Another great book by Pandora, even if the Titanic details feel a bit off. The Cope and Jude part of the story was beautiful. It's just the technicalities of the backstories of the (now) ghosts that kind of bother me. Not because they're badly plotted, but because to my Titanic nerd brain, they feel oddly timed. It's not that big in the grand scheme of the story, but as someone who spent months watching documentaries in my free time, it did bother me how it weng down. If you want to avoid my tangential nerd rant over Titanic details, you can happily leave now with my opinion on the book stated. My rant has no real spoilers, so if you're curious, read ahead.
To explain, how she describes it, it sounds as if the ship sunk in minutes and everyone was panicking from moment one. However, based on the accounts I've read, most of the people who were there didn't know they should be panicking as they didn't even know the ship was sinking for quite the while. And that could've been hours, as the ship took several hours to sink (if my memory doesn't fail, the ship hit ice at around 11 and sank fully at around 3 ir 4 am, don'tquote me on that thought). The workers would've been the first to know, so it doesn't make sense to me how Tilnrey and Rian went from finding the ship was sinking (after a big boom in the boiler set off the alarms) to immediately go up to find the lifeboats nearly gone and everyone left in a panic.
Either the timing was wrong or something happened in the middle. Those in the boiler would've likely been amongst the first to know, as their work stations were some of the first to fill with water. Some had flooded and needed to be closed off for safety. And the first passengers to be loaded into lifeboats though it was a drill, not an emergency. The people in charge took pains in concealing there was an emergency from the passengers for as long as they could. By the time it was generally known there was a cause for worry, about half or so of the lifeboats were gone.
So, in order for them to have to wait for the last of the boats, the ship tilting before the break and the panic on board, something must have stopped them from getting to the lifeboats. It couldn't have been the general traffic, as again people weren't piling up for the first hour or two after the hit. Also not finding the ship was sinking while they were on their down time, as they were, on one hand supposed to be working; and on the other the workers' rooms were quickly flooded, they would've known relatively early had they been in their downtime. It isn't shown they were put back to work before deciding to flee for the lifeboats, so I think Pandora missed with the timing. On a smaller ship, it would've been minutes for it to sink. However, as the luxury liners were designed to be protected against such emergencies with technology like the airtight compartments, it made the sinking slower. It would've been cool to mention the fact that there was a fire in the coal rooms, as something the workers would've known but most of the public didn't, but it's understandable that that detail was omitted. It's not that well known.