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12 pages, Paperback
Published April 1, 2021
through the gap between the closing doors, you can see a man staggering down a narrow corridor. Above him, a faltering fluorescent light flickers on then off and on again, effacing then reinstating his shadowy silhouette as he stumbles in fits and starts towards you. Light cutting out darkness cutting out light, erasing and reconstituting this or that feature, a gloved hand, fingers snatching, lunging forward towards the elevator doorsThe Elevator builds up a harrowing atmosphere of menace and entrapment in scenes that shift from being encased in a metal elevator to being in a bedroom with a propeller ceiling fan wafting above you. In each scene there is a fly also entrapped either within a ceiling light or behind a lampshade as if it was a microcosm to the situation of the protagonist. This was very evocative and effective writing.
lock shut
before
you
feel the frantic sound of footfalls resonating in and around you - Opening paragraph from The Elevator