a series of deaths (murders, he thinks) that only have one apparent connection: a hacked off big toe and a body drained of blood. Elsewhere in Klang Valley, Harun introduces his cousin Ismail to a secret that can solve all his monetary woes: toyols. On the surface, Toyols 'R' Us aims to help people secure their financial future, albeit in not-quite-legal ways - but what is their super enigmatic owner hiding behind his cheery demeanour?

If you've ever read one of Terence Toh's short stories, you know exactly what to look forward to in his debut novel: an utterly Malaysian story guided by and wrapped in punnery and wordplay. And since puns tend to be somewhat divisive, you may end up laughing your head off... or rolling your eyes so hard it hurts. I think I did a little of both.

In between the wit and the fun, Toh doesn't gloss over the darker side of Klang Valley. There's that one-upmanship, the constant competition to be better, richer. The rampant corruption and cronyism. Religious extremism and cyber trolling. Unwanted pregnancies and abortion. Loan sharks and gangs. In some ways, it feels a little like an extension of the KL Noir series. Both obliquely and blatantly, Toh seems to include an underlying commentary on the social issues that plague Malaysian society today.

The ending lends itself to a possible sequel - and I would definitely pick up the next Inspector Khairul & Detective Fara novel if that materialises!

It's not perfect. There's a little more POV changing than I prefer, and also a bit of an almost romance (as in, it's set up to be romantic I think but isn't quite sure what it is) that felt rather awkwardly staged. But these are really rather minor preferences that don't detract from the enjoyment of the novel as a whole.

I absolutely loved this gem, the winner of Fixi Novo's inaugural Malaysian Novel Contest. A deserving win indeed!
4 reviews
March 23, 2024
I love how accessible this was, how relatable it is. That it didn’t have preachy vibes, of having the moral ground. I like that not all of the characters are good people and that’s fine. I also love how it shows that anyone, including those who are mostly good people can be swayed. And not only is it because of their morality, but also because of the circumstances they’re in that pushes them. The morally gray characters are what made the story interesting along with the magical realism. Which also made a certain popular series blow up. And of course, broaching the taboo of sex education and the LGBTQ+ community and also abortion and reproductive rights was a breath of fresh air. And absolutely loved the comic ending!

The only downside I think is Khairul and Fara’s relationship. It felt rushed and the flirting was too subtle to suddenly spring a date at the end. It felt like an afterthought. And Khairul is way too relaxed about everything and got over the supernatural stuff too quickly that it felt unrealistic. It would be different if he has a relative that is somehow in the supernatural business.
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Author 5 books96 followers
June 18, 2021
TOYOLS 'R' US by Terence Toh is such a fun and imaginative story about magical occults happening around KL. It's such an interesting read that made me want to continue reading until the end and find out who is the one behind these rogue toyols.

This book features a few povs, the detectives, the ones behind the toyol business, Jing, even the toyols and a few other characters too. I can see why they are highlighted and each play their parts well to the overall story. Its just well plotted out how they all come together and defeat a one common enemy.

I can definitely see why this story was chosen as the winner of the 1st Fixi Novo Malaysian Novel Contest as the story is so unique and unlike any I've ever read before. The toyol shenanigans and the presence of magic as well as runes that accompany it.

I'm glad I picked this book up as it was such a wild journey through seeking for the truth and stopping the odd deaths that were discovered throughout the city. I really hope there won't be toyols coming out to get to me tonight in my sleep!
1 review
July 26, 2022

*SPOILERS
Pros ( Why I like the book)
1) The title, and the bright vibrant Cover. It's just so cute and titilating!
2) The fact each chapter starts with the name of a location, and the time. Somehow this adds depth and richness to the setting
3) Its a reflection of Malaysian Life. The struggles of living in Malaysia. Like how one character laments he hates FB, because its full of pictures of foreign places and 5 star restaurants, places he cant visit, and it makes him feel so inadequate. And the struggles of having a bossy demanding wife, that kind of thing
4) Nuanced: Balances gory bits with humor
5) Creativity: I like how there is a business, and you can buy different types of toyols for different things.
6) Easy Breezy Read. I finished it in one sitting one Saturday Afternoon

Cons (Why I dont like the book)
1) The Price. RM16.90 is way too much. I will pay RM8 or RM9. Maybe at most RM11 to RM12. Maybe I am still living in the 90s. Well, Maybe that's why Fixi always have those RM50 for 3 books bundle deal.
2) In the end, after I finished the book, I stopped and thought: Can such a thing really happen? What would it be like if you could really step into a store and buy any toyol you want? Vindictive evil people would have a field day. Stretches the imagination a little too much.
3) Descriptions and writing is very basic. Not worth RM16.90


Overall, the book is a light hearted read, and you actually get to see the quirky yet cheerful personality of the author himself. I wonder if the owner of Fixi published it because he was hoping to sign a deal to get the book animated into a Saturday Morning Cartoon on Astro for Kids. The trouble with Fixi these days is that it doesnt publish anything of literary merit. Just books they feel can be made into a tv show, or movie film.
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52 reviews
July 17, 2022
Being a fan of investigation stories, I was intrigued with this book because of the synopsis.

