Black Heart, Book 5 in Lynne Raye Harris’s Black’s Bandits series was worth the wait. Finally, I got to Ian’s story, and what a story! I feel like I’ve waited for years and plodded through quicksand to get to this one, lol. Ian and Natasha—the notorious assassin known as Calypso—have been circling each other from their very first meeting in book 1, Black List, but they finally get together in this one.
The story starts with Ian’s masquerade ball at his palazzo in Venus. When a masked woman enters the room, Ian feels a flicker of interest and soon realizes that only one woman elicits such feelings in him—Natasha. After Natasha dissuades an over-zealous admirer (quite dramatically and enjoyable at that), Ian approaches her, and they start talking. Ian is almost 100% certain that the woman is Natasha, but Natasha feels a little upset that Ian is using his seduction skills on “just any woman” while she was still dreaming about the kiss they shared a few months ago. It soon becomes apparent that Ian and Natasha are very much attracted to each other, and they end up having a one-night stand (sans the masks). When Ian wakes up the next morning, he is disappointed when he discovers that Natasha has left. Two months later, Natasha learns that their one-night stand resulted in … let’s just say “consequences.” At the same time, she receives the name of her next target, and it happens to be Ian. Natasha then arranges a meeting with Ian, fully intending to carry out the instructions she received, but she soon finds out that Ian is not an easy man to take down. Together with the Bandits, Ian and Natasha set out to dismantle Gemini—Natasha’s employer, and the organization Ian has sworn to destroy—and sever the hold they have over Natasha.
The chemistry between Ian and Natasha was red-hot and obvious from the first chapter; it didn’t feel forced, and I liked that. In Natasha, I finally found an FMC in this series that I can respect—a direct contrast to the FMCs in previous books. Natasha had strength, substance, self-respect, pride, and a kick-ass personality. Unlike the other FMCs her focus was not on “getting the man; she had a lot more going for her.” Did she initiate some of her and Ian’s s€xcapades? She certainly did, but in the context of her and Ian’s story, it fit. She was also not the typical damsel in distress and could defend herself physically and had mental acuity.
In Ian, I found the alpha male I was looking for throughout this series. He was a true alpha in every sense, and it showed in his actions and words. My favorite Ian quote was, “You realize you’re mine in every way, right? You aren’t getting naked with another man ever again. There’s no leaving. No escaping. You belong to me.” And when he was talking about marriage, he wasn’t asking … “A proposal implies there’s a choice. I’m not giving you a choice. I’m stating a fact.” Ian was alpha to the core, and I loved it! But Natasha had him wrapped around her little finger, and they both knew it.
Something else that worked for me was how welcoming Maddie, Tallie, Angie and Libby was despite the harm Natasha caused them in previous books. That was a nice touch, and for the first time I felt some kinship to those women. Also, Ty (next book) featured prominently in this story, and I liked his character—protective and funny. I’m not crazy about the surprise pregnancy or children in romance books, but this one actually worked.
There were, however, a few things that didn’t work for me. I didn’t like that, despite already having feelings for Ian, Natasha was set on carrying out her instructions. And yes, I understood her motivation, but she gave up too easily and did not even consider alternative solutions. Unfortunately, this somewhat weakened the romance element for me. This author seems to be struggling with striking a balance between tension and romance ... Then there was Natasha’s unreasonable demands—she expected Ian’s help but was reluctant to even give him the information he was asking for (so that he can help).
My biggest problem, though, was that the author just could not steer away from making the FMC the aggressor in the romance … Natasha did very well until the very last, and then she spoiled it all by being the first to declare her love. Just why? Is there anything wrong with the MMC being the first to say, “I love you?” I honestly don’t get it, especially where Ian was concerned—he knew what he was about and how he felt; there were no uncertainties on his part. This one made me deduct a full point from my rating (which was going to be 5 until this doozy).
There were a couple of proofing issues (i.e., independent clauses need commas, and an incorrect word use [“need” instead of “needs” or “needed”], but these did not detract from the story or enjoyment thereof. A few inconsistencies in the plot also caught my attention (and I might just have it wrong because I no longer have the other books to refer back to, but I don’t think so): In previous books, it was said that Colt was shot on either his left or right side or just above his heart, and he almost died (can’t recall). In this book, however, the story is that he was shot in his arm. Now, I’m sure that a person can die from being shot in the arm if the shot was just right, but what are the chances? The other inconsistency was Natasha and Ian’s ages … In this book, Natasha’s age was given as twenty-eight and Ian forty-one. However, just over a year had passed since they met in the first book, and in that book, Natasha’s age was twenty-four and Ian’s thirty-eight. To be fair, twenty-four was too young for a world-renowned assassin in my view, so I don’t have a problem with her being twenty-eight, but this did not add up.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book and highly recommend it; it was worth the wait.