3/5 stars, a sort of middle of the road fantasy with some interesting elements
Thank you Penguin Teen for the arc through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review!
I am aware that Morgan Rhodes has written a fantasy series before this book, falling kingdoms that I have yet to read, but this one seriously felt like a debut. Considering how many people adore her other series I was really excited to read this arc, and I've been hearing a bit of hype as it releases today. But I was disappointed in this story, for multiple reasons. However, that doesn't drive me off from reading her other series, I think this one just didn't click with me, and some things could definitely be easily improved.
This story follows the daughter of a prime minister, Joselyn Drake, who knows that magic is rare, illegal, and always deadly for whoever is involved. When she attends the Queen's Gala and gets caught up in a robbery gone wrong, she suddenly gets imbued with magical powers. These allow her to see memories of an evil warlock, the one who killed her father a few years ago. She knows she needs this magic out of her asap, but she cannot turn to anyone but the robber himself, wanted criminal, and warlock Jericho Nox. He offers her a deal, his help extracting the magic for the magic itself to be given to him. But the farther that Joselyn goes out of her comfort zone, the more she really sees the world around her, and what magic could mean for everyone.
The setting of this book is set in a fantastical city, that has both magic and technology items like phones. It seems sort of like an urban-fantasy city, but the simple warlock magic feels like magical realism. While this is an interesting setup for a kingdom, as there is a queen and her family, it was very confusing. I didn't see how everything blended together and there wasn't a lot of worldbuilding on how things work in this land. That was a bit disappointing, as I feel like it could have been a lot of fun to see magic and technology interact.
I also felt that the plot was lackluster, it started off adding a lot of smaller details that the story frankly did not need, before launching right away into the plot. I thought that this would signal a story that was fast-paced and interesting, but after just a little bit, it turned sluggish. I didn't really enjoy what was going on, and then the characters went somewhere, the plot basically halted. I think the story was trying to turn into a character-driven story at that point, but it didn't work at all.
Jocelyn was frankly, a really bad main character. She was very self-centered and had views that were harmful to a lot of people. As the story progressed I enjoyed seeing her character growth, however small it was. I don't think she is perfect or supposed to be, but I never felt attached to her. She didn't seem to have a lot of depth besides what we got towards the end of the book, so I think she was my least favorite part of this book. She wasn't rude ever or anything, but didn't have substance.
Jericho Nox was the dark and mysterious love interest, a common trope in fantasy books. Besides that though, he didn't have much substance either. His backstory was actually interesting, but it wasn't explored until at least the second half of the book. He was thrown in and we were expected to be attached to him, and while that sometimes happens, he was just meh. As we got into the second half of the story, for spoiler plot reasons, he wasn't around as much either so he felt pretty disconnected.
There were a handful of side characters in this story, but none of them had a real lasting impact on the story or on me. I remember the queen and Jocelyn's best friend, but not much about them. The story was so centered on the main characters that it left behind some opportunities to connect with a few side characters. I think if there had been more side characters, the story would have felt more alive as well. While there was some later in the book, it really didn't make up for it.
The supposed romance went so fast, it wasn't instant love which I get it credit for. However, the feelings growing between Josalyn and Jericho were so quick that it didn't really feel like they were falling in "love." I didn't feel a spark of connection between them, besides the initial, who is this sort of moment. But I saw no chemistry between either of them, and not every book needs romance, so when it is put into fantasy stories, I want it to be done right.
Overall this story didn't really work for me, but I didn't hate my time reading it. There are definitely things that could be improved on, and I hope they are for the second book. So far I am undecided if I will be continuing, but there was some interesting foundation for a sequel. As well, I will still read the author's other work, I just think this one, in particular, didn't really work for me.
[TW: death of a family member, death of a friend, gun violence, blood, drugging, kidnapping, torture]