My interest in this book stemmed not just from its stunning cover but also from the fact that it is penned by a Chinese American author and centers around a British-Chinese protagonist. The majority of literature related to the Titanic tends to be narrated from the viewpoints of white passengers. It seems that the writers of both non-fiction and fictional books about the Titanic have overlooked the ethnic diversity among its passengers, focusing instead on the overused 'rich versus poor' narrative.
Before diving into my critiques, I want to acknowledge that the book is skillfully crafted. The author aimed to honor the eight Chinese passengers aboard the Titanic, and her research is largely commendable. However, she also made some artistic choices that I found problematic.
SPOILERS
I was not fond of the depiction of the captain and the officers in this story. Although the author attempted to present Captain Smith in a favorable light, there was a scene where he made an inconsiderate remark about a Chinese man. I understand that the author intended to highlight the racism that Asians faced and continue to face, but to my knowledge, neither the captain, the officers, nor the crew treated any passengers unkindly.
I am certain that there was tension among various nationalities aboard the Titanic, given the diversity of passengers. The ship carried people from numerous European nations, alongside people from Arab and East Asian countries, as well as North and South America. I've come across stories illustrating that even among third-class passengers, biases existed. Poor white people from the UK often held disdain for other white people from underdeveloped European countries. Consider how much worse passengers from Arab and East Asian countries were likely treated.
I haven't encountered any reports of misconduct involving the captain or the officers. The author retained the captain's actual name in the story but modified or substituted the names of the officers, probably to prevent potential legal issues with their families. Although many mistakes were made that night, I stand firm against anyone who claims the crew failed to give their all or acted in a cowardly fashion. None of the Titanic's top officials, including Captain Smith, Chief Officer Wilde, First Officer Murdoch, and even the ship's designer, Thomas Andrews, sought to save themselves; they all went down with the ship.
The actions of a fictional officer in the book were inspired by the rumors surrounding Fifth Officer Harold Lowe. I may have a personal bias, as Harold Lowe is one of my favorite Titanic officers, alongside Moody and Murdoch. This admiration stems from the fact that his lifeboat, which he commanded, was the only one that returned to rescue survivors. One of the accounts described an incident where he brandished a gun at a sixteen-year-old boy attempting to board a lifeboat, as recounted by Charlotte Collyer. 'For God's sake, be a man! We've got women and children to save. We must stop at the decks lower down and take on women and children.'
The author noted that lifeboat 14 hesitated to rescue a Chinese man from the water because they thought he was 'a Jap.' While some articles reference this incident, they all conveniently omit the fact that only one individual reported this incident, and that person was, once again, Charlotte Collyer.
Both accounts—Lowe threatening a boy with a gun and pondering whether to rescue a Chinese man from the water—originate solely from Charlotte Collyer. Her daughter even claimed that Lowe shot a man, which is false. He was firing his gun into the air to stop men from jumping into the lifeboat and tipping it over, so I believe Charlotte should have shown more gratitude since his actions protected her and the other women on board. (While several officers discharged their weapons into the air to prevent men from forcibly boarding lifeboats, there is no evidence that any officer shot someone.)
Although Lowe, like other officers, maintained order with a firearm, the claim that he refused to help the Chinese man raises doubts. No other witnesses have corroborated that part of the story, and Charlotte is the sole individual who has profited from it by selling it to a magazine. I don't hold that against her, especially considering she lost everything in the sinking and needed to support her young daughter. I don't label her as dishonest, as I wasn't present to witness the events myself.
I can't definitively say what transpired, but it's clear that the media of that era was as sensationalist as it is today. Once the Titanic went down and the survivors reached New York, newspapers began to publish dramatic stories, many of which lacked proper verification. This has led to a plethora of rumors and assertions that remain difficult to confirm or refute even now.
My additional critiques align with those expressed by other reviewers. The protagonist is impulsive, judgmental, immature, and even manipulative. She exhibited controlling behavior and seemed almost obsessed with her twin brother. While I can overlook some immaturity, given that she is a teenager and this is a young adult novel, her numerous questionable decisions were annoying. Perhaps my perspective as an only child limits my understanding of sibling dynamics, but I found it odd that she consistently felt compelled to either shield or control her twin, acting as if she were the older sister despite them being the same age.
Excessive focus was placed on dull storylines, leaving insufficient attention on the actual sinking. The author failed to effectively convey the terror of that night, instead allowing the brother and sister to exchange eye-rolling insults while their lives were at stake. I won't even get into their tedious romantic subplots.
MAJOR SPOILER: In the end, she sacrifices herself for her brother. She had multiple chances to save herself by boarding a lifeboat, yet she turned them down each time. Lifeboat 14 returns to search for survivors, just as it did in reality, and they offer to take her aboard. However, she insists they take her injured brother instead. As noted earlier, a conversation emerges regarding their possible ethnicity as 'Japs' and the question of whether they should be rescued. Ultimately, they can only take one person (ridiculous), leading them to abandon her to perish. This portrayal is deeply disrespectful to Fifth Officer Lowe, who, although not named in the book, was part of lifeboat 14—the only boat that returned to the disaster site. There is no way he or the others on that boat would have allowed a teenage girl to succumb to hypothermia. If you trust the stories about Officer Lowe's determination to rescue women and children, even going as far as to threaten men and boys with a gun, how can you expect me to believe he would have abandoned a girl to perish in the icy water?