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Step Stalker

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While Navy SEAL Vale Butler is overseas, letters from his stepsister have kept him sane. Now he's returned home a hero, eager to match a face to the words, never expecting to be attracted to the girl. Ferociously. Urgently. Dangerously. Lula is off-limits, but for the first time in Vale's life, he is breaking protocol and following the orders of his heart, no matter the consequences.

75 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 6, 2021

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Profile Image for Mareeva.
382 reviews10.2k followers
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June 18, 2021
Hero became obsessed the first second he saw her.

He's a stepbrother that wanted to be called daddy......?

Stalked her.

Wanted to trap her by getting her pregnant.

Asked to marry him 2 days after their first meeting.

And it was still not crazy enough for me, so next.

Also, fat johnson and orange juice made another appearance, Miss Jessa, you gon get allergies from all those oranges.
Profile Image for cha.
312 reviews630 followers
January 17, 2025


“Say the words and I’ll give you Daddy’s milk.”


*throws salt* AHHHH STAY AWAY FROM ME



i never want to read the words sopping wet flesh ever again in my life....... i am begging you all to just say pussy............it will be okay. you will live. i promise

“Right into that fertile fucking pussy.”


WAIT NO THATS NOT WHAT I MEANT..........

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA





──────✧ pre-read

hello again... br with youssra this time because she held me at gunpoint and told me to read it with her......lol just kidding unfortunately i am a very willing accomplice😞
Profile Image for Youssra (semi ia).
716 reviews232 followers
January 15, 2025
You know, I knew this was going to be bad, but to actually out-bad My coach, My stalker was not what I expected. Jessa baby you must be trolling us.. I refuse to believe otherwise😭

I shall now regale you with some words strung together to make a sentence. (quote is too fancy of a word to refer such nonsense😭)

It was embarrassingly slippery.
I'll let you guess what she's referring to💀🌮

Make those titties jiggle for Daddy. BROTHER EUUGGGGHHHHHH

God help me, I can't imagine a set of hands on me that don't belong to my stepsister. 🤡🤡

His tongue bathes my throat. JUST WHAT?????????

My little girl squirts just like I knew she would. my poor poor eyes😞

Answer me! Are you on protection or fertile for me princess? pls stop

you're getting tense on me. Let my seed work, princess. Don't fight it. I HATE THE WORD SEED SO MUCH OH MY GOD

He did drive a hundred miles to stalk me. There is something to be said for that.
wow.. just wow.. you can probably hear an echo if you knock on her head poor girl 🤧



NGL though me and Cha laughed a lot so not a total loss?
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Cha and I are subjecting ourselves to another JK book. Keep us in your thoughts😞🙌
Profile Image for Flor ❁ (HIATUS).
236 reviews57 followers
January 24, 2022
“A woman who still needs a Daddy, though, doesn’t she? A Daddy. A brother. An obsessed stalker who watches you finger your little, wet pussy from the trees. I’m all of those things to you now. Hear?”


🥰
Profile Image for Ainhoa.
591 reviews17 followers
June 5, 2021
What can I say, the title sums it all. It even has an age gap...

Step brother meets step sister, knows she is the love of his life and proceeds to show it to her in form of (light) stalking and sex with plenty of daddy references. Come on, you know how it goes...
Profile Image for Matilda.
269 reviews2,834 followers
July 2, 2021
I have never read a hornier hero

I'll be honest, this novella made me laugh so much. The dirty talk was absolutely hilarious and the sex is super unrealistic, but that is to be expected in books.

Vale (H) is a Navy SEAL and while he was deployed, his new stepsister (that he hadn't met) was sending him letters that really kept his moral up during some of his worst moments. When he returns home, everything changes for them. Vale is shocked to learn his stepsister, Lula (h), is not a little kid, but a woman. This doesn't stop him from making her call him 'daddy' and calling her 'little girl' (yikes)

"Never been a Daddy before, but I was yours the second I stepped off the plane wasn't I? And so did this pretty virgin cunt...And what does that make you, my too-tight princess?"
...
"L-little girl. Your little girl."
"That's right...They want to slack off on parenting duties? Fine. I'm stepping in. I'm the one who gives permission and advice and buys your clothes now. Vale is Daddy. Say you understand."


