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Cabin Girl
Eight years ago, young Éirinn O’Connell’s papa disappeared at sea. Many sleepless nights later, in the rolling hills of 1600's Ireland, Éirinn has given up on his return - while her mama continues to watch the horizon, her grasp of reality slipping. Desperate to provide for her and her sister, Éirinn learns all she can of medicine and spends her days struggling to assist villagers wh•o shun her for her crooked back. Then in one brutal night, Barbary pirates raid her village, and Éirinn is dragged from her family and the only home she's ever known. Set on a course to Morocco, and amidst a crew as turbulent as the ocean around her, Éirinn is forced to tend to the sick quartermaster. In addition, she must serve as cabin girl to the infamous Captain Gills, a hard-hearted man bent on thwarting her every attempt to return home...to the family she prays still lives. As Éirinn searches for a way home, she soon finds that all is not what it seems aboard The Lonely Eye. Unrest brews and mutiny whispers. Allies appear in unexpected places. A cunning enemy plots. Who can she trust? Will her God carry her through the storms? And how can she survive the Captain's constant torment? The answers are unlike anything she expects. Sail ahead for this compelling and twist-filled tale of pirates, faith, family, and second chances. You won't want to put it down!
277 pages, Paperback
Published September 18, 2023
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E.G. Bella
4 books95 followersE. G. Bella is a bookworm-turned-author with a passion for cheesy puns, colorful characters, and contagious faith. She writes in a wide variety of genres, striving to craft memorable and page-turning tales the whole family can enjoy.
When she’s not writing, thinking about writing, or gushing about her stories to anyone within earshot, Bella can be found sipping warm coffee, reading emotional books, and harmonizing with the radio. Sometimes all at once. You can visit her at www.egbella.com, where she blogs weekly about life, writing, and what she’s learning about both.
When she’s not writing, thinking about writing, or gushing about her stories to anyone within earshot, Bella can be found sipping warm coffee, reading emotional books, and harmonizing with the radio. Sometimes all at once. You can visit her at www.egbella.com, where she blogs weekly about life, writing, and what she’s learning about both.
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April 13, 2025
5 stars. I’ve been fascinated by pirates since I was a kid (drama, ships, and moral dilemmas, who’s surprised?) but never got into pirate fiction (and I mean pirate fiction that’s steam-free). I couldn’t get past the A) historical inaccuracies and B) the complications of a “good” pirate (Disney tried, but “a good pirate never takes other people’s treasure” sorta cancels out the “pirate” part). However, I wanted to try the genre, and since I’ve read E.G. Bella’s
The Toymaker’s Doll
last year and loved her writing, I figured I’d give this a try. Also, I loved the cover.
Was this historically accurate? Kinda not. Was it delightful? Yes. Was I hooked and kept reading till past midnight? Also yes.
So my first reaction was I absolutely loved the snark and humour running through the writing style. My second was I LOVED the characters. Éirinn herself didn’t make a big impression on me…? I liked her, I respected her, but she wasn’t my favourite. I liked Khalil, and I liked H. for a while because I have a friend names Hans and I kept mixing them up, and also because I always feel sorry for and kinda like the dumb funny sidekicks, like in Disney (another point in favour of the book). Actually, I never could really hate him, so there’s that. Most of the pirates ended up with me kinda liking them in the end. Which brings back my whole reasons for why I don’t read this genre, but I’m afraid I’ve succumbed.
I liked Allan and I was NOT ready for his story arc. I liked S. a LOT . But my favourite was hands down the Captain. He. was. crazy. hilarious. And I just couldn’t help loving him in the end. . I was not ready for the story to end. I need more Captain Gills. He was my favourite thing about the book, 1000%.
The plot was quite gripping, and never went in the direction I expected. The whole thing was either suspenseful or heartwarming (I kid you not). We have kidnapping, fire, attempted escape, going overboard several times, attacks, being stranded, and more. As soon as you thought stuff calmed down it erupted again, and not the way you thought it would. I loved it. And I really appreciated the bit of Moroccan setting, just because it’s unusual (I know I keep saying books are “unusual” to the point of making them usual, but I don’t know, guys, I just don’t know many books that talk about Morocco, so… idk).
Also, the ending is a climax. I wasn’t ready.
I love the themes, by the way. And I love books where villains find God’s amazing grace even when humans can’t understand why they do. Yeah, we need justice. But the key is we ALL need justice. We’re all sinners, we all come under grace. I wish more books tackled that topic. There is grace for every thing, and grace that covers everything.
So, yeah. Is it everyone’s cuppa? Probably not. But if you don’t insist on realism and love heartwarming, exciting books with enjoyable plots, great humour, and amazing characters, take a test dive into this world. <3
Content: some veiled mentions of the pirates’ desires to assault the MC; one attempted assault (nongraphic). Female MC dresses as a male.
