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Mona Passage: A Novel
Mona Passage is the story of two neighbors in San Juan, Puerto Rico: Galan Betances, a Cuban emigrant, and Pat McAllister, a young Coast Guard officer. During long evenings spent together talking on their Calle Luna rooftop, a deep friendship develops based on shared traumas and a common desire to heal. When Galan learns that his sister, Gabriela, is going to be committed to a mental health facility in Cuba, he plans her escape to Puerto Rico. Pat, whose Coast Guard cutter patrols the Mona Passage for drug traffickers and migrants, warns Galan that such a journey will be treacherous--perhaps fatal. Aware of the dangers but determined for Gabriela to live a full life, Galan hands over all the money he has to a Dominican smuggler based out of a San Juan nightclub, and Gabriela begins her terrifying journey.
Knowing that his cutter may be all that separates Galan and Gabriela--and haunted by the human suffering he has witnessed at sea--Pat must decide. Will he remain true to his oath, as his older brother had done in Iraq? Or will he risk his own future--and perhaps his freedom--for his closest friend?
On a moonless night, two armed vessels converge in the Mona Passage, and three lives change forever.
Knowing that his cutter may be all that separates Galan and Gabriela--and haunted by the human suffering he has witnessed at sea--Pat must decide. Will he remain true to his oath, as his older brother had done in Iraq? Or will he risk his own future--and perhaps his freedom--for his closest friend?
On a moonless night, two armed vessels converge in the Mona Passage, and three lives change forever.
- GenresFiction
286 pages, Hardcover
Published December 28, 2021
About the author
Thomas Bardenwerper
2 books10 followersThomas “Buddy” Bardenwerper served five years in the US Coast Guard aboard cutters homeported in Maine and Puerto Rico. He participated in humanitarian and law enforcement missions from the Gulf of Maine to the Caribbean Basin. After being medically retired for Type 1 diabetes in 2018, Bardenwerper began a joint degree program at Harvard Law School and the Harvard Kennedy School of Government. Upon graduation in 2022, Bardenwerper will be moving to Miami with his wife and daughter.
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January 5, 2022
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Real Rating: 3.5* of five, rounded up because this is a very promising debut
I RECEIVED A DRC FROM THE PUBLISHER VIA EDELWEISS+. THANK YOU.
My Review: The stakes in this story could not possibly be higher. Two men, friends who have that certain connection that feels more like family, are set onto a collision course by the Large External Force that is Law.
You don't get more universal than that.
What makes this read stand out is the way it happens...the way Author Bardenwerper created it. He was Pat, he knows Pat's job...he knows what it means to be bound by Law to go against convictions you simply can't ignore. And, as is ever and always the case, no good deed goes unpunished.
Multiple times and in innumerable ways. There can only be so much good luck in the world, it seems, and some people burn through their tiny bit in no time at all. This story is about many of those people; this read is for those myriads of us who know, love, are those people. The decisions of people we'll never meet cost us precious resources, time or money or access. And we'll often never know how those souls are responsible for the landscape we are required to walk. And I think, as lessons I've been forced to learn myownself go, this one's the best one to revisit. As I read Pat's story, I felt so clearly the pitfalls, the disasters to come. The secret of the read is that I kept reading, kept my eyeballs on the page, as it unfolded. I cared about Galán, and Gabriela. I wanted them to be reunited, despite the many, many burdens that meant Galán would be shouldering. And Gabriela, well, we need our families, we need our people near us more when it's hardest for them to be there.
The main story here, though, is about the Wrongness of the World. It's so simple on a personal level...so very complicated as soon as higher authority gets hold of the narrative. It shows that Author Bardenwerper knows Pat's job...it shows that he's got the keys to a roman à clef in this novel. But most of all, it shows that he really, truly wrote from his heart, gave his full and complete self to creating this novel. It was a surprise to me to care this much about his characters. They weren't particularly well drawn, though that is not for want of trying. Whatever craft lacunae there are, are not there because the author is not working hard to fill them. It takes time and luck to fill out the weak spots in one's writing, and the world gives little of either to anyone.
Happily, Syracuse University Press has given Author Bardenwerper a leg up through their Veterans Writing Award, a program instituted to bring us the often-impossible-to-locate words of the actual people who do the hard, thankless work that being in the military requires. It is not a group of people we can afford to ignore. Our various military branches have many jobs, and some leave more traces behind than others. We're better able to learn about their world, and the world we all live in, now that this series exists.
This particular novel, Mona Passage, is a good way to enter that world and be present, be attentive, as its costs become prices paid by real people.
READ THIS ASK-THE-AUTHOR INTERVIEW: https://writerinterviews.blogspot.com...
Real Rating: 3.5* of five, rounded up because this is a very promising debut
I RECEIVED A DRC FROM THE PUBLISHER VIA EDELWEISS+. THANK YOU.
My Review: The stakes in this story could not possibly be higher. Two men, friends who have that certain connection that feels more like family, are set onto a collision course by the Large External Force that is Law.
You don't get more universal than that.
What makes this read stand out is the way it happens...the way Author Bardenwerper created it. He was Pat, he knows Pat's job...he knows what it means to be bound by Law to go against convictions you simply can't ignore. And, as is ever and always the case, no good deed goes unpunished.
Multiple times and in innumerable ways. There can only be so much good luck in the world, it seems, and some people burn through their tiny bit in no time at all. This story is about many of those people; this read is for those myriads of us who know, love, are those people. The decisions of people we'll never meet cost us precious resources, time or money or access. And we'll often never know how those souls are responsible for the landscape we are required to walk. And I think, as lessons I've been forced to learn myownself go, this one's the best one to revisit. As I read Pat's story, I felt so clearly the pitfalls, the disasters to come. The secret of the read is that I kept reading, kept my eyeballs on the page, as it unfolded. I cared about Galán, and Gabriela. I wanted them to be reunited, despite the many, many burdens that meant Galán would be shouldering. And Gabriela, well, we need our families, we need our people near us more when it's hardest for them to be there.
