Why ?
So my friends and I are doing reading dares. Where we find a book or story that is outside the confines of "normal for us " and then the other two of us have to read it. There's a point system involved but I digress. So me being the reader of all things smut thought it be a piece of cake.
I almost dnf-d this one. And I never allow myself to dnf. It's a matter of pride for me lol. First let me just say it needs to be edited. Multiple times the lead character is called the wrong name.
Next as long as no one is being hurt irl I don't care what kind of smut or erotica you like but this book wasn't for me. It felt like I was reading a badly written porn script. And some of those descriptions.... One I found oddly funny was the "supple (butt) crack." I've never heard that one before 😂
Also while there are many kinds of ways a character can fit the description of a "daddy" this one doesn't fit that. This story is a pseudo taboo age gap between step siblings. So the title feels a bit clickbait-y. You could stretch and say it's because she might be pregnant at the end of the story but. That's a big stretch in my opinion.
I'm sure someone out there will love it as is. But please at the fix the consistency issues with the girl's name.