A Favourite Quote: Standing, I glance back at the crew—who surrounds the Captain as though he’s the greatest being in history—and my heart pangs. If ever anyone’s needed You, Lord, they do.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: “Tell me, do any of you use those unsightly flaps on either side of your head?”
Several of the pirates reach up and touch their ears, their movements hesitant.
The Captain’s scowl deepens. “I asked a question, and I expect an answer.” He snaps his fingers and points to the floor in front of him. “Raze.” Raze takes a slow step forward. “Did you or did you not hear me when I ordered that only males were to be brought onboard?”
Raze shakes his head. “It was an honest mistake, Captain,” he says. “Just look at her rags. They’re men’s rags, and it was dark.” His voice turns to silk. “But, if she’s here—I think—”
“I don’t give a serpent’s scale what you think, idiot!” The Captain backhands Raze, forcing him away. “I don’t tolerate rebellion on my ship. When I give an order, I expect you to follow it—regardless of cripples’ wardrobe choices!”
*Content list to come. I received a complimentary copy of this book for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.*
Was this historically accurate? Kinda not. Was it delightful? Yes. Was I hooked and kept reading till past midnight? Also yes.
So my first reaction was I absolutely loved the snark and humour running through the writing style. My second was I LOVED the characters. Éirinn herself didn’t make a big impression on me…? I liked her, I respected her, but she wasn’t my favourite. I liked Khalil, and I liked H. for a while because I have a friend names Hans and I kept mixing them up, and also because I always feel sorry for and kinda like the dumb funny sidekicks, like in Disney (another point in favour of the book). Actually, I never could really hate him, so there’s that. Most of the pirates ended up with me kinda liking them in the end. Which brings back my whole reasons for why I don’t read this genre, but I’m afraid I’ve succumbed.
I liked Allan and I was NOT ready for his story arc. I liked S. a LOT . But my favourite was hands down the Captain. He. was. crazy. hilarious. And I just couldn’t help loving him in the end. . I was not ready for the story to end. I need more Captain Gills. He was my favourite thing about the book, 1000%.
The plot was quite gripping, and never went in the direction I expected. The whole thing was either suspenseful or heartwarming (I kid you not). We have kidnapping, fire, attempted escape, going overboard several times, attacks, being stranded, and more. As soon as you thought stuff calmed down it erupted again, and not the way you thought it would. I loved it. And I really appreciated the bit of Moroccan setting, just because it’s unusual (I know I keep saying books are “unusual” to the point of making them usual, but I don’t know, guys, I just don’t know many books that talk about Morocco, so… idk).
Also, the ending is a climax. I wasn’t ready.
I love the themes, by the way. And I love books where villains find God’s amazing grace even when humans can’t understand why they do. Yeah, we need justice. But the key is we ALL need justice. We’re all sinners, we all come under grace. I wish more books tackled that topic. There is grace for every thing, and grace that covers everything.
So, yeah. Is it everyone’s cuppa? Probably not. But if you don’t insist on realism and love heartwarming, exciting books with enjoyable plots, great humour, and amazing characters, take a test dive into this world. <3
Content: some veiled mentions of the pirates’ desires to assault the MC; one attempted assault (nongraphic). Female MC dresses as a male.
A Favourite Quote: Standing, I glance back at the crew—who surrounds the Captain as though he’s the greatest being in history—and my heart pangs. If ever anyone’s needed You, Lord, they do.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: “Tell me, do any of you use those unsightly flaps on either side of your head?”
Several of the pirates reach up and touch their ears, their movements hesitant.
The Captain’s scowl deepens. “I asked a question, and I expect an answer.” He snaps his fingers and points to the floor in front of him. “Raze.” Raze takes a slow step forward. “Did you or did you not hear me when I ordered that only males were to be brought onboard?”
Raze shakes his head. “It was an honest mistake, Captain,” he says. “Just look at her rags. They’re men’s rags, and it was dark.” His voice turns to silk. “But, if she’s here—I think—”
“I don’t give a serpent’s scale what you think, idiot!” The Captain backhands Raze, forcing him away. “I don’t tolerate rebellion on my ship. When I give an order, I expect you to follow it—regardless of cripples’ wardrobe choices!”
*Content list to come. I received a complimentary copy of this book for promotional purposes. I was not required to write a positive review. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.*
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September 1, 2023Hello there, I'd like you to meet my first full-length novel.
This book has been five years in the making (from September of 2018 to September of 2023) and has seen me through so much growth, both in the writing sense and as a person. I still can't believe I get to share it with you all now.
Thank you all for being here, and happy reading! <33
PARENTS'/CONTENT GUIDE
I would recommend this book for readers roughly 13+ and up.