The main story here, though, is about the Wrongness of the World. It's so simple on a personal level...so very complicated as soon as higher authority gets hold of the narrative. It shows that Author Bardenwerper knows Pat's job...it shows that he's got the keys to a roman à clef in this novel. But most of all, it shows that he really, truly wrote from his heart, gave his full and complete self to creating this novel. It was a surprise to me to care this much about his characters. They weren't particularly well drawn, though that is not for want of trying. Whatever craft lacunae there are, are not there because the author is not working hard to fill them. It takes time and luck to fill out the weak spots in one's writing, and the world gives little of either to anyone.
Happily, Syracuse University Press has given Author Bardenwerper a leg up through their Veterans Writing Award, a program instituted to bring us the often-impossible-to-locate words of the actual people who do the hard, thankless work that being in the military requires. It is not a group of people we can afford to ignore. Our various military branches have many jobs, and some leave more traces behind than others. We're better able to learn about their world, and the world we all live in, now that this series exists.
This particular novel, Mona Passage, is a good way to enter that world and be present, be attentive, as its costs become prices paid by real people.
November 3, 2021
I think this book tackles some important issues in an effective way. While I did grow to care about the outcome for certain characters I felt in general that the characters fell a little flat. I loved the flashbacks and that did help, but the present day things happened so quickly they didn’t feel genuine. The two main characters come from different worlds Galan is a Cuban immigrant now living in Puerto Rico. Patrick is in the Coast Guard stationed out of Puerto Rico tasked with stopped illegal immigrants from reaching American soil. The two met and then instantly were each other’s best friend in the world which felt a little odd. I also didn’t really understand the point of Patrick’s birthday out and all the drama that caused. I do think the book did a good job showing the desperation of people who attempt the rafts to try for a better life and adding much needed humanity to their stories.
December 5, 2021
THE MONA PASSAGE
This book is deceptive in its simplicity. It reads like a nice story about Galán Betances, an immigrant from Cuba living in Puerto Rico, who needs to bring his adult sister with mental health issues to the United States to avoid having her placed permanently in a Cuban care hospital. He becomes friends with his new neighbor Pat McAllister, who is a lieutenant on the Coast Guard interceptor “Strickland”. McAllister works with Customs and Border Protection in the waterway between Dominican Republic and Puerto Rico: The Mona Passage. What could possibly go wrong?
As Galán and Pat’s friendship develops, we learn about their families and love interests, as well as their current daily activities of work and fun. It’s a continuous back and forth between present and past, and done exceptionally well. The characters’ situations and their reactions to them are presented in such a realistic and subtle yet detailed way that you truly feel that they are real people. You can see their good and their bad and you can feel it.
The Mona Passage addresses many complex issues, including illegal immigration, human trafficking, Immigration Law, mental health, family values, PTSD, military service, drug abuse, love, loyalty and friendships. It’s all woven so seamlessly into the story that it feels so real and gives meaning to the words. No real right or wrong, just reality.
I would like to thank NetGalley, Thomas Bardenwerper, and Syracuse University Press for the opportunity to read and review this very thoughtful book.
This book is deceptive in its simplicity. It reads like a nice story about Galán Betances, an immigrant from Cuba living in Puerto Rico, who needs to bring his adult sister with mental health issues to the United States to avoid having her placed permanently in a Cuban care hospital. He becomes friends with his new neighbor Pat McAllister, who is a lieutenant on the Coast Guard interceptor “Strickland”. McAllister works with Customs and Border Protection in the waterway between Dominican Republic and Puerto Rico: The Mona Passage. What could possibly go wrong?
As Galán and Pat’s friendship develops, we learn about their families and love interests, as well as their current daily activities of work and fun. It’s a continuous back and forth between present and past, and done exceptionally well. The characters’ situations and their reactions to them are presented in such a realistic and subtle yet detailed way that you truly feel that they are real people. You can see their good and their bad and you can feel it.
The Mona Passage addresses many complex issues, including illegal immigration, human trafficking, Immigration Law, mental health, family values, PTSD, military service, drug abuse, love, loyalty and friendships. It’s all woven so seamlessly into the story that it feels so real and gives meaning to the words. No real right or wrong, just reality.
I would like to thank NetGalley, Thomas Bardenwerper, and Syracuse University Press for the opportunity to read and review this very thoughtful book.
October 30, 2021
There are so many themes in this book I don't know which to tackle first. The author did a brilliant job of diving deep into them all - family, friendship, loyalty, patriotism, immigration, and special needs. Wow!
Galan is a Cuban immigrant who was brought to the United States by his father as a child. He has been separated from his mother and special-needs sister since that trip because his mother jumped off the raft with his sister. After his mother's death, his sister is passed between relatives who are unable to care for her. Galan is determined to find a way to smuggle her to Puerto Rico, where he now lives.
Pat is a young, dedicated Coast Guard officer and Galan's neighbor and friend. He owes a lot to Galan, who has looked out for him in Puerto Rico and got him out of a few jams of Pat's own making. He looks up to the older Galan and is sympathetic to his sister's plight but is still very loyal to his country and his job. This situation will test his loyalty to all parties.
Galan and Pat are both complex characters. The author did an amazing job of developing them and setting up an impossible conflict. You just have to read it!
Galan is a Cuban immigrant who was brought to the United States by his father as a child. He has been separated from his mother and special-needs sister since that trip because his mother jumped off the raft with his sister. After his mother's death, his sister is passed between relatives who are unable to care for her. Galan is determined to find a way to smuggle her to Puerto Rico, where he now lives.
Pat is a young, dedicated Coast Guard officer and Galan's neighbor and friend. He owes a lot to Galan, who has looked out for him in Puerto Rico and got him out of a few jams of Pat's own making. He looks up to the older Galan and is sympathetic to his sister's plight but is still very loyal to his country and his job. This situation will test his loyalty to all parties.
Galan and Pat are both complex characters. The author did an amazing job of developing them and setting up an impossible conflict. You just have to read it!
October 31, 2021
Mona Passage captured my attention and heart right from the start. It is an enticing story that transports you straight to Puerto Rico. Where reggaeton drifts out of open doors, dancing in the streets, the hot sticky air, the awe-inspiring beauty of the island. Thomas Bardenwerper attention to detail and inside knowledge shines through every word. His well thought out and layered characters allows you to dive deep into the underworld of human smuggling. You hear about smugglers who cram as many people as possible into a raft and head for open water, Bardenwerper, brings you even closer. You can smell the fear and feel the absolute defeat of the people who try to escape their homeland. It makes you take a minute to consider the other side of the story. Why would people put themselves in such danger in order to leave their homes, families, way of life? You realize just how bad of a situation it must be for them to even consider this journey. He allows you to put yourself into another person's shoes, before you judge.