Nowadays I don't read a lot of Fixi but I would still browse for some stories (and specific authors) that would catch my eyes.

This particular cover didn't attract me at first,but suddenly I just felt to read the synopsis. Couldn't possibly turn down the book and read it almost in one seating.

For a light yet something to put your mind of the real world, this book can give you that. I like the novel..the author really does tell the story in a light yet intrigue way to keep one engrossed.
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38 reviews1 follower
September 25, 2021
first of all, i really wanted the free umbrella printed on the cover. i almost left a poor review on the seller before realising it's a freebie for the toh-yol customers in the book, not outside the story. maybe, there should be umbrella merchandise for this book so we real-time buyers are also happy la.

overall, it's an enjoyable story to read before bed! looking forward to reading more creative works by toh!
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Author 7 books101 followers
June 7, 2021
I'm giving it 5 stars not because he's a good a friend of mine, but because this novel was such a thrill to read! I finished it in an afternoon. Definitely not for the faint of heart. 🤣 You are now one of my favourite Malaysian authors Terence. 🙂
10 reviews
March 24, 2025
In my point of viewlah kann this story are really good ada gambungan malay and english (even sikit je tapi buatkan dia jadi best) my first novo tapi at first ingatkan macam buku malay before beli tu rupanya english novel
The story about toyol and manusiaa (baca jgn tak baca)
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10 reviews8 followers
May 26, 2021
Entertaining, highly imaginative, punny.

My only disappointment? "Free umbrella" is merely part of the book cover's design, and not an actual promise for freebies.
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3 reviews
December 29, 2021
Like very elevated true Singapore ghost stories but in the best way :D
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18 reviews
August 6, 2024
This book is hilarous ! It's a fun book to read . Light story , it doesn't put much pressure when you read it . Love it !
10 reviews1 follower
June 10, 2024
I read because of the cover. But it really interesting. Horror crime but a little bit joke (e.g competition for kak ponti who is the strongest) can’t imagine how kak ponti fight and people do not scare but bet for it. WOWWW😂
1 review
November 28, 2022
What I enjoyed most about the book was its wiry sense of humour, and dark subtones on Malaysian societal life - I was often left grinning subconsciously to myself at various points in the story. If there's anything that can make a book feel Malaysian, it's the puns and the deadpan sarcasm. Somehow the social commentary felt very relatable, the desire for wealth, the trappings of greed, and somehow grey morals of everyone involved. It felt as if I was given a window into the human state, without being judgemental.

The plot was unique (although I can't say i've read much Toyol-themed books), and the twists on-point. Initially, the author seemed to take a slow pace, starting the novel with a series of separate storylines - eventually building up into a coherent interconnected beautiful mess of horror, murder-mystery and adventure.

The chapters ended with a great sense of anticipation of "what's next" and indeed made me think that the book would be a great movie/TV series adaptation. I was especially curious about the character's background stories, and perhaps that's something that could be delved into further in future sequels (or film adaptations).

Plus points for its readability, my only regret was the book ended so quickly. Had the author spent more time exploring the characters' back stories, the book would have become an entirely different masterpiece. But as it is, for Fixi, this is a success.
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116 reviews5 followers
December 16, 2022
3 stars. Congratulations to the author for winning the first Fixi Novo Malaysian Novel competition. First of all, I like the cover. It was cute and eye-catching.
Secondly, I like the storyline. It was slow at first but as the story expands, the adventure becomes rich with tension and surprises. The world-building was very interesting. It seems that a fair amount of magic was applicable in the world and hence, I was expecting more spells and curses or witches and wizards along the way. What else can be done in the world? How else magic is practiced in that world? How does the supernatural side was kept separated from the "normal" world?
The story reaches its climax when the officers managed to catch the perpetrator. The battle was abrupt and quick. I was expecting a more jaw-dropping magical battle. In the end, the villain dies a horrible death.
Overall, the story was fun to read. It was such a flawless police procedural drama with a tinge of occultism, satire, humor, and love. I like the author's effort to highlight social issues such as teenage pregnancy, baby dumping, possession of firearms, thievery, religious fundamentalism, and lastly, women empowerment. I hope Fixi can publish the remaining shortlisted novels as well.
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160 reviews1 follower
December 24, 2022
The concept is brilliant! Such a witty spin of a well-known name. And the way Terence builds the whole toyol industry is a work of art. Imagine this. The toyols hve categories. Levels. With different pricing. And there are terms like SPELLCOM! I live for this kind of stuff. I've always loved novels with made-up worlds, and this treads nicely along those lines.

Being an aspiring author myself, I look up to Terence's writing style - neat. He proves that Malaysians can write just as well as international authors. Readable and concise, with a touch of humour.

My reading experience was, however, interrupted by what I feel like an overuse of heavy language. While I get the urban/pulp fiction approach, it got too much at one point. Same goes for the satirical element. Worked in the beginning, too much in the end.

Overall, I'd say this is a good book. My rating combines that and my personal reading experience. I recommend this if you're looking for something different, or if you're in a reading slump. If you're an aspiring author, you need to study this book! If you don't like heavy language at all, this will likely not be your preference.
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