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Galactogon #1
By Vasily Mahanenko
Warning ⚠️ This review may contain plot-sensitive content.
Overview 📝
The author is back with a new MMO, this time in space! He’s transplanted many of the grandiose story-building devices from the Way of the Shaman (WotS) series into this iteration, producing another rags-to-riches story with a MC who’s at the epicenter of a grand plot.
Another Marina is used, this time the head of a leading clan. Much like Astaria of Phoenix Clan, she pursues Mahan’s analogue, Alex aka “Surgeon”, for coveted plunder he’s inexplicably come across as a newb. Together they form an alliance and Surgeon is quickly propelled into higher levels of prestige, reputation, and higher-class loot.
Behind the scenes, Surgeon begins the game immediately knowing what the stakes are to succeed at a certain contest that the developers recruited him for. He and 11 other participants—who have no prior knowledge of a certain Space Ops MMO—are offered the chance at $1 billion or rupees or whatever by playing the game under certain conditions. It is revealed that each of the 12 players have their own conditions, such as limiting play time each day but the ability to “pay to play” vs. unlimited game time each day but strictly adhering to a “free to play” IAP structure. Surgeon has been given the 4 hours max daily play time + a $500k monthly salary to which he can use to leverage his chances at finding a mystical game object that will grant the payout promised.
The Good 😊
1. The “contest” has a certain “Ready Player One” vibe going for it. There are lots of similarities to that story, including another player killing off the contestants. At least with this novel it’s assumed that no one can be trusted until thoroughly vetted (unlike poor Mahan in WotS). Surgeon’s relations with his best friend’s vengeful wife made me cringe each time he dealt with her once it was revealed that she was also a contestant.
2. Like Mahan, Surgeon stumbles into hidden game secrets and rewards through the use of bandying about persuasion and coercion tactics, finagling positive outcomes from idiot NPC’s, and generally using a sly tongue and a rapier wit to make things happen. It’s formulaic but still entertaining.
3. The mention of a legendary Grand Arbiter ship and how no one in the history of Galactagon has defeated one made me smile, as I just knew the author would conjure some way for Surgeon to destroy one.
4. Surgeon’s bloodlust in the training sector was very amusing.
5. Surgeon finagling the ship and its max load-out out from under the NPCs’ noses, including a certain top secret prototype weaponry system, and the corresponding offers received from top clans afterwards, made me smile in a “Karmadont Chess Set” sort of way.
6. “Space Cucumber” has a certain ring to it, much like Mahan’s clan’s name “Sea Thistles”. There are many other similarities to WotS too, such as Surgeon turning his back on his Empire of origin in favor of a path of shadow.
7. One of the most engrossing aspects of Mahanenko’s novels is you never know who’s going to have a hidden motive, and the most minor of characters (or quest or NPC) introduced early on might play a more significant role to the plot later on. The storyline is very nuanced and I have to refer to the ebook almost as often as the audiobook read through just to make sure I’m digesting everything.
8. Telling his clan to go home or logout while he lingers around only to discover epicly cool loot and game mechanics = classic Mahan ploy, but still a lot of fun.
9. Losing 1 complete ship class (i.e. 100 levels) for being destroyed and sent for respawn was a great addition to the game’s balance, even if everything else about Surgeon’s game time was highly unbalanced/OP. It really incentivized Surgeon to think his way out of situations as opposed to succumbing to what felt like, at first glance, the inevitable.
10. For all of the foibles in this novel, the ending tidies up very well and the ending “boss fight” was epic in Surgeon’s pragmatic approach to defeating his foe.
The Meh 🤢
1. The author originally wrote his books in Russian and a translator guy converted them to English. Certain translation deficiencies appear as obscure words and phrases, such as “Betting Masters” (describing the wealthy leaders of the contest) or calling a bearded Clan Leader “the beard” as opposed to his actual name. Other times the author (or his translator to English) is just plain confusing/confused. See next points below.
2. Someone got confused (author or translator?) as to what the vague term “unlimited” was in reference to: unlimited game credits OR unlimited play time. Alex was assigned the limited game time role but is clearly the unlimited game time player in the rest of the novel.
“Eunice, which of the three games types do you choose?” “Unlimited.” “Affirmed. Constantine?” “The second—the semi-limited.” “Affirmed. And you, Alexis, will play the limited game type then.”
4. As with WotS, the author is quite sexist, borderline misogynistic, towards women. If you’re unsure on this point just wait until the ending.
5. Why describe how leveling of items like articles of clothing or spoons work if you’re not going to follow through with leveling them up? Mentioning gaining “legendary status” with a spoon had an alluring “Survival Quest” vibe towards it, but the author never mentioned it again. Irritating.
6. It took a full quarter to third of the novel to get up to speed where things started to become really interesting.
7. Alex’s pacifier weapons acquired through killing the “local” (NPC) guards in the Training Sector prove to be an OP one-trick pony throughout the rest of the novel. At least with Mahan he never overused any one thing iirc correctly. Further OP exasperations continue with the finding of the Uldan planet and Surgeon’s subsequent acquisition of an elite robo squad and a unique B class ship (that should’ve been classified as legendary due to all its bells and whistles). Kind of lame.
8. Speaking of lame, the forced marriage with Eunice was ultra lame. Government controlling baby production, forcing them to marriage and move in together after a 1-night stand, converging their separate contest entries into 1, seriously??
9. Blood Island was purported to have an enormous amount of Raq yet why did Surgeon leave the world without first bringing his ship and robotic shipmates up to 100% operational efficiency through mining said Raq? No reason at all? Of course, that makes sense (sarcasm).
10. Why give an elite death squad to Surgeon and then cripple them with “operational efficiency”?? They proved to be more of a liability than an asset after everything was said and done. It’s like the author realized his blunder of writing in these OP plot elements and instead of revising what he wrote, he gave them all sorts of limitations instead. Laaaaame.
Final Thoughts 🤔
Tallies: 10 Good and 10 Meh. Will I read the next novel? Probably.
3 stars ⭐️