This book is really about friendship. The deep, unbreakable bond that you develop that turns a friend into your family. You will fall in love with Pat and Galán's friendship. Pat has just been stationed to Puerto Rico, with the Coast Guard. He will be chasing down drug and human smugglers in the Mona Passage. He is completely enraptured with his new surroundings and wants to try everything. Galán is his next-door neighbor, who is a Cuban emigrant. He made the treacherous journey from Cuba to Florida as a child. His mother and sister were left behind, he dreams of bringing them to live with him. When something happens to his mother, Galán must act fast to bring his sister to live with him. This entails her making the dangerous journey with the smugglers, on her own. Will Pat and Galán's bond hold through this trying time? Are they truly family?
I completely fell in love with this book. I cannot believe this is Bardenwerper's debut novel. It is deep, thought provoking, riveting, and all engrossing. I could not put it down. His attention to detail and human emotion is astonishing. He completely captures the essence of Puerto Rico and the Caribbean culture. Thank you to Thomas Bardenwerper, Sabrina Dax, and Syracuse University Press for sending me this awe inspiring read.
This book is really about friendship. The deep, unbreakable bond that you develop that turns a friend into your family. You will fall in love with Pat and Galán's friendship. Pat has just been stationed to Puerto Rico, with the Coast Guard. He will be chasing down drug and human smugglers in the Mona Passage. He is completely enraptured with his new surroundings and wants to try everything. Galán is his next-door neighbor, who is a Cuban emigrant. He made the treacherous journey from Cuba to Florida as a child. His mother and sister were left behind, he dreams of bringing them to live with him. When something happens to his mother, Galán must act fast to bring his sister to live with him. This entails her making the dangerous journey with the smugglers, on her own. Will Pat and Galán's bond hold through this trying time? Are they truly family?
I completely fell in love with this book. I cannot believe this is Bardenwerper's debut novel. It is deep, thought provoking, riveting, and all engrossing. I could not put it down. His attention to detail and human emotion is astonishing. He completely captures the essence of Puerto Rico and the Caribbean culture. Thank you to Thomas Bardenwerper, Sabrina Dax, and Syracuse University Press for sending me this awe inspiring read.
August 20, 2021
This book was good for me because it was the first book that I finished in quite awhile. It was entertaining and interesting. I liked the variety of perspectives the author provided, and it was never confusing because they were so distinct.
However, I think the author could have provided a little more depth for the characters or situations they were in. I think the book could have packed a much greater emotional punch if we had become as invested in the stakes as the characters were. But as it was, it was sort of like reading a newspaper article or something, where we knew that something bad was happening, but we just didn't feel it. I know the author tried, for example having Galan go to the day hospital and seeing how horrible it truly was, but it was all just a little quick.
But then again, perhaps it was just perfect, because I was able to stick with the book until the end.
However, I think the author could have provided a little more depth for the characters or situations they were in. I think the book could have packed a much greater emotional punch if we had become as invested in the stakes as the characters were. But as it was, it was sort of like reading a newspaper article or something, where we knew that something bad was happening, but we just didn't feel it. I know the author tried, for example having Galan go to the day hospital and seeing how horrible it truly was, but it was all just a little quick.
But then again, perhaps it was just perfect, because I was able to stick with the book until the end.
August 11, 2021
Thank you BookishFirst, author Thomas Bardenwerper and his publishing company for providing this ARC for me to review. The book arrived so fast and I finished reading it even faster. Once I started, I found myself getting caught up in the story and finished it within two days. It is more moving, suspenseful, and captivating than I had expected.
The story has two protaganists: Galan who was a Cuban refugee but now an American who lives in Puerto Rico; and Pat who is a Coast Guard officer that is stationed in Puerto Rico. The story starts with Galan's escape to Florida with his family as a young child, and the trip goes terribly wrong when the boat captain pushes his mother and younger sister into the water and proceeds without them. Galan and his father make it to Florida, where he grows up without seeing his mother or sister Gabriela again. Many years later when everyone has grown up to adulthood, he receives news that his mother has passed away and Gabriela (who has been emotionally and mentally stunted after the trauma) needs a new caretaker. Galan who felt responsibility and guilt for abandoning his sister for so long decides she needs to come live with him in Puerto Rico, but laws make it difficult for Gabriela to legally so Galan finds a human smuggler to do it.
Meanwhile, Pat is stationed in Puerto Rico working for the Coast Guard, and turns out to be Galan's neighbor. They meet on friendly terms and become fast friends since both of them are far from their families. Eventually, Galan tells Pat about Gabriela's situation and how he wants her to come to Puerto Rico, and Pat is conflicted on helping him because he would be enabling illegal activity. You should read the story to find out what happens next!
I think the action and suspense in the story make it really fun to read, but also I think it's probably really close to the truth and could possibly be real which makes it scary and impressive. The lengths people go to to get to US land is insane, and the dangers that come up along the way are unbelievable. It really makes me acknowledge how privileged I am to be taking my citizenship for granted, and how sheltered my life has been.
The story is separated into three parts, with the last one Part Three being super short. I feel like the author really tried to wrap up the story to provide some sort of closure, but there was still so much content, story to unravel, background to provide, points to be elaborated that this section should be longer. We are introduced to two new characters in the end and neither one of them get as much character development as Pat and Galan did in the previous parts. Honestly, the ending is still super open-ended so I don't see why we need Part Three if it's not going to be longer. Ending the book at Part Two seems more complete than the ending in Part Three, so please write more to make the last part more detailed and provide a more conclusive ending!
Also I have to mention the texture on the book is super cool. It has this velvety feel to it that makes the book feel soft and look matte instead of glossy. I did notice that the areas where my fingers held the book while reading started to take some of that texture off. Now there are patches of off-colored fingerprint sized areas blotching the book cover and it doesn't look that nice anymore. Those areas look lighter and kinda oily.
