I write a lot of erotic capture fiction myself, so I was very interested in seeing how it would work in VR. Nara Malone clearly understands virtual reality far better than I do, but her descriptions never left me at a loss regarding what was going on. I also saw that character development can go on just as easily in VR as in RL, which was something I hadn't previously considered. Most of the sexual tension and arousal also take place in VR. That, at least, I was a bit more familiar with, and let's not go into how I came by that familiarity.
'Snatch Me' is a novelette or a novella, rather than a novel, but it is written so well, and the characters and settings are so vividly realized, that I'd like to see what Ms. Malone could do with a full 50,000 words.