This review is going to be harsh, but I’ve just finished reading and I’m confused and annoyed by the whole thing. I’m all for character driven/introspective books that don’t need action, but this book wasn’t that. Trying to get a picture of the story and the characters through the onslaught of words was near impossible, and honestly made this book a slog to get through.
I had two main issues with the book.
1. Some reviews describe the writing as poetic but mostly I found it dense paragraphs of minutely described details and sentences full of adjectives that never really painted a picture. It became incredibly repetitive, endless descriptions of bodies and pain and blood and tendons, but instead of differentiating people and giving lots of snapshots into different lives, it somehow made every person the same. Plus the fact that almost everything was described negatively, with no human the ghost inhabiting feeling joy or happiness or health, each description had a dull drudgery to it, that made me feel annoyed when I reached yet another chapter from their perspective.
2. the characters were boring. The premise of a vengeful ghost hunting the person who harmed them is great. The structure of the book using three pov- the ghost, the past tense and the present tense was also great. The problem is that Adam, and sort of Yun though we never actually get to know them at all, is incredibly boring. He has a boring life, does boring things and thinks boring thoughts. Perhaps that was the point? That he was just an average guy? The flashback narration tells us that he’s a good guy, he thinks he’s a good guy, but as the story progresses we find out that he’s actually not a great guy, and is kind of weird and creepy. I think. Because once again, wading through the long, syrupy, over indulged prose to actually know anything was pretty impossible. So mostly I just think he was a boring guy who did some creepy things.
Other reviewers who gave it a similar rating to me seemed to have picked up more in their reading of it, themes of consent, violence, the state of the world and about Adam’s character. I mostly just feel deeply confused.
Spoilers: for example, did Adam kill Yun? I’m fine with ambiguous endings and unreliable narrators, but personally I didn’t feel like there was all that much in the entire book pointing to this. If anything, I took that Yun woke up to find Adam in their room, and left the house which led to their murder, but since there was basically no description of what happened or their relationship outside of Adams pov, how do we know? That theory is based off like three sentences in the final pages.
That’s another thing, everyone really seemed to not like Adam, or be creeped out by him, but was that the possession doing that or could everyone see he was a weird and creepy guy? Yun seemed to hate that Adam watched them, but the reader doesn’t get to know this until the final pages because there’s almost no interaction between the characters, so we just need to infer Yun is uncomfortable through our knowledge that Adam crosses boundaries and creeps on them, without them saying anything at all.
I think that these little secrets the author kept from the reader are another thing that let the book down. You could guess pretty early on that Yun is the ghost and that Adam is possessed but because nothing is ever confirmed until the very end pages, the reader is always steps behind. It wouldn’t have made it less atmospheric or thrilling to be clear with what was happening, and actually would have helped the story progress and let the characters have some genuine feelings of their own instead of just rambling reflections about nothing much.
Overall, I thought that if this had been edited down and cleaned up it would have made a good short story. But there just wasn’t enough there for over 300 pages, and the characters weren’t engaging enough to carry the minimal plot there was.