*2.4 Stars*
Summary: Overall, I didn’t enjoy many of the stories here. I really only enjoyed 2, and the rest ranged from 1-3 stars, with only one 3 star (which you can read more about below).
Many of the stories either didn’t utilize their trope well, weren’t well written or didn’t have well developed relationships, or had ridiculous narratives or characters.
Bye Bye, Piper Berry (The Fake Relationship):
2 stars
This story’s pacing was rushed, even for a short story, and I didn’t feel any of the romance or “romantic” vibes. Both of the characters were exhibiting toxic traits (like faking a relationship just to make your ex jealous? Laughing at your ex falling off a stage into the orchestra pit?), which was all tired and outdated drama for the sake of drama. Overall I just never felt the romance or believed its development, so it got a low rating from me.
Anyone Else But You (Stranded Together):
2 stars
I did not like the love interest in this one (lame excuses for her annoying behavior), nor did I believe that these two characters would get together or that they miraculously felt anything for each other. They went from “enemies” to “friends” way too quickly, and their status as “rivals” was never really set up so none of this “development” meant anything to me, and it was very rushed and had a corny ending. Aside from that, the writing wasn’t great either. For the longest time I was wondering who the main character even was, because we were getting all this description about the love interest and their life, but not the MC and what they looked like or who they were. At least the story had a good setting/set up.
The Idiom Algorithm (Class Warfare):
1 star
This was really all over the place. First off, there were so many names and characters being thrown at me at once which confused me for a long while. It’s a short story, not a novel, and stating all these different names is not smart. Then there’s just the random facts about characters that were not necessary at all except for being over handed exposition, like describing the dad putting a pot onto the stove, and then tacking on a random sentence stating that he worked in tech but his true passion was gardening. Like… okay? So? There was also a lot of poor explanations for character decisions. Then the story got incredibly overdramatic and unbelievable in terms of the rising action and full of melodrama — I can only describe it as being a hallmark movie mixed with a James Bond movie but the entire thing is satire except it doesn’t know it is. A true telenovela. Then the MC made me extremely uncomfortable, becoming obsessive over this girl and practically stalking her… then missing school and meals for her… then hacking security cameras in another country to find her… it just left a bad taste in my mouth and I don’t know anybody who would want to date this guy. Then the story ended in a very anticlimactic manner, as did the development of the central relationship.
Auld Acquaintance (The Best Friend Love Epiphany):
4.75 stars
The first story I enjoyed! I really flew through it — the author really made me ship the two characters and made their development together believable. I was able to care about them and their emotions very quickly, and I loved the setting of the story. There was just positivity in this one with a side of mistakes and flaws, and the characters and their lives felt real.
Shooting Stars (One Bed):
5 stars
This one was my favorite story! I loved the setting and concept from the get go, and again I was easily able to connect with, believe, and feel for the characters and their lives/relationship. I thought the characters were super adorable and healthy and that they made sense. And the usage (i.e. transformation) of the one bed trope was so good and unique!
Keagan’s Heaven on Earth (The Secret Admirer):
2 stars
This one was told in the form of a comic, which was super unique and cool, but I unfortunately didn’t enjoy the story. I never cared for either of the characters or really understood who they were. It was also rushed and I felt like it was missing parts, which was odd. The setting was also pretty boring and generic, as was the relationship and how they got together. Also, the trope was barely demonstrated in this story.
Zora in the Spotlight (The Grand Romantic Gesture):
2 stars
There were way too many pop culture references than I cared for in this one (which I noticed in a few of the other stories but was very evident here). The dialogue was a bit on the nose, and overall the story was cheesy, unrealistic, and the couple didn’t even know each other, so I’m not sure how this fulfilled the theme.
In a Blink of the Eye (Trapped in a Confined Space):
1 star
I’m not even sure why this short story made the cut… the trope that was used wasn’t even used, imo, accurately to the prompt? It was not a confined space at all, and the two characters “trapped” together weren’t even the main couple. It was dead a story about a girl making up with her friend’s boyfriend, like, what? The story has unbelievably cringey, on the nose dialogue, and it features insta-love/love at first sight, which was ridiculous. The story overall didn’t even have any romance in it, which was odd? The whole situation was also unrealistic, uncomfortable, and the conflict wasn’t resolved in the best way.
Liberty (The Makeover):
1 star
Another one where the trope wasn’t really used, and overall was extremely rushed in the romantic development. The MC also admits this, that her “feelings” for the love interest are just a “stupid” “celebrity crush” that was shallow, but… admitting it doesn’t make it make sense or make me care lmao. The main character’s dilemma also made me uncomfortable, what with her trying to erase her Latina features and be white to be accepted, later to be “fixed” by someone else. Also I felt it was so… odd, to have the love interest unable to perform her cheerleading routines and duties just because she’s a lesbian and hand placement. If that were a straight dude on the team, that would be the questionable behavior that many school systems use to justify the dress codes in place to protect the attention of their male students. It didn’t sit right with me. Overall the story had outdated concepts/interactions, and nothing made me actually ship the two characters or care about them.
The Surprise Match (The Matchmaker):
3 stars
I wish I enjoyed this one more. I thought that the concept was really good, but it fell flat in execution and writing style. There was a grand gesture that would’ve fit better in an earlier trope, yet it was incredibly unnecessary and unrealistic. The author was also way too heavy handed in the exposition, like, this was a line from a best friend to another: “I can’t believe you just wrote a program that would find people’s best romantic matches using info trawled from their social media profiles.” Also, don’t even get me started on the awful lingo and slang these authors think teenagers actually use in real life: like including “BTW” or “AF” in an actual verbal conversation.
That being said, I really wanted to love this collection, but unfortunately I didn’t enjoy most of the stories and thought the few that I did like didn’t make up for it, hence the rating :(