PROFANITY: None. Plenty of creative insults but nothing vulgar.
SEXUAL CONTENT: A handful of mild references to impure intentions from pirates, but nothing is ever clearly explained and no actions are taken. Spoiler for scene-specific explanations.
VIOLENCE: Sea battles, physical and emotional harassment, dragging someone across the ground, depictions of slavery, fights, injuries (mildly described). See spoiler for scene-specific details.
TOUGH TOPICS: Slavery, death, previous self-harm, depression, grief. See spoiler for more specifics.
Readers, if I've forgotten anything, please let me know in the comments and I'll be sure to add it here! Funny how you can forget just about everything that happens in your own book when writing something like this.
This book has been five years in the making (from September of 2018 to September of 2023) and has seen me through so much growth, both in the writing sense and as a person. I still can't believe I get to share it with you all now.
Thank you all for being here, and happy reading! <33
PARENTS'/CONTENT GUIDE
I would recommend this book for readers roughly 13+ and up.
PROFANITY: None. Plenty of creative insults but nothing vulgar.
SEXUAL CONTENT: A handful of mild references to impure intentions from pirates, but nothing is ever clearly explained and no actions are taken. Spoiler for scene-specific explanations.
VIOLENCE: Sea battles, physical and emotional harassment, dragging someone across the ground, depictions of slavery, fights, injuries (mildly described). See spoiler for scene-specific details.
TOUGH TOPICS: Slavery, death, previous self-harm, depression, grief. See spoiler for more specifics.
Readers, if I've forgotten anything, please let me know in the comments and I'll be sure to add it here! Funny how you can forget just about everything that happens in your own book when writing something like this.
October 2, 2025
Rating: 3.5 stars
I knew this was a book I wanted to read the moment I first heard about it properly. I’ve never read pirate fiction or really anything from this era, but the description and cover had me sold. This was my first read by the author and I had no idea what to expect.
Well, to start off, I think I’m coming to the realisation that high-stakes suspense and intense plots are, as a general rule, very much hit or miss with me. I can enjoy it, but it isn’t something I can read a lot of at a time or very often, and I have to be in the mood for it. It’s not so much the suspense, because that part I love usually, but if there’s a lot of pain, fear, hopelessness, awful characters, heaviness/despair, and emotion then I sometimes find it difficult to read. This was the case with Cabin Girl, especially in the beginning. After the events of Chapter 4, I put it aside for a few weeks so that I could read it once I was more in the right frame of mind for it. When I did pick it up again, this time with a better idea of what to expect, it was somewhat easier to read.
Please understand, this is solely personal preference. There was nothing objectionable or uncomfortable, and the violence was not excessive or gory, which I appreciated, since the pirates are definitely not nice people and are shown in their worst light. But their brutality and especially the captain’s mocking cruelty is a big part of the story, and for me I found it a little depressing/hard to read. And the vivid descriptions of, for instance, rotting fish, or the stench of the ship, or the sharks, or a sick or wounded man, were too easy for me to picture sometimes and made me wish I didn’t have to imagine the scene so clearly. Note again that it wasn’t excessive or gory, but I have a low tolerance for that kind of thing in books personally. XD Also, I have to admit that the author clearly details the trigger warnings and tough topics in her author’s review, so really it’s entirely on me for reading it anyway and I am in no way am objecting to the style or implying it should have been done a different way.
So with that out the way, I can say that I really enjoyed this book a lot. The writing is excellent. The action, the suspense, and the descriptions are vivid and gripping, and I felt as if I was there with the characters. After I got past the beginning and my initial struggle, wow, I really got sucked in and I think I read the rest in two days flat. Sometimes I felt like putting it aside again, but I kept going and was glad I did. And anyway, I don’t know if I would have been able to leave it again because my then I was too invested in the characters and the plot. XD
Eirinn was such a strong yet not strong heroine. I liked her a lot and felt for her so much. And wow, her backstory that finally came out was... just wow. Also, she was an amazing daughter and sister. <3 There was one among the pirate crew who I really genuinely liked until I got suspicious even though I really didn’t want to be right and I was right and it made me so sad and I feel betrayed. :/ As for the Captain, I had no idea why I felt as if I was meant to like him, because I really really didn’t. But wow… things did not go like I thought they would, and it was a much more complex journey to the end than I thought it would be! I didn’t see any of the twists with the captain coming. I was so worried about the outcome and what Eirinn would do… And then things took a very different path again. I never loved the captain, he was just too awful for that, but I did come to care very very much about what happened to him. The ending, though expected, was both beautiful and heartbreaking. Part of me really wishes it hadn’t gone that way, but at the same time I loved it. Really, I loved the whole ending, or the whole sequence from say Chapter 10/11 to the end. That was just soo well done and I could not put it down. I loved, loved that part — maybe because there was way more hope in it and because by that point I hated the ship so much. XD It was just generally much less heavy, while still being intense and keeping me in breathless suspense, but with much more focus on hope and light.