Overall I liked the story, I learned a lot about the Cuban refugee and Coast Guard experience, and I would recommend reading this book!
The story has two protaganists: Galan who was a Cuban refugee but now an American who lives in Puerto Rico; and Pat who is a Coast Guard officer that is stationed in Puerto Rico. The story starts with Galan's escape to Florida with his family as a young child, and the trip goes terribly wrong when the boat captain pushes his mother and younger sister into the water and proceeds without them. Galan and his father make it to Florida, where he grows up without seeing his mother or sister Gabriela again. Many years later when everyone has grown up to adulthood, he receives news that his mother has passed away and Gabriela (who has been emotionally and mentally stunted after the trauma) needs a new caretaker. Galan who felt responsibility and guilt for abandoning his sister for so long decides she needs to come live with him in Puerto Rico, but laws make it difficult for Gabriela to legally so Galan finds a human smuggler to do it.
Meanwhile, Pat is stationed in Puerto Rico working for the Coast Guard, and turns out to be Galan's neighbor. They meet on friendly terms and become fast friends since both of them are far from their families. Eventually, Galan tells Pat about Gabriela's situation and how he wants her to come to Puerto Rico, and Pat is conflicted on helping him because he would be enabling illegal activity. You should read the story to find out what happens next!
I think the action and suspense in the story make it really fun to read, but also I think it's probably really close to the truth and could possibly be real which makes it scary and impressive. The lengths people go to to get to US land is insane, and the dangers that come up along the way are unbelievable. It really makes me acknowledge how privileged I am to be taking my citizenship for granted, and how sheltered my life has been.
The story is separated into three parts, with the last one Part Three being super short. I feel like the author really tried to wrap up the story to provide some sort of closure, but there was still so much content, story to unravel, background to provide, points to be elaborated that this section should be longer. We are introduced to two new characters in the end and neither one of them get as much character development as Pat and Galan did in the previous parts. Honestly, the ending is still super open-ended so I don't see why we need Part Three if it's not going to be longer. Ending the book at Part Two seems more complete than the ending in Part Three, so please write more to make the last part more detailed and provide a more conclusive ending!
Also I have to mention the texture on the book is super cool. It has this velvety feel to it that makes the book feel soft and look matte instead of glossy. I did notice that the areas where my fingers held the book while reading started to take some of that texture off. Now there are patches of off-colored fingerprint sized areas blotching the book cover and it doesn't look that nice anymore. Those areas look lighter and kinda oily.
Overall I liked the story, I learned a lot about the Cuban refugee and Coast Guard experience, and I would recommend reading this book!
November 17, 2021
The bond between neighbors can be as strong as family!
Galan Betances is a Cuban who emigrated to Florida when he was young. The trip was terrible and although his whole family was supposed to make the journey, his mother grabbed his sister and jumped off the raft at the last minute, leaving Galan with his father who was determined to leave Cuba behind. Several years later, Galan is now living in San Juan, Puerto Rico when he hears of his mother’s passing. His sister, Gabriela, is still in Cuba and she is a simple person who cannot care for herself and family seem to want to put her in an institution rather than take care of her. Plus, the Obama administration is changing the policy where Cubans will be viewed as any other immigrant. His only hope may be to try to smuggle her into Puerto Rico through the Mona Passage, which is carefully guarded by the United States Coast Guard.
Pat McAllister is a coast guard lieutenant who has just taken a station in San Juan, Puerto Rico. He patrols the open seas in a cutter built to outrun and overtake human traffickers. His new neighbor, Galan, has been a tremendous help to get him situated around the town and takes care of him like an older brother. Pat watched his own older brother suffer from his time in Iraq and wants to do his country proud, but when he learns of Galan’s problems, he knows he faces a crucial decision in his life. Will he be loyal to his country? Or his best friend?
What a storyline to begin closing out 2021. Having spent a large amount of time in San Juan and Aguadilla personally, I jumped at the chance to read this story. Needless to say, the author has either spent some time on the island himself or did some great research. His knowledge of the way of life in San Juan was impeccable from who hangs out at which bar to what beer is served. Not to mention the description of local cuisine made my mouth water.
Onto the story itself. It takes no time at all to become friends with both Pat and Galan. So much so that you grieve with Galan and want to knock some sense into Pat from time to time. The characters were well fleshed out and realistic. The tension that built up during the end of the story kept the pages turning so that I couldn’t put it down. Sure, there is some language here and there, but nothing that takes away from the story. There were also some sex related scenes, but nothing overally graphic.
Both main characters battle inner conflict throughout the book all the way until the ending. Now, I’m really not a fan of the ending of this book. I get the purpose of it, but still. It’s just not the way I wanted it to go, but sometimes an author has to do what an author has to do!
I received a complimentary copy of this title from the publisher. The views and opinions expressed within are my own.
Galan Betances is a Cuban who emigrated to Florida when he was young. The trip was terrible and although his whole family was supposed to make the journey, his mother grabbed his sister and jumped off the raft at the last minute, leaving Galan with his father who was determined to leave Cuba behind. Several years later, Galan is now living in San Juan, Puerto Rico when he hears of his mother’s passing. His sister, Gabriela, is still in Cuba and she is a simple person who cannot care for herself and family seem to want to put her in an institution rather than take care of her. Plus, the Obama administration is changing the policy where Cubans will be viewed as any other immigrant. His only hope may be to try to smuggle her into Puerto Rico through the Mona Passage, which is carefully guarded by the United States Coast Guard.
Pat McAllister is a coast guard lieutenant who has just taken a station in San Juan, Puerto Rico. He patrols the open seas in a cutter built to outrun and overtake human traffickers. His new neighbor, Galan, has been a tremendous help to get him situated around the town and takes care of him like an older brother. Pat watched his own older brother suffer from his time in Iraq and wants to do his country proud, but when he learns of Galan’s problems, he knows he faces a crucial decision in his life. Will he be loyal to his country? Or his best friend?
What a storyline to begin closing out 2021. Having spent a large amount of time in San Juan and Aguadilla personally, I jumped at the chance to read this story. Needless to say, the author has either spent some time on the island himself or did some great research. His knowledge of the way of life in San Juan was impeccable from who hangs out at which bar to what beer is served. Not to mention the description of local cuisine made my mouth water.
