Jake and Hannah buy a run-down old cottage in the middle of nowhere. From the very beginning, strange and foreboding things kick in, storms that trap them in the house, sounds of children crying, Jake's intense headaches, a strange cold wind from the cellar, a bedroom painted completely black - windows and all. Of course there's an old tale about a witch who used to live in this cottage. And of course there's still a bit of evil lingering about.
This story reminded me very strongly of James Herbert's 'The Magic Cottage'. In fact, it reminded me so much of that book that for the first half or so of this book I was worried that this was actually just a slightly rewritten version of the original. Finally the story takes a turn onto its own road of originality, though (phew!). The story itself is pretty good. It's your basic witch-ghost-cursed area- portal to the other side and something evil has come through kind of deal.
I felt like it took an awfully long time to get going, though. The first half lacked the action that made me want to race through the book. This does pick up in the second half. My other complaint is that the writing seems amateurish at times (for instance: comparing the air to a 'slushy'), there's an abundant overuse of commas, and question marks pop up at bizarre times.
A good basic story. Writing that needs polishing. Some really gross parts (male readers, beware, boy bits are going to suffer). Altogether I give it 3/5 stars. The potential is there. This was not one of those knock-your-socks-off-it's-so-good stories, but it was good. I'd read more from Mark R. Faulkner just to see if his writing gets a little more finesse over time. He's got the imagination to come up with some seriously good stuff. Time will tell.