I do have to say though, no dog is worth that. I’m sorry, and I love dogs, and I love Murphy, but there it is. That part frustrated me SO much because it could have all been avoided. *sobs* XD
And the final ending of the whole book, after the climax, was very good too. Also realistic, and *slight spoiler* I liked how it was filled with hope while not having everything be suddenly perfect.*end of slight spoiler* I didn't expect it to end the way it did, and I liked it!
So, overall, this is an intense, gripping tale of piracy, survival, and adventure on the high seas, with strong, excellent themes and memorable characters. You feel everything along with Eirinn and are taken on her journey, both literally and figuratively. For its genre and style, it checks all the boxes, and if I enjoyed that genre and style more, I could see myself giving it 5 stars easily. As it is, it's somewhere between a 3 (for personal enjoyment) and a 4 (for appreciation of a really good book) for me. Will I read the next book? I’m not sure. Because of who and what it’s about, I’m inclined to think that there may be little to no light in it at all and it will be really despairing in a way this was not. XD But we’ll see. Would I recommend this one? Absolutely!!! I don’t know I would give it to anyone under 16 for various reasons, but that’s not a solid limit. Any readers who enjoy suspense, high stakes, intense plots, naval stories, and 1600s Ireland and Morocco, will love this epic tale.
Note: I received this book free from the author in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I knew this was a book I wanted to read the moment I first heard about it properly. I’ve never read pirate fiction or really anything from this era, but the description and cover had me sold. This was my first read by the author and I had no idea what to expect.
Well, to start off, I think I’m coming to the realisation that high-stakes suspense and intense plots are, as a general rule, very much hit or miss with me. I can enjoy it, but it isn’t something I can read a lot of at a time or very often, and I have to be in the mood for it. It’s not so much the suspense, because that part I love usually, but if there’s a lot of pain, fear, hopelessness, awful characters, heaviness/despair, and emotion then I sometimes find it difficult to read. This was the case with Cabin Girl, especially in the beginning. After the events of Chapter 4, I put it aside for a few weeks so that I could read it once I was more in the right frame of mind for it. When I did pick it up again, this time with a better idea of what to expect, it was somewhat easier to read.
Please understand, this is solely personal preference. There was nothing objectionable or uncomfortable, and the violence was not excessive or gory, which I appreciated, since the pirates are definitely not nice people and are shown in their worst light. But their brutality and especially the captain’s mocking cruelty is a big part of the story, and for me I found it a little depressing/hard to read. And the vivid descriptions of, for instance, rotting fish, or the stench of the ship, or the sharks, or a sick or wounded man, were too easy for me to picture sometimes and made me wish I didn’t have to imagine the scene so clearly. Note again that it wasn’t excessive or gory, but I have a low tolerance for that kind of thing in books personally. XD Also, I have to admit that the author clearly details the trigger warnings and tough topics in her author’s review, so really it’s entirely on me for reading it anyway and I am in no way am objecting to the style or implying it should have been done a different way.
So with that out the way, I can say that I really enjoyed this book a lot. The writing is excellent. The action, the suspense, and the descriptions are vivid and gripping, and I felt as if I was there with the characters. After I got past the beginning and my initial struggle, wow, I really got sucked in and I think I read the rest in two days flat. Sometimes I felt like putting it aside again, but I kept going and was glad I did. And anyway, I don’t know if I would have been able to leave it again because my then I was too invested in the characters and the plot. XD
Eirinn was such a strong yet not strong heroine. I liked her a lot and felt for her so much. And wow, her backstory that finally came out was... just wow. Also, she was an amazing daughter and sister. <3 There was one among the pirate crew who I really genuinely liked until I got suspicious even though I really didn’t want to be right and I was right and it made me so sad and I feel betrayed. :/ As for the Captain, I had no idea why I felt as if I was meant to like him, because I really really didn’t. But wow… things did not go like I thought they would, and it was a much more complex journey to the end than I thought it would be! I didn’t see any of the twists with the captain coming. I was so worried about the outcome and what Eirinn would do… And then things took a very different path again. I never loved the captain, he was just too awful for that, but I did come to care very very much about what happened to him. The ending, though expected, was both beautiful and heartbreaking. Part of me really wishes it hadn’t gone that way, but at the same time I loved it. Really, I loved the whole ending, or the whole sequence from say Chapter 10/11 to the end. That was just soo well done and I could not put it down. I loved, loved that part — maybe because there was way more hope in it and because by that point I hated the ship so much. XD It was just generally much less heavy, while still being intense and keeping me in breathless suspense, but with much more focus on hope and light.
