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320 pages, Hardcover
First published February 8, 2022

Interesting, he's already comfortable using past tense when talking about a woman he'd just discovered moments earlier was dead. Adam filed the information away for more consideration later. (86)
Kendall pulled up the note app on her phone. She also managed to get the voice recorder started without RaeLyn noticing. Colorado is a one-party consent state, and...it was at least legal to record the conversation without Mrs. Volkov's actual consent. (243)This sort of thing isn't bad information to have, of course, but sometimes it feels like it's inserted in a way that is very much for the reader. (I think the present tense of 'Colorado is' probably has something to do with that...)
He felt an uncommon bond with Kendall—not romantic or anything. But like they were both cut from the same cloth. Siblings without any relation. (29)
He was a good guy, and she liked him. Not as anything more than a friend. (154)
She was hot, yeah—and it wasn't that Adam hadn't wondered about what she would be like in bed; he was still a guy—but he didn't get warm fuzzy feelings from her. She was definitely in the friend zone, and Adam was okay with that. (197)
"You buying?" she asked, as they headed toward the elevators.Real talk: with the first 'just a friend' comment I thought, okay, cool, this is a book that's going to subvert convention and not make the male and female detective lead hook up eventually. By the end, all these 'WE'RE JUST FRIENDS' comments are making me think the lad(y) doth protest too much. Kendall's past might be wrung out, then, but if there are more books to follow, mark my words, there will be more to this not-a-romance drama.
"I guess, but if you continue to make me buy coffee and meals for you, people are going to think we're dating."
She squished up her nose and squinted. "No one would ever believe we're dating. There is no way I look desperate enough to go out with you, Taylor."
"Well, that's just mean." (224)
I shrugged, not willing to get in the middle of their pissing match. (36)Accidental extension of italics:
Any news? the message from Q read. (73)Malapropism (emphasis added):
"Did he elude to any sexual abuse?" (80)Missing word (emphasis added):
Now, Ms. Beck was on the hot seat, and he wanted to see if her story remained the same—rehearsed, even—or changed at all. Any could mean she was covering something up. (85)Malapropism 2.0 (emphasis added):
A curt nod proceeded him walking through French doors into a long living room. (95)Malapropism 3.0 (emphasis added):
Agent Beck was pretty good at diffusing powder keg situations. (98)Inconsistency:
Ringing abruptly woke Adam from the best dream he'd had in months..."I'm not fucking on call!" (63)
While detectives were always on call... (196)Tiny little punctuation thing that drives me bonkers:
"I need more." She said. (212)And so on and so forth. It's hardly the most egregious set of proofreading errors I've ever seen ('Jane Austin' as a favourite author does come to mind), but it does tend to take one out of the story.