THIS MAN IS FUCKING WILDIN' AHAHAH

Now as far as unrealistic sex scenes. Lula has her first orgasm without ANY stimulation. I just want to know how she's doing that. He calls himself 'Daddy' and this bitch is blasting off to space 🚀

I'm having my first orgasm right on top of his rigid length—and he only had to say the right word to unlock me, make it happen. Daddy. He said Daddy.




OH OH I almost forgot, he tries to trap her by getting her pregnant.

I wanted inside of her so I can start working on getting her pregnant and locked down before someone steals her from me.


SIR PLEASE-

In the epilogue, Vale mentions in his inner-monologues that he stalks Lula by following her, tracking her phone and even beats his bratwurst in his office while staring at pictures of her 😍 In other words...

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354 reviews3,706 followers
January 20, 2022
i don’t know what i expected, but it wasn’t this. the moment this man said he was too horny to even eat, i knew i was in for it.
I’m itching to get my fingertips on her things. To go through her laundry and find the panties in which she had her first orgasm, so I can drag them all over my body, tie them in a knot around my dick.


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Profile Image for Kimmylongtime.
1,301 reviews130 followers
June 23, 2021
I need a soldier, That ain't scared to stand up for me-Destiny’s Child

What’s the one trope that makes all the ladies hot? Step-siblings you say ? Stalkers? Alphaholes? War torn Veterans? Buff guys who love a plus sized lady? Dirty talk?


What if I told you not only does this story have all those things ? It has all those things and enough true love ❤️ to make you swoon.

Jessa Kane fans know what to expect but this has been the best stalker romance so far.

Let’s give a small recap on the story shall we !!

War hero 🦸‍♂️ Vale Butler is just coming home after being honorably discharged due to injuries. During the last year he built up a relationship with his stepsister Lula who has been writing him letters. These letters are the only thing that’s kept him sane and when he finally meets Lula things just click.

Vale is instantly obsessed with Lula because she is curvy, beautiful and full of 💡 light. She might just be the thing to save Vale but of course things will get into the way.

Give this hot little novella a try I promise you’ll love it. 🤯🤯😍🥰😍🥰😍
Profile Image for Arena♡.
415 reviews746 followers
June 27, 2021
so after three non-reading, painful weeks, i finally picked up the only thing that could get me reading again and it totally worked.

anyway, like every other JK novella, this one was totally insta-love with a taboo step-brother/sister relationship, daddy kink and a lot of steamy scenes. JK is a true smut queen and i swear daddy kink will be the ultimate death of me 🤡
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916 reviews1,378 followers
November 5, 2021
1⭐️

"daddy's milk" made me cringe so much that i will never look at milk the same.
Profile Image for Carmen Rae.
1,683 reviews187 followers
August 27, 2021
I put this on my tbr after a friend suggested it and it's sat there a while. But I just needed something shortish that I could read before bed and I like Jessa Kane's insta love with the OTT possessive, alpha hero. What I wasn't expecting was the daddy/lg kink. This book was so fast paced, hot and everything I was hoping for plus a little extra. And it was on KU. Score.
Profile Image for Alison.
1,507 reviews107 followers
June 1, 2021
Stars: 5
Length: Novella
POV: Dual
Series: Stand Alone
Ending: HEA
Re-read? Yes (1)

"I’m already planning on watching her while she sleeps tonight, this sweet, loving angel who happens to be related to me by marriage. I’m itching to get my fingertips on her things. To go through her laundry and find the panties in which she had her first orgasm, so I can drag them all over my body, tie them in a knot around my dick."

OMG. It's been a minute since I've read a Stalker book. I've missed them. Jessa Kane has produced a ridiculous, over the top, stalker mess... and I am HERE for it!!! VALE IS DADDY. I needed a cold shower after reading this one.

Stalker + Daddy kink + military in this book and I love it. The Daddy kink came out of nowhere and just hit me in the face.

“Never been a Daddy before, but I was yours the second I stepped off the plane, wasn’t I? You knew it.

I'm not super into the eastern medicine thing that Lula is into but the book isn't sooo filled with it and pushy with it that it's annoying. Vale can stalk me anytime. I'll be re-reading this one soon.
Profile Image for Anne E ♡ emo + OTT Hs.
224 reviews205 followers
March 2, 2022
4.5-Star

Taboo/pseudo-incest romance done well. Emotion- & romance-based despite the quickness of their official meeting to sex (day2) to H's proposal (day3).