I do have to say though, no dog is worth that. I’m sorry, and I love dogs, and I love Murphy, but there it is. That part frustrated me SO much because it could have all been avoided. *sobs* XD
And the final ending of the whole book, after the climax, was very good too. Also realistic, and *slight spoiler* I liked how it was filled with hope while not having everything be suddenly perfect.*end of slight spoiler* I didn't expect it to end the way it did, and I liked it!
So, overall, this is an intense, gripping tale of piracy, survival, and adventure on the high seas, with strong, excellent themes and memorable characters. You feel everything along with Eirinn and are taken on her journey, both literally and figuratively. For its genre and style, it checks all the boxes, and if I enjoyed that genre and style more, I could see myself giving it 5 stars easily. As it is, it's somewhere between a 3 (for personal enjoyment) and a 4 (for appreciation of a really good book) for me. Will I read the next book? I’m not sure. Because of who and what it’s about, I’m inclined to think that there may be little to no light in it at all and it will be really despairing in a way this was not. XD But we’ll see. Would I recommend this one? Absolutely!!! I don’t know I would give it to anyone under 16 for various reasons, but that’s not a solid limit. Any readers who enjoy suspense, high stakes, intense plots, naval stories, and 1600s Ireland and Morocco, will love this epic tale.
Note: I received this book free from the author in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
September 15, 2024
Overall, I enjoyed it. For sure a lot. Some parts I can definitely see them feeling kinda hopeless, but sometimes that's life, sooo... 🤷♀️ Good to have books showing God at work even in really rough or traumatizing situations. I didn't think it was graphic at all and not even any of the not fun scene bugged me, but definitely mentions of blood and gross things if that bugs you at all. This book had all the vibes of Fiddler's Gun and Two Years Before the Mast, but was a more relatable perspective. It had all the classic plot lines while also being unique and I enjoyed it a lot.
September 24, 2023
*I received an ARC from the author and was not asked or urged to leave a positive review. These are my own thoughts and opinions.*
Full review is also on my blog: https://booksbyvirginia.wordpress.com...
After reading The Toymaker's Doll: An Allegorical Short Story I came across Bella’s WIP: Cabin Girl and was immediately sold. I love pirate stories and Christian pirate adventures are rare to come by! I was even more sold on the book when I found out it had some inspiration from Treasure Planet (a sadly underrated Disney classic right up there with The Black Cauldron) I could not wait to read it! When I heard it was releasing, I jumped at the chance to join the ARC team. I’m most pleased to say that all this enthusiasm has not gone wasted.
The Cover: Fits my aesthetic. 🙂 I like the hint of adventure and the color schemes.
The Writing: Very good pacing and flow. I did feel that some words were used repeatedly, such as glare. I would have liked more ocean descriptions but that’s just me. I love a lot of description and imagery. I enjoyed the dialogue and got some chuckles out of the Captain’s sayings.
The Characters: Wow! Such a wild and heartfelt cast. I admired Errin’s bravery, faith and above all, compassion and mercy. She’s a fictional character to look up to. The captain was something else. I wanted to despise him but the more “human” he became (showing emotions, feelings, and memories,) the more he grew on me. Rough exterior for sure but just as vulnerable as anyone else. S…you old seadog…Loved Murphy and Allan!
The Plot: Ekkk!! Amazing plot and it was executed so well. I enjoyed the surprising twists, and moments that made me gasp. I don’t think I lost interest at all while reading. I can definitely see how this has a bit of inspiration from Treasure Planet. Toward the end things did seem to rush a bit and I found it hard to keep up with what was going on.
The Themes/Messages: The adventure was suburb but there was so much more to it. Forgiving and having mercy on our enemies. Letting go of our bitterness and grief. Trusting in God in our darkest moments.
The Romance: There wasn’t a bit of romance which was perfect for me.
Content Warnings: As with any pirate story there’s violence, nasty injuries, rough living, made-up slang/fake curses, and death. There are hints of some of the pirates trying to “make a move” on Éirinn, but that’s as far as it goes.
Overall: 5 STARS! Cabin Girl is everything I’d hoped it would be and I’m stoked for the next book. I 100% recommend this to readers of clean, faith-based pirate adventures. Massive thanks to the author for the ARC copy!
Full review is also on my blog: https://booksbyvirginia.wordpress.com...
After reading The Toymaker's Doll: An Allegorical Short Story I came across Bella’s WIP: Cabin Girl and was immediately sold. I love pirate stories and Christian pirate adventures are rare to come by! I was even more sold on the book when I found out it had some inspiration from Treasure Planet (a sadly underrated Disney classic right up there with The Black Cauldron) I could not wait to read it! When I heard it was releasing, I jumped at the chance to join the ARC team. I’m most pleased to say that all this enthusiasm has not gone wasted.
