You know when a book disappoints you so much you actually feel pretty angry about it? After finishing this book, I’ll admit I’m at that point right now. I really enjoyed Incendiary, it wasn’t anything ground breaking necessarily but it was enjoyable and I got through it pretty quickly. Illusionary, however, the sequel in this duology felt a lot harder work to get through.
The biggest thing that irritated me in this book was the romance. In book one Ren is in love with Dez to the point of willingly putting her life in danger getting herself caught to avenge him. He tells her he loves her, she regrets never telling him back how much she loved him, they make love etc. Then plot twist, Prince Castian, the monstrous prince who killed Dez, didn’t actually kill Dez, he only pretends to be a monster, he only let Ren mourn her love that he created the illusion of murdering for her to see, he’s actually the good guy! And Dez, the good guy, his character is just switched in a way that makes no sense, he flees, he lets Ren think he is dead and evades her and even turns on her. It makes no sense. But it’s totally fine because as much as Ren loves Dez, her life is all about Dez, she grew up being protected and loved by Dez, it’s because she knew Castian as a child, A CHILD, she realises she has always loved him and stops loving Dez like it’s been switched off, just as her repulsion and hate for Castian switches off. It feels incredibly immature romance. Similarly at the start of this book, Castian and Ren work together to find Dez, Castian asks questions about his brother (because in the most obvious twist of all, Castian and Dez are brothers), he wants to know about this brother he thought he lost, he longs for his brother and Ren loves Dez too much to talk about him, neither stop and either consider Dez or how them getting together would effect any future relationship with Dez. Essentially Castian chooses Ren over his brother (knowing how close they were because she had a pregnancy scare) and doesn’t once question the propriety of that, or Ren flirting and ultimately sleeping with the brother of her love who got messed up after finding out he had a brother and his life was a lie. I’m sorry, maybe Vampire Diaries normalises sleeping with both brothers but it’s weird.
But there’s more! Castian was engaged to Nuria, they loved each other to the extent she begged Ren to remove one of her most intimate memories of him to help her, and he just ditches it because he’s such a brooding hero. There is no apology or recognition between the 2 characters when they’re together on the page, in fact despite Nuria risking her safety to assist Castian throughout the story, there isn’t one interaction I can recall where he even acknowledges her. But it’s fine because how do you solve a love triangle like Dez, Ren and Castian? Just lump Dez and Nuria together at the end *eye roll*. I’m sorry but it feels underdeveloped, by the end of the book you’ve got Ren and Castian together, but she’s slept with his brother Dez too. And Nuria with Dez, but she’s also slept with Castian. Just putting the leftover characters together as some happy ending just annoyed me, as did the dialogue where Dez goes from “how will I get over losing you” to ‘oh well, there’s a spare woman here, I’ll love her now’ and pretty instantly forgives his brother and former love for getting it on. This emotional maturity is from the character previously written to panic so much when he found out he had a brother and that he was a Prince that he fled everything?? Oh then we flip again and he just becomes King and takes on that responsibility easily enough. Sounds like he easily could’ve handled the stuff he was written to bail on too, but that would've got in the way of the need for Ren to get with Castian. It just reads inconsistent and written towards getting from A to B. Similarly, multiple members of the Whispers betray Ren and again it’s just glided over and moved past. It’s infuriating.
While there is no emotional development when it comes to relationships in the book, I did enjoy the emotional progression of Ren herself in this book. She starts off with such self loathing, being raised to be a weapon, a prop to be disposed of, and ending up loving herself. I wish that had been the love story in this book, self love, for both Ren and Castian, instead of 2 very broken, hurting people propping each other up. I actually preferred the ending when it looked like she boarded the pirate ship alone, doing something FOR HER but nope, Castian has to chase after her.
Relationships aside, this isn’t a bad book and at times I really did enjoy it, I just detest love triangles and flip flopping in character personalities, it’s a bit of an overused YA cliche. Also I have read too many books now where the plot is all about the protagonist having to make a sacrifice and it’s discussed for chapters, there’s an end goal which will save the world but the cost is her life, she hides it from him as he talks of their future etc. And she dies, a higher being or whatever speaks to her and is all ‘I know this is literally how it works but for the happy ending, I’m going to change the rules just for you and say it’s not your time yet’ as her love cradles her body and low and behold she returns. I can name several like this but I’ll be spoiling a lot of books if I mention them, i think it’s just been done too much now that you know it’s a bluff! I’m not saying I wanted the characters to suffer but it was just wrapped up too neatly and sweetly.
I’m sorry that sounds so bitter, it just didn’t do it for me and I could see such potential which is why I’m annoyed. Nuria was my favourite character and she’s barely used, as is Sayida and Argi, 3 women that would have totally changed how I felt the book had they been given more instead of the romance that instead took over this book.