Disabled 32yo Navy SEAL H and 18yo virgin stepsister-of-1yr 18yo h knew each other for 1 year as pen-pals since their parents married each other while he was still on active duty as a Navy SEAL. H thought she was a younger teen but valued h's letters since it helped him psychologically cope with his war trauma and their letters weren't sexual nor romantic. Loved that throughout the book their appreciation for the other's character was repeatedly mentioned and helped balance the insta-ness of their meeting to sex/proposal as genuinely romantic and not make it seem just lust-based or from emotional impulsivity. Both H&h weren't impulsive people and were, in fact, both introverted and put a lot of thought into things. At their 1st person-to-person meeting, they we’re just agog at how sexually attracted they were to each other so things quickly changed their relationship from friendship to sexy romance. H’s frankness and openness about how attracted he was to h was a big factor in speeding up their relationship.

h was shyly honest with H. She was wary about H’s attraction to her since she’s never inspired open lust in males before and her mom's repeated put-downs about h being a “chubby hippie” and how H should be with tall slender women got to her. And she was kind & honest enough to inform H this. Loved how H kept proving to h how smoking hot he viewed her to be and that she was it for him forever. Loved H’s OTT stalkery obsession and open protective-possessiveness with h (ie., he deliberately kissed & held h’s hands while the public was taking photos of him, he bought h an engagement ring ASAP right after her mom told her that H was only with her coz she forced him). He was proud of snagging h and wanted everyone to know it. Loved how the 5yr epilogue showed that H’s stalkery obsession with his now-wife h just increased with time and with kids and coupled with therapy & meditation for his PTSD.  It wasn’t just a novelty or a strange result from his PTSD.

Hot sexual tension/detailed bareback S made hotter by their feelings for each other and the repeated “stepsister”/“stepbrother” and D/LG names that added a taboo/pseudo-incest spice to their smexxing. Good emotional involvement for  a novella. I had to put this book down a few times due to life distractions and the emotion and sexual tension of this book didn't die away when I picked it up again. I could feel their love and caring for each other when no woods were spoken.  Good char growth. h learned to stand up to her fat-shaming  social-climber mom and be ok with her plump curvy body and her Eastern medicine interests. She became much more self-confident, even in her posture and fashion. H changed from being a tortured work-focused man to a calmer man who’s obsessed with his wife.  Their love made them become better people.

Sexual history:
No info of whether 18yo virgin h had dated or kissed anyone. But she’s never flirted before H and only experienced sexual arousal with H. H is also the 1st to see or touch her privates. H had some short-term GFs but not even a “ smidgen” of what he felt for h. He’d been celibate for 2 years due to active military service. 
Profile Image for lakshmi.
705 reviews554 followers
May 9, 2021
Okay so JK books are a little too addicting to stop reading. But this book got me one step there.

This just didn’t do it for me. It was a mess and just al over the place. The insta-lust didn’t hit right for me and it was honestly. Just boring.

This was a stepbrother - stepsister romance. An age gap. A virgin heroine (duh). A fat-shaming mother. Anger issues father.

->>>> nope. Lakshmi out.
Profile Image for Alexandra.
579 reviews1,082 followers
February 28, 2023
Favorite line: “Say the words and I’ll give you Daddy’s milk.”
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2,026 reviews1,144 followers
June 8, 2021
... so I can devour her like it’s a pie-eating contest and she’s strawberry-rhubarb.

And that was his thoughts about going down on her.

I mean, what else can you expect right?

I actually like the middle part of this book. It's the beginning and the ending that's pretty meh for me. But the middle? Woohoo!
Profile Image for Salma.
410 reviews5,718 followers
January 3, 2023
this is the first time ever I don’t like a jessa kane novella

this is so weird for me
Profile Image for ❤️Court - Villains Do It Better❤️.
1,088 reviews774 followers
December 15, 2021
Eh. I normally love age gaps but the one in this book was a bit irrelevant. I was also bored and wanted the hero to be a little more stalkerish since its in the title 😅
Profile Image for Michelle.
150 reviews22 followers
January 22, 2022
A lot of sex with a bit of a story.

If you enjoy a whole lot of sexy times with a short story then this book is for you.
I don't honestly mind the sexy bits but I would have liked a whole lot more story behind it.
Profile Image for Alicia.
844 reviews133 followers
May 8, 2021
Oh, another Jessa Kane book released today? *drops every single thing I’m doing, downloads and starts reading* Yep, that about sums it up...

And girrrrl, Jessa just gets even filthier with that Daddy shit. I didn’t think I could read something new but she pulls out some kinky Daddy talk that has my panties in a twist the moment I read it.
“This pussy needs a Daddy, doesn’t it, princess?”