The Cover: Fits my aesthetic. 🙂 I like the hint of adventure and the color schemes.
The Writing: Very good pacing and flow. I did feel that some words were used repeatedly, such as glare. I would have liked more ocean descriptions but that’s just me. I love a lot of description and imagery. I enjoyed the dialogue and got some chuckles out of the Captain’s sayings.
The Characters: Wow! Such a wild and heartfelt cast. I admired Errin’s bravery, faith and above all, compassion and mercy. She’s a fictional character to look up to. The captain was something else. I wanted to despise him but the more “human” he became (showing emotions, feelings, and memories,) the more he grew on me. Rough exterior for sure but just as vulnerable as anyone else. S…you old seadog…Loved Murphy and Allan!
The Plot: Ekkk!! Amazing plot and it was executed so well. I enjoyed the surprising twists, and moments that made me gasp. I don’t think I lost interest at all while reading. I can definitely see how this has a bit of inspiration from Treasure Planet. Toward the end things did seem to rush a bit and I found it hard to keep up with what was going on.
The Themes/Messages: The adventure was suburb but there was so much more to it. Forgiving and having mercy on our enemies. Letting go of our bitterness and grief. Trusting in God in our darkest moments.
The Romance: There wasn’t a bit of romance which was perfect for me.
Content Warnings: As with any pirate story there’s violence, nasty injuries, rough living, made-up slang/fake curses, and death. There are hints of some of the pirates trying to “make a move” on Éirinn, but that’s as far as it goes.
Overall: 5 STARS! Cabin Girl is everything I’d hoped it would be and I’m stoked for the next book. I 100% recommend this to readers of clean, faith-based pirate adventures. Massive thanks to the author for the ARC copy!
March 8, 2025
this entire book I was predicting who the mentor character to be and then a big story event would happen and I thought “welp I guess our nice guy friend isn’t our mentor after all” (*cough* Alan)
This story was so so good to read. I’ve been meaning to read it for years and I’m so glad I finally did. I was hooked throughout the entire story and I got so attached to the characters and I especially loved the relationship developing between Gills and Eirinn. Now I know why Bella likes Gills so much.
Overall a really enjoyable read. No regrets
This story was so so good to read. I’ve been meaning to read it for years and I’m so glad I finally did. I was hooked throughout the entire story and I got so attached to the characters and I especially loved the relationship developing between Gills and Eirinn. Now I know why Bella likes Gills so much.
Overall a really enjoyable read. No regrets
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 25, 2023
Never anticipated crying happy tears at a book poised around vile pirates, but here I am. What a fantastic read! I can’t wait to read the sequel!!
September 6, 2024
I really just want to cry right now! 😭 it kind of reminds me a bit of Paul. Even after all he’d done, I still liked the Captain. Not all is as it seems. But he got saved!!! 😭 why did he have to die???? I wished he could’ve lived.
But, I suppose that realistic. *sighs greatly* really good story anyways. I really did enjoy it but I tend to become emotionally attached to my characters.
Thanks! ☺️ y’all, my honest thoughts. Scully was a sneak and a lying ugly wicked old sailor! 🤪 😠
But, I suppose that realistic. *sighs greatly* really good story anyways. I really did enjoy it but I tend to become emotionally attached to my characters.
Thanks! ☺️ y’all, my honest thoughts. Scully was a sneak and a lying ugly wicked old sailor! 🤪 😠
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 28, 2024
Wow, this was so Good. This book came up on my kindle unlimited page and it sounded interesting so I picked it up and I am really glad I did. Warning this is the type of book that will have you smiling and crying at the same time. (Honestly I cried for the last like 30 pages of the book. 🥹)
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September 8, 2023I rarely read historical fiction that isn't any way fantasy, but I did enjoy this one. I particularly enjoyed the protagonist, as she is a strong young woman, but one who's very human and has her vulnerabilities and weaknesses. Full review here: https://enthralledbylove.com/2023/09/...
February 2, 2026
One minor thematic thing towards the end that bugged me, but overall a really fun seafaring tale. I wish younger me would have had this, she would have /devoured/ it.
September 27, 2023
I won E.G. Bella’s giveaway and got a free ebook of Cabin Girl (this did not impact my review in any way. All opinions are my own). I then proceeded to read the entire thing in one day. So I’d say it’s good.
