⭐️2/5⭐️
The writing is good but the romance is not. I would have scored this a 3 normally but I was so disappointed in the love story, the actual writing couldn’t make up for it.
💕FOR THE REASONS I READ ROMANCE:
The Connection of the Couple: 3/5
Do I believe the couple will endure after the last chapter: 2/5
Couple spent enough happy times together: 4/5
Give and Take balance between the couple: 1/5
Couple was balanced and suited: 3/5
Banter and Fun Times: 3/5
🖋️THE WORDS
Show and not Tell: 4/5
Was I transported and enraptured: 4/5
Was the language sophisticated: 4.5/5
⛔️(SPOILERS BELOW)⛔️
🌸OTHER NOTES
My personal taste:
This was well written but the love story was pretty terrible. An H like this should not be a hero in a romance because his lack of respect, honor and unwillingness to commit mirrors everything we don’t want in a man. And the h was there for it, perfectly willing to accept the little he was giving. You may say I am old-fashioned because I can’t accept historical regency romances that have sex before marriage, but if the marriage doesn’t happen then I feel like I am reading a story about a cheap hussy who happened to land herself an earl.
Characters Likability:
H: He came across to me like he was not sure about his love and commitment to the h. First, he sent her away after he took her virginity and had an outside force not intervened, he would not have gone after her. Second, he either could not or would not find a way for them to be together at any point. Thirdly, he had no intention to marry her yet kept having sex with her without protection. Fourth, he had the gall to do this under the nose of her father, disrespectful! And lastly, the couple had gone back to England and the h was with him in his house after his family reunion, and I couldn’t help but feel like he finally proposed because he had ran out of excuses.
h: I liked her at first, she was resilient and strong, she was no victim or damsel in distress, she was a fighter and had some good grit, she was also emotionally vulnerable. When it came to the H though, she was a bit of a doormat, I didn’t like that. I thought she gave him too many allowances and devalued herself, thinking and saying that the H had better prospects than her and being ok with it after she had given him her virtue and was probably pregnant out of wedlock, she didn’t once think he should hold up his end of the bargain too, that if he truly loved her, he should not leave her like that and just like that. It felt like she had to follow him, not let him out of her sight to get the marriage proposal she deserved. Run after him, why don’t you.
*I felt the connection of the couple as they got to know each other came from kissing, desire and intimate touching, there was some admiration from the H as well but there was no real friendship or banter shown. At Kings Landing, there were good conversations to add on to the sex but, I wish this would have happened before the sex, to give context as to why she gave herself to him.
Angst, was it worth it? Yes, there was a point I felt afraid for the couple when the H first sent the h away and had to fight another pirate, then he shows up when she thought she would never see him again, that was well done.
Push Pull: The H pushes the h away almost the whole time after the h declares her love. What was most annoying about it was it felt like he was deliberately seducing her before that, only to be super clear on the fact they can’t be together. It would have been more gentlemanly to push her away before seducing her because he didn’t know how they could be together.
The Ending: The happy ending for the H, his escaping the noose and reuniting with his family was great. The ending for the couple was eye-rolling, in a way that was “that’s it?” And the epilogue was not about them, it was about the couple of the next book, another eye roll.
SUMMARY
My favorite thing about this book:
I enjoyed the times at sea, what a great trooper the h was sinking into her role. I also liked the reveal of the H as King at the right time. If I had my way, this would have been his plan from the beginning, with him expressing his marrying her at this point.
What I didn’t like:
I did not understand the purpose of the flogging scene. The H’s reasoning for this to the h was to teach her a lesson and for her to be equal in treatment to all the other sailors. BUT, there hadn’t been a flogging in 6 months and that was not standard practice in their ship as punishment, so why did he lie to her and hurt her? This whole scene seemed rather pointless and further painted the H in a bad light.
This might be a minor point but my OCD brain cannot get over it, forgive me. Right before their first time having sex, the author points out the dirtiness of the sailors in general. Then the couple goes upstairs and has sex for the first time without a bath. Sorry! But, ew! This love story, in general, just lacked finesse.
Should you read this: If I had known how topsy turvy the romance was, I would have skipped this. It was a well written story though, plot was well-paced and exciting.
Will this go on my favorites shelf to read again: