*1 Star*
Summary: A very quick, very simple and almost childish narrative with Insta-love galore and repetitive writing.
Overall, I didn’t enjoy reading this book, which is super unfortunate because it has such a nice concept and there was so much potential for this type of world, atmosphere, and even the characters (and the cover is really pretty of course). But this book was not written well in my opinion, as it almost read like a young teen or pre-teen writing a wattpad story, a fanfiction.
This story is told through dual point-of-view in third person perspective and the chapters vary from being relatively short to a bit longer. The book itself is incredibly short, which I don’t think contributed to the lack of development between characters and their relationships and the plot - it is absolutely possible to write a short book with well developed characters, plots, and relationships, and it simply appears that the author just wanted to make everything simple and rushed. Unfortunately, the “simplicity” of it results in dumb character choices and unbelievable relationships that supposedly drive the crux of the story.
Things I Liked:
- The World: I think the society these characters live in was interesting and unique (and had a lot of potential) regarding the high class being either rich or connected to a high military rank. I liked that there were apartments across the river from the nice neighborhoods, it made it feel urban and modern and yet whimsical - really reminded me of the Pride and Prejudice aesthetic coupled with a contemporary sort of feel. I think the world could’ve been delved into more, but I liked what we got.
- Amya as the Genie: I think she fit the role super well! Not much else to say here, but I think the author did do a good job of meshing the Pride and Prejudice and Aladdin storylines.
- “Plot:” I like the idea of the plot. The basic outline of it. It had potential. It provided conflict caused by the protagonist, a basis for relationships to develop. An interesting political conflict. Unfortunately, it did not deliver, more about what I didn’t like below.
Things I Didn’t Like:
- Plot: The plot took too long to present itself in the narrative, especially for it being such a short book and for the main relationships having already taken off full steam in the first couple of chapters. The plot also really unraveled in the last third - I thought we were hitting a groove but then all of a sudden EVERYTHING that happened in regards to the plot and big developments and revelations happened OFF PAGE. We got to see none of it! And not only did it happen off page, but it also happened super quickly! Oh no, there’s some weird contrived conflict a character started near the end of the book - boom solved right away. The pacing was completely off and the “antagonist” was rather weak and had no semblance of a personality or goal or desires. More a caricature than a proper character, IF that.
- Characters: Most of these characters felt more like caricatures than real people, real characters. I believe the best of the characters was Amya, because she didn’t make dumb decisions, she was flawed, but she was also severely passionate for the people she cares about. Everyone else fell flat. Rinity was extremely immature and childish, and she made a really dumb choice in the second half of the book with no real basis. She was over dramatic - but none of these traits felt real. It just felt like a silly shell of a cartoon. And the love interests had nothing at all!! No development, no personal goals, no one else in their lives. And we were supposed to believe these two love interests were best friends! They never even interacted! No story about their relationship prior to the book! And the super contrived excuse for character development that was thrown in for Tov in like three short chapters not only happened off screen and in a very short time span, but it was also based around a really dumb character decision that made me lose respect for him! He disregarded his responsibilities and was incredibly weak-willed out of nowhere, only for him to change because the plot demanded him to! And Gibbs had a lot of potential, but his characterizations were all over the place and weren’t consistent. His story should’ve been delved into more (as with the prince!) because they were incredibly important to the plot. But no, I barely know either of them. I don’t know their home lives, I don’t know their backstories, I don’t know any of it. Even if these characters appeared in a previous standalone, the author should be able to answer these questions in this new installment. And !! The minor side characters were just cardboard cut outs! We got the most from one of Amya’s younger siblings, but literally every single character in this book outside of the main 4 were practically invisible and were just there to fill up space. I knew nothing about them, especially Rinity’s stepfather - we’re told all these amazing things about him and what he’s done for Rinity and her mother but we see none of it! He’s briefly mentioned in the book a couple of times and has no personality or personal drive.
- Insta-Love: The Big One. This is what turned me off almost immediately from the book. Granted, I finished the book in hopes that the rest of it would make up for the Insta-love. But alas, it did not. And honestly, this was the worst case of Insta-love I’ve ever read. In Rinity’s case, think The Little Mermaid. Ariel sees Eric one time, saves his life, then the next time she sees her father, she tells him that she loves Eric. That’s what Rinity does, but worse. Rinity has one conversation with the guy. She’s already swooning hard (despite not knowing anything about him and actually believing he was someone else). I was willing to give the benefit of the doubt and just trump it up to her being super attracted to him, but no. In the next meeting, they’re making out, and Tov claims he falls quick and hard. Like… what? For the rest of the novel I’m supposed to just buy that they’re in love, that they’ll never have a love like theirs ever again despite the fact that they just met and they’re only like 19 or so (which is a harmful idea that media should stop perpetuating). Because of this (and the rest of the book) I believe the first chapter was the best. In Amya’s case, think more like Ariel’s level of love for the love interest mixed with a slower start (literally just like 2 extra meetings than Rinity). And at the very end of the book she even admits she doesn’t know anything about him! Not even his damn name! And she still claims to love him! Sigh. It was awful. And I hated how the author (and apparently most reviewers, because I didn’t know about this before I picked it up!) expected me to just go along with this worse-than-a-Disney-Princess love story. Ugh. In fact, that second meeting I told you about where Rinity is making out with Tov already? That happened in like chapter 3? I was convinced for the majority of the chapter that it was some sort of dream or story that Rinity was fabricating in her mind, since her whole shtick is telling stories. It was not. I was disappointed and lowkey mad. I think that route would’ve been much more interesting to explore (- especially since I read Rinity as a neurodivergent character? I might be wrong but she felt that way to me, with her claiming to “hear” her books and her actual need to finish a story or else she’ll just combust).
- Writing: The writing was extremely juvenile, which is odd because at first it did not read as such. But as the story progressed the simplicity was made clearer. It was super on the nose at times, as if the author were trying to talk down to the reader. SO much telling and not showing. A lot of important things happened off page or super quickly. It was extremely redundant - oftentimes the author would repeat a sentence or sentiment multiple times across chapters or even within a chapter as if they were brand new thoughts being thought up when in reality we had already established that or hashed it out. Relationship and friendship conflict came out of nowhere just for the sake of conflict (I mean, are you seriously jealous that your best friend has a client who’s nice? Ugh), and so many things were resolved so quickly. An issue arose, and it was addressed and resolved on the next page. Like why do we even bother including it. Whatever.
That being said, the concept for this story was great and had a lot of potential but it wasn’t able to execute it well at all.