Cabin Girl is the story of Eirinn, a young girl who is abducted by pirates and forced to work as a cabin girl on the pirate ship, The Lonely Eye. It’s a fun historical fiction that shows the ins and outs of medieval sailing. I also loved the strong themes of faith that were woven into the story. The only real complaint I have is that there weren’t many physical descriptions of the characters. If it wasn’t for the cover, I don’t think I’d know what Eirinn looked like (other than her hunched back). I totally get leaving room for readers to fill in the blanks, but it would have been nice if my imagination had a little more guidance in this case.
The descriptions of The Lonely Eye, on the other hand, were wonderful. Everything about the pirate ship/sailing felt realistic. While very few characters were likable, even that seemed realistic and helped put Eirinn in a solitary position (and the relationships she forged with the crew--both good and bad--seemed natural).
I also thought that the character arcs for both Eirinn and Captain Gills were well done, and I really liked the ending (it took me a while to figure out if we were supposed to like Gills or not, which goes back to how well done his development was).
Cabin Girl is the story of Eirinn, a young girl who is abducted by pirates and forced to work as a cabin girl on the pirate ship, The Lonely Eye. It’s a fun historical fiction that shows the ins and outs of medieval sailing. I also loved the strong themes of faith that were woven into the story. The only real complaint I have is that there weren’t many physical descriptions of the characters. If it wasn’t for the cover, I don’t think I’d know what Eirinn looked like (other than her hunched back). I totally get leaving room for readers to fill in the blanks, but it would have been nice if my imagination had a little more guidance in this case.
The descriptions of The Lonely Eye, on the other hand, were wonderful. Everything about the pirate ship/sailing felt realistic. While very few characters were likable, even that seemed realistic and helped put Eirinn in a solitary position (and the relationships she forged with the crew--both good and bad--seemed natural).
I also thought that the character arcs for both Eirinn and Captain Gills were well done, and I really liked the ending (it took me a while to figure out if we were supposed to like Gills or not, which goes back to how well done his development was).
October 4, 2025
Finally finished this one! Goodness, that took forever. Over a year, in fact.
First-person present-tense is definitely NOT my favorite presentation. I abandoned this book for many, many months because of this.
There were plenty of plot twists, but some of them, sadly, were highly unrealistic and improbable. For instance, there was a moment in which a character is dangling over the edge of the boat and they suddenly are able to stand up and clamber back over the railing. What did they stand on... water or air? Neither one works in reality. Another example was when a character gasped underwater while keeping their mouth closed. How is that possible again?
I also got lost in the minutia of the anatomy of a ship. Research is all well and good, and obviously this author did a ton of it on ships, but I think the plot would have been better served with a few details to set the atmosphere instead of a plethora of details to knock the reader over the head with "I did my research, see!" A lighter touch would go a long way and help maintain the action-packed pacing.
There were a couple of random sound effects that had me thinking I'd tripped into an old comic book. The dog got kicked. "Thud." A person got hit. "Pop." Say what? No, no. Just give me the action and reaction--no sound effects needed if they don't fit in more naturally than that.
The premise of a hunchback girl being kidnapped by pirates was absolutely stellar, and that was the main reason why I continued reading even when grammatical errors stacked up and the aforementioned issues bothered me. That premise wasn't one I'd seen before, and that usually hooks me and provides more than usual patience to let the book get to the point.
Good thing that patience had kicked in! The story didn't really get good until around 62 percent. That's when some major plot points, twists, and surprises ramped up and made things very interesting. I love the way the author spun things on their heads a couple of different times in the final 38 percent of the story. There were some particular switches I did not see coming. There was even one that had me blinking back tears. Some of these twists and such were still unrealistic, but they let me see grand potential for this author in future books.
The ending was pretty happy, which made me happy after all the turmoil and name-calling that had happened throughout the novel. I'm not sure why the author said in her acknowledgements that Gills was better at nickname-giving than she was because he was quite cruel with all of his "nicknames" (name-calling) for the leading gal. I'll be skipping the next book that focuses on him because he wasn't a likeable character for 99 percent of the story. I definitely don't care to read any of his backstory.
It'll be quite a while before I try another of this author's books, but I see strong potential and am interested in checking out a later title, maybe her eighth or ninth one, to hopefully see some maturity in the writing and a more professional presentation.
Content: replacement expletives, name-calling/bullying, alcohol
First-person present-tense is definitely NOT my favorite presentation. I abandoned this book for many, many months because of this.
There were plenty of plot twists, but some of them, sadly, were highly unrealistic and improbable. For instance, there was a moment in which a character is dangling over the edge of the boat and they suddenly are able to stand up and clamber back over the railing. What did they stand on... water or air? Neither one works in reality. Another example was when a character gasped underwater while keeping their mouth closed. How is that possible again?
I also got lost in the minutia of the anatomy of a ship. Research is all well and good, and obviously this author did a ton of it on ships, but I think the plot would have been better served with a few details to set the atmosphere instead of a plethora of details to knock the reader over the head with "I did my research, see!" A lighter touch would go a long way and help maintain the action-packed pacing.