Onto the story itself. It takes no time at all to become friends with both Pat and Galan. So much so that you grieve with Galan and want to knock some sense into Pat from time to time. The characters were well fleshed out and realistic. The tension that built up during the end of the story kept the pages turning so that I couldn’t put it down. Sure, there is some language here and there, but nothing that takes away from the story. There were also some sex related scenes, but nothing overally graphic.
Both main characters battle inner conflict throughout the book all the way until the ending. Now, I’m really not a fan of the ending of this book. I get the purpose of it, but still. It’s just not the way I wanted it to go, but sometimes an author has to do what an author has to do!
I received a complimentary copy of this title from the publisher. The views and opinions expressed within are my own.
November 6, 2021
Block buster beginning and climax for debut novel, Mona Passage, by author Thomas Bardenwerper. The author served five years in the U.S. Coast Guard aboard cutters including time in Puerto Rico. The opening of the book took me back to my childhood and hearing about courageous Cubans finding their way to freedom by crossing the waters to Florida on old boats….In this book, the Betances family tries to take this journey. Galán and his father, Gustavo, succeed in the journey while his mother Josephina and little sister get scared and turn back to shore. At this point, I was nervous for this family. The novel skips ahead to 2015 and we meet Lt. Pat McAllister on a Coast Guard Interceptor that looks for Cubans trying to get from the Dominican Republic to sanctuary through the Mona Passage to Puerto Rico. Pat is Galán’s neighbor in Puerto Rico, and they became friends. Galán is desperate to get his younger mentally handicapped sister out of Cuba. The story is told by both Pat and Galán and moves between the past and 2015. You will want to read this fast paced story. I am sure you will see decisions are not just black and white. My thanks to Syracuse University Press, Bookishfirst, and NetGalley for an ARC of this book. The opinions in this review are my own.
October 24, 2021
Galán, a Cuban emigrant, and Pat, a member of the US Coast Guard, are neighbors and friends in Puerto Rico. Galán’s mother and sister still live in Cuba, but when his mother passes away Galán must come up with a plan for the care of his sister, Gabriela, who has the mind of a child. He wants nothing more than to bring her to Puerto Rico to live with him, but the heavily guarded waterways, the same waters guarded by his friend Pat, present a real challenge. As Pat’s vessel and the vessel carrying those people attempting to make it to American soil converge, Pat is forced to make a decision that will potentially impact not just his life, but the lives of Galán and Gabriela.
Mona Passage is a good story full of love, family, and desperation, and it leads the reader to have questions about what is legal versus what is right. It is told from the perspectives of multiple characters, which I tend to enjoy as it allows me to better understand the characters and their motivations. The characters are honest and relatable, and it is easy to understand why they make the decisions that they do. I also like how Mona Passage is centered around a rather major issue faced by many within the United States and outside of it--immigration into the United States--without the novel being solely about this topic. I especially enjoyed the ending; it was so unexpected to me and in a way it added a lot to the message of the novel. Overall I really enjoyed Mona Passage and I highly recommend it.
Thank you to BookishFirst and Syracuse University Press for gifting me an advanced uncorrected proof of Mona Passage, given in exchange for an honest review; all opinions are my own.
Mona Passage is a good story full of love, family, and desperation, and it leads the reader to have questions about what is legal versus what is right. It is told from the perspectives of multiple characters, which I tend to enjoy as it allows me to better understand the characters and their motivations. The characters are honest and relatable, and it is easy to understand why they make the decisions that they do. I also like how Mona Passage is centered around a rather major issue faced by many within the United States and outside of it--immigration into the United States--without the novel being solely about this topic. I especially enjoyed the ending; it was so unexpected to me and in a way it added a lot to the message of the novel. Overall I really enjoyed Mona Passage and I highly recommend it.
Thank you to BookishFirst and Syracuse University Press for gifting me an advanced uncorrected proof of Mona Passage, given in exchange for an honest review; all opinions are my own.
November 5, 2021
After a somewhat slow start, this book gathered steam and became more interesting as it went along. The author, Thomas Bardenwerper, added depth to the characters by showing through speech and actions what were they made of. Like most people, they failed at some things, and had personal issues to deal with.
The setting is Puerto Rico for much of the book. I was surprised that it seemed like such a party place with music and dancing everywhere. The females that live there come across as being sexually aggressive--also surprising. (There are scenes that some will not want to read.) Since I've never been there, I can't say how true these scenes really are.
A good bit of the story focuses on people from Cuba who would risk anything to land on a part of Puerto Rico that would guarantee them the opportunity to live in the United States and the Coast Guard members who do their best to stop that from happening. The author shows us a what-if scenario that added a degree of excitement to the story and made me want the people to make it.
Overall, I thought this was a four star book.
The setting is Puerto Rico for much of the book. I was surprised that it seemed like such a party place with music and dancing everywhere. The females that live there come across as being sexually aggressive--also surprising. (There are scenes that some will not want to read.) Since I've never been there, I can't say how true these scenes really are.
A good bit of the story focuses on people from Cuba who would risk anything to land on a part of Puerto Rico that would guarantee them the opportunity to live in the United States and the Coast Guard members who do their best to stop that from happening. The author shows us a what-if scenario that added a degree of excitement to the story and made me want the people to make it.
Overall, I thought this was a four star book.
January 14, 2022
What do a Cuban expat living in Puerto Rico, a loved one in Cuba , a young Coast Guard officer, and a treacherous stretch of sea known as the Mona Passage have in common? MONA PASSAGE, A NOVEL, is a chilling story about human trafficking and the risks that people take every day to reunite with loved-ones. Tom Bardenwerper has crafted a chilling tale of intrigue and courage, which covers the range of human emotion and demonstrates the lengths to which people will go to circumvent the law, even if it means risking one’s life or ending a career. I frankly couldn’t put the book down and neither will you!
I was privileged to have read and recommended this manuscript for publication by Syracuse University Press for their first annual Veterans Writing Award in 2019-2020.
I was privileged to have read and recommended this manuscript for publication by Syracuse University Press for their first annual Veterans Writing Award in 2019-2020.
August 7, 2021
Thank you to Thomas Bardenwerper, Bookish First and Syracuse University Press for an ARC of Mona Passage. I don't give away spoilers in my reviews.