“A woman who still needs a Daddy, though, doesn’t she? A Daddy. A brother. An obsessed stalker who watches you finger your little, wet pussy from the trees. I’m all of those things to you now. Hear?”


I mean... howwww the fuck does she just come up with new shit that makes me even more excited than the last book? I’m in awe.

Lula is 18 and a virgin and a little bit on the curvier side. Her weight and plushiness came up a few times in the story. All the better because I love me some thick FMCs and the muscly dudes who love their bodies.

Vale is a 32 year old decorated Navy SEAL who everyone and their mother knows who he is  because he killed a wanted terrorist. He doesn’t really give a shit about that and just wants Lula to be his the moment he lays eyes on her. Except she’s his stepsister. Oops. That doesn’t stop them though.

I mean... he even humped her on the couch while their parents fell asleep just a few feet away. Geezus.

The stalker situation was super duper light though. Sure, he followed her camping and watched her from afar for a bit, then snuck up on her while she was masturbating in a secluded cave... but that’s pretty light on the stalker scale to me really. 🤷🏼‍♀️

So they have filthy dirty sex and he talks about getting her pregnant, she’s his, he hasn’t been with a woman in years so he’s all insatiable for Lula. It’s pretty damn hot.

“Say the words and I’ll give you Daddy’s milk.”


Oh god. 🥵 I swear I can just quote this whole damn book with the naughty talk that made me squirm.

Now... I know this won’t be everyone’s cup of tea but it damn well is mine. I loved this and I’m ready for the next book by this author, kay thanksssss. 😘

POV: Dual 1st person
Profile Image for *CJ*.
5,096 reviews622 followers
August 30, 2022
"Step Stalker" is the story of Lula and Vale.

A super sexy, forbidden stepsibling romance between a celebrated scarred navy seal and his innocent tortured stepsister. There is loads of stalking, dd/lg play, kinky lovemaking, breeding and HEA.

Enjoyed it!

Safe
4.5/5

Update: added .5 stars!
Profile Image for Lori [semi-hiatus].
276 reviews157 followers
May 12, 2021
I'm so behind on my reviews, but most of the things I've read have been too forgettable.
This one wasn't the best JK book.
Safety is good as per usual, but something was missing.
December 13, 2025
Nothing extraordinary

First of all... What is up with that cover?



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316 reviews1,498 followers
September 11, 2023
Sometimes you just need a good short spicy novella & this was it. This was GIVING
73 reviews57 followers
March 14, 2023
Well there's no sex scene on the bed
But there's sex scene
-At waterfall
-In parking load
-and last one on the tree

Hmm... He just too horny.

Then they said
💁‍♂️"I Love You"
💁‍♀️"I Love You Too"

WTF after two fucking days you love him... but well i need to remind myself that it was Novella. So take it easy.

🐥
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997 reviews161 followers
May 31, 2021
2-2.5 stars

I so wanted to love this one but it definitely wasn't my favourite.




A few reasons why I didn't enjoy this read:

1. I don't mind the age gap as long as the heroine is at least 20+. Here Lula is 18, a virgin and quite inexperienced in almost every area of life while Vale is 32, a military veteran with PTSD.

2. I'm not a fan of the whole daddy kink. It's just not my jam.

3. The whole stepsibling thing was another issue. I get that they are practically strangers whose parents got married and I guess that wouldn't be an issue for me if he didn't keep referring to her as his stepsister, even when they were doing the dance with no pants. Because that was deeply disturbing, even for a perv like me.
If they established right from the get-go and announced that to the entire world that they don't see each other that way, never have, never will, well then it would be a different story.
And I know that sometimes shit happens and it's not like they're blood related or anything and there's nothing wrong with them falling for each other. I just wish it was handled differently.

4. It all happens within 2-3 days so to say that the time frame is ridiculous would be a major understatement.

5. Dry humping with your parents napping next to you? Sorry, that's just a big fat nope from me. And it was pretty unsettling.

I love Jessa Kane but this read clearly wasn't for me. Oh well...

Profile Image for Sarah.
555 reviews335 followers
May 26, 2021
If you're into the "Daddy" kink thing, you'd enjoy this, I'm not and I still kind of enjoyed it. Quiet short, so enjoy.
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659 reviews168 followers
January 1, 2023
of course i’m ending the year with jessa kane
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