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Caden:
“Grayle Meadows was like no other man I’d ever met. He was tall, handsome, sophisticated, and sexy as hell. Eyes you could lose yourself in, and never come up for air, and he was the first man I ever loved.
I could have spent my life adoring and loving him, but for one thing, he said, ‘You’re too young.’ Twenty five wasn’t that young. I was just hitting my stride.”
A young man searching for his future, an older man living his life single and happy, or though he thought. Can they find the love they desire with each other when each man is searching for something different?
Submission series is an age gap (25/35) M/M Romance with HFN in the first book which contain fake boyfriend, and friends to lovers.
“Grayle Meadows was like no other man I’d ever met. He was tall, handsome, sophisticated, and sexy as hell. Eyes you could lose yourself in, and never come up for air, and he was the first man I ever loved.
I could have spent my life adoring and loving him, but for one thing, he said, ‘You’re too young.’ Twenty five wasn’t that young. I was just hitting my stride.”
A young man searching for his future, an older man living his life single and happy, or though he thought. Can they find the love they desire with each other when each man is searching for something different?
Submission series is an age gap (25/35) M/M Romance with HFN in the first book which contain fake boyfriend, and friends to lovers.
141 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 17, 2021
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July 12, 2022
Thank God It Was Free
This book was unbelievable.
The timeline in age was off.
The main character is the slowest lawyer ever.
Too many typos to count.
To top it all off it's a Cliffhanger.
Book one was enough for me
This book was unbelievable.
The timeline in age was off.
The main character is the slowest lawyer ever.
Too many typos to count.
To top it all off it's a Cliffhanger.
Book one was enough for me
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June 18, 2021DNF. Writing style didn't suit me.
August 16, 2022
DNF at 13%. I just couldn't. This was a mess.
November 10, 2021
Age is just a number…
Man what a rollercoaster ride of emotions. When Caden sees Grayle for the first time it’s instant attraction to the older man. Caden doesn’t know if he’s straight or gay. It doesn’t stop him from fantasizing about him.
These two rotate around each other for over a year before they find themselves possibly being in the right time and place until a phone call shatters the bliss of the moment.
What a cliffhanger…
This would have been a 5 star read if there were not a lot of errors in it. Names were wrong and quite a few words that were not right. I think if the author would fix this then I could give it 5 stars.
Other then that I enjoyed this very much. The build up, the obstacles and frustration was felt through the characters. Can’t wait to to read the next book in the series.
Man what a rollercoaster ride of emotions. When Caden sees Grayle for the first time it’s instant attraction to the older man. Caden doesn’t know if he’s straight or gay. It doesn’t stop him from fantasizing about him.
These two rotate around each other for over a year before they find themselves possibly being in the right time and place until a phone call shatters the bliss of the moment.
What a cliffhanger…
This would have been a 5 star read if there were not a lot of errors in it. Names were wrong and quite a few words that were not right. I think if the author would fix this then I could give it 5 stars.
Other then that I enjoyed this very much. The build up, the obstacles and frustration was felt through the characters. Can’t wait to to read the next book in the series.
July 3, 2024
UGH!!!
2 stars... barely.
I am all for m/m romance, but this book has so little of it that it was beyond pathetic. The protagonists, Caden and Grayle, didn't even have proper intimacy until the very last chapter.
This book amounted to voluminous editing errors, very little likeable plotlines and rehashing of previous chapters and scenes from the two MC's POV. And Grayle's insistence on remaining loyal to his partner, Austin, was SO frustrating and boneheaded I wanted to slap the stuffing out of him! Especially since Austin was a totally unfaithful and such a liar.
Beyond the above, I can think of nothing positive to say except that I'm glad I've finished the book. (It was not at all easy, though!)
2 stars... barely.
I am all for m/m romance, but this book has so little of it that it was beyond pathetic. The protagonists, Caden and Grayle, didn't even have proper intimacy until the very last chapter.