I found Mona Passage to be an exciting adventure based on a Coast Guard cutter Lt and a Cuban brother and sister. I liked all three of the main characters very much - especially Gabi. I loved her relationship with her brother.
I also appreciated (the Lt) Pat's flaws. This story doesn't end wrapped in a pretty bow and that's so unusual for a story. I like the ending as much as I like the story.
I learned about Coast Guard cutters, immigrants and the smugglers. I could see Mona Passage as a movie full of adventure as well as drama.
I loved the colors of the cover and the graphics - so eye-catching and suits the story very well. I could easily see Pat continuing on in additional stories.I could also see Galan and Gabi in other stories too.
I found Mona Passage to be an exciting adventure based on a Coast Guard cutter Lt and a Cuban brother and sister. I liked all three of the main characters very much - especially Gabi. I loved her relationship with her brother.
I also appreciated (the Lt) Pat's flaws. This story doesn't end wrapped in a pretty bow and that's so unusual for a story. I like the ending as much as I like the story.
I learned about Coast Guard cutters, immigrants and the smugglers. I could see Mona Passage as a movie full of adventure as well as drama.
I loved the colors of the cover and the graphics - so eye-catching and suits the story very well. I could easily see Pat continuing on in additional stories.I could also see Galan and Gabi in other stories too.
November 2, 2021
Mona Passage is about two neighbors in San Juan, Puerto Rico who strike up a good friendship. Galan Betances is a Cuban immigrant whose sister and mother were left behind in Cuba when he and his father sailed on a rickety raft to Florida. Pat McAllister is an officer in the Coast Guard, trusted with catching drug traffickers and intercepting migrants before they reach the shores of Puerto Rico.
When Galan's mother dies, he learns that his sister, who is mentally handicapped, is going to be sent to a mental health facility in Cuba. He learns that his only option to bring her to the US is by paying some unsavory criminals to smuggle her in by boat from the Dominican Republic. Pat wants Galan to reunite with his sister but faces a conflict between helping his friend and meeting his professional obligations.
I learned a lot about the arduous and dangerous journey migrants and refugees make to reach American shores and how desperate they must be to take such risks. I appreciated seeing border enforcement through the eyes of a Coast Guard officer. Members of the Coast Guard are put in some very distressing situations in terms of the human anguish they witness and how they must repeatedly put duty before compassion. Mona Passage provides a window into the complex immigration issue, so relevant right now. A good debut from a veteran Coast Guard officer.
When Galan's mother dies, he learns that his sister, who is mentally handicapped, is going to be sent to a mental health facility in Cuba. He learns that his only option to bring her to the US is by paying some unsavory criminals to smuggle her in by boat from the Dominican Republic. Pat wants Galan to reunite with his sister but faces a conflict between helping his friend and meeting his professional obligations.
I learned a lot about the arduous and dangerous journey migrants and refugees make to reach American shores and how desperate they must be to take such risks. I appreciated seeing border enforcement through the eyes of a Coast Guard officer. Members of the Coast Guard are put in some very distressing situations in terms of the human anguish they witness and how they must repeatedly put duty before compassion. Mona Passage provides a window into the complex immigration issue, so relevant right now. A good debut from a veteran Coast Guard officer.
August 6, 2021
Mona Passage is the story of two neighbors in San Juan, Puerto Rico, one is Galan Betances a Cuban emigrant, and the other is Pat McAllister a young Coast Guard officer. They become friends becasue they can kind of relate to one another's traumatic past. Galan learns that his sister, Gabriela, is going to be committed to a mental health facility in Cuba, so he plans her escape to Puerto Rico. Pat warns Galan that it will be really dangerous. I really enjoyed the story. The characters are very well-written and have great personalities. The settings were interesting and you could really feel the tension at times when stuff was getting real. I enjoyed reading things from alternate perspectives as it gives you a chance to really understand what the characters are feeling.
September 12, 2021
This was a very well written book. You can tell the author has a military background and knew what he was writing about. It had just enough military lingo in it to not make me lost and bored. It was slow in parts, but still held my attention. It was a very eye opening story. I like how it’s told through both the perspectives of the coast guard and the migrant.
October 28, 2021
I went into this book not knowing much about the Coast Guard, their role or how dangerous things could be for both them and immigrants all over. I live in a Coast Guard town (Cape May) so I found this to be interesting from my perspective...there were a few parts that were a bit slow for me, but I stuck with it and I am glad that I did! This book ended up being one that I enjoyed more than I anticipated.
This is the author's debut novel, but it seemed like a much more seasoned author wrote it. The reader could tell that the author had experience in the area in which the book is set and used some of the lingo that I imagine would be authentic. There were some parts that were a bit tedious but overall it was a solid debut.
The reader learns about friendship (Pat and Galan), love, the boundaries of both of these things and the saga that I can imagine is all too true. The reader is taken on a roller coast ride of emotions as they navigate the loops, curves, twists and turns that this story brings us. This was a good read and should be added to your TBR list and moved to the top of that list! An overall good read that should be shared far and wide.
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This is the author's debut novel, but it seemed like a much more seasoned author wrote it. The reader could tell that the author had experience in the area in which the book is set and used some of the lingo that I imagine would be authentic. There were some parts that were a bit tedious but overall it was a solid debut.
The reader learns about friendship (Pat and Galan), love, the boundaries of both of these things and the saga that I can imagine is all too true. The reader is taken on a roller coast ride of emotions as they navigate the loops, curves, twists and turns that this story brings us. This was a good read and should be added to your TBR list and moved to the top of that list! An overall good read that should be shared far and wide.
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November 9, 2021
The e-book was emailed to me by the publicist @sabrinadax in exchange for an honest review.
I was fascinated by this book, the main setting is around Puerto Rico and Cuba, their descriptions are so colorful and immersive, I easily imagined I was there dancing along to the music and strolling through the streets.
There are two protagonists, the first is Galan Betances, he emigrated from Cuba when he was a kid and in the process, left her sister there. Pat McAllister is his neighbor and a Coast Guard Officer, they slowly develop a friendship and are for each other in their times of need. But then the unexpected happened and Galan’s sister has two options: stay in a mental health facility in Cuba or face the illegal and dangerous escape to Puerto Rico. Both of the protagonists must put their values on trial and decide what’s the right thing to do and if there are reasons worth bending the rules for.
