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Melas #2
The Witch
The world is shaken. Consequences are dealt. Enemies lurk in every corner.
After leaving the Free Lands, Melas arrives in Laxis and slowly tries to establishes herself as a Hunter. Her magic is still a curse, yet it can be a blessing. Especially with the rise of the Abomination threat. And now that she has made enemies, between the Church and the Dark Crusaders, she will have to watch her back for those coming after her.
After leaving the Free Lands, Melas arrives in Laxis and slowly tries to establishes herself as a Hunter. Her magic is still a curse, yet it can be a blessing. Especially with the rise of the Abomination threat. And now that she has made enemies, between the Church and the Dark Crusaders, she will have to watch her back for those coming after her.
- GenresFantasy
590 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 10, 2021
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August 27, 2021
This has lost all meaning.
The pace is terrible. The action is boring. The main character is foolish, childish and lacks any modicum of intelligence. Most sections once you finish reading, you find yourself wondering why you did. Nothing of any import happens. This takes the possibility from book one and saddles it with a very bland story, poorly told, involving pointless characters.
The pace is terrible. The action is boring. The main character is foolish, childish and lacks any modicum of intelligence. Most sections once you finish reading, you find yourself wondering why you did. Nothing of any import happens. This takes the possibility from book one and saddles it with a very bland story, poorly told, involving pointless characters.
June 10, 2021
Next Book Please?
Would've been a 5 star but for 2 reasons.
1) Formatting and spaceing of pages at times was strange. I tried making the font larger and smaller to change spacing issues, but there were still pages with two lines of text, then empty space. Then the next page wouldn't a new chapter.
2) A South Park reference, almost verbatim from the show. I strongly dislike when RPGlite's (and fiction in general) break the fourth wall like that.
A knock that didn't really affect my rating, but poor editing at some points. Inconsistency with spaces following punctuation is another negative. This is something a spell check/review of the text should catch at some point.
Would've been a 5 star but for 2 reasons.
1) Formatting and spaceing of pages at times was strange. I tried making the font larger and smaller to change spacing issues, but there were still pages with two lines of text, then empty space. Then the next page wouldn't a new chapter.
2) A South Park reference, almost verbatim from the show. I strongly dislike when RPGlite's (and fiction in general) break the fourth wall like that.
A knock that didn't really affect my rating, but poor editing at some points. Inconsistency with spaces following punctuation is another negative. This is something a spell check/review of the text should catch at some point.
November 17, 2021
Good story that needs and editor.
As with the first book in this series, there were many grammatical errors throughout this book. From the misuse of Prepositions, to sentences starting with Conjunctions, to the haphazard switching of Tenses within the same sentence, there were errors in almost every other paragraph. I really wish this series was edited better. All the errors really break me out of the story and just makes reading feel like a chore since I inevitably have to report them. This story is great and I will read the next book, but I just hope that future books are looked over by an editor, as that would make this series so much better.
As with the first book in this series, there were many grammatical errors throughout this book. From the misuse of Prepositions, to sentences starting with Conjunctions, to the haphazard switching of Tenses within the same sentence, there were errors in almost every other paragraph. I really wish this series was edited better. All the errors really break me out of the story and just makes reading feel like a chore since I inevitably have to report them. This story is great and I will read the next book, but I just hope that future books are looked over by an editor, as that would make this series so much better.
March 8, 2022
She is a bully.
I like a strong female character but she was just out right rude and unlikable. I hate how the author made her ditzy yet intelligent. Dumbing down your character for jokes and/or exposition is super annoying. She acted like a spoiled child that threw tantrums every-time she couldn’t get her way. Her refusal to really study or enjoy magic also makes a already basic uninteresting magic system hard to read. Again either she is scholarly or she isn’t. Don’t pick and choose different character traits to move the story along. She is self righteous and a bully, and I hate how everyone cow-tows to her. Not horrible writing but not all that great of a story.
I like a strong female character but she was just out right rude and unlikable. I hate how the author made her ditzy yet intelligent. Dumbing down your character for jokes and/or exposition is super annoying. She acted like a spoiled child that threw tantrums every-time she couldn’t get her way. Her refusal to really study or enjoy magic also makes a already basic uninteresting magic system hard to read. Again either she is scholarly or she isn’t. Don’t pick and choose different character traits to move the story along. She is self righteous and a bully, and I hate how everyone cow-tows to her. Not horrible writing but not all that great of a story.
March 30, 2022
Terrible pacing and characters. The main character lacks intelligence in her actions and everyone else seems black and white. The whole story seems to lack something. At times it feels as if the author can't decide between a child's book, young adult fiction and adult fiction. World building seems like the author decided to go with 17th century mixed with some choice 21 century items which are there more or less just for the wow factor without considering how their existence would have changed the world as a whole or influence things at large. After I have read it I had a feeling I could have skipped it and went straight to third book without missing anything.
May 13, 2021
I loved it
A fantastic book with phemoninal multidimensional characters, thank you so much for your willingness to write. I plan on buying all of your books even if you go on kindle unlimited!
A fantastic book with phemoninal multidimensional characters, thank you so much for your willingness to write. I plan on buying all of your books even if you go on kindle unlimited!
July 23, 2021
I don't know
It's not a bad book. I just had a hard time finishing it. It was kinda boring. Not sure that I will get book three. Depends on price and how many other books that are ahead of it in my queue
It's not a bad book. I just had a hard time finishing it. It was kinda boring. Not sure that I will get book three. Depends on price and how many other books that are ahead of it in my queue
February 8, 2023
What the hell is the plot of this series
I have no idea where this series is going. The overarching plot is... Very sparse and as a result it makes the main character seems like she's just ambling about for basically no actual reason most of the time.
I have no idea where this series is going. The overarching plot is... Very sparse and as a result it makes the main character seems like she's just ambling about for basically no actual reason most of the time.
July 12, 2021
I liked this book even better than the first. Melas has grow so much and the recent events have left a mark. Looking forward for more.
July 29, 2021
Decent
Overall, an improvement over the previous book. Certainly interesting enough to continue to the next book. If food, it’d be chain restaurant level.
Overall, an improvement over the previous book. Certainly interesting enough to continue to the next book. If food, it’d be chain restaurant level.
June 29, 2022
Very good read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action.
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