There were a couple of random sound effects that had me thinking I'd tripped into an old comic book. The dog got kicked. "Thud." A person got hit. "Pop." Say what? No, no. Just give me the action and reaction--no sound effects needed if they don't fit in more naturally than that.
The premise of a hunchback girl being kidnapped by pirates was absolutely stellar, and that was the main reason why I continued reading even when grammatical errors stacked up and the aforementioned issues bothered me. That premise wasn't one I'd seen before, and that usually hooks me and provides more than usual patience to let the book get to the point.
Good thing that patience had kicked in! The story didn't really get good until around 62 percent. That's when some major plot points, twists, and surprises ramped up and made things very interesting. I love the way the author spun things on their heads a couple of different times in the final 38 percent of the story. There were some particular switches I did not see coming. There was even one that had me blinking back tears. Some of these twists and such were still unrealistic, but they let me see grand potential for this author in future books.
The ending was pretty happy, which made me happy after all the turmoil and name-calling that had happened throughout the novel. I'm not sure why the author said in her acknowledgements that Gills was better at nickname-giving than she was because he was quite cruel with all of his "nicknames" (name-calling) for the leading gal. I'll be skipping the next book that focuses on him because he wasn't a likeable character for 99 percent of the story. I definitely don't care to read any of his backstory.
It'll be quite a while before I try another of this author's books, but I see strong potential and am interested in checking out a later title, maybe her eighth or ninth one, to hopefully see some maturity in the writing and a more professional presentation.
Content: replacement expletives, name-calling/bullying, alcohol
December 27, 2023
What a fun YA novel! I devoured this book within a day (well... a day and a half?) as Éirinn's voice, who narrated such an intense experience as a Cabin Girl on Captain Gill's ship, completely absorbed me into her story. I enjoyed viewing the crew through Éirinn's eyes and observing her own development and the strength she embodied. In every chapter, the plot is so vibrant as it thickens, carrying the story through till its ending. And there were so many surprising moments and twists that I completely did not see coming! The story was plot-driven, and I love that; however, I wish there was more room to flesh out Éirinn's character and know her deeply–more of her thoughts and emotions to connect with her further.
Besides that, though, I had so much fun reading this novel. Éirinn's story as a Cabin Girl was a fun–and rather intense–journey to embark on, and witnessing her and the characters' development was deeply inspiring and moving.
Besides that, though, I had so much fun reading this novel. Éirinn's story as a Cabin Girl was a fun–and rather intense–journey to embark on, and witnessing her and the characters' development was deeply inspiring and moving.
September 26, 2024
Can I call this book delightful when it was full of real pain, pirates, gripping attempts of escape and mutiny…? Yes, I believe I still can. ;) because somehow admits the excitement and danger, it still was.
This is a sweeping, every-moment-unexpected sea-tale from Ireland to Morocco. Genuine suspense, genuine plot twisting, genuine heart. I knew I’d enjoy it, but I didn’t expect to laugh and I didn’t expect to cry… I did both.
Simple in the sense that it has a gentle, not over complicated feel, but complex with its clever plot and hidden layers, Cabin Girl kept me hooked until the end. It has one of my favourite character dynamic arcs and unexpected duos ever.
It’s an exciting and clean historical adventure that’d I recommend 14 plus for fans of seas and ships, redemption and journeys home. (And perhaps fans of Lois Watford Johnson, in the sense it is a great historical with a lot of heart, spunk, and strong Christian message :) )
Prepared to be drawn in to this extremely touching journey!
This is a sweeping, every-moment-unexpected sea-tale from Ireland to Morocco. Genuine suspense, genuine plot twisting, genuine heart. I knew I’d enjoy it, but I didn’t expect to laugh and I didn’t expect to cry… I did both.
Simple in the sense that it has a gentle, not over complicated feel, but complex with its clever plot and hidden layers, Cabin Girl kept me hooked until the end. It has one of my favourite character dynamic arcs and unexpected duos ever.
It’s an exciting and clean historical adventure that’d I recommend 14 plus for fans of seas and ships, redemption and journeys home. (And perhaps fans of Lois Watford Johnson, in the sense it is a great historical with a lot of heart, spunk, and strong Christian message :) )
Prepared to be drawn in to this extremely touching journey!
November 25, 2024
Every time I thought it couldn’t get worse—it did! Which is the mark of a gripping and compelling story. It was captivating. Watching Éirinn change and grow was something I won’t forget, and it was clear that the author did her research on ships thoroughly. I can’t wait to see what Bella comes up with next!
August 2, 2024
I really liked the concept and the characters had my loyalty, but the ending felt contrived and the story was sadly lacking in research.
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