It’s such a good book, I cared about all the characters and felt so many emotions while reading how they struggled. It's crazy to think people in real life have shared similar experiences. I feel like I learned a lot and went on a journey alongside the characters. I highly recommend the book.
I was fascinated by this book, the main setting is around Puerto Rico and Cuba, their descriptions are so colorful and immersive, I easily imagined I was there dancing along to the music and strolling through the streets.
There are two protagonists, the first is Galan Betances, he emigrated from Cuba when he was a kid and in the process, left her sister there. Pat McAllister is his neighbor and a Coast Guard Officer, they slowly develop a friendship and are for each other in their times of need. But then the unexpected happened and Galan’s sister has two options: stay in a mental health facility in Cuba or face the illegal and dangerous escape to Puerto Rico. Both of the protagonists must put their values on trial and decide what’s the right thing to do and if there are reasons worth bending the rules for.
It’s such a good book, I cared about all the characters and felt so many emotions while reading how they struggled. It's crazy to think people in real life have shared similar experiences. I feel like I learned a lot and went on a journey alongside the characters. I highly recommend the book.
October 21, 2021
This debut novel from a former Coast Guard officer starts as a slow burn and transforms into a page turner. Crisp writing, authentic dialogue, and split POV with backstory seen through flashbacks create multidimensional characters. This book encourages readers to question the difference between what is legal verses what is moral. Faced with an impossible choice, Pat is forced to make a split second decision. The ending of the book left me unsettled and I’m sure I’ll be thinking about this book for some time.
I received a gifted ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I received a gifted ARC in exchange for an honest review.
October 28, 2021
Okay, this is not my usual read. It's a book about migrants. It's about friendship between men. It's about family. It has a mixed ending.
Galan Betances is a Cuban emigrant and a naturalized citizen. He came over from Cuba with his father when he was a boy. His mother and younger sister were supposed to go with then, but at the raft they decided to stay in Cuba. Galan has kept in touch, so he is told when his mother dies. He goes to Cuba for her funeral. There he decides his sister cannot stay with what family is left behind. But she is mentally handicapped and he is not rich or powerful. Integration lawyers tell him it is highly unlikely she could get an entry visa. He decides smugglers is the only way he'd get her to Puerto Rico, where he lives.
Pat McAllister is a Coast Guard officer. He is a neighbor of Galan. The two bond over their past traumas. When Galan mentions his plans to bring his sister to Puerto Rico, Pat is torn. He wants to help Galan, but part of his job is to stop migrants and return them to where they came from.
What Pat decides to do is an ever changing landscape. It makes for a compelling story and I did enjoy reading it. It may make you reexamine your stance on migrants.
Galan Betances is a Cuban emigrant and a naturalized citizen. He came over from Cuba with his father when he was a boy. His mother and younger sister were supposed to go with then, but at the raft they decided to stay in Cuba. Galan has kept in touch, so he is told when his mother dies. He goes to Cuba for her funeral. There he decides his sister cannot stay with what family is left behind. But she is mentally handicapped and he is not rich or powerful. Integration lawyers tell him it is highly unlikely she could get an entry visa. He decides smugglers is the only way he'd get her to Puerto Rico, where he lives.
Pat McAllister is a Coast Guard officer. He is a neighbor of Galan. The two bond over their past traumas. When Galan mentions his plans to bring his sister to Puerto Rico, Pat is torn. He wants to help Galan, but part of his job is to stop migrants and return them to where they came from.
What Pat decides to do is an ever changing landscape. It makes for a compelling story and I did enjoy reading it. It may make you reexamine your stance on migrants.
November 10, 2021
I got an early copy of this from @bookishfirst and @syracuseupress for an early copy of this, I thought this was really interesting with a really exciting ending!
Synopsis: A friendship between Galan, a Cuban emigrant in Puerto Rico, and Pat, a Coast Guard officer, comes to a head when Galan desperately needs to get his sister to join him in Puerto Rico.
I wasn't sure about this at first. It was fine, but nothing amazing, and I thought a lot of it was rather predictable. I also thought the way the flashbacks (which came up frequently in the first half or so) were handled in a kind of clunky way.
But the last 100 pages are really exciting, and I got so much more into it! There were some side stories that seemed unnecessary at first, but ended up mattering so much by the end. The whole book ended up having some strong messages on family, loyalty, and honor.
I plan to look for thoughts by Cuban reviewers. The author is a former Coastie, so obviously has good background for Pat's perspective, but I'm very curious about how #ownvoice reviewers interpreted Galan's perspective. But I definitely enjoyed this!
Synopsis: A friendship between Galan, a Cuban emigrant in Puerto Rico, and Pat, a Coast Guard officer, comes to a head when Galan desperately needs to get his sister to join him in Puerto Rico.
I wasn't sure about this at first. It was fine, but nothing amazing, and I thought a lot of it was rather predictable. I also thought the way the flashbacks (which came up frequently in the first half or so) were handled in a kind of clunky way.
But the last 100 pages are really exciting, and I got so much more into it! There were some side stories that seemed unnecessary at first, but ended up mattering so much by the end. The whole book ended up having some strong messages on family, loyalty, and honor.
I plan to look for thoughts by Cuban reviewers. The author is a former Coastie, so obviously has good background for Pat's perspective, but I'm very curious about how #ownvoice reviewers interpreted Galan's perspective. But I definitely enjoyed this!
November 13, 2021
The Mona Passage is not a book I would notmally pick out, but I really enjoyed the change in pace from my normal genres. This book has characters that feel so real at times I had to double check that it wasn't a true story. It's not real in the overly gritty way most books are, it was authentic with characters that had full backstories and understandable motivations.
This book also tackles the very timely issue of immigration. Specifically illegal immigration. There are many reasons why someone may want to flee theur place of birth, and this story does a great job exploring some of those reasons. The moral and ethical divide between the duty of the main character and what his heart says to do makes for a very compelling glimpse into issues most people don't consider on a day to day basis.
I think this is a great book if you want some good for thought.