This book amounted to voluminous editing errors, very little likeable plotlines and rehashing of previous chapters and scenes from the two MC's POV. And Grayle's insistence on remaining loyal to his partner, Austin, was SO frustrating and boneheaded I wanted to slap the stuffing out of him! Especially since Austin was a totally unfaithful and such a liar.
Beyond the above, I can think of nothing positive to say except that I'm glad I've finished the book. (It was not at all easy, though!)
April 14, 2025
I should have DNF’d but I couldn’t. I wanted to see it to the end. Which ended in a cliffhanger. I’ll be honest I’m not going to even bother the next book.
There’s a really good story to be told here but from the timelines being very off, to many people and back story’s messed up or repetitive, the names kept getting mixed, the writing style felt like there was no separation, like punctuation was there but it was as if the whole book was written as one sentence. (if that makes sense)
There’s a really good story to be told here but from the timelines being very off, to many people and back story’s messed up or repetitive, the names kept getting mixed, the writing style felt like there was no separation, like punctuation was there but it was as if the whole book was written as one sentence. (if that makes sense)
February 16, 2024
I think the story is good, I liked the characters and their story's, also the side characters where good and it made the basics of this story ok.
Only the writing, sometimes I must re-read to understand who was talking.. it was going very fast and there was a character name switched.
I'm going into book 2.
Only the writing, sometimes I must re-read to understand who was talking.. it was going very fast and there was a character name switched.
I'm going into book 2.
Did Not Finish
August 4, 2021DNF 8%
This was written so poorly. I can’t even list everything I found wrong with it, with only 8% in!
For example: “The idea to become a lawyer didn’t just creep into my head, when in fact it had.”
What?
This was written so poorly. I can’t even list everything I found wrong with it, with only 8% in!
For example: “The idea to become a lawyer didn’t just creep into my head, when in fact it had.”
What?
September 30, 2023
Love can be fun or full of drama! Sometimes it takes forever!
When you meet someone and they are just it! Makes you happy! Ten you find out love is not that easy! Is this worth it? Read and find out adults only!
When you meet someone and they are just it! Makes you happy! Ten you find out love is not that easy! Is this worth it? Read and find out adults only!
May 7, 2024
This story is a slapped together mess. What a struggle to read. I had to give up around 35%. Just couldn’t cope anymore with all the jumping around story line thrown in with some childish discussions and poor storyline. Don’t waste your time or money!!
August 10, 2025
A recipe for love.
Trying to navigate love isn't always easy but when the right person comes in the door you just need to go for it and get out your cookbook and make something happen. All the pieces are there make it happen because this is a recipe for love.
Trying to navigate love isn't always easy but when the right person comes in the door you just need to go for it and get out your cookbook and make something happen. All the pieces are there make it happen because this is a recipe for love.
June 15, 2021
I loved it but hate having to wait for book 2.
November 24, 2022
My First
MM Romance (Surrender Series) Book One, my first book by this author a really great start, with the struggle between jealously and love. Looking forward to the next
MM Romance (Surrender Series) Book One, my first book by this author a really great start, with the struggle between jealously and love. Looking forward to the next
Did Not Finish
May 1, 2023DNF at 1%
I only made it to, like, page 2 of this freebie. Don’t like the writing style.
I only made it to, like, page 2 of this freebie. Don’t like the writing style.
May 3, 2023
Love at first sight ...
Is there such a thing? In Sky McCoy's story world there is! And I'm really wanting to read the follow up.
Is there such a thing? In Sky McCoy's story world there is! And I'm really wanting to read the follow up.
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March 9, 2024Dnf at 20% I don't like the writing style.
July 23, 2024
saucy
Very saucy. Easy read. There is a lot of reference to a time when the characters were younger. Read it while traveling
Very saucy. Easy read. There is a lot of reference to a time when the characters were younger. Read it while traveling
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