This book also tackles the very timely issue of immigration. Specifically illegal immigration. There are many reasons why someone may want to flee theur place of birth, and this story does a great job exploring some of those reasons. The moral and ethical divide between the duty of the main character and what his heart says to do makes for a very compelling glimpse into issues most people don't consider on a day to day basis.
I think this is a great book if you want some good for thought.
July 28, 2021
I like the book because of the style of the writing and the story. The design of cover looks interesting to me because I like the lights which casts a shadow of what looks like a boat. Also, what got my interest was the title Mona Passage. Just from looking at the title, I didn't know what this book is about. But the cover along with the title got my interest.
It is a book with lots of suspense and serious themes. It talks about family, immigration, and exploring the world around and trying to survive. It also has themes of friendship, where the characters have to decide whether to risk their future or their friends. This creates a dilemma which is very interesting. It allows the readers to become invested in the story, wanting to find out how the main characters decides and acts. I like the themes in the story because it evokes strong emotions.
It is a book with lots of suspense and serious themes. It talks about family, immigration, and exploring the world around and trying to survive. It also has themes of friendship, where the characters have to decide whether to risk their future or their friends. This creates a dilemma which is very interesting. It allows the readers to become invested in the story, wanting to find out how the main characters decides and acts. I like the themes in the story because it evokes strong emotions.
August 13, 2021
Love it
August 26, 2021
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Leaving Cuba illegally for the US left Galan Betances separated from his mother and sister. After establishing himself in Florida, Galan finds that he must save his sister and arrange for her passage to the US. Using the Mona Passage to Ile de Mona to gain Puerto Rico’s protection is a hugely expensive and highly illegal transit, but he has no choice. With the help of a Coast Guard friend, it may turn out to be he and his sister’s only hope. Recommended reading and very well written.
Leaving Cuba illegally for the US left Galan Betances separated from his mother and sister. After establishing himself in Florida, Galan finds that he must save his sister and arrange for her passage to the US. Using the Mona Passage to Ile de Mona to gain Puerto Rico’s protection is a hugely expensive and highly illegal transit, but he has no choice. With the help of a Coast Guard friend, it may turn out to be he and his sister’s only hope. Recommended reading and very well written.
April 7, 2022
"It's about the people you meet. It's the people. The good ones."
Halfway through Thomas Bardenwerper's touching debut novel, Danny McAllister puts his finger on what made his experience in the army so meaningful. It's poignant and something the richly-detailed characters wrestle with throughout the book. What do we owe the ones we love and what does it mean to be good?
With disarming wit, colorful banter and a heart-pounding plot, Bardenwerper takes us on a thrilling ride. I don't often re-read books, but am confident I will come back to Mona Passage.
An exceptional story.
Halfway through Thomas Bardenwerper's touching debut novel, Danny McAllister puts his finger on what made his experience in the army so meaningful. It's poignant and something the richly-detailed characters wrestle with throughout the book. What do we owe the ones we love and what does it mean to be good?
With disarming wit, colorful banter and a heart-pounding plot, Bardenwerper takes us on a thrilling ride. I don't often re-read books, but am confident I will come back to Mona Passage.
An exceptional story.
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May 8, 2022Two men, both far from home and family. They bonded together enough that they called each "Brother." One has the chance to help the other. But, he must struggle with the question of which to obey, the law or his morals. It was a great book.
February 11, 2022
I really enjoyed this book, until I didn't. I lost interest about 2/3 of the way through. The book is about important issues including immigration, Puerto Rico, and PTSD in the military. I am interested in all of these complex issues. The settings, particularly Puerto Rico, came alive. The characters, for the most part, didn't develop very well. I came to care bout Galan and somewhat about Pat. Maybe it's that I hate to see characters I like make bad choices. (And Pat made more than one. The young man getting drunk and making a choice he shouldn't is tiresome.) The women were ancillary to the story, even Gabi. I liked the cover art. I feel it captures the nighttime water activities of both immigrants, so close yet so far, and the Coast Guard, whose job is difficult, requiring compassion and law enforcement. I finished the book. I'm not sorry I read it. I just wish it had been better written.
August 19, 2021
Mona Passage is a book of fiction, with a good bit of reality, for a very compelling read. Pat who is a member of the Coast Guard becomes friends with his neighbor Galian, who is from Cuban and made the treacherous journey to Puerto Rico from Cuba as a child.
During the bonding of, Pat & Galian, the two men become family and share secrets, dreams and hopes. Galian has a sister that is still in Cuba and Pat will risk everything to help Galian achieve that goal.
The most interesting thing in this book is how one views, the immigration laws of the Untired States and is doing the legal thing always doing the right thing. While the ending doesn't come neatly wrapped up, it does leave the reader wondering "what if".....
During the bonding of, Pat & Galian, the two men become family and share secrets, dreams and hopes. Galian has a sister that is still in Cuba and Pat will risk everything to help Galian achieve that goal.
The most interesting thing in this book is how one views, the immigration laws of the Untired States and is doing the legal thing always doing the right thing. While the ending doesn't come neatly wrapped up, it does leave the reader wondering "what if".....
August 16, 2021
For starters, I would like to say "Thank You" to BookishFirst and Syracuse University Press for the opportunity to have received the ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) edition of this book.
I'll be blunt. If you are looking for "action" this isn't for you. But what the story brings to the pages makes up for it. It's a touching story that, unfortunately, too many people have lived, and died, through. You get so involved with the characters, you can't help but like some of them. There aren't really any slow parts and there are parts that are page turners. To me it was a good read. Getting away from the standard guns, gadgets, girls and guts themes did me some good. The only complaint I had while reading this story was it felt like I needed to go out and learn to read Spanish, since there are some sentences and phrases in Spanish. All in all it was a book worth reading.
I'll be blunt. If you are looking for "action" this isn't for you. But what the story brings to the pages makes up for it. It's a touching story that, unfortunately, too many people have lived, and died, through. You get so involved with the characters, you can't help but like some of them. There aren't really any slow parts and there are parts that are page turners. To me it was a good read. Getting away from the standard guns, gadgets, girls and guts themes did me some good. The only complaint I had while reading this story was it felt like I needed to go out and learn to read Spanish, since there are some sentences and phrases in Spanish. All in all it was a book worth reading.
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